That was such a sad update. It's heartbreaking, the way everybody suffers so much behind the facade of happiness they put up. Their courage is to definitely to be admired though.. they're all trying to deal with everything without any support in the way that seems best to them. Hopefully they'll find 'solace' in each other :)
Originally posted by: -Sookie-
Every character in the story is complex and are broken.
And they have found each other too.
The parents who don't get along well and siblings who are mere acquaintances; its sad to see that families are reduced to this.
I am not against going for friends for resolving issues or even some TLC, but I guess in the end family IS family and friends are friends. The distinction always remains.
I am liking the way you are bringing out many aspects in this series almost like every chapter comes with a subtle theme and its tied to the ongoing storyline.
Liked it parts for many reasons.
Sookie
Exactly! And I think it's great that you've given importance to each character and showing the turmoil that they go through in their own lives! The story's going great! It's sad that some of them are living lives with empty relationships though. Maybe they can help each other heal! Continue soon.
Originally posted by: 090909as
Everyone'd had a bad stage. Which is what reality is like, So I do believe that your story is very realistic, Everyone just trying to keep an elastic smile.. It's so sad, But still amazing.
write more soon.
Originally posted by: _.serendipity._
That was such a sad update. It's heartbreaking, the way everybody suffers so much behind the facade of happiness they put up. Their courage is to definitely to be admired though.. they're all trying to deal with everything without any support in the way that seems best to them. Hopefully they'll find 'solace' in each other :)
Heya! not a problem =))Originally posted by: me myself
hey didnt reply for the previous ud, was some kinda busy..... so combing reply for both the updates :)
felt bad for ayush that he took up smoking as a stress buster.... but that the complexity of being in one 's teens....one succumbs to pressure easily if there is no one to help out.....but ayush surely cares about his dad....
ayush relationship with his sis not of any help either.....its kind of dysfunctional.... felt really bad for both f them....
Naina is really mature for her age....she understands ppl that rocks about her....wish she comes up with her past soon....and what say about nandita : girl is really rock solid , she deserves applaud for being able tk everythng in her stride with smile on her face....
hope fr best fr everyone....ud soon
it is a pity that Ayush resorts to smoke away his problems, and at the same time money. I find smoking detestful, (I mean if u wanna die, go somewhere and die, but why do you have to take 10 others with you due to passive smoking?) The complicated relationship between him and his sister too, is kind of sad. All characters in the story are battling internal wars. And I really hope they help each other out!
Sorry for the late comment, exams are on!!!!
Originally posted by: pinkorblack
the update showed the problems faced by ppl with increased strain and constraint in our lives.... maybe due to the fact that there is plethora of problems face by each individual eveyday with very little to act as a stress buster......maybe that y god created friends, to help each in time distress. wish that ayush naina and nandita act as allies and sort their problems......
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