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Awesome n azmaing update👏⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️👏.....u hav written very well👍🏼...I really enjoyed it😳...!!!!!!! Luv it....!!!!😉can u plz add me in pm list

Awesome update
loved it
happy dev told them the truth
wonder how maans going to react
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

great update ..

Awesome Winnie...your FF is superb. 👏👏👏👏 what will Maan do now?.....but I am sure you will put his reactions beautifully..I trust you.. I can imagine every word that you have written. I am imagining Maan's furious and shocked face even now while i am writting this.😭😭😭😭 love your writting....don't forget to pm me. LUV whitepearl

finally he told maan..good
thanks for the update

HEY ALL, lovely Maneetians

Originally posted by: sravani899

wow neeru

nice and lovely update dear😊

loved it alot dear😃

so finaly dev told truth to maan and daadima👏

wow neeru👏👏👏

lovely and nice update yaar⭐️

looking forward yaar😉

with love

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Thank u soooooooo much sravs for the support u give to my work
its really like a booster for me....
love u DOST... 🤗

Originally posted by: shivangi783

Hi 😊

Thanks for adding me 😊
loved the update 😊

Finally Dev confessed!
And even told that the girl is none other than Geet!
Lets see how Maan reacts now 😊

Update soon 😛

BTW wats your name? 😊

Thank u for liking my work dear...

the next update is to hit ur screen very soon


Thank uuuuuu 🤗

Originally posted by: bshah856

dats nt fair u just left us hangin like dat

Awww... 😔

im really sorry....

kaan pakad ke maafi

Pleej... aagey nahi karungi...

I will update sooon to make up

my mistake... 🤗

Originally posted by: vinithaa

oh my god!!! i want maan to just slap dev......but anyways dev atleast told him the truth....i want maan to search for geet....loved it plzzzz update soon

Yup all ur imagination will come true...
but kabhi kabhi intezaar karnaa hota hai

Thanks for the lovely comments 🤗

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

awesome part

finally maan and dadi no the truth cant wait 2 see hoe maan will react

U MUST WAIT FOR TODAYS UPDATE DEAR... 🤗

Originally posted by: charmed ones

<font color="#6600cc">wat a great update yaarr👏.....just Khurana's.....!!!!!</font> 😉

<font color="#6600cc">im hoping this nt dream of sumthings😕...no matter wat happen next 2 Dev😆....!!!!!</font>

<font color="#6600cc">bt i reali wnt Maan to reach Geet😃 ASAP by Pari help.....!!!!!😊</font>

<font color="#6600cc">do cnt....!!!!!!😛</font>

Thank u sooo much for ur comments... dear

and yes Todays update would let u relax i suppose..🤗

Originally posted by: .sireesha.

Thats A Fabulous Update Dear👏

U Wrote it soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Well

Sooooooooooooooooooooooo Happy to see that the Truth is out

Eagerly waiting for the next part

Pls Update Soon

Thank u sooooooooooooo much 🤗

IM updating sooooooooooonest😉

Originally posted by: kirannaryani

Awesome n azmaing update👏.....u hav written very well👍🏼...I really enjoyed it😳...!!!!!!! Luv it....!!!!😉can u plz add me in pm list

Thank u sooooo much dear

and u are already in my pm list

but im sorry if u dint get the pm
😔 plzz send a buddy request

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

Awesome update
loved it
happy dev told them the truth
wonder how maans going to react
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

Thank u sooooo much....
🤗

Originally posted by: uzmam1

great update ..

really interested to see what happens next ..

i really hope Maan slaps Dev with all his might!!

Thank u.... next upadate i will pm u soon 😊

Uzma xx

Awww....🤗

Lov u...............sweety....

Im soooo happy seeing all the comments

and happy to hear that u can really imagine

And thanks a bunch for saying u trust me

i will definately try and keep up with

all ur expectations....😉

Originally posted by: desigurl953

finally he told maan..good
thanks for the update

Thank uuuuuu dear 🤗




Thank u all
for ur lovely comments....
hope todays episode in the
show wud be more satisfying...

NEEXT update is to come sooooooon 🤗

PART-21


DEV : yakeen maaniye bro... hum yeh sab hargiz nahi karna chaahtey they...
          aaur ab jo galathi hui hai tho... aap jo sazaa dete hai... mujhe manzoor hai...

Dev's eyes were showing his guilt and repentance .....
While MAAN rised from the couch and started to walk away...


DADIMA was speechless... she looked at helpless DEV, and Restless MAAN...
She thought...

DADIMA : Humaarey dono bachonke zindagi ko tabaa karne wali...
               NAINTARA hain???? Kitnaa barosa karte they hum unpar...
               usne tho humaari zindagi ujhaad di hain... humaarey bachchey...

[ she starred in trance with teary eyes ]

DEV came to stop MAAN from walking away....



