New FF - Kaisa Yeh Pyaar Hai AbhIya updated part 5 - Page 5

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Vidhya

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Part 5

"And here, we present...Piya Dobrial!" Misha announced at the foot of the stairs. Panchi, the parents, and Misha all waited for Piya to come down, after getting ready for her date.

Piya slowly came there, and walked down the stairs. She was wearing a yellow anarkali dress, with pink designs on it. She wore pink earrings, and pink heels, with a pink purse. Her hair was half tied back, and half loose. Misha started whistling, and Panchi and her mom started to gasp. Their dad just smiled at her, looking at his little girl looking like a princess.

"So guys, kaisi lag rahi hoon main?" Piya asked.

"Fantastic! Egdam mast! Kabir will go crazy Piya!" Misha yelled. Panchi smiled at her little sister. "Tu bohot sundar lag rahi hai Piyu!"

Madhu put a dot of eyeliner behind Piya's ear, and hugegd her. "Tu bohot pyaari rahi hai beta."

Arnav just hugged his little girl. "Pata nahi chala kaise vaqt guzar gaya. Meri bachi...kab badi ho gayi? Teri pehli date. Tera pehla boyfriend..."

"Papa! Woh abhi tak mera boyfriend nahi hai!" Piya moaned, and hugged her dad.

"Lekin ho gayega!!!" Misha and Panchi chorused.

Just then, the doorbell rung.

"Hi Piya! Hello Misha and Panchi! Namaste aunti aur uncle!" Kabir walked in.

They welcomed him and chatted with him for a while. Arnav told Kabir some ground rules, and Kabir agreed happily.  Then they were off.

"So Kabir –"

"Ruko Piya. First off, main yeh kehna chatha hoon ke tum bohot sundar lagrahi ho....just amazing. I'm speechless." Piya blushed and looked down. They started chatting and reached the restaurant. They sat down and Kabir ordered some food.

"So Piya, maine tumhare liye ek gift leyi hai."

"Really?! Wow! Lekin kyun Kabir?" Piya smiled excitedly.

"Bas, aise hi! Ab dekho." Kabir gave her a small box.

Piya opened it to find a beautiful diamond locket. It was in the shape of a heart, with diamond designs. She opened the locket, which had space for 2 photos. One space was empty, and the other had a beautiful photo of Piya. Piya was shocked.

"Kabir – yeh tho bohot expensive hoga! Yeh sab....kya zarurath thi?" Piya stammered.

"Bas Piya. Just tell me ki pasand aya ya nahi?" Kabir smiled.

"Yea of  course. Kitna khoobsoorat hai! Its amazing! Mere paas shabd nahi hai batane ke liye ki main kitni thankful hoon!"

"Then good. I'm glad. Ab bas tumhe koi jeevan saathi mil jaega, tho uski photo lagana waha pe." Kabir smiled, and leaned back in his seat.

They leaned back and enjoyed a nice meal. Soon, they left, and Kabir dropped Piya home.

"So thanks for everything Kabir. I had a great time, aur yeh locket..." Piya started.

Kabir put his finger on her lips, and smiled. "I'm glad tumhe maza aagaya. I'll see you on Monday, huh?" He took her hand, kissed it, and left. Piya stood there smiling, and went inside to tell her sisters who were waiting for details about the date. She showed everyone the locket, and everyone was very impressed with Kabir. Piya put it on, and slept happily.

After a few days, it was the day to perform the scene in front of the whole class. Kabir had made Piya practice a couple times already, and Piya had been swept off of her feet at the way Kabir handled her. She was really starting to like him. Abhay, on the other hand, had just flat out told Piya that he couldn't practice with her, and that they should both just practice their lines on their own and be ready to perform in c lass only. Piya was having so much fun with Kabir that she didn't really mind that she didn't get to practice with Abhay. It was his choice, after all, if he wanted to receive a bad grade.

