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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
thanks for all the lovely and sweet comemnts, but pls tell me which ff u want to read first this or love and duty .
I'll update one of them hopefully tonight.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

thanks for all the lovely and sweet comemnts, but pls tell me which ff u want to read first this or love and duty .

I'll update one of them hopefully tonight.

Rakhi pata hain tujhe tune kitna tough question poocha..iska jawab dena bahut mushkil hain....mujhe to donon fics ki update chahiye
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Rakhi pata hain tujhe tune kitna tough question poocha..iska jawab dena bahut mushkil hain....mujhe to donon fics ki update chahiye

jaldi se choose kar koi ek, mein sirf ek aaj update kar sakti hoon, jitne late hoga,utna short ud hoga. 😆😉😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

jaldi se choose kar koi ek, mein sirf ek aaj update kar sakti hoon, jitne late hoga,utna short ud hoga. 😆😉😛


accha thik hai tu ise hi update kar de aaj kyunki iss ka first part hai.par tu aage se aise mushkil sawaal math poochna samjhi.😡aur haa LnD ko bhi jaldi update kar yaar kyun iss tarah se khel rahe ho hamaare saath😭?
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: esha143


accha thik hai tu ise hi update kar de aaj kyunki iss ka first part hai.par tu aage se aise mushkil sawaal math poochna samjhi.😡aur haa LnD ko bhi jaldi update kar yaar kyun iss tarah se khel rahe ho hamaare saath😭?

ok mein kan pakar ke sorry bolti hoon sab se, study mein busy thi ,thik hain aaj iye aur jaldi hi lnd bhi ud karti hoon. ro mata ur nehi puchungi aage se aise sawal.kk.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
Part1:-

Raj and Naveen reached at their home and found both the house decorated beautifully. Raj thinks iye naveen ka ghar decorated hua toh samajh gaya but mere ghar kyuon,

Here naveen goes to his home and straight goes to naina's room and found her crying.

Naveen:-Chutki, kya hua, tu ro kyuon rehi hain ,aaj toh sangeet hain na.

Hearing naveen voice, naina get up and hugged her brother tightly and said bhaiya, pls save me. Mein shaadi nehi karna chahathi?

Naveen smiles at her innocence and said chutki, sab aise hi sochte hain, shaadi nehi karna hain.aapne parents, ko brother ko kaise chor ke jaye, par,jana toh sab ko hota hain ek din?

Naina:-par bhaiya?

Naveen:- chutki tu soch may aur dar mat mein teri patise mein baat karunga, agar usne tujhe pareshan kya na, toh meinusse datunga, agar jarurat pare toh marunga,

Naina:-kya aap rajveer singh shekhwat ko marenge.

Naveen shocked to heard it but say rajv eer matlab raj ko, par oh,

Naina :-kyuon ki mere shaadi usse ho rehi hain, aap sab khush toh honge na?sab jante the par?she goes from there.

Naveen sat there dumbstruck, couldn't understand anything. Then he realized and said oh toh iye baat hain, mujhe ma se baat karna hoga, nehi toh bahut bari galati ho jayga,

Naveen aapne ma se puchne gaya but uske ma ne kaha un sab ne kundali milaya hain aur raj ke parents kah dil hi khwaish hain ki shaadi ho dono ka,aur mein iya tumhara papa nehi chathe ,koi problem ho.

Naveen:-par ma, naina aur raj nehi khush honge?

Sunita:-Hum kuch nehi sunna chathe, humne ek baar kehe dia na,baas, aab iss barein mein kuch nehi hoga?.baas, tum sab aaj kal ke lerke lerki, jaise dil kare, waise karne ki sochte ho, par nehi, hum abhi zinda hain.

Naveen:-mere oh matlab nehi hain ,mein toh baas meri behen ki khushiya ke liye.

Sunita:- toh kya oh humara beti nehi hain, hum uski khushiya nehi chahate, ekele tum hi uski khushiya chathe ho.

Naveen:-mein aise kuch nehi kaha.ma, aap mujhe galat samajh rehe hain.

