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naddiya26 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
awesome dear i am speechless ... it was too emotional... you are
one of best OS writer. superb
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
Superbbbbbbbbbbbb os
Loveeeeeeeeeeee the os.
So u have united maneet.
Thanxx for the pm.


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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
OMG.. nice confession... loved it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
WOW!!!! That was awesome!!! Truley loved reading it and could sooo picture our beloved Maneet!!!   ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
beautifully written!!!! keep writing more!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
JAZ i didnt cry yesterday with the sad ending..but today i did..gosh girl u make me cry so much..
BUT i loved it...every bit of it..every line of it..i wouldnt have mind reading another two pages of it..it was so Beautiful..really beautiful..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
OMG IT WAS AWESOME INFACT MORE THAN AWESOME
i absolutely was about to kill you if ud kill maan here..!! lol:P
i was listening to 2 songs teri deewani - while geet was saying her monologue and 'janam dekhlo-veerzara' when geet found out about maan's accident... absolutely adored it... though it has happened in soo many movies and is a kind of cliche as wel.. loved it..
 
URE AN AMAZING WRITER..
DO WRITE MORE..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG.......wen i got ur pm....i was jst abt to leave 4 mosque....n i was lyk shoott!!......i cnt read it nw.....damn it!!! :(
i was so sad......n nw wen i read it......

1st wen she said ....haa app mere layek nahi ho....
ohh god i cud feel maans pain.....shoot i felt soooo bad!
n thn tat letter......goosebumps !!

n thn d accident gosh......i wud hav srsly killed u if sumthin wud happen to MAAN....but i knw every1 luvs maan n u too so u cudnt kill him hehe!!......n D reunion less Proposal was jst TOO AWSUM!!!
gosh hats off u to u grl!!!
luvd it.....its always a deli8!!.....i will miss ur nxt os....!! :(
but atleast sat....so tat my day will go on by os hehe! no episode na

luv ya...
xxxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
awsuM!!!

loved da way geet confessed!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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1stly Im Sorry For Being LAte 😔 As i Was Away 😔
Secondly, OMG! Thanks ALOT! for dedicatin it To Me😳
 
Ok Here Goes Ma Rainbow 😆
 
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"Kyun nahin karogi? Iss natak se tumhe kya problem hai? Mere saath naam jodne se tumhe daar lag raha hai? Tumhe kya lagta hai, main tumhare kabil nahin hoon? Asmaan se safed ghode mein rajkumar baitkar ek haath mein phool toh dusri mein angoothi lekar aayega? Uske sapne mein jaana chati ho tum? Haan…?" his voice was a raspy whisper but still managed to send shivers down her spine. I Was Like Awwwwwww 😳 Maan u Dnt Need to do All Tht as YOU r THe 1😳😳😳
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"Baas kijiyeh Sir, aab aur nahin." Here I actuallly had Feelin tht She is DEFINATELY Gona Break His Heart 😭😭
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"Tumne mujhe maana kyun kiya tha? Kya main tumhare layak nahin hoon?" his voice was raspy against her ears. No Maan u r The Perfect Dude 😉

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"Nahin!" She yelled as she turned to face him. "Nahin hai aap mere layak!"As I Said 😭 I Knew She will Break his Heart Again 😭 n Here it Goes😭😭Geet u Blind Gal 😡😆

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The look of shock and pain on his face would have stopped anyone, but not her. She knew she had to keep going, it was the only way.
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"Nahin hai aap mere layak! Samje aap!"

 

He stumbled away from her. OMG Why Geet Why 😭😭 I can Actually Feel Maan's xpression Here😭😭😭

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"Kitni baar…kitni baar aapse kahaan hai ke main aapse door rehna chati hoon. Ek hi baath baar baar keh ke main thak gayi hoon! Thak gayi hoon main! Muhje aapka paas aana, aap ka saath rehna…kuch aacha nahin lagta! Kyun meri zindagi mein muskilein bada rahe hahi aap. Kyun humesha mujhse aaise sawal karke mujhe chot pouchate hai? Kyun? Kaise samjaoon main aapko ke main aapse kissi bi tarha ka rishta nahin rakhna chati!?" she yelled, her voice loud and ringing. I Was Actually Shout *GEET Please SHUT UP! I cant Hear All This Thn Imagine Maan Hearin ALL This😭😭😭😭😭How Could She Even  Say ALL this😭😭😭
 
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With unsteady hands she opened the envelope to discover a neatly written letter. Again her eyes blurred as she read the letter, her heart shatter and her soul cried out.
My Heart Actually Stopped for a Sec here😭 Cuz I Thaught DONE even in This OS she will Not Unite Maneet😭😭😭
 
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Geet,

 

