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nice one yaar.
 
plz pm me whn u update.
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EPISODE ?3

       (Dutta jaise hi kamre se bahar aane ke liye darwaza kholta hai saamne use kalawati dikhayee deti hai. Kalawti kuch kehti usase pehle hi uski nazar Dutta ke kurte per jaati hai jisme Nakku ke kaano ke jhoomke fase huye the. Kalawati ye dekh kar hairan ho jaati hai. Dutta usase puchta hai ki kya kaam hai. Wo Dutta ke kurte ko or ishara karti hai. Dutta ka dhyaan Nakku ke jhoomke per jaata hai. Wo use apne kurte se nikal kar Nakku ki or uchal deta hai.)

Dutta ? koi kaam tha tai.

Kala ? haan??. Wo aai saheb tujhe niche bula rahi thi.

Dutta ? thik hai.

            (Dutta kamre se jaane se pehle Nakku ki or ghoorkar dekhta hai. Dutta ke jaane ke baad Kala kamre me aati hai)

Kala ? kya ho raha tha yahan? Ek baat acchi tarah se apne dimag me daal le, tu chahe kitni bhi kosis kar le Bhau ki patni ka darja nahi paa sakti. Na hi is ghar me kabhi bahu ki jagah pa sakegi. Isliye tere liye yahi accha hoga ki tu apne ye sapne wapne bhul ja or chup chap se ek kone me padi rah jab tak Bahu tujhe yahaan rakhe huye hai. Samjhi.

            (Kala kamre se nikal kar apne kamre me jaati hai wahan Roop or Leela dono uska intzar kar rahi hoti hai.)

Roop ? ye lo tayee apna chanamitra.

Kala ? tum dono bus yahin karti raho or wahan ???. Wahan Bhau us Nakusha ke hantho me aa jayega.

Leela ? kya? Tayee tu ye kya keh rahi hai. Bhau to Nakku se nafart karta hai, wo kyun Nakku ke haantho me aane laga.

Kala ? aaj nafarat karta hai per kab tak???. Aaj maine jo dekha hai usase to mujhe lagta hai ki kahin ye Nakusha Bhau ko apne pyaar ke jaal me na fusa le.

Roop ? Tayee aap ye kya keh rahi hai or aapne aaj aisa kya dekha hai..

Kala ? abhi main Bhau ko bulane ke liye uske kamre me gayee thi to maine dekha ki Bahu ke kurte me Nakusha ka jhoomka atka pada tha.

Leela ? kya ye tu kya keh rahi hai Tayee?

Roop ? iska matlab Bhau or Nakusha ke beech kuch hua tha.

Kala ? nahi lagta to nahi ki kuch hua tha per agar wo dono aise hi ek dusre ke saath rahe to ho sakta hai Bahu use apni patni hine ka haque de de, or agar aisa ho gaya to??..

Leela ? agar Bhau or Nakusha ke beech koi rishta ban gaya to ho sakta hai kal ko Bhau use apni patni ka darja bhi de de. Or wo naukrani humari vahini ??.. nahi tayee kuch kar na aisa nahi hona chahiye.

Kala ? kuch karna to hoga. Filhal itna kar sakte hai ki Bhau or Nakusha ko jitna ho sake ek dusre se door rakhna hoga.

Roop ? lekin tayee hum unhe kamre ke bahar alag rakh sakte hai per raat ko to Bahu apne kamre me hi jaayega na or wo bhi Nakusha ke saath. Agar tab kuch ho gaya to???

Kala ? chup kar jab bhi bolegi manhoos hi bolegi. Are aisa kuch karna hoga ki jab Bhau apne kamre me jaaye to Nakusha maujood na ho or jab Nakusha kamre me ho to Bhau kamre ke bahar.

Leela ? lekin tayee hum aisa kab tak kar sakenge.

Kala ? tab tak jab tak ki Nakusha ko is ghar se nikalne ka koi raasta na mil jaaye. Aaj to Bahu bahar gaya hai. Kal tak hi lautega. Isliye humara kaam kal se shuru hota hai.

