FF ~ Kitani Mohabbat Hai part 15 on p. 22

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Hay friends ye mera new and 1st FF hai. My first try. Maine ise Dutta Nakku ki shadi ke baad 2nd night se likha hai.

 

CHARACTER SCKETCH

 

Dutta Sri Ram Patil (Dutta Bhau) ' main lead (male)

Nakusha (Nakku / Disha) ' main lead (female)

Aai saheb ' Dutta's mom

Kala ' Dutta's Sister

Leela ' Dutta's sister

Roop ' Dutta's Sister

Babi ' Nakku's mom

Seth ji ' Nakku's brother

 

EPISODE '1

Nakku dutaa ke kamre me uska intzar kar rahi hai. nakku soch rahi hai ki ab to use Dutta ke sath hi rehna hai isliye ab wo apna asli chehra usase kaise chupayegi. Tabhi darwaze per kisi ke aane ki aawaz aati hai. nakku dar jaati hai. wo dekhti hai ki baji dutta ko sahara dekar le aa raha hai.  Naakku dutta ko sahara dene ke liye aage badhti hai per dutta hanth ke ishare se mana kar deta hai. nakku piche hut jaati hai. baji dutta ko bed per sula deta hai.

Baji ? dekh nakku aaj teri wazah se sirf teri wazah se bhau ka ye haal hai. main tujhe kabhi maaf nahi karega nakku. Kabhi nahi. Tere pyaar ke natak ne bhau ko tod kar rakh diya hai.

Nakku ? baji main to...........

Baji ? bus, ab itna ehsaan kar ki bhau ko chain se sone de.

Baji chala jaata hai. nakku soye huye dutta ko dekhti hai. phir dheere dheere uske pairo ke paas baith jaati hai. wo purane sapno purane dino ko phir se yaad karti hai jab dutta use apni dost manta tha. Wo din jab dutta ne kaha tha ki "nakku ye tu hai. acchi lag rahi hai. humesha aise kyun nahi rehti. Ruk abhi baji ko bulata hoo or kehta hoo ki teri ek tasweer nikale use main apni shadi ki album me lagaunga. Or uske niche likhunga nakku meri sabse acchi dost."

Achanak nakku purani yaado se bahar nikalti hai or uski nazar dutta ke chehre per padti hai. wo sochti hai aaj uske chehre per kitna dard hai. kitni taklif hai. anjane me hi sahi per uski taklif ki wazah wahi hai. agar usne RAVI or SUPRIYA ka such pehle hi dutta ko bata diya hota to aaj dutta ko itni taklif nahi hoti. Yahin sochte sochte nakku ki nazar dutta ke pairo per parti hai. uske pairo me joote dekh kar wo dutta ke joote utarne ki kosis karti hai. isi beech dutta ki neend khul jaati hai. or wo nakku ka haanth pakad leta hai.

Dutaa ? kya kar rahi hai?

Nakku ? sab wo....... aapke joote ....... wahi utar rahi thi.

Dutta ? joote........... tujhe kya lagta hai ye sab karke tu mera dil jeet legi. Nakku teri saja itni aasani se khatam nahi hone wali. Ye sab karke na to tu mere dil tak pahuch sakti hai or na hi mera dil pighla sakti hai. tune mere saath jo kiya hai uski saza to tujhe milegi hi.

                Ye kya nakku tu ghabra kyun rahi hai. tere maathe per ye pasina ........ ye pasina kyun?

(dutta nakku ke maate ko hanth lagata hai. phir dheere dheere uske galo ko apni ungaliyo se chuta hao. Nakku ghabra jaati hai. dheere dheere uski ungali nakku ki gardan per pahuch jaati hai. achanak dutta nakku ka gala pakad leta hai. nakku ki taklif uske chehre per dikhayee deti hai. dutta dusre haanth se nakku ke baalo ko chuta hai. dheere dheere use dhakelte huye deewar ke kareeb le jaata hai.)

Dutta ? nakku tune dutta se pyaar kiya hai to ab anzam to bhugtna hi hoga. Or tu to yahin chahti thi na. Dutta ki biwi banana. To phir aaj ........ aaj aise dari dari kyun hai. tujhe to khush hona chahiye. teri chal kamyaab ho gayee. Ban gayee dutaa ki biwi. Mujhse bahut pyaar karti hai na....... bol na........... are bol na.... meri pyaari biwi....... bol na mujhse bahut pyaar karti hai na.

                (nakku kuch nahi bolti. Sirf sir hilati hai.)

Dutta ? haan ......... jab tu mujhse itna pyaar karti hai to mera bhi farz banta hai na ki tujhe pyaar ke badle pyaar doo. Akhir haque hai ye tera. Meri patni hai tu. Kyuin main sahi keh raha hoo na.

                (dutta dono haanto se nakku ke gaal pakad leta hai. phir dheere dheere uske dono hanth se nakku ke dono bajuo ko jor se pakad leta hai. nakku ko dard hota hai. per wo kuch nahi kehti. Dutaa nakku ko apne paas khichta hai. nakku ki aankho me dekhta hai. dono ki nazre milti hai. dutta nakku ko dheere dheere bed ke paas lata hai. or phir use chod deta hai. dutta apne black kurte ke uper ke batan kholta hai. nakku ye dekh kar dar jaati hai. dutaa dheere dheere nakku ke kareeb aata hai. nakku piche hutati hai. dutta aage badhta hai. nakku bed per gir jaati hai. dutta uske karib jaata hai. dutta apna chehra nakku ke kareeb karta hai. nakku dar se use dekhti hai...........)

 

to be continue

 

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Nice yaar, please continue. (:
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kya karnewala hai dutta...do contiue  soon...cant wait
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very interesting ...and very well written continue soon
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