Aaj tumne meri akheen khol di. Saab se pehle toh main tumse maafi mangna chata hoon. Mujhe paata nahin tha ke tumhari zindagi ki sabse badi kaanta, main hoon. Mujhe pata nahin tha ke mere vaje se tum kush nahin ho. Jaabse tumhe jaana hai, taabse maine tumhe mushkiloon se bachaya hai. Aaj bhi main vahin karunga. Aaj bhi main tumhe haar mushkil bachaunga, chahe woh mushkil main khud hi kyun naa hoon. Jaabse tumhe jaana hai, taabse tumhara saath diya hai. Aaj bhi main tumhara saath dunga, chahe uske liyeh mujhe tumhara saath hi kyun naa chodna pade. Aanjane mein hi sahi, lekin jaabse tumhe jaana hai tumne kush karna chaha. Aaj bhi main tumhe kush karne ke puri koshish karunga. Aagar mere door jaane se tumhe kushi milit hai, toh woh hi sahi. Jaise tum chate ho, vaisa hi hoga. Zindagi mein dobara aapna shakal tumhe nahin dikhaunga. Baas…tum kush raho, mujhe aur kuch nahin chahiyeh.

 

Soocha tha ke jaane se pehle tumne aapne dil ki baath betake jaunga, magar himmat hi nahin juta paya. Aur aab sooch raha hoon ke batane se kya faida. Baas itna jaan lo ke main humesha dua karunga ke tumhe haar kushi mile, tumne tumhara Rajkumar mile, aur tumhara haar saapna pura ho. Baas aur kuch nahin chahiyeh mujhe.

 

Jaa raha hoon Geet. Magar fikar maat karo, main vapas nahin aaunga. Mere vaje se tumharhi akhoon mein asoon aayeh, yeh main bardasht nahin kaar paunga. Aagar mere vaje se tumhe kissi bhi tarha ki taqleef hui…main toh jeete jee marjaunga. Yeh Maan Singh Khurana ka vaada hai, aur Maan Singh Khurana jo vada karta hai woh khabi todta nahin.

 

Kush rehna aur humesa aapna khayal rakhna.

 

Maan

And Im Not Liein Here... I Was Actuallly Cryin Here 😭 I couldnt Stop Ma Tears While Readin ALL this 😭 I had Bad Feelings Tht Maan Might End Up Doin Sumfin to him self 😭😭😭
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Geet wept as she held the letter close to her heart. Everything she'd said to him, the horrible words that came out of her mouth. The look on his face when she told him that she wanted him to stay away from her, when she told him that he wasn't good enough for her. How could he not have known that those were all lies? How?

 

She cursed herself for her actions. She thought she'd been sparing him heartache, but instead she caused it. Why? Why hadn't she been able to tell him that joining her name to his would be one of her lifes greates joys? Why hadn't she been able to tell him that the prince she was waiting for was standing in front of her? Why hadn't she been able to say that without him, her dreams were just as lifeless and colorless as her life was? Why…why…why?

 

Of course, she knew why. Why, because she loved him. She loved him more than life itself. Had it not been for the life growing inside her, she would already be dead. The look of sheer horror and regret in his eyes as she told him he wasn't good enough for her – that one look was enough to kill her. She knew, she knew that if she explained everything to him, he'd stand by her side like he always did. She knew it – her heart knew it, her soul knew it. But she couldn't do that to him. She couldn't make him lose the possibility of a happy and full life but tying him down with her cursed destiny. People would talk about her, people would shame her, people would ridicule her and they would disrespect her. But if the same people shamed him or disrespected him, she'd die. How she supposed to go on knowing that the man who'd protected her honor and dignity, was now being mocked because of her. God no!

I Felt Like Killin Geet here first😡😡 After Sayin ALL tht Why u Regrettin NOW 😡 Buh Thn I Cried For Her too😭 Cuz Its Not her Fault either😭 she is Goin Through Same Pain😭
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Suddenly she'd jolted up when someone barged into her room. Once her eyes focused she saw it was in the early hours of the morning, the rain still poured and it was Dadi Maa that entered her room.
And here When Dadi entred, I thaught She is gona Shout at Geet For Maan Being Missin ! Buh She Broke ma HEart By Sayin tht "Maan ka accident hogaya!""Uska accident hogaya aur uska kuch paata nahin chal raha hai!" I Was Shoutin ! NOOOOOOOOOO😭😭😭😭 
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Moments later she found a picture of him set on the dressed. Suddenly, the words he'd spoken earlier rang in her ears: "Baas, yahi tak ka saath tha humara? "Maine humesha, haar muskhil mein tumhara saath diya hai. Aur tum…tumhe shayad yaad bhi nahin hoga…aagar main nahin hota…toh shayad…tum zinda bhi nahin hoti…"

 

"Main kaise bhool sakti hoon, kaise bhool sakti hoon ke meri zindagi aapki amanta hai! Kaise bhool sakti hoon ke mera dil, meri jaan, mera saab kuch aab aap mein basta hai!" she yelled. "Aapni amanat peeche chodke aap nahin jaa sakte. Nahin jaa sakte!" I Was Shoutin Here *GEEET AFTER ALL THIS 😡 WHY Didnt U Tell Him ALL This B4😭😭😭

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"Aapko vapas aana hi hoga," she said as she sat on the floor, her knees drawn up to her chest, her feet tucked under. "Aapko mere paas vapas aana hi hoga."

