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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
Nice update
Looks lik Mayur share same life as background
Rahum Muskaan's convo was sweet n fab
Sajan was also cut
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Please Add Me To Your PM List!! 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: SaJan_Sana4ever

Please Add Me To Your PM List!! 😳


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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
nice ff Lekha! really enjoying reading it :D
cant wait for more!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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please add me to your pm list......... an OMG this FF is awesome. please update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautiful update lekha
fantastic
plz do cont. it and pm me.
Take Care
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi..y r u nt updating???????
update it soon... waiting 2 read more...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: SaJan-SaJan

hi..y r u nt updating???????

update it soon... waiting 2 read more...


i'll upd8 soon.
maybe by friday
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
i'm sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sorry.
plz forgive me.
i know that i'm update after a long time but i promise that i'll update faster from mow on.
here is a breif abt the story till now.


nups meets with an accident and mayank finds her and admits her in the hospital
rm meet while rahul's on a bike race and they fight. muskaan gets rahul arresyted for bikeracing.
sam finds gunjan's name in his guest list to chose his bride and is happy.
sam makes a plan and fakes his name and mohit and wears an eyemask so that gunji cant recognize him and they danced.
nupur finds out that gunji and sam know each other before and plans to get them together.
when mayank goes to bail out rahul his diary gets mixed with muskaan's who also came there.
a week later they plan to return it so mayur at nups' house and RM at rahul's house.
mayank starts showing concern for nupur but then controls his feelings. he wins the bet against nups that nups cant make cofee with one hand.
rahul read muskaan's diary and figures out that he should give some time for her to get over whatever rough past she had.



PART 5

Mayank's car:

M: kahan jana hai?

N: mera treat hai to app batayiye.

M: nahi Nupur. You have faced a lot of torture today. To aaj main tujhe treat doonga.

N :Par-

M: no par no lakin. Batao kahan jana hai..

N :Theekh hai to yahin rukiye.

Mayank stops the car and looks at her. She gets out of the car and heads straight for the pani puri stall. He follows her. She orders pani puri for the two of them and then she starts enjoying her panipuri. Mayank just smiled at her innocence. They headed next to a stall and had paav baaji and ice candy. All the while Nupur kept telling Mayank how she loves such food. At that moment it started raining. Mayank rushed under the shed near by but Nupur carelessly got wet. Though she was limping she seems to be enjoying the rain.

Grewal's house.

Muskaan had been trying to fix her car since the past 15 minutes. Rahul offered to help but she rejected it. He stood by the door watching her and got lost in her beauty.

M :mujhe ghor ghor kar math dekho.

R :kyun nahi? Mari ankein. Main dekhoonga.

M : dekho. Zyaada smart math behave karo samjhe.dikh nahi raha hai kya, ki main ek moosibat mein phasi hoon.

R :u rejected my offer.not my problem.

M : koi zaroorat nahi. Main mechanic ko phone karti hon. Wo yahaan akar is gaadi le jayega . Main ab ja rahi hoon.

R : kase jaogi?

M : mera pair hain. Chal sakti hoon.

R : main tujhe drop kar doon.

He was trying to coverup for hurting her feelings.

M : koi zaroorat nahi hain. Main chali jaoongi.

As soon as she walked into the drive way it started raining heavily. Rahul smiled at her. She looked at him but then she looked away as she didnt want to give in. Muskaan had no umbrella so she was getting drenched in the rain. She took a few more steps.

Just then she heard the thunder. She quickly ran back and hugged rahul. She felt so secure. He wrapped his arms around her feeling her soft skin against his. A few minutes later she broke apart. Muskaan felt awkward.

M : wo..........main.

R : drop kar doon (grinned)

M : nahi....................theekh hai.

R : ye lo towel. Go dry yourself.

She goes in to dry herself and rahul starts smiling at what had just happened.

R : rahul control. She might look hot but she is not the type for you. Give her time to get over her past.

Samrat's farm house-

After a small dance sajan headed towards the courtyard. It was raining cats anhd dogs. Sajan were having their tea.

G : so mohit. Tumhe shaadi karna hai?

S : no ways. Bas dad ke kehne par ladki dekh raha hoon.

G : cool. Mujhe bhi shaadi nahi karni hai.pehle internship to complete kar doon.

S : kahan?

G : sanjeevini.

S : (spat out the tea) Sanjeevini?!

G : haan. Kyun?

G : wo ....mere dad ka hai aur main bhi wahin internship complete karne wala hoon.

G : cool. To saath main kaam karenge.

