heheheh sowwieeee.......for the late coomnet lekin ab tujhe to pata hain na....i m the reserved queeen but tu phir bhi lucky hain mene yaha sirf 1 hi din tuk reserve chora baaqi sab mein to kabhi kabhi ek hafta ho jata hain hehehehe
chalo ab coming to the part
i reallly loved it ...it was really nice ur really an amazing writer so keep it up n dont underestimate ur self coz ur trully good
u trust me na???so trsut ma words ok
i loved rahul muskaaan nokh jokh hehe i alwayz love it coz i love them tehy r reeally sweet hehehe i couldnt stop laughing whn muskaan was screaming u know typical muskaaan
n i got a bit confused whn tehy were talking baut the gul whu passed form the corrider abut 2 3 years back i was like did i missed something wht r tehy talking i read two three times but samjh nai aya thn i m like ghaddee age to phar so i reead more n phir samjha me aya ke whts happening.....
u knwoww i would like to clap for u .....
coz tht part was really amazing...it looked real....
i mean agar koi dusra hota to they would have directly explained whts happening but u didnt do tht ....
u strted form the middle like AR were talking to each other n rahul suddenly came n v readers came ( lolz) soo this is the converstion v here n v get confused n thts where armaan explain
samjhi wht i m trying to say hope u did heheheh
n abut the dimple baby ..n bahi ..hehehehehe haaiii i know whu it is lolzz...
soo ab jaldi uske bhai ko lav orr ye ek big problem ko solve karo as i really want to know
n plzz update the part sooon mein tujhe pyar se abhi keh rahi hun ......kyu ke agar nahi kiya to i will bring my gang
heheheh
love u maleee
muahh
Edited by princess52 - 14 years ago
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