#*Devil's Den#* Haati aur Cheeti

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BgblZoolander69

@BgblZoolander69

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#441

Yasu - where is that shower scene from? It gave me very vivid pictures in my head, especially since i'm an FF writer. My imagination runs a bit more wild than others......not that u minded. 🤣 *kidding kidding* me is shareef. 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

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Mellowfellow

@Mellowfellow

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Posted: 14 years ago

#442

Maan knew the answer to his question when she looked away. "Dev'!!!" Maan exclaimed as the question answered itself in his head. He saw Geet look up at him and her eyes were beginning to moisten again. "Geet.." his hand went out to touch her face again. Geet was turning away from him. He stopped her by holding her and tilting her face towards him and forced her to look up at him again and meet his eyes. He could read her eyes now. "Please..I am finding so hard to do this. Don't ask me questions, which I find difficult to answer. I cannot go through all that pain remembering everything. Please..I beg you. Read my eyes to find your answers", they seem to be pleading. As the realization dawned on him slowly, he remembered moments from the past which had been hanging as open ended questions in the air, answer themselves. "Geet fainting in the field and him carrying her home as her aunt came running saying "What happened to Geet? She was married, what happened to her?"; Geet refusing to sign the document papers and saying "I am sick of listening to people about what to do and being used by people, I will do what I wish from now"; Her coming his room in the night to ask for the agent's information in return for her co-operation; Her attempting to meet someone at Amritsar and that person not turning; Her trying to kill herself in front of the car; Her brother Brij trying to kill her and her pleading for her life; him meeting her in front of the Canadian embassy; him asking Dev how he solved his money problems and Dev's vague answers; Naintara looking for Geet's file in the office; Naintara getting worked up when he tells her to stay away from Geet; Him finding out the whole truth about Geet's pregnancy, how she was lead into a sham of a marriage and used for the sake of money; her having Dev's Canadian number in her hand before they left for Manali and her being unable to answer his questions at that time; Dev coming to talk to him time and again about something; Her coming into his room saying she met Dev; Her shock on hearing that Dev was his brother".

Geet could see anger slowly replacing the shock and confusion in Maan's eyes. He seemed to be breathing hard trying to control his emotions. His hold on her was become tighter and tighter. She could feel his fingers digging into her skin. The storm raging around them was reflected in his eyes. Fury was slowly building in those eyes as his temple nerves began to flex. His jaw had set firm, tight into a determined knot as he literally ground his teeth. She felt scared. She had never witnessed this side of Maan. She had seen him angry many a times before, angry with her, with people at work, with her brother brij, but never before had she felt this fear. How could one feel extreme passion and fear for the same person within a matter of minutes. It felt as if the red fury building in his eyes would lash out uncontrollably and resident devil would rip her apart.

Edited by ykannan - 14 years ago

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AnjanaYYZ

@AnjanaYYZ

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Posted: 14 years ago

#443

@Yash - fantastic👍🏼

@Yasu - MY GAWD! ☺️🤣

@Arpita - will keep fingers crossed for u🤗 N am upset today about a zillion n 1 things but, not at all at U.

@K - I don't know if they have studied KMH, but surely gotten the mix near perfect. Intro urself to everyone when u get the chance. Arpita (md410), Swan20, Shreya, Jyoti, An, Beagle, Minnie, and Mehr you already know from RKA. Arwen too from Adda CC.

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sumz3

@sumz3

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#444

@Yash: OMG OMG OMG!!!!.... waaow! you are mashallah brilliant!! Just amazing!👍🏼

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MarshP

@MarshP

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Posted: 14 years ago

#445

@Ann: Don't you blame it on the punch you are ALWAYS high!! The punch It was ME

@sumz3: HI!! 🤗What's your name btw?

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Jaded

@Jaded

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#446

hello all.....🤗

okay i m gonna come out and say it...i liked the epi...it was logical.....at least to me......first of all its a soap opera......do not forget the word OPERA....that means Drama......as in huge drama which is required to keep the interest alive in any show...similarly small seperation at this point is required to progress the track logically.....people are bashing Geet today...that why did she believed NT.....plz people lets try to be human here.....look at it from Geet's perspective....the girl is vulnerable....few verbal reassurance from Maan are not gonna cut it......he has to keep proving time and time again......because i think Geet has scars of her past which has come in front of her so suddenly.....her mind is in emotional upheaval.....she needs Maan to be on her side....but is he there??No...she tried meeting him over and over again.....but did they meet?? No....she is still reeling from shock about seeing Dev again..and not only that her baby secret is out as well.....in front of the world.....the whole time for last two epis she kept hoping that Maan would come back to her....that was her time of need.....and by need i mean her desperate need of support.....but Maan was nowhere.....by no fault of his of course......its destiny that has set this obstacle......but Geet doesnt know Maans condition....her intuition tells her that Maans around....but how can she trust it?....she is so shaken and vulnerable that she cant even trust herself.......how in the name of hell people expect her to trust Maan???

NT Geet interaction.....throughout NT spewing poison.....Geet refused to believe her.....she protested albait a little feebly but she did protest it...Have u people ever heard of a phenomenon called....self-fulfilling prophecy.....heres a very small definition."Positive or negative expectations about circumstances, events, or people that may affect a person'sbehavior toward them in a manner that he or she (unknowingly) creates situations in which those expectations are fulfilled.' i think thats what happened with Geet......she was soo afraid that Maan might leave her once he finds out Dev's the culprit...that she subconsciously believed NT lies...mind u NT already told Geet on the day of engagement that she spoke to Maan and he left after that and has not contacted Geet....so Geet's only communication to Maan have been through NT.....According to Geet, if Maan didnt believed NT why didnt he came after her??.....if Maan does think Geet is at fault, then why doesnt he speak to her??.....why doesnt he comeback to her??....may be he does believe NT...Akhir Khoon Khoon hota hai....even if that blood is within the lowliest scum of the earth. so people cut Geet some slack....she is after all emotionally drained...she thought of breaking her relationship with Maan but she didnt....and once she is calm and able to think again.....she will question why Maan believed NTor Dev.

ahhh CVs...another stripper.....😆😆 cool cool...baas ek problem hai....he might need more support in his tank top....😆😆 😆😆 ...plz CVs i dont mind Jay at all....but dont make him strip....or provide him with better support aka a Bra😆😆....okay so yea...the Baby sitting track is also ghisipitti....but what the heck...after some time all fiction is inspired by some other fiction....so i just wanna sit back relax and enjoy the new track...oh yea plz make sure Maan is green with envy he comes around....😃 and do a caveman 😆😆

so yea thats about it....

~Sin~