            (raat ko Nakku nahane ke liye bathroom me jaati hai. Kuch der baad Dutta kamre me aa jaata hai. Kyunki uska kaam zaldi khatam ho gaya hota hai isliye wo ghar laut aata hai. Dutta kamre me apne bed per baith kar koi file dekh raha hota hai. Bahar tez hawaye chal rahi hoti hai. Tabhi light chali jaati hai. Dutta pareshan ho jaata hai.)

Dutta ? kya musibat hai. Ab is light ko kya ho gaya?

            (Dutta kamre me candle dhoondhta hai. Per use candle nahi milti. Idhar kamre me Dutta maujood hai is baat se anjaan Nakku bathroom se nikalti hai. Kamre me andhera dekh kar wo candle dhoondhne ke liye aage badhti hai. Tabhi wo Dutta se takra jaati hai. Dono bed per gir jaate hai. )

Dutta ? dekh kar nahi chal sakti kya?

Nakku ? sab??. Aap?.. aap kab aaye?

Dutta ? ab kya tujhse pooch kar is kamre me aau jaau. Ab kya aise hi pari rahegi ya hategi mere uper se.

            (Nakku ko yaad aata hai ki wo abhi apne asli chehre me hai. Usane socha tha ki dutta to ghar me hai nahi isliye wo bathroom se kapre pehankar bahr aa gayee apne chehre per kala rang nahi lagaya. Nakku sochti hai ki agar Dutta ne use uske asli chehre me dekh liya to pata nahi kya sochega. Isliye wo zaldi se Dutta ke uper se hatati hai. Per dard se chikh kar phir se uske uper gir jaati hai.)

Dutta ? kya hua hat kyun nahi rahi or cheekh kyun rahi hai?

Nakku ? saab wo?.. wo mere baal aapke locket me ulajh gaye hai.

Dutta ? to nikal use or hut mere uper se.

           (Nakku kosis karti hai per kamyaab nahi hoti. Uske muh se dard bhari cheekh nikalti hai.)

Dutta ? ruk, main nikalta hoo.

           (Nakku Dutta ke seene per sir rakhti hai. Dutta uske baalo ko apne locket se nikalta hai. Chandani me Dutta ke chehre per Nakku ke baal parte hai. Dutta ko kuch hota hai. Wo Nakku ke baalo ko apni ungaliyo se huta kar use kaan ke piche rakhta hai. Dono ek dusre ki aankho me kho jaate hai. Nakku ek pal ko sab kuch bhool jaati hai. Phir achanak use yaad aata hai ki wo apne asli chehre me hai. Wo wahan se hutane ki kosis karti hai. Per hut nahi paati kyunki Dutta ne uske haantho ko apne haanto se pakad rakha tha. Nakku ghabra jaati hai.)

 PRECAP ? Nakku hutne ki kosis karti hai pet Dutta use nahi chorta. Wo pareshani se dekhti hai. Dutta Nakku ke chehre per apni ungaliya firata hai. Nakku seham jati hai. Dutta dheere dheere Nakku ko apne karib karta hai. Nakku ghabra kar Dutta ki or dekhti hai.

 

 please do comments.....

Edited by vs-kmh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey puja ......very nice dear...............update soon

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oa puja kal hi update kardena pleez 😃 precap parh kar hi ma heart startd beatng hard dhak dhak dhak dhak 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG puja..andhere mein itna beautiful scene!!!..amazing!!!so dutta went weak in his knees when nakku was there..*me gettiing dreamy* 😍 ..and dutta holding nakku's hand??? 😳..woow..update soon dear..me eager to knw th e story!!
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plz jaldi update karo na.
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMg !! very nicee plz update asap
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Its so romantic.Kaash we got such scenes in LTL.
Plz continue asap.
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 EPISODE 4

