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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
qute story......... please update the next chapter soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
Sooo Good!! Looking Forward To The Next Chapter =)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
PART 3
 
As time changing nite turns day... day turns nite wheater changes 4om summer to winter to winter to summer, pratigya got a sence of style wid her hairs and clothing, awhile krishna becume a total ladies man... a total heart breaker for gurls offcourse!

so this is about 2 days b4 prats turns 20, and she is still in canada.....

tina is juz a radom gurl...and will be here for a lil awhile

tina: krish, i reali reali reali reali reali reali reali reali reali reali reali reali reali reali reali reali reali reali I LUB YEWW

kirsh: oh god get lost tina.... we had fun... went around for two weeks, and it is imposiable to lose ur heart to sum in two weeks

tina: bt i reali lov and lov happens in a 1st eye sight

krish: dat onli happens in books

tina: but-- krish: no buts gurl go away

tina gose away crying and sees adrash cuming: adrash can u tell ur friend to be more decent like you

adrash: did krish?

tina: yess and starts crying

adrash: look tina i told u b4 krish is not a one man gurl... i told u nt to go out wid him

tina: it is so hard to belive u and krish r best friends, both of u r so opposite 4om one another

adrash: yea bt me and krish go way back

tina: krish... oh krish( and gose away crying)

adrash gose to krish

Adrash: krish, u did it again

krish: did wot?

adrash: u nw wot im tawking about

krish: oh cum'on adi

adrash: its adrash

krish: yea yea adi

adrash: krishnaa

krish: hey dont u dare... i got a rep to protect... like wid my image krish gose not krishna

adrash: and wid mines adrash gose not adi

krish: fi9 adrashh... so wots neww

adrash dosent answer as he gets lost in sum1's eyess

krish: adrash?? dude?? adii?? (krish pinches adrash, so he can cum back to earth) earth calling adrash

adrash: OUCHH... wot is it

krish: quit starin @my sister

adrash: wot... huh... who?

krish: my sister i nw u have the longest crush on her... and even komal likes you... bt i dont understand why u guyz neva tawk

adrash: we tawked dis morning we said hi to one another

krish: juz hi...

adrash: yea and bell rang so we had to go to our classes... as we dont bunk as you do

krish: i dont bunk i juz take my current gf out for breakfast... lunch and then dinner if u nw wot i mean! (and winks at adrash)

adrash: gosh krish... u nw i juz meet tina and she was crying soo much and asking me how can we be the best friends, and nw im wondering the same thing

krish runs as he sees his next door nieghbour cuming towards him and adrash

adrash: arey, where r u going??

krish: look behind u- and runs away

adrash looks and its arushi and rolly( both are sisters one has a massive crush krish(arushi) and rolly has a massive crsuh on adrash)

rolly:(in a seductive way) hi adrash

adrash: hi rolly ( adrash thinks to himself: dat krish ran away and left me here, i'll nt leave him)

rolly: so wot r u doing?

adrash: umm nt much i gotta go to my class.. i'll tawk to u later

and adrash leaves

rolly: did u hear that, he said he'll tawk 2me later

arushi: he always says dat

rolly: ur juz jelous cuz krish ran away wen he saw u cuming

arushi: not true he likes me... bt he is juz playing hard to get

rolly: sure sure

arushi: its true

rolly: yea, lets go to our class b4 v get late

okay guyz, thanks for the comments... will update today the thrid part or mayb tommorow... bt it will be sweet! anyway thanks agian guyz... plz do comment!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi

really liked ur ff. plz pm next time u update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
wow i just love it
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plzzzzzzzzzz update soon 😭
thanxx alot 4 ur hard work 😊 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks guyz... and  sistu  next time i'll pm u wen i upload!πŸ€—
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
Very good chp 😊 looking forward to the next part.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow Wow Wow!!
Got Nothing Else To Say Apart From Praising You Lolz =)
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PART 4
 
 
nena: rise and shine

pratigya: oh mama tori aur dar sona do na

nena: i woud let you bt this ticket and says pratgiya flight in 5hours will departure soon... nt unless u want me to cancel iit

pratigya jumped upp fast: mom juz 5hours... we gotta hurry up... i'll go 2da bathroom and cum down fast

nena: okay sweety i'll wait for yew downstairs

after 15mins pratigya cums down ready and wearing this

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2513/3894750504_3dc73d74b5.jpg

nena: pratigya ur going like thiss?

