sajan ff updated part 34 pg 59

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gurpreet

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Posted: 15 years ago

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thanks for liking the cs......here goes the first update...i hope u guys like it and pls forgive my hindi....

background info on gunjan she was studying in US for 3 yrs but came back to india because she was missing mayank and nupur...

In a beautiful room gunjan is sleeping peacefully hugging a winnie the pooh bear..and there is alot more stuffed bears on her bed..when mayank comes in to wake her up

M:angel ab ut jao

G:pls bhai tori deer aur sone do na

M:nahi ab jaldi utto varna main naraz ho gaunja aur tumhe pata hai jab mein nazar ho jata hoon to tumhe mein tumara favorite gara ka halwa nahi kane deta

immediately gets up
G:kya gajar ka halwa..bhai mein ut gaye hoon aur abhi neeche arahi hoon

M:thats like a good girl

after mayank leaves gunjan quickly gets ready and comes down for breakfast but before sitting she hugs nupur

N: yeh kya kar rahi ho gunjan

G:ap ko hug kyunki ur the best

N: vo to mein hoon ab maska lagana band karo aur nashta kar lo

while eating breakfast mayank tells gunjan that she is going to join excel tomorrow

G:teek hai bhai

N:kya mayank vo parso ayi hai aur tum ho ki kal college bej rahe ho

G:babhi main ne bhai ko kaha ta

N:tu bhi na gunjan.chalo fir nashta kar ke shopping ke liye chale gaye

G:teek hai

M: aur ha angel dia tumhe college mein mili gi

G:teek hai bhai

after breakfast mayank leaves for office and nupur and gunjan go shopping.after shopping for hours they come home and after eating dinner they go to sleep because they were exhausted

NEXT DAY

the alarm is ringing in a room. when we go in we see samrat sleeping peacefully in his messy room but the alarm clock that keeps ringing disturbs him. so he lazily gets up and gets ready to go to college. while he is getting ready his phone rings

S:hello

B:kaha hai tu

S:ghar kyun

B:bool gaya aj basket ball practice hai

S:oh ha abhi aya.

B:jaldi ana

S: ara hoon bye

B:bye

samrat quickly brushes his hair and goes off to excel. while gunjan is already in college. she was sitting in the canteen with dia because dia was done showing her the college. both of them were chatting when gunjan remembered that she had to go to the library to get a card issued so she tells dia that she will meet her later and quickly leaves but on her way gunjan slips cause there was water spilled on the floor. but before she fell someone saved her.

heres my first update...i hope u guys like it

Edited by preety88 - 15 years ago