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Slowly the lights in the hall dimmed down. Instead soft green and silver lights spread across the centre area reserved for the dances......while silvery smoke started floating in the floor, giving a romantic touch overall. From behind the majestically adorned pillar in the right, Mriinalini and Vivek appeared. Whereas Deepika and Arjun entered from the left side pillar. Dev and Dadima and the others looked on, waiting for the performances to begin.
 
Just then a beautiful song started playing out......
 
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=neMj84LpIb8[/YOUTUBE]
 
Mrinalini, Vivek and Deepika, Arjun started swaying slowly to the tune of music. Their soft yet synchronized moves left everyone gazing at them as they bought out the romance alive in the air.
 
As they started dancing, a sweet smile filled Dev's face and he kept gazing at them. Deepika and Arjun seemed like a couple lost in love because they couldn't just shift their gazes away. However what surprised him was Vivek's romantic moves and looks – his brother never seemed so romantic until now!! But guess he was wrong, Dev wondered with a smile.
 
The dance had simple yet well choreographed moves – that were beautiful and romantic, yet not indecent at all. Everyone in the room seemed to be mesmerized by the enchanting aura formed in.  While both the dancing couples appeared to be completely absorbed in to each other.
 
Dev grinned seeing Vivek and Mrinalini to be so lost in each other. "Dadima.....kitne dino baad bhaiyya ko iss tarah dekha hai na?" he mumbled, inching closer to her ears.
 
Nodding in agreement, "Haan sahi keh raha hai tu. Warna Vivek to kabhi Mrinalini ko samay hi nahi de paata......par ab dekho......uska pyaar uski ankhon main jhalak raha hai na?" she replied, in a soft tone.
 
"Infact maine to kabhi bhaiyya ko aise dance karte huwe bhi nahi dekha" Dev said.
 
"haan......are who aaj itna khush jo hai. Balki itna khush to who shayad apni shaadi main bhi nahi huwa hoga jitna teri shaadi ke liye khush dikh raha hai" Dadima replied
 
Another grin broke on his face. "sahi keh rahi hai aap......umm......lekin touchwood" he added quickly.
 
Dadima chuckled once sweetly, seeing his gesture.  
 
Although Dev was immersed in the performances, soon his heart began longing for Radhika intolerably. The romantic aura, dance and the song only amplified the much agonizing ache within him. How badly he craved for her presence here, only he knew! If she had been here then they both could have swayed in the enchanting music together...... and he'd never let her move away. The thought itself was too tempting to resist. But this wasn't possible, his brain painfully reminded him!!
 
Another pang of anguish arose in his heart, cringing it badly, and he glanced down feeling glum. Her images, laughter, smile, voice all started flashing across his mind only making his heart ache some more.
 
 
One more beautiful romantic song followed this one.
 
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hi3VGakWK10[/YOUTUBE]
 
 
As the melodious tune started floating in the room, Dev glanced up, feeling forlorn and sad without Radhika.
 
But suddenly........as if God himself heard his heart's ache and decided to fulfill it, he saw Radhika in the dancing area wearing a beautiful mixed golden and green lehenga choli – a cap sleeved corset type choli that exposed a small portion of her waist along with a heavily embellished ruffled lehenga and a beautiful soft dupatta pinned neatly on either side. His breath was caught in his throat while eyes widened in a fraction, feeling utterly surprised and shocked! But what followed, made his brows twitch in confusion for a faint second......he saw his own reflection appearing in.
 
 
In the dance floor......Dev approached Radhika, gazing in to eyes lovingly, and she too had her gaze fixed on him. Right at this moment no words were needed to express their mutual feelings – they could just feel it by looking in to each other's eyes. Everyone else seemed to have disappeared and it was only them in the beautiful romantic surrounding. Reaching her, he flashed a charming affectionate smile that made her skip a heart beat and she glanced down, blushing. His smile transformed in to a beam seeing her so shy and, inserting a finger beneath her chin he tipped her face up to look in to her eyes.
 
As she found his eyes, a small shy smile curved her lips up involuntarily. This beautiful sweet smile made his heart race faster and, with a slow sensous movement he lets his finger slid across the length of her jaw. She shivered in response and cocked her head to other side by a minute fraction. Framing her face gently, started advancing his face to her. Her beautiful serene face transformed his boyish expressions in to a desire filled one. Sensing his breaths on her face, she felt her breath hitch. His gaze darted down to her lips as he sensed them quivering, and then titling his head he pressed his lips sensuously to her's to give her a passionate peck. At that moment the time indeed seemed to have come to a standstill.
 
Gradually she opened her eyes and found his eyes still looking in to her's passionately, which made her cheeks burn red – she could still feel the warmth of the passionate peck on her lips a second ago. He gave another boyish smile, as if feeling pleased about the sweet peck, and that made her heart thud. Smiling coyly, she faced away and then turned around to walk.
 
