FF (Shiv-Gauri): The Oldest Story... -pg. 140, 142 - Page 86

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Posted: 14 years ago

Beautifull!! Beautifull!!! Beautifull!!!

as for gauri guess this line goes..."tan bhi hai... mann bhi hai ....pighla hua........"
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Posted: 14 years ago

lol.. it was a bit of borrowing from one of my fav directors ;) as a lot of my writing is... what with all the books and the poetry i quote ;)

My new writer's creed is...

I seduce my readers with sensual writing so that they will read my philosophies (and by association, everything I have read...

-Devi
Edited by sridevi27 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved loved loved loved ittttttt Devi......can't wait :D
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sridevi27


lol.. it was a bit of borrowing from one of my fav directors ;) as a lot of my writing is... what with all the books and the poetry i quote ;)

My new writer's creed is...

I seduce my readers with sensual writing so that they will read my philosophies (and by association, everything I have read...

-Devi

I must say that's a very clever ploy 😉 xxxx
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: tanya_vi

Wow! 'Namukku paarkkan mundirithoppukal' ,one of my all time favorites..Ha!...Padmarajan - the genius...before watching this movie,I never knew that Bible had such romantic verses...Loved your update dear..BTW,don't make Shiv stay in Kochi longer..first of all I'm in Kochi and getting... Ahem....distracted and secondly, don't want Gauri to suffer more..

i second that... lovely update sri.. and thats a beautiful movie too..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow...that was really romantic...I can't wait for him to get back....

ps: Like most other people I did not know Bible had such verses as well! My to read list is increasing day by day!

Any chance of another update tonight?😆

ps: you better start an FF de-addiction center soon!

Edited by -pixie- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -pixie-

Wow...that was really romantic...I can't wait for him to get back....


ps: Like most other people I did not know Bible had such verses as well! My to read list is increasing day by day!

Any chance of another update tonight?😆

ps: you better start an FF de-addiction center soon!


I will.. right after I find an FFwriting-rehab for myself 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg devi the bible has such things?! wow
and that was soooo romantic
wow
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Posted: 14 years ago

I do not love you as if you were salt-rose, or topaz,
or the arrow of carnations the fire shoots off.
I love you as certain dark things are to be loved,
in secret, between the shadow and the soul.

I love you as the plant that never blooms
but carries in itself the light of hidden flowers;
thanks to your love a certain solid fragrance,
risen from the earth, lives darkly in my body.

I love you without knowing how, or when, or from where.
I love you straightforwardly, without complexities or pride;
so I love you because I know no other way


than this: where I does not exist, nor you,
so close that your hand on my chest is my hand,
so close that your eyes close as I fall asleep.


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -pixie-

I do not love you as if you were salt-rose, or topaz,
or the arrow of carnations the fire shoots off.
I love you as certain dark things are to be loved,
in secret, between the shadow and the soul.

I love you as the plant that never blooms
but carries in itself the light of hidden flowers;
thanks to your love a certain solid fragrance,
risen from the earth, lives darkly in my body.

I love you without knowing how, or when, or from where.
I love you straightforwardly, without complexities or pride;
so I love you because I know no other way


than this: where I does not exist, nor you,
so close that your hand on my chest is my hand,
so close that your eyes close as I fall asleep.



Ah.. Neruda... 😍

I think that's one of my favorite lines ever by any poet:

I love you as certain dark things are to be loved
in secret, between the shadow and the soul
Edited by sridevi27 - 14 years ago

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