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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
Fantastic

except the last bit....
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#22
pART-11..Trishul shouts at kumud:what do u think of me?u

                                                                                    
                          thot u can easily fool me?let
                                                      kshitij cum.i'll kill him.i
                                                                                    
                          won't allow u 2 go with him.
                                                      K got scared. he goes
                                                                                    
                          near vidhi:u thot u can
                                                      save ur sister?
                                                                                    
                          V:yes,she'll be saved.u
                                                      cannot do anything.when
                                                                                    
                          i'm alive u won't get her.
                                                      T:so that means i won't
                                                                                    
                          get kumud if u r alive..then
                                                      i'll kill u.then i'll get
                                                                                    
                          kumud no. T beats V
                                                      heavily.kumud-khusum
                                                                                    
                          cud'nt save her. vidhi's
                                                      situation was really
                                                                                    
                          dangerous.so K takes a
                                                      knife & stabbed him.ppl were
                                                                                    
                          shocked.K screams. Ks
                                                      reached.he did'nt
                                                                                    
                          understand anything. K
                                                      cries:i killed trishul. Ks
                                                                                    
                          was shocked. K:if u had cum
                                                      a little more
                                                                                    
                          earlier,this wud'nt hav
                                                      happened. Ks was really
                                                                                    
                          upset. K:u go kshitij.god
                                                      does'nt like us living
                                                                                    
                          2gether.u marry kali.don't
                                                      spoil our life.u go
                                                                                    
                          kshitij..plz giv me ur fav
                                                      violen.thats enuff 4 me 4 ur
                                                                                    
                          presense.but in jail i dunno
                                                      whether they'll allow me 2
                                                                                    
                          carry.go kshitij...but plz don't
                                                      say 'gud-bye'.i can't
                                                                                    
                          bear it. Ks:kumud.. suddenly
                                                      she falls into Ks's
                                                                                    
                          arms. she:u shud not cum 2 see
                                                      me 2 the jail.don't see
                                                                                     me
                          in that situation.sumtimes
                                                      i won't be seen alive
                                                                                    
                          there. Ks:kumud,how can i liv
                                                      without u? he hugs her
                                                                                    
                          tightly. Ks sees T's
                                                      hand moving slightly. Ks:trishul
                          is not dead.we'll take
                                                      him 2 the hospital.
                                                                                    
                          K:no let him die.otherwise
                                                      he won't giv us piece.
                                                                                    
                          Ks:r u crazy?
                                                      V:kshitij,we'll take him
                          2 the
                                                                                    
                          hospital. K:u r mad.he'll
                                                      kill u. V:i don't
                                                                                    
                          want him 2 die,not bcoz i luv
                                                      him.bcoz if he dies,u'll
                                                                                     be
                          in jail.u'll miss a happy
                                                      life.i won't u 2 be happy
                                                                                     in
                          Ks's hands. K was
                                                      touched by that. T gets
                                                                                    
                          V
                                                                                    
                          stares at him. T:i tried
                                                      2 kill u.then also u saved
                                                                                    
                          me? V:that's not bcoz
                                                      of my luv. T becomes
                                                                                    
                          sad:i won't destroy kumud's
                                                      life.let her go with
                          kshitij.kumud,i'll be ur old
                                                      jeeju.u can trust me this
                                                                                    
                          time. V:i can't trust
                                                      u. T:i no that.but giv me
                                                                                    
                          chance..2day onwards i'll be
                                                      ur faithful husband,i
                                                                                    
                          promise. he catches V's
                                                      hand.she gets relieved.
                                                                                    
                          T:kumud,thanku 4
                                                      teaching me a lesson.all these
                          days
                                                                                     i
                          was not conscious.now with
                                                      ur punishment i think i've
                                                                                     a
                          change. Ks-K smile.they
                                                      get married & hav a
                                                                                    
                          happy life.   THE END.
                                                     
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
FANTASTIC< BRILLIANT< MARVELLOUS> MIND-BLOWING

U R A GENIUS......
3 Cheers 4 Jasmine
HIP HIP HORAY
HIP HIP HORAY
HIP HIP HORAY

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Posted: 17 years ago
#24
Fantastic ending
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Posted: 17 years ago
#25
good fanfic.. too bad kali didnt get married.. but thankfrully she wasnt evil.. haha.. good job in writing this fanfic