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Posted: 13 years ago





PART- 15


            
PINKY : GEET ... woh Dyane teraa itnaaa
            buraaa karti hai... aur tu hai....
            BABA RAAMDEV BANNAA HAI KYA???
            Jaane de naa... ek baar giregi tho sambhal jaayegi
            tu phone kar.... phone.... [ she diverted ]


Geet dint dare to really save SASHA from disaster after what
all pinky told her... so she started to call DADI....she slightly
turned around,but turned back to her position quickly... as she heard
Sasha MAM fall in the puddle.....Pinky playfully laughed and started
singing like a school child..." HUMPTY DUMPTY HAD A GREAT FALL "
while Geet was stepping to help Sasha... Sasha in her attitude denied
to take help from her.... and pinky gestured Geet ... Thats what is sashaa..
its waste offering a help to that dyne....

Mean while Maan was busy watching Geet's rapid reactions,
and changing expressions,While PARI laughed aloud.....
seeing SASHA Fall down like that....Sasha wished MK not to see her
that moment... but her wishes dint work.... Pari's laughter Bought Maan
back to the world and even he could not resist laughing at Sasha...
but somehow managed to end up with small smiles... and moved towards
GEET without even looking at SASHAA for another time....




SASHAA could not digest this and she got up herself.... ,
it was quite difficult but she deserved it... everyone felt so...
and as AADI arrived... the place was even more colorful
with his smiles... HA >>... HA.... HAHAHA...πŸ˜†

PINKY and AADI were laughing, Pari accompained them,
but poor girl TASHA dint know how to react... as she was
meant to be with Sasha all the time....so she started
meddling with her pony TAILπŸ˜†... and made wierd faces...

Sasha's face was muddy now... she looked like her name..." DYNE "
she quickly walked towards Tasha....

TASHA : Aaaahhhhhh....

SASHA : TASHAAAAAA .... mai hu..... SASHA.....
              now shut up and direct me to the
              washroom..... 😑

TASHA : yes MAAM.... uhh .. silly me...


they walked away right at that moment and Maan
called out for Pari... coming very near to Geet's ears...
it seemed as if he shouted for Geet in her ears...

MAAN : PARI....

GEET shook in shivers... and said....slowly

GEET : sir... Pari maam wahaa hai... aap kahe tho mai buladeti hu...

Maan felt bad ... that Geet is not reacting the way he expected....
but he dint let his feelings out... as he always did....he hid them
deep in his heart.....

MAAN : Geet... tumhey jo kaha jaye ... wo karo...
            Pari ke paas mai khud jaunga....

saying this Maan was moving towards Pari but he was even
looking Back at Geet... so he dint observe that Pari was walking
towards him and bumped into Pari...
and now the arrow hit Geet ..... She started muttering...

GEET : yeh LADKI phir aa gayi???
           Wo bhi Maan sir ko takraane??
           Paagal hai yeh ladki... yeh tho
           MAAN SIR KE LIYE BILKUL TEEK NAHI....
           aur Maan sir ....??? Wo bhi uss Paagal
           ladki ke saath haste, muskuraatey hai...
           inhe mujhse tho Sirf gussa aata hai...
           par wo Pari ke saath..? uske saath
           tho badey mazaak kartey hai....
          Ab kya kahu??? inkaa koi barosa nahi,
           kab kaisey hojaatey hai... aur Ladki par....
           uspar tho bilkul yakeen nahi... ab kya karu???

she quikly walks towards Maan, who was making fake smiles
for what Pari was speaking to him....

GEET : sir.... aapka phone....

Maan does'nt pay attention and is still busy speaking to pari
Geet holds Maan's hand, turns slightly away... and
placing the phone in his hand,leaves walking slowly....
Maan noticed the change, and was happy it worked...
even Pari smiled and they highfived and felt happy...



Now all moved to have lunch... and Geet was about to
take Papaya while Pinky stopped her...

PINKY : Geet...... tu yeh kya kar rahi hai???
            yeh PAPITA ... hai yaar... tu...

GEET : arey tho kya hua agar yeh Papita hai???
           Mujhe achaa lagtaa hai, meri Maan tu bhi le...
           yeh sehat ke liye achaa hai...

PINKY : haaa... GEET mai jaanti hu...
            YEH SEHAT KE LIYE ACHAA HAI...
            PAR TERE LIYE NAHI.....

GEET is shocked to hear this... and asks...in worry

GEET : mere liye teekh nahi...? par kyu???
           
pinky takes the plate from Geet's hands...places it away..
and looking around she drags Geet to a lonely place....
in this process pinky hits Maan and without noticing she leaves
Maan dont understand..... but lets it go...

PINKY : Geet.... tu apna khayaal bilkul nahi rakhti hai...
            tu iss haal mai yeh khaane wali thi????

GEET : pinky tu kya keh rahi hai??? mujhe kuch nahi pata...
           saaf saaf bolna....mujhe bhook lagi hai...

PINKY holds Geet's hands and whispers slowly

PINKY : Geet.... MAI JAANTI HU... TU GHAR KYU CHOD KE
            AAGAYI.... DAD NE MUJHE SAB BATAADIYA....

Geet's heart sinks for a moment.... her eyes teared...
and her breath rate turn uneven....       
pinky held out her arms and Geet fell into them,sobbing
and sniffing.... Mujhe maaf karna pinky , main tujhe bataana chahti thi
lekin... mai... uhh...wo...she cried... pinky made her caring talks
which made Geet calm at a point of time...

PINKY : Geet... tu ab mujhse waada kar...ke tu
            apnaa puraa khayaal rakhegi...

GEET : Haa .. pinky Mai waada karti hu... mai apnaa
           puraa khayaal rakhungi... aur mai aindaa..
           tujhey koi shikaayat ka maukaa nahi dungi...

Maan who was worried after noticing the time
as Geet and pinky dint return, went to search them
and at this moment he reached a tree hid himself behind
it and heard Geet's promise of taking care of herself....
Now he was even more worried .... he thought... what
would be the reason for Geet to have tears and make such promise????
He tried hard but failed to make out the reason...


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Edited by wiinie_pooh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i guess truth will be out soon?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thats AwesomeπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Loved it
Poor Sasha. πŸ˜’Maan too smiled at her thats so disappointing for herπŸ˜‰
Loved Pinky's Concern towards GeetπŸ˜ƒ
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Pls update ASAP
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey just start reading...
it is so good...hope to finish it soon
plz add me to ur pm list
thx
keep writing πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
soooooooooooo sweetπŸ‘& lovelyπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΌupdate,loved it a lot😊send next part soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh loved it....i hope the truth comes out tommorow and maan secretly still loves geet even after knowing her flash back...

anyways it was lovely update πŸ‘ loved both pari and maan and also shasha fell in kichad...she deserves it

-------vinitha
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ohk going to reveal da past too gud continue 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was nice
liked how much maan is concerned about her
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks u 4 lovely update...!!!! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Ohh Tasha n sasha....poor soul😈....hehehe......!!!!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Luv Maan😳... making Geet more J...lol!!!! πŸ˜†πŸ˜†gud work......!!!!!high five!!!!! lolz...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Poor Maan😳 is worid 4 Geet now...I wonder when she accept her feelings 4 Maan😊....!!!!!...More MANEET Moments plzzzzzzzzzz...!!!!!!πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago
Please add me to ur pm list!! I really like it!