Mayur FF - Plan B - 6th oct - Chapter 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi guys,
Im ivana i have recently become an addict to this forum and love all the FF's that are written here.
Im not a writer,this is my first attempt, which to is inspired from a book called Separate Bedrooms by carol halston. Let me know what you'll think and if i should continue.
Ps. Im an Mjht fan namely Mayur so this will be based on them. πŸ˜ƒ

<font color="#660066">Plot:
Mayank and Nupur had been best friends since childhood,

They had shared joys and sorrows of life...be it school....family...dating....Nupur even helped Mayank get through his wife's death.

So it would only make sense for Nupur to turn to Mayank for help to fulfill her dying

grandmom's wish...


Nupur Bhushan:

A girl who has a large family, who love her dearly, but want to see her get settled in life

with a nice guy. She is secretly in love with her best friend. Has been for years, but holds

back because she knows he doesn't see her as anything more.


Mayank Sharma:

He was a balanced guy who has lost his way after his wife's death, he was able to get through

it only because of his closest friend Nupur. He treats her almost like a kid sister but under the wall he has created around himself he finds himself wishing for more.
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Plssssssss let me know what u'll think, if interested please let me know and i'll continue.
Love
Ivana

<font color="#330033">Index:
Chapter 1 - page 3
Chapter 2a - Page 5
Chapter 2b - Page 7

Chapter 3- page 9Edited by ivana - 13 years ago

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mayur-arti.4eva thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey Ivana,
first of all congratz for ur first ff πŸ₯³
now yupieeeeee me first to comment πŸ˜›


nice concept and cs
so mayank is married
and nups loves him but neva told him hhmmm
nice ff
but wht ws tht mayank treats nupur almost like a kid sister??????? πŸ˜• πŸ˜•
anywayz nice conecept wud love to read further
do continue soon
thxs for the pm 😊


Krushi
Edited by mayur-arti.4eva - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice concept yaar.......continue soon.
want to read more...............thanks 4 pm.
Escapist thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Ivana,

Congo !! dear on starting an FF !! 😊

Well the prologue seemed intriguing ! :)
Waiting for the updates too....and thnx a lot for sharing this wonderful story with us !!
Do update soon :)

Take care
Fatima
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Posted: 13 years ago
congrats on starting a ff!!😊
nice concept..cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ivana,
very nice concept hun
do continue it soon
and please pm me whenever you update

-Tasheen-
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi honey

1st attempt? so best of luckkk for it and do continue soon haan i will waiting 4 ur update!!


love
komal ❀️
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Posted: 13 years ago
great concept dear...pls continue soon..................
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Posted: 13 years ago
aussum concept
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Seems really niceeee...continue soon!!