11/04-Siddhima OS- 'open your heart' - Page 2

loved it!!!! 👍🏼
very well written. i like the way u went from sids point of view to ridzi n back to sid....awesome!

Ashu that was brilliant!

I loved the FF, I loved the way Riddhima rage was shown and then Sid's softness and then their confessions were beautiful!

when i saw the topic of this thread...first i thought how did this poem came into this forum...i have the same heading for one of my peoms...

Asthu-Just loved it.

The  three words sounded so beautiful.........I love you .....😍......

OMG your OS just sent me to heaven,...!😊

Its amazing Asthu....😊

finally................finally.........finally............madam ko phursat mil gayi topic open karne ki😆😆😆😆

kaha thi tu ab tak yaar

miss ur writings like hell............

welcome bk...........

Originally posted by: Ramy25

aawwwwww Asthu!🤗 this is amazing...i loved it all!😳
Oh and i like this a lot--

I cover her mouth

'I love you Riddhima. I really love you Mrs. Riddhima Siddhanth Modi.

Riddhima takes hold of my hand and places it near her chest. She takes two steps closer to me and cups my face resting her head on mine.

Riddhima: Feel my heart beat, and listen to the silent whispers. I love you. I'm love with you, Siddhanth Modi.

She wraps her arms around me in warm cuddle melting all the past painful memories way.


Good Job girl! I so want to see such a scene between SR now!😍

luvd ur style...u gave away sid's as well as ridzy's thoughts...
beautiful thought!!!....luvd it
keep writing!

wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow i love ittttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt iits beautiful