(Nakku Dutta ke seene per sir rakhti hai. Dutta uske baalo ko apne locket se nikalta hai. Chandani me Dutta ke chehre per Nakku ke baal parte hai. Dutta ko kuch hota hai. Wo Nakku ke baalo ko apni ungaliyo se huta kar use kaan ke piche rakhta hai. Dono ek dusre ki aankho me kho jaate hai. Nakku ek pal ko sab kuch bhool jaati hai. Phir achanak use yaad aata hai ki wo apne asli chehre me hai. Wo wahan se hutane ki kosis karti hai. Per hut nahi paati kyunki Dutta ne uske haantho ko apne haanto se pakad rakha tha. Nakku ghabra jaati hai. Nakku hutne ki kosis karti hai pet Dutta use nahi chorta. Wo pareshani se dekhti hai. Dutta Nakku ke chehre per apni ungaliya firata hai. Nakku seham jati hai. Dutta dheere dheere Nakku ko apne karib karta hai. Nakku ghabra kar Dutta ki or dekhti hai. Nakku ki bheenge balo se paani ki bunde dheere dheere Dutta ke chehre per parti hai. andhere me Dutta Nakku ko apne or karib karta hai. Nakku dari huyee hai ki kahin light na aa jaaye or uska such bahar na aa jaaye. per Dutta ko jaise hosh hi nahi hai. wo dheere dheere Nakku ke baalo ko uske kaan ke piche karta hai. )  
Nakku - saab ........... saab aap ye kya kar rahe hai.
(per Dutta ko to jaise kuch hosh hi nahi hai. wo Nakku ki baato ansuna kar ke uske chehre per ungaliya firata hai. dheere dheere uske hannth Nakku ki gardan ki or badhte hai. Nakku ke dil ki dharkane tez ho jaati hai. Dutta Nakku ko apne itne karib kar leta hai ki uski saanse Dutta ki saanso se takrati hai. Dutta uski khooshboo apni sannso me mehsoos karta hai. Dutta apni ungaliyo se Nakku ke hoto ko chuta hai. Nakku kuch ghabrakar piche hutna chahti hai per Dutta ka ek hannth uski kamar per hota hai jissae wo hut nahi paati. Dutta sab kuch bhool kar Nakku ko kiss karne jaa raha hota hai ki tabhi darwaze per Baji ki aawaz sunayee deti hai. " Bhau aap thik to ho"
                (Dutta ko achanak jaise hosh aata hai. wo Nakku ko chod deta hai. Nakku turant Bathroom me chali jaati hai. Dutta Baji ko andar aane ko kehta hai.)
Baji - kya bhau mombatti bhi nahi jlaya. aise hi andhere me baithe ho. lo main ye mombatti laya hai.
Dutta - ye light ko kya hua?
Baji - wo bahar hawa tez chal rahi hai na isliye koi problem ho gaya hoga. waise apne aadmi chek kar rahe hai aa jayegi.
(Tabhi light aa jaati hai.)
Baji - lo bhau aapne kaha or light aa gayee. waise wo koyal kidhar hai. nazar nahi aa rahi.
Dutta - shayad bathroom me hai.
Baji - bhau ab tum aaram karo. main chalta hoo. waise aapne khana to kha liya na.
Dutta - nahi per tu jaa main kha loonga.
Baji - thik hai bhau wo Nakku aaye na to ussae keh den aapko khana khila degi. main chalata hoo.
              (Baji chala jaata hai. thodi der baad Nakku bathroom se apne black makeup me nikalti hai. wo dekhti hai Dutta bed per baitha hua hai. Nakku bina kuch kahe kamre ke bahar chali jaati hai.)
 
PRECAP - Nakku Dutta ke saamne khana rakhti hai. Dutta chup chap khane baith jaata hai. per wo Nakku ki or dekh nahi raha. dono ek dusre se nazare chura rahe hai. Dutta ko khansi aati hai or Nakku pani ka glaas uthati hai. usi waqt Dutta bhi pani ka glaas uthata hai. dono ka haanth ek duasre ke haantho per per jata hai. dono ki nazre ek dusre se milti hai.
 
 
 
Edited by vs-kmh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very well written.Liked it a lot.
Romance in darkness. 😍