DEV : kuch tho kahiye Bro .... humey sazaa dijiye...
        hum aapko aisey nahi dekh saktey ...

Initially Maan dint listen to him... but when Dev came running towards him
with tears in his eyes and fell on his knees in front of Maan, to stop him
and block his way.... Maan looked at Dev and his helpless situation,as it
reminded him of NAINTARA whom he hated fron beginning, but now he
wished he could kill her right away....He was equally angry with Dev but
just a narrow difference made him feel Dev was somehow used as a puppet...
He was not sure to believe Dev's words too.... but he said....

MAAN : Yakeen ki baat tho tum naa karo tho hi acha hai Dev...
           Ab mai tho kya...? Iss Ghar ke koi bhi shaks... tumhaari
           Yakeen nahi karegaa....

DEV was silent.... he dropped his head down and stood listening to all
the words which reached his ears.... from Maan's heart rather than his throat...

MAAN : Aur rahi baat SAZAA ki...??? tho mai kaun hotaa hu ???
           tumhey sazaa dene waale...???
           Tumne tho mujhse wo hakk bhi cheen liyaa hain...

DADI was looking at both her grandsons.... who were just trying to be happy
in recent days when this evil soul called NAINTARA.... drained out the
joy with her baneful ideas....

MAAN : Tumne soch bhi kaisey liya Dev ki har baar... HAR BAAR....
             tum galathi karke aatey... aur Main tumhey Sazaa sunaa kar
             maaf kar detaa??? Kaisey yeh soch liyaa tumne ???

This time he walks off a long distance...but Dev again starts pleading him..

MAAN : SAZAA SUNAANE KA MUJHE KOI HAQ NAHI....
            GUNEGAAR TUM MERE NAHI.....
            
MAAN : AUR AGAR TUMHEY ITNI HI SHARMINDAGI MEHSOOS
           HO RAHI HO THO.... MAIN TUMSE ITNAA ZAROOR KARWANAA
           CHAAHTAA HOON....

DEV in a tone filled with guilt and shame... says barely....

DEV : HAAN... Bro bataayiye... meri sazaa....

He was about to complete But Maan never let him do so....

MAAN : TUMHEY MAAFI MUJSE NAHI.... GEET SE MAANGNI HOGI....
            AUR YAAD RAKHNA...DEV ki MERI MAAFI TUMHEY KABHI
            NAHI MILEGI ....

MAAN : NAINTARA KO THO MAI GHAR MAIN KADAM BHI NAHI RAKHNE DOONGA....
            AUR TUM GEET SE MAAFI MILNE PAR... GHAR CHOD SAKTEY HO...
            ISS BAAR MUJHE MERE FAISLA BADALNE KO , KOI MAJBOOR NAHI KAR SAKTEY....

He stares at DADIMA who was crying... and he walks away leaving DEV and DADIMA in
the room which Got darker as it was evening by then.....


DADIMA just fell on the couch with her hand resting on her heart....
she felt the pain her life [ her children ] were going through...
Dev approached her... to say

DEV : DADIMA.... MUJHE...Ma...

DADIMA : Chale jaayiye DEV... Meri nazron ke saamne tab tak
               Mat aayiyega... jab tak aapko Geet ki maafi nahi miljaati....
               CHALE JAAYIYE....

she cries loudly in pain ..... to which DEV comes closer to hold
her by her shoulder, to which she reluctantly removes his hands and
looks at him in disgust .....


DEV walks out from the outhouse.... with a heavy heart...
he starts thinking how to find GEET, as she was not staying in
DELHI anymore....



Geet slowly, opened her eyes... now in a bit better position
and bit healthier.... she started to meet the children,get to
know them... and their personalities...

but how much ever she met the children,the times would
never let her forget Maan.... as he turned be like a breath
for a human being ..... soooo necessary to be alive....

She finally found solace in sharing her troubles with a
friend.... a Small girl Named sonia ...
Geet used to go to the beach every day taking sonia
along with her... and used to play with that little girl
and share all her problems with her....
Pari found this and one day she followed Geet till the beach....
but managed to be careful,so that Geet would not find her...
she heard her speaking to sonia... who was making the
sand castle's ....

GEET : pata hai sonia??? aaj sirf tum ho
           mere saath dene ke liye....
           Warnaa... babaji ne hamesha....
           HAMESHA.... mujse un logonko cheen liya hai
           jinke saath rehkar mai apne aapko
           sambhaal sakti, Jo mere liye sabse zyaada
           ehmiyat rakhte the....

She had tears slowly.... flowing from her eyes....


Thats for today friends,
let me know ur views/comments
and DONT forget the like button...

GOODNIGHT 😳 🤗

neeru dear  


Edited by sravani899 - 13 years ago

Awesome part!!!
Continue soon!!!

Loved the update 😊
Pari maan ko kab batayegi Geet ke baare mein? 😲
Update soon 😊 Longer update 😛 😛