mayur ff:love unlimited(part 19:pg 41) - Page 23

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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice update
Mayu really cares for Nups a lot
Wanna kill this RV for sure
Update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi sarishka

i read ur update dear
i wish i could kill rv.
thanx GOD mayank saved nups from rv
very good part.
waiting for ur next part


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Posted: 15 years ago
plz update ur FF....plz.....its vry nice 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
plz update soon .....n PM me when u update!

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Posted: 15 years ago
wow
love it
hate that rv
but hamare hero ne sahi waqt par aakar baccha liya
amazing job
continue soon
luv
mahima
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thank u mahima

guys next part is d last part

and too romantic so it will take time so plzzz give me some time

till then tc

Sariska
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Posted: 15 years ago
whn are u going to update.pls make it fast
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Posted: 15 years ago
im updating now
in a few minutes
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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 19:
He saw her crying badly!!!
He went near her and hugged her.
M-Kya baat hai jaan tum aise ro kyun rahi ho???
N-I'm sorry mayank mujhe maaf kardo tum sahi the vo rv bahut bura hai
bura.I'm sorry aaj Jo kuch bhi subah hua!!!really sorry
M-bas itni si baat...removing her frm the hug....relax nupur yeh to
hota rehta hai it's ok.
N-hmmm.
Mayank notices tht her mood is still not good so she decides to cheer
her up.
M-cmon nups let's dance
N(wiping her tears)-abhi???
M-hmmm chalo.
They go to the hall.mayank puts the music.both of them swirl with the
music mayank's hand on her waist and her hands on his shoulder.
Both of them get lost in each other's eyes.mayank starts coming close
to her face.nupur closes her eyes and he gently kisses her eyes.she
moans.he kisses her cheeks.she runs away to the room.mayank enters the
room and closes the door.he goes near nupur and whispers in her
ears"Kya yeh theek hai nupur".she slightly smiles and goes near the
bed.mayank comes closer to her and removes her hair from the side of
her shoulder and kisses her neck.he gently slips down her sleeve which
exposes her shoulder and kisses over there.nupur sits on the
bed.mayank sits beside her,her back facing him.he gently turns her and
kisses her neck,her collar bone which makes both of them fall on d
bed.mayank is on top of her,he gently removes the strands of hair on
her face and kisses her forehead,her nose,her cheeks making her
moan.he slowly starts undressing her and she undressing him.he then
gives her trails of kisses on her face,her chest,her stomach.he kisses
her passionately on her lips.she slowly parted her lips giving him
entrance to taste her mouth.there tongues start playing making it more
passionate and lights off.😳😳😳

Next day:

Do dil ek jaan,sunlight falls on nupur's face which makes her
awake.she feels Cosy in his arms.she slowly removes his hands from her
waist.as she wrapped herself and was abt to leave mayank pulled her
which made her fall on him.
N-mayank chhodo mujhe!!!
M-nope
N(blushing)-plzzzzzz
M-theek hai and leaves her.
She goes to the washroom and gets freshened
up.as soon as she comes
out she sees mayank staring at her.
N-Kya hai???
M-kuch nahin
N-To ab chalo
M-hmmm
He also gets fresh and both hv their breakfast.when they reach rv's
office everyone knows abt wht rv did last night.they all apologize
from nupur.mayank tells them tht they won't do the deal with them but
nupur tells tht rv is in jail and she does not want this matter to be
discussed. Mayank agrees.the deal goes well and they enjoy their
stay.they return back to Mumbai.
They reach their respective houses and r informed tht the mariage
dates r fixed.the sangeet,sagaai,haldi goes really well and finally
the big day arrives.

P-kanya ko bulaiye
Nupur comes down along with her sister.she is wearing a beautiful
maroon lehenga.mayank was just staring at her.she sat in the mandap.
M(whispering)-ur looking beautiful
Nupur blushes and says-thnx
Then all the rituals go on and finally mayank fills nupur's maang.she
closes her eyes just to capture the moment in her heart.mayank ties
the mangalsutra finishing the marriage
P-aajse aap pati patni hue
Everyone claps.mayur look at each other and smile.
Ten the bidaai happens.nupur badly cries and sits in the car.mayank
consoles her.they reach the sharma
mansion.MM does their grahapravesh
and some rituals r done.
At night:
Ma(mahima)-bro paise do varna sofe pe so jaao
M-Kya mahi ye Kya hai.
Ak(akanksha,mayank's cousin)-aur nahin to Kya bhaiya shaadi ki hai ab
jeb bhi dheela kardo
M-akki tu bhi
Ma-paise do varna hum dono ko bhabhi ke saath sone mein koi problem
nahin hai.vaise bhi humein bhabhi se bahut Saari baatein karni hain.
M(mayank beta paise dede varna yeh mahi ki bachchi tujhe nupur ke paas
jaane nahin degi)-theek hai yeh lo and he gives both of them a bunch
of 100 rupee notes.
Ak-yeh hui na baat vaise dekha mahi bhaiya kitne bechain ho rahe hain
andar jaane ke liye.
Ma-haan yaar such much dekh kaise laal ho rahe hain.
M(embarassed)-ab Kya main andar jaaoon??
Ma n Ak-theek hai and they allow him to go wishing him BOL!!!
Mayank enters into the room only to find his beautiful gf oops his
wife sitting on the bed with her veil on her face.
Mayank came and sat near her.
M-nupur
n-hmm
m-vo main vo......
nupur removes her veil and tells
n-uffo mayank tum to typical ndian pati ke tarha kuch to nahin kahoge so i guess mujhe hi kuch kehna padega
mayank was extremely shocked
n-main jaa rahi hoon change karne ke liye bye
and she is abt to leave when mayank catches her wrist and pulls her towards himself making her fall on the bed
n-mayank kya kar rahe ho
mayank nuzzling in her hair-pyaar
n-oww mayank mujhe gudgudi ho rahi hai
m-i love doing it
and he slowly starts removing his sherwani and nupur's dress.
both spend their first night aka SUHAAGRAAT
and they live happily ever after WITH THEIR DAUGHTER PARI
THE END
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Posted: 15 years ago
res

Edited* i was all ☺️☺️☺️

You ended this,,,

You know, this was the only ff with maximum number of twists..

started with the show, then Mayank's break up

then mayur love story

Their carriers and all..

Now it ended on a happy note...👏⭐️

It was really beautiful, the entire journey was a roller coaster ride..

I completely loved it...

Do write more.....

@ Ak- lol....you irrited Mayank... enjoy...😆
Now cheer up.....😃
Edited by -sam- - 15 years ago

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