Sajan and Mayur ff(Pyaar Ki Rahe), updt pg95

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ragini sharma

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Posted: 15 years ago

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nice concept continue soon and please add me to your pm list

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waiting to read their married life..pls update soon. and pls do pm me........

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hey great, waiting to read it! post soon 😊

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do continue soon :-)
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Nice concept

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Swetha

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Thanks a lot for liking my concept guys and commenting! Your words motivated me :) Sorry abt not replying to all your comments but will surely do so this time! Here's part 1. Hope you guys like it....waiting for your comments

Part 1

Mayur

Its a bright Sunday morning, around 10.....The gleaming rays of the sun is finding its way through the Sharma mansion, illuminating the path it traces.......

Nupur: Mayaaaaaaaaaaaaaank! Kahan ho tummmmmmm......

Mayank comes running to the frantic calls of Nupur

Mayank: Kya hua, sab teek hai na. Tumhe kuch hua toh nahi(his face showing lines of concern)

Nupur: Arre mujhe kya hoga!

Mayank: To phir tumne itne zor se chilaya kyun, pata hai mai darr gaya, mujhe laga ki tumhe kahi chot lagi!

Nupur: Chot lage mere dushman ko, waise tumne itne dair kyun laga di aane mein? Yeh sab chodo, pathe ki baat yeh hai ki aaj Sunday hai aur muje woh srk ki nayi film dekhne hai, toh jaldi ready hojao!

Mayank(irritated): By god nupur is baat ke liye you shouted.....mujhe aaj bahut kaam hai, waise bhi last week I mean pechle hafte hi humne ek film dekhi ti na?

Nupur: Mujhe pata hai ki last week means pechla hafta, translate karne ki zaroot nahi hai and for your kind info Mr Mayank urf boring husband 1 week mein 168 hours that is 10080min that is 604800 sec hote hai, aur tum kah rahe ho ki 'just last week' ! I WANT TO GO, that's it and you have no choice mayank!(she says this in filmi style!)

Mayank: Meri filmi biwi, tumhari maths kafi fast ho gayi hai, congrats! 'smirks'

Nupur: Topic change math karo mayank!

Mayank: I'm not changing the topic! I'm really busy Nupur, my PA has resigned and we are on the look out for a new one, aaj Mr Shah ne bataya ki he has found someone and I need to meet the new candidate!

Nupur: Finally uss PA ne resign kar diya, bechari tumse pak gayi hogi, itne boring jo ho, tumhara PA koi bhi nahi banega, aur taras karti hoon main uss candidate par..........(saying so she walks away but mayank holds her hand...)

Mayank: Main boring nahi hoon, tum kuch zyadi he expect karti ho mujhse......waise tum apne friend hawa ke saath jaona film dekhne.....

Nupur: Uska naam hawa nahi pavan hai....tumhari memory bhi na, jab kaam ki baat aati hai toh you remember everything but jab film, dost ya pyar ki baat aati hain toh you are lost!

Mayank: Pyar karna bhi ek kaam hi hota hai, in which I've accomplished wonders, for eg kal raat yaad hai tumhe! Dost ki baat kar rahe ho toh main bata doon ki Hawa pavan same difference, dono ka mathlab ek hi hota hai nupur rani!

Nupur: Tumse tho baath karna hi bekhar hai sadu......(she walks away)

Mayank resumes his work.....

That's it for today guys, hope you liked it! The next part will be on Sajan and Gunur.

Love

Swetha