FF:Ajab prem ki gajab kahani..Part 20/pg24/04May

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Hi,

I am starting my new FF on same concept Yudi dies and someone looking like Yudi comes back.. But with different flavour off-course. I hope you all will enjoy this..... Plz dont kill me for introductory part...... Coz I have written this considering future dhamaka...........

Yudi dies in front of Rani while fighting against terrorist. Rani returns to palace in devastated state......RS got belief that nothing happened to Yudi despite of that phone call. Everyone has spent night searching where Rani has gone without informing anyone. RS burst out his anger on Rudra that he is so incapable to find her. What answer he will give to Yudi, when he returns? Its more than 12 hours and we don't know where Badi bahu rani is? Some servant enters and informs that Rani has entered in palace. Everyone is happy to hear that. But soon everything finishes, when Rani enters in palace hall.

Same fear runs to everyone's mind looking at Rani. Her broken bangles, wiped sindoor from her maang and her devasted state!!! Sangram Singh and his daughter-in-law brings Rani by supporting her. CR runs to her and asks her what happened?? But Rani collapses completely and starts crying badly. Everyone is really feared now. Everyone is hoping that whatever they are thinking must be wrong. Rani is not in state to reply anyone and keeps continue to cry. Finally Sangram Singh chips in and tells RS that Yudi is no more.... Thats the ultimate shock for everyone... Whole palace is dipped into great sorrow.... RS is not able to hear this new and collapse on ground.

Everyone rushes to hospital. Sangram Singh apologies to Rudra and praises Yudi for his bravery. Sangram Singh bids Shishodhiya family and advices them to take care. Doctor informs everyone that it was mild heart attack and its grace of god RS is safe. Sangram Singh hands over dead body to Rudra and he completes all rituals as RS is hospitalized. In few days, RS takes discharge from hospital and comes back to palace. After coming back, he asks to arrange teravah vidhi for Yudi. Pooja is done peacefully in palace but Rani doesn't even comes out of her room for so many days. Everyone is equally worried for her and child. Everyone tries to take good care of her and makes her eat food for sake of kid at least. Rani tells everyone that she doesn't wish to live anymore but everyone makes her understand that she has to do it for Yudi and her kid. RS is more devasted to see Rani in such state after Yudi.

Just after Puja, Angad enters into palace. RS allows him to stay in palace. But RuMi are really angry with RS decision. Rudra shares his concern with CR. But she also shuts him up considering RS health. As soon he enters in palace he tries to be good with Rani and always tries to be near to her. She gets annoyed by his behavior and asks him to stay out of her way. But he continues to be like that only. On other hand, he wins confidence of Rudra by solving state problem and providing helping hand to him. Two-Three times he hands over credit to Rudra when task is done by him. Rudra changes his point of view and feels that Angad is really nice guy. In general talk, Angad keeps talking about Rudra being maharaj of this state. Meanwhile, Karari also makes entry in palace and wins Bhumi's confidence.

Everyone suggests RS to declare new king for state and as usual RS comes up with shocking decision. He decides that state will not have any king. Rani will have all rights to take decision in Yudi's absence and her word will be equally important as word of king. She was maharani of this state and she will remain same. On other hand, lawyer opens up Yudi's will and founds that everything is on Rani's name. Karari instigates Bhumi that Rani is snatching her all rights by doing rona-dhona. As per rule, Rudra should have been declared as new king and she should be new Maharani. But as Rani is there, she wont get anything till end. While instigating Bhumi, Karari plays her other game and feeds Nikki's mind with second marriage of Rani. Nikki is convinced now that as she got married again, Rani should also get married again. Nikki opens up her thoughts on CR and RS. But they get angry on her. Nikki tries to convince them that Rani has no hope to live. But CR replies that she is holding heir of this Shishodhiya family. And last memory of Yudi is enough for Rani for her lifetime. But RS is thoughtful on Nikki's word.

Here Bhumi complains CR about RS decision. But CR goes praising Rani and advices Bhumi to respect RS decision. It happens same with her for Rudra even. She realizes that whatever Karari was saying is true. She wont get her rights till Rani is there. One day, suddenly stomach pain starts for Rani. Everyone rushes to hospital with her. But in the end, one more bad news strikes to palace with miscarriage for Rani. Everyone hides this truth from Rani for few days, but one day Bhumi blurs out everything in her anger. Rani is totally broken and lost last hope for her life even. She attempts to put sleeping pills in her milk but Angad saves her at right time. Everyone is worried for Rani.That night Rani sees Yudi. He encourages her that she is too brave to fight against any obstacle. She has to live for herself and for their family. Yudi asks for promise that she will not do such things again. Rani promises him. In turn, Rani asks for promise that he will never leave her alone. But before Yudi can promise, Yudi disappears and Rani wakes up from her dream. She looks around and realizes that it was merely dream. She looks at Yudi's photo and tells him that she will keep her promise. She will never let him down. She is his Rani only and she will become same as he wants.

