New ff:MANEET( Love War ) Thread_1upt PG97 prt 45 - Page 52

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Posted: 14 years ago
kyq baat hey Maan Singh Khuran ki.... part time wife ha ha ha......

very nice n cute update..... loved it.....keep it up....



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Posted: 14 years ago
dear...😊.
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome updates ...

both of them are egoistic jerks 😆 .. but still i love them ...

continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update............like to c maan like this taking situations into his control...............
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 42
the whole day passed. geet thought why she accept his stupid offer. there would be another option if she tried. geet walking restless in this cabin. maan noticed her several times, but he ignored it...
geet thought: warey wah geet! tu bhi kamal hain, is pori duniya main tujhe or koi job nahi mila ki to kisiki biwi ki job kar rahi hain... o v part time. kis me fass gayi geet, keya jarorat thi onki proposal accept karne ki. par maine to nahi kiya, iss maan ka bacha mujhe fasaya. 😡pereshan ho gayi main iss maan se.. she working endlessly. now maan wanted to stop her.
maan: agar evening excercise ho gaya to beth jao. waise v ye tumhari pass demag to hain nahi, jo v hain oh v khatam ho jayege tumhari iss soch se. is leye sochna band karo or betho.
geet looked at him angerly. she sat on him & fuming. she is too much frustrated now with his answer.
geet: maan sir, aap ko mera brain map ne ki jarorat nahi, meri pass kuch to akal hain aap ki pass ov nahi sivaye ye attitude dekhane ki. maan looked at her surprisingly.
maan: main attitude dekha ti ho, tum har waqt mujhe dekhate rehte ho, tumhari pass ego ki lawba or kuch nahi. main keh raha ho geet apna ye ego control karo aur demag ki use karo
tumhari leye acha hoga.
geet eyes big now, & her mouth open now, keya mera ego hain, acha to aap ka keya hain
gusse to apki nak pe chari rehte hain har waqt. or apki ye ego or attitude hain na ye bas
logo ko apne vas main karne main kaam aati hain. but i m telling u, ye apki furmula jada der tak mujh par nahi chalege.main apki jaal main nahi fasongi. she turned her face other side.
maan smirked: well, tumhe kaun fasa na chata hain, tum khudi kafi ho fasne ki leye.
geet point a warned finger towards him, agar ek v sabd kahana tu apki kher nahi. maan instantly hold her hand & pulled her little closer. geet surprised then she shaking,
geet : ye aap keya kar rahi hain, dekhe ye abhi koi b nahi hain, isleye aap ko drama.. maan stopped her, put a finger on her lips
maan: yes, sweety main janti ho tumhe mere baat pasand hain, iss leye main hazar bar kahongi. geet about to faint, she whisper: keya keh rahi hain aap? maan indicate her to see back side with his eyes. geet turned back & see a nurse enter their cabin.
they back their position.
nurse: hello, sir this time to change ur cloth or dressing. i change ur cloth. nurse little excited geet noticed that, nurse droll over his six pack arms & his chest. geet felt her blood boiling.
geet thought: ye nurse maan ko gur kue rahi hain, iska niyat mujhe kuch thik nahi lag rahi hain. geet said quickly: ok, nurse u go, i 'll change his cloth. both maan & nurse surprised. maan looked at her he cant believe his ears.
maan: tum karogi, kaise?
geet now realised what she had said, she felt shy but there no option to back.
geet said confidently: ha ha, main karongi. akher main apki patni ho. she cut her toung slowly.
maan happy to hear this. but he pretended angry.
maan : nahi geet, nurse mera change karege. tum yeha betho.
geet yelled: kaha na main karongi, she snached the cloth from nurse & told her to leave.
geet sat in front of maan after nurse leave, she undoing his kurtis buttons. maan looked at her lovengly. she did not looked at him. she held his injured hand slowly then remove his kurta carefully. maan amazed by her every touch. how caring she is! after remove the kurta, geet took a towel & put it in half hot water, then she wrapped it & touch it on his chest. she slowly moved her hand on his chest with the towel, she moved it one by another side... maan fell her touch even she had a towel. now she looked at his chest then his eyes, they looked at each other suddenly geet stopped her action. she lost his eyes. they were so close their breath on them. geet put her another hand on his bare chest on the other hand maans well hand around her back pulled her closer. they don't know its reality or dream. geet put her hand around his
shoulder from chest. their heart beat top of now. both closed their eyes their lips inch away now. they were so close to gave a kiss. then geets phone rang . they open their eyes instantly
see their position then stay away. geet stood up & shaking. both wonder what had happened
. the phone rang off. geet looked down, maan also looked away.
then geet goes to him & put the dry kurta on his quickly. both dont dare to look each other now. after this, geet trying to walk off.
maan whishper: geet!! he thought may be geet angry now she will avoid him again.
geet tuned back: i will come after few moments then she walk off.
maan sigh relif to hear this.
geet in ladies wash room she looked the mirror see her image & remember that incidents.
geet: keya kar rahi to geet. tu ne khud nurse ko vaga dia kuki oh maan se ajib tarase dekh rahi thi. par tu to 4 kadam age nikli. keya hain ye sab? tu oski khayal rakh rahi hain, ya pher khud onko sata rahi hain? she bit her lip. chi chi. bata nahi keya sochege mere bare main.
then she correct herself: kuch nahi sochege, tu he hain jo over react kar rahi hain. it was weak situation. now be strong & go. she wiped her face by cold water.
on the other hand maan was waiting for her restlessly.
precap: geets dadi scold at geet..
pls comments.. sorry for mistakes...
Edited by reea88 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome one yaar..loved it ..precap sounds interesting !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it...... But y her daadi scold her....
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
but geet dadi scolds her 😲😲😲😲 is she found abt geet part time job

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