23/5 - One Shot: Armaan takes Sid-Riddz home. - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is an awesome one shot Poco.👏 completely enjoyed reading it. Hw i wish even in the show after the party Ridz had actually slept in Modi Palace holding Siddy Widdy's hand....would have been so cute. 😳
Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pocahontas



Of course you can comment, Seert and thank you so much for the comment , dear. I agree with you completely. SR are at their insane worst now and Armaan at his sane best. Soon SR will give Armaan headaches and he will beat them up. 😆😆



Your very welcome, and I thought I'd ask abt commenting since you know enemy lines have been drawn
Uff don't get me started on the insanity of the characters and the show. Don't understand why they're delaying so much...I mean just end this track already. And theres just way too many inconsistencies in the show....they keep changing the characters and even the past story line to suit a particular scene (Too many instances but for e.g. today they said that Sid for the first time said he loves Ridhima whilst he was drunk after the party, but he actually first admitted his love when Armaan and Sid were fighting in the BB court)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pocahontas

The door of the Modi Penthouse opens with one soccer-kick of Armaan's leg. Armaan walks in , or rather staggers in with a lot of weight on his two shoulders- Sid clinging to his right arm and resting his head on his right shoulder and Riddz clinging to his left arm and resting her head on his left shoulder. Sid-Riddz wake up at the sound of the door and look at Armaan....

Armaan ( trying to get inside )- Goodmorning ! Ghar aa gayaa....ab meri baazu chhodo , Modis! Ek saath hum teenon ghar ke andar nahiin ghus sakte! My figure is super sexy lekin tum dono ke baare mein aisa leh sakta. Chhodo mujhe aur jaao ghar ke andar.

Sid ( cheek to cheek with Armaan )- Noooooooooooooooooo! Cootchie! Tum mujhe chhodkar chale gaye to mera khayaal kaun rakhega? ...

Riddhima ( slaps Sid )- Abe chupp! Bewade kahiin ke ! Sharam nahiin aati itni peete hue?.... Biwi main hoon tumhaari.

Armaan ( trying to free himself)- Bewade Sid , ye teri Bewadi Riddhima hai... le dhyaan se dekh.... ( Armaan holds Riddz and Sid's face closer to each-other and they blink their eyes at each-other)....ab gaana bajaaoon background mein , badtameezon? .....Tere aur iske sapne ab ek rang hai..... o ek-dooje ke jeevan saathi!....

Sid ( touches Riddz' nose and cheeks gingerly)- O TERI! Ye to sacch mein meri biwi hai.... shaadiwaali biwi.... ( puckers his nose and clings back to Armaan).....lekin isne meri shirt kyun pehni hai?

Riddhima pounces on Sid's neck where her red dupatta is hanging and Armaan has a hard time balancing....

Armaan - O aunty! ..... ye tumhaara shaadiwaala pati hai! Kya kar rahi ho? Iske liye Karwachauth ka vrat rakha tha.... remember?....Flashback mein jaao.....

Riddhima ( clutching Sid's neck and being held back by Armaan )-  Arre kaun sa shaadi waala pati!.... Ye Sid nahiin hai ! Sid mere kapde nahiin pehenta.... isne mera dupatta kyun pehna hai?....Oye , tu jo bhi hai , meri izzat waapis kar.

Sid laughs and lets go of Armaan and holding Riddhima by the arm jerks her inside the house.... Sid laughs and lets go of Armaan and holding Riddhima by the arm jerks her inside the house....

Armaan ( cautions )- Sid sambhaal ke! Gir jaayegi , teri ek hi biwi hai!

Sid ( swinging Riddhima's arms )- Biwi nahiin saas-bahu ka TV hai!..... Waise to 5 liter aansoo baha -bahaa kar mera ghar bharti rehti hai... lekin party mein dekha tha ise.... ( copies Riddz)... uff ! teri adaa!....i like the way you move.... wahaan to izzat ke kabootar uda rahi thi tum ... ab tumhe izzat waapis chaahiye.

