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OMG.....its was soooo touchy.....:) soooooooooo cute loved it..... Do contunue soon.....
Originally posted by: sweta2005
awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nice waitingggggggg for next part asap
Originally posted by: 0711rokxoxo
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editedOk so I was about to shower joota's and champals on u...actually thinking of getting my mom's belan and run after u but then I thought😡😡Kya story hai...kya ending hai...par phir dekha toh likha tha picture abhi baki hai..😆😆I was jst joking ... it was a beautiful shot ⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏...so I thought of giving u a big hug... **come here** 🤗🤗🤗🤗It had such a great concept n the way u wrote it was EXCELLENT...especially the last line touched my heart...but u made heer dead 😭😭😭... my poor prem his living with her ghost 😲😲😲...Preet must've experienced now "SACHA PYAAR"....Ohh... I cant wait for the next part... ur too good...Update soon...
simply amazing.....
omgsh! can u please add me to ur pm list if u have one!!
this was such a sweet os! and thank God that ther'es more to come! otherwise trust me.....joota, chappal, belans, and tomatoes were all making there way towards u hun!i'm Samra btw......lol....nice to "meet" you..Bee ..... LOL.....i'mm sorry i obv. don't know ur name.....so there has to be something that i can call u...right?? :)can't wait to read more!loveeSamra :)) <33
Hi Samra! Yup, everyone calls me Bee and nice to meet you too! 😆 Umm... I don't have a pm list atm, I'm thinking of starting one soon, so I'll definitely add you!
Everyone seems ready with artillery. I suppose it is a good thing that I wrote a second part, but I warn you, it may not be what you all are expecting... 😆
Hey I just caught up with your oneshot!!
It was beautifull written and fabulous:D Loved every bit of it..It seriously made me cry:( A very touchy..Felt reallly sorry for Prem throughout reading:( Loved their cute little conversation:) But now I am eager to read the next part..Plzz update soon:)Bee Id like to read your previous writing If youve written any OS or FF:)??Please leme knowLove Mehak:)
Originally posted by: Pyari_Zahra
Awww, that was so incredibly touching, it brought tears to my eyes...you are an amazing writer and I look forward to reading more of your beautiful work. This one-shot was lovely, the fact that Heer still has an overwhelming presence in Prem's life, and he still sees and feels her when he comes to visit her grave was so beautifully written, yet so sad at the same time. The happiness that you conveyed at the start of the one-shot was so cute that it was such a shock when Preet's words brought on the realisation that Heer has passed away. The bit at the end when Heer is telling Prem to go was so heartbreaking- his pleading her to let him stay, and how she couldn't let him stay, as the place where she is gone is somewhere she doesn't want him to be...One question though, had Heer died so soon after their marriage that it was only their first marriage anniversary? Because that makes it even more depressing :( Or did she die on their marriage anniversary, and ever since then time has stopped for Prem...and everyday is their anniversary? Anyway, I loved every bit of the one-shot, despite it's sadness...it was very well written...I am in awe of your writing...please continue soon.
Love Zahra x
Originally posted by: v_nikhita18
wow.....that was really touching......
so prem spent the night with heer's ghost......wonder what happens next......hope heer comes alive in the enxt part! 😆continue soon.....
bee , thats was beautifully written...awwwwwwww ..poor premeer 😭you have written it very well, made it real touchy ....i'm eagerly waiting to read more from you
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