 

As the seconds ticked on Geet felt more and more on edge. Every second seemed like a life time. Every second meant a moment when he was not with her. Every second seemed like a wasted opportunity to tell him how she really felt. Every second seemed to bring her closer and closer to her own death. Hours had passed with Geet simply staring at the clock, counting the seconds until his return. Even the heavens cried as she cried for what could possibly be lost forever.

 

Suddenly, the through the midst of the howling wind and pitter patter of rain, she heard the distinct creaking of metal. Her heart instantly told her that he was back, but her eyes needed proof. Stumbling to her feet she raced to the window to see if what her heart was telling her was the truth. As the haze cleared, as the rain drops suddenly slowed and as she made out a figure in the distance, her heart and her soul rejoiced

I started Danncin😃😃😃Yaaay he is back !! buh Wats Dis 😭 he is injured 😭 n Wat Hurted me More Was When she Was Callin him, Buh He Kept Ignorin her Cuz of wah he Promised😭😭 Maaan Woh Ullu Ki Pathi Jhoot Bol Rahi Ti😭
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"Kya samate ho aap aapne aap ko?" she asked. "Jaab jee chaha dil mein dastak kar diya…jaab jee chaha mujhse muh mor liya?"

 

He looked at her with confusion.

 

"Aap Maan Singh Khurana hai toh kya, aap aapne manmani karsakte hai?" she demanded as she grabbed his shirt with her hands, drawing him close. "Ek baar bhi nahin soocha ke mere kya hoga? Ek baar bhi nahin soocha ke main aapke bina kaise jeeungi?" OMG I Always Wanted Geet To Say a Dailogue Like this 🤣  Love u Jaz For Makin her Say This 🤗

"Tang aagayi hoon main daar daar ke. Tang aagayi hoon aapne aap se lad ke. Tang aagayi hoon main aapse ladke. Mujhe aur saha nahin jayega," she cried. "Kaise samjaoon ke main aapse door nahin reh sakti? Kaise samjaoon ke aapke bina main marjaungi? Kaise samjaoon aapko ke meri haar kushi aapse juda hai? Kaise samjaoon ke main sapna dekhti hoon, to sirf aapke vaje se, main muskurati hoon toh sirf aapke vaje se? Kaise samjaoon aapko ke Maan ke bina Geet adhuri hai? Kaise samjaoon aapko ke main…ke main aapse kitna pyaar karti hoon…………"

I Was Like OMFG! FINALLLLLY!!!!!!! YES!!! Wat Eva She said Was So Realistic 👏 Love u Geet After All the Pain u Gave This Happiness to Maan n us😳
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And Then When he said I LOVE YOU! OMFG!!! Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!!!! YAAAAAY!!! YESY YES ! Geeet u also Say Same Please!!! 😳
 
 
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Kay Now Ma Over ALL Review!!
 
 
 1st Of ALL Jaz WATS THIS U DRAMA QUEEEN 😡😡 u made me CRY!!!!
thn MAAN Had an Accident ! 😡
I Mean This Must be the Saddest OS I eva Read😭😭 I Wish CV's Neva Seee this OS 🤣 Cuz I dnt Want This To Happen Actuallly Cuz u Knw Abt Our CHAPAL, Bellans, Dandas n Stuff buh these Behooda CV's dont 🤣 So they'll Sure Ruin it 🤣
Buh OMG Gal This was Also 1 of u Best OS i have Read 👏👏👏👏 I mean the Pain Was So Clear 😭😭 n The Big Thing is YOU MADE ME CRY 😲😲😲👏👏 
Love u Jaz n Thanks For writtin this for me 😳
Oh Btw this was ma Favourite Line! She did all she did for him. She cried for him, she bled for him, she lied for him she'd die for him. For him she'd do anything even if that meant opening her heart to joy, even if it meant digging up her past, even if it meant she had to face her worst fears, even if it meant opening her heart to his love. For him, she'd do anything…anything for him.
This Line was so Touchin😳😳😳
Love you jaz 🤗
I'll be waitin for the nxt OS 😳
n Sorry For this Long Comment 🤣