Sam smiles.gunjan was called to go to her mom's friend's house due to some emergency.

G : it was nice meeting u, that too in this whether. I just luv this whether.

S : i kno?

G : tumhe kaise pata hai?

S : mear matlab haiki.....sabko pasand hai.

g: di ko chodkar. Pata nahi wo ghar par kya kar rahi hogi? Anyways bye.

Sajan hug. Gunjan just took it as a friendly hug even though she felt a familiar touch as for sam, he was so happy that gunjan was in his arms after so many days.

Mayank nupur-

the nupur gunjan told hates rains, was enjoying getting wet in the cold rain water. Mayank was lost in her. He got into the rain himself. Nupur cupped her hands and collected the rain water and splashed iot on mayank's face. He started chasing her around. Nupur was limping but she made quick turns to avoid mayank's clutch. Just then mayank stopped on his tracks.

-FLASHBACK-

A pretty girl was standing under a shed and it was raining heavily.

Gi : mayank. Tuym bheeg jaoge. Bhukar pad gaya to.

M : are tum bhi a jao. Kucch nahi hoga.

He dragged her into he rain and they started laughing and enjoying themselves.

-FLASHBACK ENDS-

Today, thinking about her only brought mayank pain.her memories had filled his heart with hatred and revenge at the very person who took her away from him, at the very person who destroyed his love.

Nupur looked at mayank and saw an expression which was a mix of revenge and anger.

-FLASHBACK-

Nupur had always loved the rains.there, a guy was trying to get her out of the rain but she set herself free and started dancing around. A minute latere she stooped and looked at the guy. She saw a mixture of revenge and anger on his face.

N : kya hua?(worried)

Gu : (no reply)

N : kya hua? Gussa kyun ho?

Gu :main use nahi chodoonga.

N : kisko?

Gu :...........

Nupur closed her eyes and ears not wanting to remmeber any more. Mayank came out of his thoughts and noticed that nupur .

M : tum bhijli se darti ho?

N : huh.........ji haan.

M : main tujhe ghar chod deta hoon. Chalo.

They leave.

Rahul Muskaan-

Muskaan gave in and allowed rahul to drop her. It had become late at night and muskaan was hungry so rahul took her to RGs where he spends most of his time. Muskaan didnt want to go in. She didnt like such places but they had no other choice as there were no good restaurants nearby which was still open.

They enter the place to find some people dancing to a good beat whiole others were half drunk. Muskaan made a disgusting face. They go upto the counter and order a burger. There was silence between them and all that they could here was the DJs music.

M : i'm sorry. Main kucch zyada hi gussa kar diya.

R : no probs........so frends?

M : sure.

They hi-5. muskaan excuses herself to the washroom.

Muskaan gets a call and heads to the washroom. The caller ID said "private number". This puzzled her.

M : hello?

Voice: hello muskaan .

M : app kaun hai. Aapko kya chahiye.

V : kucch nahi. Bas tujhe warn karna chahta tha ki main jaldi mumbai aa raha hoon . Be careful.(cuts the call)

meanwhile one of rahul's friends came upto him.

Gu: item kaun hai?

Ra: kaun muskaan. Are kucch nahi yaar. Hum bas dost hai.

Gu: ye wo ladki hai na jiske wajah se tum jail gaya.agar main hota to main use ek sabak sikhata

R : 4get ir dude.

Gu : I know ki tum darte ho.

R : main nahi darta.

Gu : to laga bet. Make her fall for you and then break her heart that's it.

R : deal.

They shake hands and the friend leaves.Rahul turns around to find muskaan standing in front of him fuming with anger.

R : muskaan wo.

M : muhje kucch nahi sunna hai. Meri galti hai ki maine socha ki tu badal gaya par main galti thi. tum ladke insensitive hate hain. I hate you.

She leaves the place. Rahul was frustrated that she never let him explain everything.

Meanwhile mayank drops nupur home.

N : thanx….for everything.

M : no probs.

Just then they both heard a noise of someone pass by the side of the house.

Both mayank and nupur look towards it and looked away and acted as if nothing happened.. A few seconds later the person got ointo a car and zoomed away. Mayur were tensed thinking that the person was thatparticular person they hated and feared the most. Both were thinking about 2 different people that they fear.. Mayank ubruptly says goodbye and leaves.

Coincidentially at the same time mayur and rm think the same think.

"I will never meet you again"

Little did they know that they cant keep this word.


-Lekha.
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Edited by Lekha.Mayur4eva - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
mindblwoing update dear...i love all the couple of dis story..u always makes me hooked up into this story..awesome

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