forgive me if u can-savni ff ch 6pg 17

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chandrama

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Posted: 15 years ago

#71

really luv it...it's just out of d world...wen sam was in a naughty moodd..it was really cute...n waitin 4r d update bcoz d precap's drivin m crazy....wish we could ve seen all dis n d show.....anyways luved dis chap ..juhi di n deeps di...n ya i luv ur new profile pic deeps di....

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Posted: 15 years ago

#72

thanks chandu for ur lovely comment

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Posted: 15 years ago

#73

sorry for da late reply.. thnks for da pm..

awesome superb fab looooonnnngg update!

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: samratrocks
sorry for da late reply.. thnks for da pm..
awesome superb fab looooonnnngg update!

thanks samrat rocksssssssss😃😃😃

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: rose.three
nice story...
lovely update ...!!!!

thanks varsha for ur lovely comment😊😊

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Juhi Mokal

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Posted: 15 years ago

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forgive me f u can - savni ff
part 5

[sameer got discharge from hospital,and was in his flat with varun
varun was forcing him to take those medicines but he was not listening]
varun:bhaiya lelo na please
aap baccho ki tarah behave kar rahein hai
sameer:arey yaar,chote tu nahi samjhega yeh karwi davayiya tujhe nahi khani parti na isliye
avni:par main samajhti hu..........
a smile came on sameer's face
varun:avni maam aap
avni:haaaaaa par tum yahan kya kar rahe ho.....
varun:woh main aise hi jai ko milne aaya tha par dekhiye na medicines nahi le rahein hai
avni:hmmmm..........medicine toh leni hi padhegi
sameer:avni please .............
avni:please wlease kuch nahi...........ab main joh kahungi wahi karna padega
sameer:jaisa tum kaho..............aapka hukum salakhon pe....
varun:accha main chalta hu avni bhabhi
avni:bhabhi................[avni is confused]
sameer:marwayega yeh toh
varun:woh main.........woh jai mera bhai jaisa hi toh hua isliye......
avni:ohhh............
varun:accha main chalta hu...
varun leaves
avni:chalo lo
sameer:ek shart pe
avni:kya????
sameer:itni karwi dawayi ke baad mujhe kuch sweet toh chahiye hoga na
avni:swwets..lekin sweets to nahi hai.......abb
sameer:ummm ab bhi ek chiz hai jo tum mujhe de sakti ho...........
avni:kyaaa
he cums closer to her and moves towards her cheeks....

sameer:tumhari sweet kiss bhi chalegi
[avni moves his face.......]
avni:kiss.........
sameer:avni tum mere liye itna bhi nahi kar sakti
avni:pehle ye medicines le lo.....
and then she make him drink that medicine
sameer:kitni karvi hai....ewww
avni:thats like my jai
[when sameer hears Jai he gets upset.......he fears that when avni will come to that he is not jai..........she will totally break]

avni:kyaaaa hua......
sameer:[bringing a fake smile]:kuch nahi.......
avni:waise main tumhare liye kuch layi thi......
sameer:i know tum kya layi ho........medicines....
avni:nahi pehle apni aakhen band karo........
sameer:avni isme akhen band karne ki kyaa jarorat hai i noe tum medicines layi ho
[avni keeps some comic books......in front of him....sameer opens his eyes]
sameer:wooow comics mere liye
avni:haan .......maine socha kahi mr.handsome ...big bore na ho jaye.......
sameer has a big smile on his face
sameer:ur so sweet avni..thats why i love u.........
[he comes closer to kiss her cheeks........but bcuz of his back pain he cudn't
avni smiles n kisses him on forehead........]
avni:acha main chalti hu.,....
sameer:avni ...plzz thodi der aur ruko na plzzzzz.......
avni:jai ghar pe sab wait kar rahe hoge.....hmmm main kal aungi na .......
[seeing that avni is goin.........sameer in his nautanki style says]
sameer:ahhhhhh [shouts in pain.....avni came running to him]
avni:kyaaaa hua jai tum theek to ho na.......
sameer:avni dard ho raha hai.....
avni:kahaan kahan ho raha hai dard........yahaaan
sameer:nods his head
avni:fir yahaan....
sameer:nahi........
[he takes her hand and. place on his heart........]
sameer:jab tum mujhe chod ke jaati ho to yahi dard hota hai........
avni looks into his eyes full of eyes.......
both r lost in each others eyes............
[avni leaves from there......]
khudaya ve,......hai ishk hai kaisa ye ajib re...[sameer thinking abt avni]
khudaya ve hai ishk hai kaisa ye ajib re[avni thinking abt sameer]
dil k karib laya dil ka nasib re........dil k karib laya dil ka nasib re
[flash back ...avni kissing sameer on forehead]
khudaya ve haye ishk hai kaisa ye ajib re...[sameer blushing]
khudaya ve haye ishk hai kaisa ye ajib re....[avni smiling]
[the both think abt the past......]
akho se khwaab ruthe apno k saath chute
[when sameer leaves avni......]
tapti hui raho main pairo k chale phute........2
[avni tries to suiside.....]
pyaase tadap rahe hai sahil karib re
[when they meet once again......]
khudaya ve
hai ishk hai kaisa ye ajib re
aasu namak se lage rishte hai kacche dhage....
reth pe apne saye khud se kyu door bhage
kheech k humko laya kaha pe rakib re.......
khudaya ve ishk hai kaisa hai ye ajib re.............