Sunita:-mein aur baatnehi karni chathi abhi jao, ready ho jao, aaj sangeet hain.

Then Sunita goes from there and naveen also.

Naina ready hoke naveen ke paas aayi and said aapne ma se baat kiye.

Naveen:-ha.

Naina:-aapne unhe mana liya na.

Naveen:-I'm sorry chutki, mein unhe mana nehi paya.

Naina:-Aap sorry kyuon ho, aap toh iye chathe ho na, sahi hain, aab sab khush reho,mere kya,and goes from there. But naveen feels really sad, he know after this marriage both, raj and naina will be unhappy.He feared to think about Raj's reaction.

Here after heard this news, Raj broke almost everything in his room. He couldn't belie ve his destiny, he thinks mere shaadi mere marji ke bina,mere na pasand lerki se ho raha hain ,aur mein kuch nehi kar pa raha.kyuon, mere sath aisa ho raha hain, kyuon mein uss lerki ke sath ufffffffffff, nehiiiiiiiiiii,mein nehi karna chatha.

At the evening, sangeet goes on the both the house, next day following mehendi,then haldi.their mandap, In the mandap, which is decorated by rose ,orkid and different color ke ribbion se.Mandap is loking like a big hall where placed two small chair for bride and groom.That chair is golden color looking like sinhasan andbeautifully decorated by rose and carnation, tulip, orchid .

Then raj sit in the man dap and start the puja,Before this their barmala complete. Then both are sitting in the mandap and Aditya and Sunita ne kanyadaan kiya, both, of them are equally happy for naina and raj.

In the marriage, Raj fills naina's mang and tie the mangal sutra.both of them taking blessings from elders.

(I'm sorry guys for cut all the ceremony in short but believe me, I'll post them in long but in flashback, and u'll know the reason for this also).

After their marriage, naina, crying lots and then she enter her new house. Raj's mother taking arti .then she sat in the new home for some rasam. But Raj looks at her angrily?.Naina scared and closed her eyes, tightly.

Raj's phone ring and he saw it's naveen's call. He cut the phone and turns his face in the opposite direction.

Nita (Raj's mother):-this very important rasam and tells A tray or pot of water is mixed with milk and vermillion. A ring and a few coins are thrown into the mixture. The Naina and Raj are given seven chances to fish out the ring. The winner is considered as having a dominating personality and it is predicted amidst much laughter that he or she will rule the roost!

Naina is winner and all are laughing and teasing both Raj and naina. Raj feels angry, naina feels shy.

Then naina ko raj ke cousin le gaya ,unke new room. That room decorated by different flower like, red, yellow and pink rose, tulip,carnation.Lots of candels on the room.Their bed looks round shape and there is lots of red rose patals in the bed.Naina sitting in the room but her heart beat very first.

Here out side of the room, raj keep saying, that if not ant then I'll go from here .

One of his cousin said aise kaisebro, aapko bhabi se milna nehi hain?.

Raj murmur nehi,

Another cousin said kya?

Raj:-ha?

Raj's mom came and said kya ha, uske matlab hain tum sab ko sagun de dega.

Then she gave them Rs. 7000/- as a sagun.Raj angrily looks at his mom then enter the room.

After entering the room, raj looks more puzzled and confused and said what's this, iha kya current off hain,itne saare candel kyuon?Hey lerki, gunghat dalke kyuon baiathe ho aur oh bhi mere room mein , hey itne saare flowers what's this, iye ho kya raha hain mere sath, tumgaye nehi,mere bed pe aur iye mere ebd pe rose petals kyuon?

At first hearing this all naina feared then she laughs at raj's reaction then remove her gunghat and said aap ko kuch hua kya?

Raj at first said iey aap kaun hain then he looks at her first time after their marrige or during their marrige.Because in the whole marrige.So he looks at her , naina looking like angel without her specs, with those bridal attire.She looks gorgeous.Raj gaze at her with full mouth open.Naina feels shy and said aap mujhe aise kyuon dekh rehe ho?

Raj came back from his dream land and said mein tumhe kyuon dekhungi, par ek baat n ehi do baat puchna hain, ek toh tumahara specs kaha hain and second tumhara iye aap, who is aap here?