pratigya: yea mom wots worng with it?

nena: nuthing much... like this is k in canada bt in india ur dad and brother will be angry

pratigya: well mom let them b as i cant do anything

and juz then pratigya's best two friends how up... sulie and sudhi(hehe cant think of any other names!)

sulie starts crying: pratigya dont go... like hwo wants to go to india and leave such a clean canada

pratigya: dont say that... and stop crying u'll make me cry as well

sudhi: bt pratgiya i'll miss u da most

sulie: no i'll miss prats the most

sudhi: sulie shut up

sulie: no you shut-up

nena: thier they go again

pratigya: plz stop guyz or i'll miss me flight

nena: pratigya think this over r u sure... like if nt i'll cancel the flight

pratigya: mom i have been waiting for this moment sence the last 7yrs

nena: okay then lets leave

pratigya hug her mother and sulie, sudhi and leave.

pratigya in the airplane starts to think: oh god im going to meetever1 after such a long time, im soo xcited, i wonder who ever1 would look ... my dad,, my brother and my best friend- komal, gosh i miss all the naughty-ness me and komal would do.... and most of all i wonder how krishna would look... i bet he still would be surounded by gurls 24/7... bt im sure he'll be a gud man... and will nt make fun of me... as he used! i just hope that i will have da curage to tawk to him!

IN INDIA

krish: wots up wid u adrash... u look happy

adrash: ur talking like as if u dont nw

krish: i reali dont... wot did u tawk wid komal?

adrash: krish tum bhi na

krish: fi9 fi9 tell me wots up

adrash: pratigya is cuming

krish: ummm... who

adrash: pratigyaa my-- {gets interupted by krish}

krish: pratigya, don't u dare say u have been cheathing on my sister wid this gurl named pratigya... like ur a gud guy and nt like... you have ur principles to follow... and wait dose uncle now wot pratigya

adrash: wait wait WAIT, hold up krish, papa dose nw abou pratigya.... and even u nw her

krish: i do?!

adrash: yes she is my SISTER pratiyga... dose dat ring a bell

krish: u mean pratigyaaaaaaaa.... ewrlllllll like wid those two braids-- i mean oily braids and those glasse and that

adrash: stoppp kirsh, she is my sister

krish: yes and i can understand wot u'll be going thrugh

adrash : hey shut-up krish... if u another thing about pratigya i'll tell ever1 ur real name

krish: heyyy... fi9 fi9 i'll shut-up

adrash: gud so we will go at 7pm to the airport

krish: why?

adrah: to recive pratigya

krish: i dont want 2go

adrash: well to sad and bad ur gonna go, and tell komal about the flight time, as she was veri x-cited as well

krish: there she cums u tell her

adrash: wait krish where r u going

krish: giving u and komal sum alone time... later dude

adrash: gosh this krish

komal: hid

adrash: heyy.. i just want to tell u nd pratigya's flight will land at 7pm... i told krish already and he will cum as well

komal: okay

adrash: and i wanted to say

komal: yea im listening

adrash: umm juz tht u look reali preaty today

komal blushes: thanks adrash, so i'll see u then

adrash: when?

komal: at the airport

adrash: why?

komal: to revice pratigya

adrash: oh yes yes i nw... i was just u nw

komal: yea okay bye

adrash: bye - adrash thinks to himself... gosh im such a duche bagg, i forgot my own sister to revice 4om da airport

adrash sees rolly cuming towrads him and runs away

rolly thinks: next time i'll get u adrash

thanks guyz for each and ever single response.... thanks a tonss... and plz comment again and thaks onces a againπŸ€—πŸ€—

****and yea i'll couldnt find a beta pics... like google sucks... can sum1 tell me a gud place to get photos of girls wearing western clothes... plz and thanksss******
Edited by Mina H - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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such an awesome part iove it πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
thanxxx alot 4 ur hard work😊 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
😊plzzzzzz do update soon