in gm varun reaches there
prithvi: varun tum itne jaldi aa gaye

varun:ji bhaiya

prithvi:sameer ko saari medicines de di thi na

varun:woh bhaiya avni bhabhi a gayi thi isliye unhone di saari medicines bhaiya ko

prithvi:avni ayi ......

varun:haa

prithvi:mujhe kuch samaj nahi raha ...yeh sab chal kya raha hai ......ek min,avni ki shaadi hone waali aur sameer isse khush tha
right

varun:right

prithvi:karan avni se pyaar karta hai aur avni sameer se nafrat karti thi right

varun:right

par bhaiya sameer bhaiya loves avni bhabhi

prithvi:mujhe pata hai varun par avni to usse nafrat karti hai na

varun:nahi bhaiya ......vo dono ek dusre se ab bhi bohot pyaar kartey hai

prithvi:toh karan

varun:karan loves avni

prithvi:toh avni ka kya?

varun:avni bhabhi loves sameer bhaiya

prithvi:stop stop stops😡😡

yeh chal kya raha hai😕😕

avni shaadi karan se kar rahi hai,but she loves sameer

sameer loves avni aur woh shaadi se khush hai,karan loves avni evenafter when he know that avni is pregnant

varun:karan has acceped her child....

prithvi :lekin varun....ye kaise ho sakta hai.....mujhe kuch karni hi hoga[prithvi leaves]

varun:bhaiya...........bhaiya sunno toh

[ila was very happy]

damini:kya baat hai mumma aaj bahut khush lag rahi ho

ila:haan aajkal avni bahut khush rehti hai,mujhe lagta hai woh jai ko bhool gayi hai

damini:sach mumma mujhe bhi yehi lagta hai

[avni and sameer were on their way from the hostpital]

sameer:avni........

doctor said ki mujh kahin aur jaana for a vacation right.......

avni:hmmmmm......

sameer:so hum ja rahen hai shimla

avni:kk...

wait a min.hum?????

sameer:haan ,main aur tum

avni:sorry jai ,i can't cum with u

woh main........

she was about to to tell him about her engagement

but then she remembers the doc saying"inko kissi bhi tarah ka tension ya stress nahi hona chahiye......"nahi main jai ko abhi nahi bata sakti/.......

avni:jai magar...

sameer:nothing doing avni,u r cuming with me

hum teeno bahut maze karenge

avni[confused]:teeno???tisra kaun?

sameer:champ........arey tum champ ko kaise bhool gayi....kaisi mumma ho tum avni....

avni:champ???tumhe kaisa pata champ hai?

sameer:nahi toh aur kaun.....champa.. he said this in his nautanki way.....

avni:champa.......jai......

sameer:waise its ok mujhe ladki bhi chalegi .......par woh tumhari jaisi honi chahiye

he came closer to her

avni:jai....aage dekh kar car chalao.......

sameer:jab tum saamne ho to aagey kaise dekh sakta hu....

avni:tumhari ye filmy line na apne paas hi rakho

sameer:really

avni:really........jai

sameer:hmmmm

avni:popcorn

sameer{confused]:popcorn........dekho avni tum mujhe pyaar se kuch bhi bula sakti ho...magar popcorn.........ye kaisa naam hai

avni:[smiles]mujhe popcorn chahiye...........champ k buddhu papa!

sameer:ohhhhk mujhe laga ki........anyways chalo......

sameer buys two packs of popcorn.......

sameer again in his naughty mood

he throws popcorn on avni.......but when avni turns toward him he acts as if he has done nthing

avni:jai....kya kar rahe ho

sameer:kyaaa

avni:dekho tumhe bhi pata hai main kis bare mein baat kar rahi hu

sameer:kis bare main........

avni:kuch nahi

sameer again throws popcorn on her

avni:jai .....agar tumne ek aur baar mujhpe popcorn dale na to main ye pura pack tumpe daalongi

sameer:really...............[he throws it again]

avni:jai..........[she empties the whole pack......n runs away..]

sameer:avnii..........tumhe main nahi chodunga........

he runs behind her n catches her wrist.......n comes closer to her.....

sameer:hmmm galti ki hai to pay to karna hi hoga

avni:acha thik hai........tumhe jo chahiye main de dungi

sameer:promise

avni:promise.......kya chahiye tumhe

sameer:vahi jo subah tumne nahi diya........

avni:kya

sameer:kiss

avni:tum pagal ho gaye ho.chodo mujhe

sameer:nahi u cant do dis........u promised

he comes closer n closer to her

n den he hugs her .......

to b continued..........

heyyy guys this part is written by me n deeps......

hope u like it........

do comment n press the like button..........

note:guys me n deeps r little busy n will not b able to update till 11th june..........

so please understand.......

after 11th june we will update the next part

thank u!

Edited by juhi_karneet - 15 years ago

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karneetholic

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Posted: 15 years ago

#77

fabulous....
u kno wat......i was wondering bout dis ff dat y its not being updated??????.finally my search is over....i really liked da idea of having karan in betw dem nd sameer genuinly admitting his luv b4 everything else occurs.........
sameer thot she called him popcorn...........dat was 2 funny........keep on updating me