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Posted: 15 years ago
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Lovely Upd.

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hey best friend!
wow amazing update! i really love it to the core!! 😊👏 you are a GREAT writer! thanks for the pm and please update soon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

hi guys...updated next part....i hope u like it..dont forget to comment..read n njoy...

nupur was shocked to hear this..
n-kya...😭
shi-ya....😊
n-kitni..kitni ghatiya soch hai tum dono ki....😭
shi-rv..call diya...
n-nahi...mai apne liye diya ko musibat mai nahi daal sakti hu...😭
shi-ok....to fir taiyar ho jao.....aniket..is ladki ko ander ke room mai le jao aur tumhe iske sath jo karna hai vo karo...hame koi farak nahi padta hai..😡
n-ye tumlog sahi nahi kar rahe ho...pls mujhe jaane do..😭
aniket came close to nupur...vo nupur ko ghasidte hue ander le gaya..she was crying for help but.....and finally he took her inside....other side...mayank in taxi..
m-bas yaha rok do..
he stopped the taxi and mayank came out from taxi..
m to himself-pata nahi mai sahi raaste par aya hu ya nahi..kaise dhundu mai nupur ko..kya karu..😔
other side..gunjan and diya are tensed for nupur..
g-diya..ab to..ab to bohot der ho gayi hai..diya mujhe bohot tension ho rahi hai..di kaha hogi kaisi hogi...😭
d-gunjan...ab to mujhe bhi tension ho rahi hai..i hope sab thick ho...😔
other side....inside the room...aniket is misbehaving with nupur and nupur is trying to get rid of him but she is helpless..she is crying for help but...
n-mujhe chod do...pls...😭😭
an-kaise chodu tujhe......😊
then he pushed nupur...nupur on bed and aniket was lying on her and was trying to misbehave with her...nupur was crying a lot..then she took a glass and throwed iton aniket's head..blood started coming and she ran from there...she was running..aniket tried to catch her but she ran away...he went outside the room..
an-vo...vo ladki bhag gayi..😔
shina and ranvijay were shocked..
shi-kya..😡
rv-what..😡
an-vo..usne mujhe maara bhi..😔
shi-shut up...duffer...ab jao aur use dhundo aur vapas leke aao..😡
rv-haa jao..vo zaada dur nahi gayi hogi..😡
aniket leaves...
shi-oh god rv...agar sabko hamare plan ke baare mai pata chal gaya to...😔
rv-relax babes..aisa kuch nahi hoga...
other side..its 8 o clock..
n to herself-ab to mai bohot thak gayi hu aur pata nahi..kaha aa gayi hu mai...kuch samaj mai nahi aa raha hai..raasta bhi pata nahi chal raha hai...ab mujhme aur himmat nahi hai...😭😭
then nupur saw aniket...she ran from there...she was very tired....fir vo ek ped ke piche chup gayi...
n to herself-bhagwan pls meri madad kijiye...pls...😭😭
then aniket saw nupur and went to her and caught her..
n-nahi....chodo mujhe..chodo...chodo...😭😭
an-tujhe chodu mai...haa...mujpar haat uthaya...chal chupchap..😡
vo nupur ko zabardasti leke jaa raha tha par nupur fir se bhag gayi...she was running and aniket was running after her...then her leg slipped and she fell...she was not in a condition to walk...she was so much tired...then aniket went to her and he lied down on nupur...nupur became unconcious....she could not do anything..only tears were coming from her eyes...when he was going to kiss nupur mayank came and throwed him away from nupur...
m-tumhari itni himmat...😡
then mayank started to fight with aniket......mayank ne aniket ko bohot maara...
m-nupur ke sath aisa karne ki himmat kaise ki tune...😡😡😡
he became so angry..he took one big stone and was going to throw on aniket but he went from there...
m-bhaagta kidhar hai...tujhe mai nahi choduga..😡
n-bachao.............bachao...😭
mayank went to nupur..
