SR Untitled One Shot, Uptd 06/06, p.1 - Page 4

Originally posted by: desi chic

hehe my bad forget to comeback after reservation 😳 Its ok, I put it under the special, extended reservations section😉
Neetz I love you post and now count me in your fan following, you're great writer and I will second Poco that your post rhymes and has symphony coming out from the words 👏👏 *looks around in disbelief* You sure you read what I posted?😕 Pagli, you are too kind, and I'm flattered😳

and your poem is just awesome so apart from president of  BUSR you are great Poetess too 😳 Kaunsi poetess? Main BUSR di kursi te hi teekh haan, don't throw me any higher😆

Inna sara talent.. hats off yaar.. now can we have part II 😳 me craving for it and I am big bhukad bikhari 😛 Yaar, ehni taareef? How am I supposed to huzm that? And especially knowing I'm not deserving of any of it! The magic lies in the mind of the reader, but you humble me😳 As for your prasad, I will likely bring it around tomorrow😉 Picture abhi baaki hai mere dost!

Cheers,
dc

Thankoo for extended parking 😳
I am sure yaar *rubbing ma eyes and runs to check first page again * yeah I read your post only 😛 pagli tu talented hai. maan le ab.. warna chaped markar samjhoon 😡
tu hi hai poetess .. hor ki tu jedo tu hilegi nahi kursi de naal then how will I take that position tell tell 😈*devil*

Le yeh post acchi hai bahut hai twanu kuch nahi pata.. I am blunt if wont like will tell ya upfront 😳..

and yeh this reader is all set with her reading glasses to read further
Edited by monar - 13 years ago

Hey guys, I've updated this suspiciously long "OS" on the first page... feel free to rip apart!😊 Maine waada poora kiya Pragzie beta, now your baari😉

Anyone wanting me to PM them, please let me know! And as you know, I don't look over these thingies, so forgive the mistakes! I wrote this one rather quickly, so half the stuff probably makes no sense anyhow!😕

Cheers,
dc
Edited by desi chic - 13 years ago

👏👏👏👏..I am spellbound.............

Originally posted by: uppaas

👏..I am spellbound.............

And I am too... how do you have such tolerance?😆😆 Thanks dude! 😃

Cheers,
dc

Its absolutely breathtaking. Honestly, I read a LOT, but I've rarely come across something so simple, and so beautiful at the same time. Kudos to you.

-Aditi

Loved the second part

Cont soon!

Wow!!

How did I miss this the first time!!😲

neetu di 🤗 your just magical with words..i love reading ur OSs..they are just😍 ..i am speechless..i cannot think how to describe how much i liked it!

sid kabhi nahiin badlega even in the OS he is thinking AR are meant to be 😆

and i luv ridz nakhre 😆

continue ASAP! 😆 😆 me will continue soon 2

😆 Edited by Pragzie - 13 years ago

Originally posted by: monar

Thankoo for extended parking 😳 Anything for fellow employees😃
I am sure yaar *rubbing ma eyes and runs to check first page again * yeah I read your post only 😛 pagli tu talented hai. maan le ab.. warna chaped markar samjhoon 😡 Oye *hand on cheek*... tu bhi Ridzy ki tarah tapad-mar-ing professional hai kay?😕😕
tu hi hai poetess .. hor ki tu jedo tu hilegi nahi kursi de naal then how will I take that position tell tell 😈*devil* *Bollywood style  - Nahiiiiiiiiiiin... hand on forhead* Tu beth toh sahi, main neeche se keench loongi😆

Le yeh post acchi hai bahut hai twanu kuch nahi pata.. I am blunt if wont like will tell ya upfront 😳.. Chalo, tuhaadi bluntness sar aakhon par😳

and yeh this reader is all set with her reading glasses to read further Sirf reading glasses?😆

Thanks for the sweetness dost!

Cheers,
dc