kya pyaar hoga??MN ff part 9:pg 61 - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
hey Sariska
awesome update
loved it totally
thanks for the pm

love
pooja
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
Hey Sariska,

Thanks alot for the pm. Aww poor poor N, but then all good things happen with good people, i hope this always works for everyone and MN as well. Would love to read ahead. Keep it up!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
Awesum update...feeling sad for Nupur...Update it soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
Sariksha awesome update..
I loved it but very short...
Percap sounds preety intresting...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Heyyyy sariska
nice start yaar
poor nupur...
Y is samrat gonna create problems..???
Do continue soon
n thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hola!!!!!!im back with an update!!!!thank u so much for d lovely comments!!!!sorry cudnt reply individualy but thnx a lot!!!!here comes the next part!!!
note:before reading this part there is a slight change in d story line so plzzz refer to pg 1 and then read this part!!!!
Part 1:
Nupur goes down and takes the blessings of myank's dad and mom.
Mm-mayu abhi tak nahin utha??
N(bit sad)-vo so rahe hain
Mm-Kya hua beta???thodi udas lag rahi ho???
N(not wanting to tell her the reason)-nahin maa aisa kuch nahin hai
bas ghar ki yaad aa rahi hai....
Mm-hota hai dheere dheere sambhal jaogi!!
N-ji
Mm-vaise ek baat kahun??
N-ji maa boliey
Mm-tum log kuch din aur Delhi mein ruk jao aaj Mumbai jaana zaruri
hai???
N-maa humne pehle hi bahut chhutiyaan le li hain shaadi ke liye ab
hospital vale aur chhutiyaan allow nahin kar rahe hain isliey.
Mm-koi baat nahin...
Just then mayank comes fully dressed.he doesn't even look at
nupur.nupur feels bad.he goes and takes blessings of his parents.
Mm,md-khush raho
M-vo flight ke liey deri ho rahi hai to ab hum chalte hain.
Md-par beta tum logon ki flight to sham ki thi na?
M-dad flight ki timing prepone ho Gaya hai isliey subah ki flight
hai.vaise bhi humlogon ne sab kuch pack kar liya hai.
N-ji dad bilkul.
M-to chale nupur
N-ji
Then they take blessings and leave for d airport.
As soon as they reach the airport mayank tells nupur tht her seat is
different from hers and she won't check in with
him.by telling this he
goes inside the airport.nupur feels extremely bad.after all the
checkin and immigration stuff r done they sit in the flight.mayank
sits 2seats in front of nupur.
After setting herself comfortably she lays her head back and thinks
about this marriage.why is mayank doing this to her and lots more.but
her thoughts were disturbed by someone.

S-excuse me?
Nupur jerks out of her thoughts.
N-yes??
S-vo yeh meri seat hai aapki seat shayad andar hogi
She checks her ticket and realizes her mistake.
N-yeah sorry and she shifts inside.
The guy makes himself comfortable In the seat.
S-hii!!!
N-hiii
S-hi I'm samrat naam to suna hi hoga????
N-excuse me??? bahut Purana dialogue hai so stop flirting.
S-ok ok.hi I'm dr.samrat shergill,senior doctor in sanjeevani
basically a cardiac surgeon.
N-hi,dr nupur bhu....I mean sharma,senior doctor at
sanjeevani,gynacologist
S-oh to aap bhi sanjeevani mein kaam karte hain?
N-ji
S-sanjeevani,mumbai???
N-yes aur aap???
S-vaise main sanjeevani,Delhi mein kaam karta tha par mera transfer
Mumbai mein ho Gaya hai!!!!!
N-oh thts gr8 iska matlab hum ek saath kaam karenge!!!!
S-yup I'm quite excited!!!
N-aur bataiey aapke baare mein!!!
And with this they keep on continuing with their conversation till
they reach Mumbai.

On the other side mayank was getting extremely angry seeing nupur talk
to tht stranger happily as he was getting damn bored becs there was
some aunty sitting beside him(lol).
after the flight reached Mumbai nupur and samrat exchanged their
mobile nos and email Ids with each other.nupur introduced mayank to
samrat.he just said a hi and dragged nupur out of the flight.
As all the crap airport formalities got over mayank and nupur went to
mayank's house.....oops THEIR house.
They entered the
house.it was a well organized house.
M-nupur...
N-yes
M-meri baat suno bhale hi hum ek saath rehte hain lekin humaara kaam
bilkul alag hoga.tum duniya ke saamne to meri patni ho lekin mere liye
tum sirf ek aam ladki ho.neither do I care for u nor u shud care for
me as a typical wife.understand???
No response
M-understand????
N-ji
M-aur haan dekho mere paas do kamre to hain lekin un mein se ek kamra
mera studyroom hai isliye na chahte hue bhi Hume ek hi kamre mein sona
padega alag alag.tum sofa par aur main bed par.aur kabhi mujhse yeh
umeed mat karna ki main tumhe kabhi bed par sone doonga.ab tum jaldi
se fresh ho jao Hume hospital bhi jaana hai.tum guest washroom use kar
sakti ho.and with this he left leaving a helpless nupur
behind.as soon
as mayank left nupur fell on the floor and started crying helplessly.
N-mere saath hi aisa kyun ho raha hai.kyun Bhagwan kyun????but as
usual she got no answer
She wiped her tears and got freshened up and both of tehm left for
sanjeevani.

Precap:"doctors yeh hai hamare nays senior doctor dr.samrat shergill"
Nupur and samrat smile at each other.dr.kirti observes this.
K--oh to aap ek doosre ko Jante hain???
N-ji
K-gr8 phir dr.nupur aap dr.samrat ko sanjeevani dikhayengi.
N(with a smile)-yes
This makes mayank even more angry.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
amazing part 1 plz plz plz cont soon and thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
awesum one gurl...!!
continue soon
luv
ruchi :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
hey dear nice update and thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great update lov

cont soon n thnx 4 d pm

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