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Senny

@Senny

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#471

hey linaaaaaaaaaaaa awesomeeeeeeeeee display picture of Rati, she looks so hot and a great update. hope you are fine honey and everything is going well at your end.

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#472

Rabi..nice update... finally atleast in FF I get to see some father-daughter scenes...

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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#473

reserved

sorry Linz

I would've been the first

but I was at the doctor's

my nose has been bleeding a lot

i think you knew...

right?

anyways I'll comment later

I'm sleepy

EDIT

Linzzz

You made it longer!!

Love ya for that

and always 😉

I loved Nupur's line

at the end

"Mar gayi, ur dead"

haha I feel like that too

LOLzzzz

haha me and my zzzzzzz's

Edited by dmgmjht4ever - 15 years ago

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seema mittal

@seemamittal

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#474

Heyyyy Lina
Amazing updates
So mayur r in goa now
Plzzzzz continue soon
N thanx for pm

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cornelia

@cornelia

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#475

Part-7
Hi linu,
i know it's been a long time..i thought i missed many parts...anyways good to see u back.. look who's saying it.. i myself have been away for abt 2 months.. anyways abt the part, it was so good... no... more than good n u r saying it's boring.. if u call this boring i wonder how will u describe my writing.. so this is no where near boring, ok? i like the way u've sketched Mayank's character as a sweet person.. who in the world wud agree to help a stranger unless they are really sweet like our Mayank..

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cornelia

@cornelia

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#476

Part-8
Hi again... lill sis.. omg what's her dad gonna do???!!! i
m guessing he'll hug her probably... ahhh can't wait now... gunjan is funny.. she calls sam bandhar 😆

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#477

hey lina..nice part..

MayUr reach home..n everyone is busy talking to Nupur..

Gunjan notices Mayank..n she sees Arti too..n they all r really happy..sweet convo..

Nupur is scared to talk to her dad..i wonder why..

thnx 4 d pm

update soon

-aish

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PRACHI GOYAL

@prachi06

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#478

NIce part,😊
hope all misunderstandings between nupur and her family will be sought out soon.
AND MAYUR ALSO GET UNITED
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

👏thanx for the pm
do continue soon