"So class, let's start! First we have Ruhi, with Angad." Ruhi excitedly jumped up and got ready to perform, while Angad moaned and reluctantly got out of his seat. Ruhi was wearing a really nice sari, and had gotten really dressed up for the scene. She started pulling out a bunch of props, and fumbled with them while Angad just glared at her. Piya giggled watching them both. She liked Tracker, because she was really funny and friendly. "Maybe Angad and Tracker would make a cute couple", Piya thought, and smiled and looked down.  

"Arre, Piya, hamara scene shuru hone se pehle sharma rahi ho?" Kabir grinned at Piya.

Piya stuck her tongue out at him. "Yeah right, you wish Kabir. Main sharma nahi rahi thi." Kabir just pretended to nod his head in understanding, and then winked at Piya. Abhay on the other side of Piya, listening silently to their conversation.  "Bohot salo baad Kabir ko itna khush dekha hai. I hope ke sab accha hoga uske relationship main, varna main woh depressed Kabir phirse nahi dekha paunga."

Tracker and Angad started to recite their lines from the movie Dil Bole Haddipa, where Rohan and Veera talked in the truck, when they first met. Tracker was even wearing that style of punjabi suit, in white color, to match Angad's plain white T shirt. It was very funny to watch them together, as Ruhi was being too enthu, and Angad was very detached, and just saying his lines in a low annoyed voice. Everyone was laughing at them two, and finally the scene was over.

"Ok, thanks for that....interesting presentation, Ruhi and Angad. Agli baari hai, Kabir aur Piya ki." Said the teacher.

Piya jumped up nervously, while Kabir jumped up excitedly at the same time. They looked at each other, smiled, and went to the front of the class. Piya was wearing a red sari, and Kabir was wearing black.

They started with the part where it was raining, and Kabir said "Main tumhe kahin leke jata hoon!" He gestured to her to dance with him, and Kabir quickly put on KKHH piano music on his phone. They started dancing, and Kabir brought Piya near to him. Piya looked into his eyes and saw a lot of love for her. Her heart melted at seeing that, and felt very warm and happy inside. She blushed, and turned away from him, but Kabir held onto her arm and brought her near to him again. She looked into his eyes, and Kabir came closer to her face. He kept coming closer and closer, nearer and nearer to her lips. Misha's eyes were going to pop out, and the teacher was getting nervous. She was going to have to stop them...as romantic as this was, they were in school, for heaven's sake! Just then, Kabir missed Piya's lips and went near to her ear.

Piya opened her eyes wide in surprise, and listened to what Kabir was going to say.

"Piya, be my girlfriend. I really like you, and I sense something between us both. I know you feel it too. Please don't say no. You know even your dad likes me! They will approve...Please?" Kabir said in her ear.

Piya's eyes teared up, and was so surprised. All this had happened so quickly. But she really did like Kabir. He was special – he made her laugh, was gentle and patient with her, and was a great guy. She pulled away from him, and smiled at him.

"Ok Kabir. Main tumhari girlfriend banoongi." Kabir's eyes lit up, and he picked up Piya and twirled her around. The whole class started clapping, and suddenly there was whistling. Kabir and Piya both looked over to see Misha whistling at them. Kabir looked to Abhay, who just stared at him, with wide eyes, then looked away at the ground. The teacher even, was laughing and clapping.

"Well Kabir, maana padega. That was very romantic! Aur scene bhi bohot accha perform kiya tumne." She said.

Kabir took a bow, held Piya's hand, and walked back to his seat. Kabir looked behind Piya's head, and winked at Abhay. Abhay just rolled his eyes and looked away. Piya looked over to Misha, who gave her a thumbs up sign and was smiling. Piya laughed at her sister, and sat down.

"Ok, ab hai Misha aur Manik ki baari!" said the teacher. Piya looked back at Misha, who was glaring. She looked just like Angad when he was performing. She and Manik had to perform the scene from Romeo and Juliet, where Romeo and Juliet killed themselves. Misha ran to the front of the class, and announced.

