11/04-Siddhima OS- 'open your heart'

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Nikita

@nikita_88

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Ashu that was brilliant!

I loved the FF, I loved the way Riddhima rage was shown and then Sid's softness and then their confessions were beautiful!

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ayeasha

@doldrum

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

when i saw the topic of this thread...first i thought how did this poem came into this forum...i have the same heading for one of my peoms...

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JATIN THAKKAR

@JATINTHAKKAR

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Asthu-Just loved it.

Amazing.👏👏👏

Want to see this in real.

CV's you need to shoot this.

Perfect OS.

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mysterieux

@mysterieux

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

The three words sounded so beautiful.........I love you .....😍......

Wonderful...wonderful...wonderful job!!!!!

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

OMG your OS just sent me to heaven,...!😊

Its amazing Asthu....😊

Loved the beautiful and emotional scene between the couple which portrayed different emotions of anger and love...

Its beautiful and I would love to read another piece of your writing....😊

Continue soon....

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431923

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

finally................finally.........finally............madam ko phursat mil gayi topic open karne ki😆😆😆😆

kaha thi tu ab tak yaar

miss ur writings like hell............

welcome bk...........

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astha

@Asthuox

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Ramy25
aawwwwww Asthu!🤗 this is amazing...i loved it all!😳
Oh and i like this a lot--

I cover her mouth

'I love you Riddhima. I really love you Mrs. Riddhima Siddhanth Modi.

Riddhima takes hold of my hand and places it near her chest. She takes two steps closer to me and cups my face resting her head on mine.

Riddhima: Feel my heart beat, and listen to the silent whispers. I love you. I'm love with you, Siddhanth Modi.

She wraps her arms around me in warm cuddle melting all the past painful memories way.

Good Job girl! I so want to see such a scene between SR now!😍