m-nupur..nupur..utho nupur..pls nupur utho...😔
then he picked nupur and took her with him..
m to himself-kaha le jao mai nupur ko...raasta bhi bhatak chuka hu mai....pata nahi ye kaunsi jagah hai..😔
then he saw one small house..mayank went inside...then one old man came...
old man(om)-kya hua beta??kya chahiye tumhe??
m-mai....uncle ye meri dost hai aur iski haalat bilkul thick nahi hai...kya thodi der ke liye ham log yaha reh sakte hai...😔
om-haa haa beta...aao ander...
inside...
om-beta...tum ise yaha leta do...mai paani leke ata hu..
old man went from there and brought water...fir mayank ne pani ke drop nupur ke face par daale aur fir vo hosh mai aayi..
n-mai..mai kaha hu..😔
m-nupur..nupur tumhe hosh aa gaya....utho..😊
she stood up..
m-nupur tum thick to hona??😊
n-mai....mayank tum...😔
om-beta...par ye sab hua kaise??
m-uncle..bohot lambi kahani hai....
om-beta...tum log aj ki raat yaha reh sakte ho....thum log aaram kar lo...mai kuch khane ka intezam karta hu..thick hai..😊
m-thick hai uncle..😊
then after sometime...nupur told everything to mayank..
m-ye bohot galat hua...shina aur ranvijay...sazaa to un dono ko milni chahiye..😡
n-haa....😡😭
m-nupur...ab tum fir se rone lagi...
then mayank wiped her tears and nupur hugged him..
m-dont worry nupur..mai sab thick kar duga...
then they had a dinner....now its 11 o clock...
m-nupur..tum bohot thak chuki ho...tum yaha bed pa so jao..mai jagta hu...
n-par..
m-dont worry nupur..tum so jao...ham kal subah raasta dhund lege...tum so jao abhi...
nupur was lying on bed and mayank went outside...then nupur remembers everything that how mayank came and saved her..she feels good..
n to herself-mayank bohot acha hai..agar vo sahi waqt par nahi ata to pata nahi kya ho jaata...maine use thank u bhi nahi kaha..aur vo bechara meri wajah se so bhi nahi raha hai..mujhe uske paas jaana chahiye..
she went outside...
n-mayank..
mayank turned back..
m-nupur tum...abhi tak soyi nahi..
n-vo...mujhe nind nahi aa rahi hai..
m-nupur..apni aakhen band karo..tumhe nind aa jaegi..
fir bijli garajti hai....and nupur became nervous..she hugged mayank suddenly..
n-mayank..mujhe bijli se bohot dar lagta hai...😔
m-.............kuch nahi hai nupur...sab thick hai..
n-mayank...
then rain comes....
n-baarish...😊
m-koi zarurat nahi hai baarish mai bhigne ki...
n-mayank..bohot thand lag rahi hai...
m-to ander chalo..
both went inside....
m-jao tum so jao..
n-mayank..mujhe nind nahi aa rahi hai...
m-nupur....
then nupur kept his finger on mayank's lip..
n-bas mayank....😊
then they both were just looking in each other's eyes....then nupur sleeps on bed and mayank was lying on nupur..mayank went closer to nupur..he kissed nupur on her forehead..then he kissed on her cheeks...then he kissed on her lips..they both were not knowing that what r they doing...then mayank removed his shirt and went close to nupur...then he kissed nupur..lights off....
hey guys...here ends my part..i hope u like it..i dont know u wil like or not..so kya hoga kal jab mayank aur nupur ek dusre ko ek sath ek bed par dekhege??janne ke liye wait kijiye mere next update ka..love u all..
hazra
Edited by hazraluvroka - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
yaaay!!!...i am first to comment...
very nice part hazra!!
ab jaldi update karna warna mera sona mushkil ho jayega next part ke baare mein sochte sochte...lol....😆
awesome woek once again...👏
Edited by yashu_mjht - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow
it was mindblowing
do conti............soon
ab jaldi karna esse update
pls
pls
pls
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey nice update hazra
totally cute!!
cont soon

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