Naina shyly smiles and said aap aap hain.

Raj confused and asked aap aap hain matlab kya hain iska?

Naina:-aap mean mein aapko bula rehi hoon aur mein aaj specs nehi peheni, shaadi ke liye.

Raj :-oh par iye tum aap kehena choro, mein koi old man nehi hoon and second tum iye itni baat kabse kar rehe ho?

Naina:-baas aise hi then to her self bhaiya ne kah tha aapko chup karane ke liye mujhe baat karne hoga, par it's too difficult for me,aur iss tarah aapka dekhna ,I'm feeling shy.

Raj:-kaha kho gaye, jao, so jao sofa par.

Naina:-nehi?

Raj:-nehi matlab,kya,jao.

Naina:-mein nehi jaungi, mujhe iha sona hain aur agar aap mujeh kaha toh mein ma ko,meri nehi aapki ma ko aur mere bhaiya ko bolungi, un dono ne kaha ap agar mujhe kaha toh meinunhe bol sakti hoon.

Raj:-kya,tum u r just? go and sleep .par mein aapna bed ko chor ke kahi aur nehi jaungi.

Naina:-hummm

Raj:-kya hummm.

Then naina goes from there to change her wedding dress.After changing the dress, raj said so, tum mere patni ho ,toh ma ko sab bologe mere against. Ok then bolo ,Mein iha tumhe kuch bhi nehi bolunga mere zindegi se azadi cheen ne ke liye ,u'll punish for it

Naina bhi bari himmat se kaha , mein aapke sath nehi jaungi kahi?

Raj came close to her and held her by her waist and said really jaan, but for ur kind information,u'll go with me, afirst we'll go for our honeymoon. Then ha ha give her evil laugh.

Naina:-mujhe aap dara rehe hain na, mein nehi daungi,

Raj mock her mein nehi darungi, huh, so jao.waise kal se tumhar akya hog aoh toh tum bhi nehi jante.

Naina lay on the bed but keep praying to the god for her safety, she thinks iye kaunsa pagal ke sath mere shaadi hua, mein sochti thi iye kaise hain but iye toh pura pagal hain, bhaiya kaise iske sath dosti kiya and now mujhe isse sari zindegi , kyuon mere shaadi iss ke sath hua, kyuon.

On the other side raj thinks iye kya musibat mere zindegi mein aagayi,kyuon sab mere piche pare hain, kyuon sab mujeh iss tarah iske sath .oh no, kyuon.

Then both dose off too deep sleep.

Next day morning naina wakes up and find raj sleeping on his stomach and have cute smile but son she thinks some naughty and did something and goes from there.

Then , naina ready hoke puja room meinjake puja kiye sab ke sath .

Suddnely raj came with wash his mouth and said ma mujeh chai do.Everyone looking at him and brust out in loud laugh.

Naina also laugh silently.Raj shocked and said kya hua?

Sherry(Raj's sister);-bro go and see ur face.

Raj :-what but why.

Sherry push him and now raj infront of mirror and shout what's this ,iye kaun hain?then he understands it's naina's work and shout nainaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.

Note:-
See the page 5 also for note

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
yaar don't be sorry.we can understand perfectly as studies always comes first.u can update whenever u find time.just as long as u dont forget ur own fics and update them regularly.we r happy as long as our writers n RN r happy,u see😉😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

jaldi se choose kar koi ek, mein sirf ek aaj update kar sakti hoon, jitne late hoga,utna short ud hoga. 😆😉😛

Aaj kal tu bahut dhamkiyan derahi hain...ye kiska asar hain main acche se jaanthi hun 😆 😆 😉...tikh hain ab isi fic ka first part post karde...but longggggggggg part honi chahiye
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: esha143

yaar don't be sorry.we can understand perfectly as studies always comes first.u can update whenever u find time.just as long as u dont forget ur own fics and update them regularly.we r happy as long as our writers n RN r happy,u see😉😛

I agree with u Esha..rakhi dont be sorry dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
everyone smiles,I'll update this ff tonight and oh bhi long.

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