Rani turns to RS-CR room to apologies. She decides that she will tell everyone, she will not do such things again. When she reaches there, she is shock to experience scene in front of her. Angad approaches RS for his marriage with Rani!! Rani is really angry with this and slaps him in front of everyone. She shouts on him that no one can ever take place of Yudi in her life. While shouting on Angad, she almost faints down and everyone takes her to her room. Rudra calls doctor and doctor gives injection to her to have some mental rest. Doctor advices them not to give her any stress else she will have mental breakdown. Doctor advices everyone to have medical test for Rani. CR goes with Rani and performs her medical check-up.

On other hand, Karari keep instigating Bhumi and she feels Rani is doing all this drama to grab royal property only. She doesn't want to marry with Angad as she will loose property. In her anger, she keeps Rani hurting. Situation gets worst day by day and RS makes his final decision that he will be on hunger strike until Rani gives positive reply for marriage. Finally Rani makes worst decision of her life and agrees to marry Angad. RS makes her understand that he always wants to see her happy and her every rights will remain same after marriage with Angad even. He requests Angad to stay in palace after marriage even. Angad agrees. On other hand, Bhumi is under impression once Rani is married to Angad, Rudra will be announced as King and she will be queen. Rani-Angad marriage is decided just two weeks after.

One day, Rani receives call from doctor. Its doctor from same hospital where she was admitted after having stomach pain. Doctor informs her that she has one important news for Rani regarding her and her kid. Rani is shocked to hear this!!!!!!!!


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ooooooh! Darshu!
Rani-Angy marriage? never mind,I know u will keep hopes alive!
Its awesome! And,very interesting too!
Abhi doctor ke paas kya news hai??
I hope ur Rani has brains & backbone too!
Continue soon!
👏👏👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks Purva.. Sorry for disappointing you all with miscarriage for Rani. But it has scope for future parts that why...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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dasrsh....yaar if this was statted by creative we would have by the time abuse them like no body's business but we have faith in you that you will turn around this drastic story in some fun story and strong bonding of yura story...........

i think rani had not miscarraige her baby............that baby is still alive in his womb..............please darsh............
i liked your intro ...............its very interesting and gripping............
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wowie Darsh!

A new concept again! Interesting....

Poor dear, Yudi is dead, Rani lost her kid too and now this marriage wid Angad, I can understand Rani's plight!

Doctor has a shocking news? Don't tell me that Rani's kid was killed by Bhumi bcoz Karari askd her to do so!!!😲

I lost track of ur other FF coz I don't remember whr did I last read it, but don't worry I'll catch up wid it as soon as I get some time!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow darsh FF is really good.................but rani ka miscarriage 😭.........i hope this news is false
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow darshu di naya ff it sounds very interesting lekin doc kay paas konsa news hay jaldi say update karo plzzzzzzz 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: bsingapury

dasrsh....yaar if this was statted by creative we would have by the time abuse them like no body's business but we have faith in you that you will turn around this drastic story in some fun story and strong bonding of yura story...........

i think rani had not miscarraige her baby............that baby is still alive in his womb..............please darsh............
i liked your intro ...............its very interesting and gripping............



Thanks Beena di, I know all girls could throw tamatar andey on me for Rani's miscarriage. But its for one special purpose....... Dont worry i will keep in mind YuRa and their bond while writting every part...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: tes_v1

Wowie Darsh!

A new concept again! Interesting....

Poor dear, Yudi is dead, Rani lost her kid too and now this marriage wid Angad, I can understand Rani's plight!

Doctor has a shocking news? Don't tell me that Rani's kid was killed by Bhumi bcoz Karari askd her to do so!!!😲

I lost track of ur other FF coz I don't remember whr did I last read it, but don't worry I'll catch up wid it as soon as I get some time!



Thanks Tia, dont worry its quite long i havent updated my other FF. But i will do it soon... Till then keep reading this.... I am updating next part so keep reading!!!!!!1

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: siddiqua

wow darsh FF is really good.................but rani ka miscarriage 😭.........i hope this news is false



Sorry Siddiqua, that news is not false.... But further parts will be interesting...

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