Originally posted by: karneetholic
thanx kritz........im really thinking hard on da next scene so dat i dont repeat myself............im not at all creative ...only hugging or tripping cums on mind...........but dis tym sam wont ve it dat easily 4 sure.......;-)
Guns and Naz....u guys r so mean😆 Can't blame u two....it's the Sameer effect i guess!!!!Originally posted by: karneetholic
me too......used dat so many tyms on my sis
Originally posted by: lnmdjrocksss
Aha.....i like dat😉Offcourse avni shouldn't give up that easily,i want her to throw some tantrums😆
meri dimag pura khali hain.....how shud sam manofy avni?????????
Originally posted by: lnmdjrocksss
Guns and Naz....u guys r so mean😆 Can't blame u two....it's the Sameer effect i guess!!!!
back wid a ''not upto da mark scene''....dimag pura khali hai bcoz of study pressures .but was dying to write sumthing...sorry but cudnt think of sumthing betr.
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a cud b savni scene6:
on reaching home avni doesnt even luk @ him.getting down from da car she goes 2wards her garden....
sam getting down 'kaha ja rahi ho......avni pehle kuch khalo'
avni says nothing nd keeps walking
sam stands in her way,holding her asks 'wats da matter????y r u being so serious???????'
avni 'leave me...i dont wanna talk bout it'
sameer 'fine im sorry 4 burging in........but.....'
avni 'but....but kya sameer...kehdo na ......u didnt trust me'
a guard weirdly hearing deir convo.....sam saw dat.
sam 'avni andar chalke bat karte hain' holds her hand nd forcefully takes her inside da house.
avni 'sameer......chodo mujhe'
but he doesnt pay ne heed to her.
on entering da house varosh were waiting 4 dem in da hall..
roshni 'kyun jeej kaha tha na k jai avni di pataneka koshish karega'
avni 'to yeh ghatiya plan tum logoka hain.....aur varun tum bhi..'
varun doesnt say nething cing her temper.......
roshni 'par di hum to mazak karrahe the'
avni 'just shut up roshni.......tumne 1 bar bhi socha k woh log mama papa k kitne close associates the.....kya sochenge woh mere bare mein'
sameer 'roshni varun tumhe shopping jana thana...tum log jao'
varun 'lekin bhaiya...'
sameer 'kaha na jao....' nd in sign lingo he says to him 'dont worry......main sambhal lunga'
roshni being very upset 'lets go varun.........im sorry di'
nd varosh goes outside da house 4 shopping.....
sameer to avni 'relax jaan.....itna gussa champ k liye thik nahi hain.....lets ve our lunch together...wat say?'
avni is still furious nd walks away to champs room....she sits down in a chair nd stares @ her mothers photo......
(actually avni is feeling very guilty as bcoz of her nd sameer ppl myt misunderstand he mothers values.....dey myt question her integrity nd parvarish....moreover she thinks sameer didnt trust her nd her love 4 him.)
sameer observes her from da door......he sends a servant to avni wid a plate full of fruits.
servant entering da room 'mam apke liye'
avni 'no thanx......abhi kuch mat leana' nd still luking @ da photo...she didnt even c sam standing @ da door.......
sameer is very worried bout her....he wants to go to her nd holding her tightly wants 2 console her...........but he decides to give her sum space to calm down nd goes away.
after sumtymes sameer cums back to talk wid avni.....
sameer chirping to keep everything normal 'avni..........kya kar rahi ho............champ k anese pehle hi mera patta gul karrahi ho......ab mere saath tym bitao.......u didnt even c me properly today niether u let me do dat'.chalo mere saath....chalo na'
avni 'kyun kya hua???????????'
sameer 'ab koi sawal nahi.......get up'
avni gets up but she held her head due to nausea....she havent had nething since morning...
sameer quickly holds her nd scolds her 'meri koi bat nahi manti ho......ab chakkar arreahe hain na...kyun apne apko itna takleef deti hon woh bhi mere liye'
sameer picks her up nd takes her 2 deir room.he makes her sit in da bed nd says 'wait a sec' brings soup nd sits infront of her.....
while feeding her avni stares @ him...
sameer 'avni khao......bohut gussa kar chuki tum....maine kaha na .....im sorry........tum itni hurt hogi maine kabhi sapne mein bhi nahi socha tha'
avni 'mujhe laga k tum mujhe samjhoge......tumhare anese jai humare rishte ke upar sawal uthayega...tumhe pata tha'
sameer 'par pata nahi chalana..aur wise bhi kya farak parta hain'
avni 'farak parta hain........woh humhare family frenz hain...... misunderstanding se rishte bigarte hain...uncle humare father figure jaise the'
sameer 'agar jai wakei mein tumhara sachcha dost hai to phir woh us waqt aur halat ko samjhega.........hum kab tak humare rishteko usse chupaenge....tumne mana kiya isliye maine aj kuch nahi kaha'
avni now starting 2 get his point nd calms herself.
sameer adoring her cheeks says 'hamara rishta pure 7 janmoka hain..jo hua usse bhulke hume apni lyf ko 1 direction dena chahiye.....jai ko ek din ek din sab pata chalagahi.....kyuna hum hi use sab samjha dete hain.......if hes true hell understand'
avni 'par tumne mujhpe shak kiya.....main use sab dheere se shanti se samjhana chahti thi but tumne ake use phir se bewakuf banaya'
sameer 'ise shaq nahi pyar kehte hain... hum jise pyar karte hain hume unki hi phiqr lagi rehti hain......aur phir main nahi chahta meri nazook pari si jaan ko koi pareshani ho'
avni smilling a bit 'ab kya sirf gyan hi doge ya phir soup bhi pilao ge....mujhe bhuk lagi hain'
sameer laughing @ her reaction 'nahi nahi tumhe to bhuk nahi hain na???tum to kuch nahi khaogi'
avni making a baby face 'thik hai....jai ko phone karke dinner k liye invite kar leti hu'
sameer 'jai se yaad aya usne tumhara hattth kyun pakra tha????? mujhse to bhagi phirti thi tum'
avni 'kya karoon sab tumhare jaise flirt to nahi hote........ na'
sameer 'madam ........is flirt sehi apko pyar huatha'
avni 'nahi toh.......ab bhi hain....bohut pyar karti hu uss flirt se'
sameer 'bad mein apni pyar barsa na.........ab yeh soup khatam karlo...... itni batein kaise kar leti ho tum'
avni hits him on his shoulder nd both of dem share a laugh wid each oder. nd finally sameer is victorious
@ nyt sameer lays down bside her...avni resting on her chest says 'im sorry 4 2day ......nd'
sameer holding her tightly ,smiles nd says 'nd i luv u more'
avni blushes nd kisses him on his neck........ 'hm.......'
[quote=karneetholic]sameer 'jai se yaad aya usne tumhara hattth kyun pakra tha????? mujhse to bhagi phirti thi tum'
avni 'kya karoon sab tumhare jaise flirt to nahi hote........ na'
sameer 'madam ........is flirt sehi apko pyar huatha'
avni 'nahi toh.......ab bhi hain....bohut pyar karti hu uss flirt se'
sameer 'bad mein apni pyar barsa na.........ab yeh soup khatam karlo...... itni batein kaise kar leti ho tum'[/quote]
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seriously some of ur dialogues are hilarious.....
and sum are extremely romantic....hayeeee marjawan!!!!!!!
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