"Ok everybody, ma'am ne kaha tha that hum revision kar sakthe hai scene ka, agar hum chahe tho. Tho humne iss scene ko revise kiya hai, thake yeh koi Ekta ke serial jaise na lage."

They started performing. Misha was not wearing a dress, but was just wearing one of Piya's skirts over her shorts. Romeo killed himself, and Misha woke up from her fake sleep.

"Oh romeo! Tumne khud ko maar diya?" Misha said concerned. Everyone was impressed. This seemed to be the real R&J. Where was the modification? Then, suddenly, Misha jumped up and started dancing.

"Yes!!!! Thank you god, mujhe iss idiot se bachane ke liye! Yeh kitna bada stalker hai! Ek din dekha mujhe, aur phir doosre din mujhse shaadi? Main kya ek shirt hoon kya, jo dekha aur pasand kiya? Aur finally, mera plan kamiab hua! Mere dushman ka stalker beta mar gaya!!! Aur main ab chain se jee paoongi!!" Everyone started laughing their heads off. Of course...how typical Misha.

The teacher was startled, and hurried to Misha.

"Stop this Misha! Yeh kya? Tumne ek romantic tragedy ko comedy banadiya? Aur poori story badli tumne tho!"

Misha grinned, glad it was over, and took off her skirt in front of the class and threw it over to Piya.

"Hmm...After that...disturbing performance, we have Abhay with Piya." The teacher shook her head, still not believing what Misha had done.

Piya had changed into a long simple pink dress, while Abhay wore a nice red button shirt with black pants. They both came to the front of the class, and Piya sat down in a high chair. Kabir stood up and started whistling. Piya smiled at him, and he winked at her.

"Romeo? Kaha ho tum Romeo?" Piya started.

Then Abhay appeared and started reciting his lines. As he did, Piya looked into his eyes, which suddenly looked very deep. She got lost in his gaze, and then suddenly realized Abhay was glaring at her. She wondered why, and realized it was her line. She spoke quickly, and they finished their scene. Everyone jumped up and started clapping.

"Very well done, guys. bohot sweet scene tha yeh." The teacher smiled, relieved that somebody at least understood Romeo and Juliet, unlike Misha. Piya started to climb down the high chair, and her foot slipped from the bar. She started to fall, when Abhay quickly caught her. They both started staring at each other. Piya's heart suddenly started to race faster, and she started to breathe faster. But it felt like she couldn't breathe, at the same time. She saw confusion in Abhay's eyes, and felt it in her heart. She felt really hot inside, like she was burning. With Kabir, she had felt warm happiness, but right now she felt something very different than that. What was this feeling?

"Piya, you ok? Thanks, bro, for catching her. Agar usse kuch ho jatha tho...meri jaan chali jaathi." Kabir came running over, and Abhay put Piya on the ground.

"Thanks Abhay." Piya said in a small voice. Abhay just looked at her, nodded once, and then left the class. Kabir and Misha came to Piya and started fussing over her, making sure she was ok.

 

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Love always,

Aarti

Sweet! Nicely done Aarti! I like the way Kabir is shaping up, and of course Abhay is Abhay...broody, mysterious, cool dude types😊!

Cheers!
Vidhya

hey nice update...aww kabir and piya are so cute...however, we cant forget abhay lol..he had to be the savior..lol..thankx 4 the pm..really well done..

another great piece of writing. well done.
Edited by Mrs.Jaysean - 13 years ago

Originally posted by: madmaxine

Sweet! Nicely done Aarti! I like the way Kabir is shaping up, and of course Abhay is Abhay...broody, mysterious, cool dude types😊!

Cheers!
Vidhya

Thanks Vidhya! Yes...Abhay will be Abhay. But he will open up eventually....there's a while to go...lol

Originally posted by: .:.MONA.:.

hey nice update...aww kabir and piya are so cute...however, we cant forget abhay lol..he had to be the savior..lol..thankx 4 the pm..really well done..

❤️MONA

Hey Mona!

Originally posted by: Mrs.Jaysean

another great piece of writing. well done.

Thanks a lot! What's your name by the way?