FF PYAR YA NAFRAT MG UPDATE COMING SOON - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
well amazing u mean they r married nd nw they wanna part ways ...update dear nd do pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12

a nice start.....

plzz continue soon and add me to the PM list.....
will be waiting......
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Posted: 13 years ago
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6 months ago

 

First meeting

 

"Relax Geet! Relax!" Geet calmed herself down

She took her luggage and walked to the entrance'

"oh s***t I have to change my clothes if Dadaji sees with this clothes he'll kill me" she rushed  to washroom changed her western clothes and wore a yellow anarkali suit. She looked at her phone and walked out.

"ouch" she bumped in something really hard'she looks up and saw a man'really tall, trained body, dark brown eyes, unshaved, small lips,'all in bohat handsome she thought'

"Don't you have eyes? Look before you walk! Typical woman! No brain!" she hear him yelling'

You should know Geet is a feminist'and she hated it when men talk about woman like that'

"What did you say woman and no brain? You don't have a brain! I forget you are a man! Of course you talk like that. What else can I expect! Idiot!

"Idiot! You are calling me idiot? You bumped in me and didn't even apologize! I think you did ti on propose! you saw and thought what a good looking man and then bumped in me to get my attention!

Geet couldn't believe what she heard:" are you paranoia? And where do you see a good looking man? I can just see a ugly donkey in front me!

Shut up! By the way why I am wasting valuable time with talking to dumb woman!

Now he went too far! Geet: how dare you call me dumb woman?" she raised hand to slap him, but he was faster and holds her hand very tight. He twisted it.

Geet: ouch chodo mujhe you are hurting me'chodo!

HE pushed her away and walked away'Geet landed on the ground'

She wanted to run behind him and beat him up'She wanted to see his blood'

But she didn't want to create a scene in the public'So she got up took her luggage and called a taxi'the whole way she was so annoyed'after two years she returned to India and then this'I hope I see the idiot never again. She reached her home'There it was again the tension'She totally forgot about the guy at the airport'She forgot her anger'She stood at the door form her home.

She  pressed the dorr bell' And a girl opened the door'


Geets suit

 

 

 

 

 

Precap

Geets familiy

Edited by sonnal_17 - 13 years ago
namita25 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
Awwwwwwwwww  Sonal ...🤗
loved the concept......😳
nice intro n the first part is great.....👏
count me in.....😳
PM me when you update next
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
Awesome update!! :-D
 
Nice dress choice too haha
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
Y always maan and geet have to bump bcom angry uff in dono se hum kya karaegi nice update dear. Sry cnt pres like coz im usng mble to read it once i log in ma pc i'l pres it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
hey sonal that was really nice...loved it...
and precap looks interesting....do keep writing
Downhill thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#18

hey nice start..........

both fighting each other like cat and dog...........
 
lik their first meeting
 
waiting for the next update
 
reva
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
hmmm it's intresting continue fast......
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
superb!!!plz add me 2 ur pm list 4 the updates.thnks.