FF (Shiv-Gauri): The Oldest Story... -pg. 140, 142 - Page 70

two awesome updates.......as great as ever.....

OMGGGG...the night keeps gets better and better.....do update soon :)

I cannot believe....it....

omgosh! That was some outburst 4rm gauri, n im glad he didnt leave. And shivs thought bout nt needin nething to assist them lol well mayb they do as its the ice breaker 4 them lol o my my cnt wait 4 mre

Lovd it! Ur update realy provd tat humans shld not b judged by their behaviours n outer appearance, b'coz their cn b a saint within a devil lookin man.

From the chracter u r developin of Shiv it was obv he wud never tke advntge of this situation...n  want her in his senses wen TheY actually  hav SR.....KNWIN GAURI SHE WUD HOlD IT AGAINST HIM....Waitin to read wat happens next....Thnk u 4 thes frequent updtes....the past few days.........😆...i guess in a  a sense wer in a similar state to  Gauri..4 the .updtes😛.

gauri's feelings and her state was well described and i now see shiv in very well understandable pati.........after all accusations from her, he is ready to help her......and i like this sentence lastly

She could always blame the aphrodisiac later…

hehe thats what gauri....................

I ddin't get my PM😒 Thank God I stalk this thread😆

nyc update................plz pm m.............

OMG!

Shiv won't do it,

but Gouri wants to do it,

that leaves me wondering,

will they do it or not 😆

wonderful update Devi.

Nadia
xxx