Armaan ( in comic shock )- Suna Riddhima! Kya kaha Sid ne ? Tumhaara koi dupatta nahiin hai... i mean tumhaari koi izzat nahiin hai! ... aur isliye tum Sid ki shirt .... i mean uski izzat pehenkar ghoom rahi ho!

Riddhima grabs Sid by his shoulders and shakes him like a wet cloth put up for drying.....


Sid ( like a baby )- Chhod de chudail! Chhod de mujhe!..... Armaan bachaao mujhe! Ye meri izzat par hamla kar rahi hai.


Armaan ( sitting comfortably in a couch)- Lutne de, beta ....... waise bhi is society mein kaun sa tum dono ki koi izzat bachi hai.....


Riddhima - Siddhanth Modi ke bacche!


Sid ( thinking )- Bacche? Abhi nahiin hue .....kab karne hain?


Riddhima ( latching on to the dupatta )- Ye tumhe divorce papers bhejne se pehle sochna chahiye tha...... badtameez, bewakoof aadmi! Bacche hum baad mein plan karenge.....Ab mera dupatta waapis karo aur mujhe .... bar mein.... sorry .... JP ke ghar chhod kar aao...


Armaan ( sifting through a magazine and biting into an apple)- Tch , tch.... kya biwi hai teri Sid.... tujhe chhodkar JP ke paas ja rahi hai.....


Sid ( holding Riddz by the shirt collar )- Kya?...... Tumhaara JP ke saath bhi chakkar hai?......Maine tumhe 1.5 chammach sindoor aur 2.5 kg ka Cartier ka .... oh ya , Mangalsutra ye dinn dekhne ke liye pehnaaya tha.....


Riddhima ( jumping up and down like a kid)- Pehle mera collar chhod , Sid!.... Armaan bachaao!


Armaan ( getting up)- Filhaal , mujhe tum dono se bachne ki zaroorat hai!.... Ek Club Soda aur doosra Rum ka Tadka.....


Sid ( not leaving Riddz )- Armaan mera hai! Mera Cootchie meri side lega!.... Aur ab tum meri shirt utaaro! 


Riddhima ( running away)- Tum mere kapde utarwaaoge! Kaise pati ho tum!


Sid ( running after her )- Party mein kapde utaar kar twist kar rahi thi! Kaisi biwi ho tum? Apna dupatta lo , aur meri shirt do........


Armaan switches on the playstation and sits down to play a game , putting earplugs in his ears as Sid-Riddz run all over the house chasing each-other. 


Riddhima throws cushions and furniture on Sid.....


Sid ( throwing things back at her )- Phenk chudail, phenk , kal subah tujhe uthaakar poore ghar mein jhaadoo-pochaa nahiin karwaaya na , to mera naam bhi... naam....


Riddhima ( throwing a fruit basket at him)- Abe Siddhanth Modi hai tu! Mera shaadiwaala pati!


Sid ( flying kiss to Riddhima twice )- Thanks! Haan...... to mera naam bhi Siddhanth Modi nahiin! 


Finally , they both get tired of running around and collapse on a sofa together behind Armaan......


Armaan ( still playing )- Ho gaya tum dono ka.....Main ghar jaaoon?


No response. Armaan turns around and slowly tears well up in his eyes but with a beautiful smile on his face. 


Sid-Riddz have collapsed together - their faces facing each-other and noses touching. They are holding each-others' hands in sleep. Armaan shakes his head , still smiling and putting a blanket on both of them , he goes out , switching off the lights.....


Love and luck to everyone always,❤️


God bless everyone.🤗

pocco amazing .why don't u join DMG creative team? if u will join DMG it will be dhamaka. yeh FF koi CV ko bhejo aisa episode dekhne ko mile to mazaa aa jaye.
tumhare post ka to mujhe intezaar rehta hai.love u sweety👍🏼