But she had barely taken a few steps when she felt her dupatta being tugged, making her heart miss a small beat, and she turned.......only to find him holding the edge of her dupatta with the same charming boyish smile across his face. With a shy smile, she nudged her face up gesturing 'what?'. Once again he tugged her duppatta gently and tilted his chin towards himself, asking her to come near. Deciphering his request, she blushed red again and shook her head disagreeing. This made him pull her dupatta again, a little harder this time. This action of his parted her lips automatically as a tiny inaudible gasp escaped her throat. His lips twitched impishly and gaze beamed victouriously – as if saying that she has no choice other than coming close to him. She looked in to his gleaming eyes for a second and then lowering her gaze shyly, started moving to him accepting her defeat.
 
As she reached near him, he bent to hold her hands......and his simple touch made her pulse to quicken. Lifting her hands up, he released them on his neck as his gaze found her's again, and then slowly brushed his hands across her slender exposed waist. Another tiny inaudible gasp mixed with a hard quiver escaped out her lips – as thousands of chilly shivers passed across her body in the same instant. Her response made him beam in gratification and he tightened his arms across her waist. A string of goose pimples rose on her skin which made his heart throb faster, knowing that his mere simple touches were creating a havoc inside her body. He continued caressing her naked waist and back sensuously, desiring to watch her reactions from his touch. Her hands resting on his neck automatically slid up to his rake his hairs, as if they have no restrain to hold themselves back. This move of her's gave him a chance to pull her some more closer and felt his heart race in effect. Gazing in to each other's eyes passionately, they swayed lightly to the tune of music, all the while remaining twined to each other's.
 
Some moments of silent love passed when Dev slowly started tilting his face to her. She felt another heart beat skipping, and her breathing became brisk in anticipation. As his eyes drifted down from her gaze to lips, she too drifted down her gaze to his nearing lips. Then he brushed his lips very softly to her's and nibbled on them. She sensed her body again quivering beneath his warm passionate lips. After a few seconds, inching back his lips by a fraction, he lifted his gaze up to her and found her glancing up at him as well. Her rosy red face bought a tiny boyish charming smile on his lips and he again started nearing his lips close to her's.
 
It was then she sensed that his arms around her waist had gone a little loose, and a naughty smile flashed across her mind. Taking advantage she swiftly moved out of his arms, to frustrate him deliberately, and turned to rush away. This step of her's did leave him astound, but he didn't waste time in reacting. And before she could take some few paces, he caught hold her hand tightly.
 
Her little impish smile disappeared as her breath was caught in throat and heart began throbbing underneath the ribs. His lips twitched mischeviously as he began nearing her. As her breathing resumed it became uneven, more so because the tightness of his grip increased and knowing that now he wouldn't leave her. Her cheeks flushed in warmth, while heart thumped beneath. Halting few feet apart he raised her hand up and then bent his face to place a warm kiss on the back of her palm. She took a sharp breath, feeling her skin under his lips bursting in sudden spurt of flames. But he didn't stop his actions and traced his lips all across her forearm to her upper arm. Feeling her skin tingling under his touch, with a small but intense burn smoldering across her entire body, she shut her eyes.
 
He languidly traced his lips until her exposed upperarm region, and then edging back an inch, he slowly moved his face up to her neck. Again another string of goose pimples could be seen on her skin as a repercussion of his kisses across the length of her arms, which made him beam yet another time. Meanwhile she gulped nothing through her throat, still reeling under the effect of his passionate touches. Lifting his other hand up, he slowly shifted her smooth hairs a little away to expose some region of her neck and back. As she sensed this her eyes flung open and breathing hitched simultaneously, while he bent down his face to place a sensous warm kiss on the nape of her neck. Instinctively she shuddered and squeezed her shoulders, as the burn amplified within her and right now concentrated on where his breaths were falling. Such responses of her body pleased him much and he continued brushing his lips leisurely along her neck, placing some sudden passionate kisses in between. He found his insides blazing in heat everytime she shuddered in effect of his touch, and this only made him want to touch her more.......to explore her soft skin more. Inching back a bit, he shifted her hairs some more, revealing her back entirely, to place some soft passionate kisses down her exposed upper back.
 
She trembled and cocked her head to sideways as every nerve in her body tightened more than a spring coil, and her eyes drooped down sluggishly feeling the pleasurable sensation peaking inside every inch of her's. Her legs started wobbling, feeling utterly powerless to hold herself when he was making her literally melt down.
 
His lips slowly travelled back up to nibble her ear. This made her trembling lips to curve up in a shy smile and she cocked her head otherside, which inturn only allowed him to explore more of her neck. His lips swiftly stole a small tight kiss behind the hollow of her ear, meanwhile his hands resting on her upper arms languidly moved down to hold her fingers – another set of shivers passed through their body feeling their skin glide past each other.
                                    
Gripping her fingers tightly, he lifted their interwined pair of hands up to her stomache level and embracing her snugly, bought her very close to his body – almost crushed her back on to his chest. It was a pure pleasure to feel her so close to his body. Some more hard shivers passed through her while the heat inside her body only amplified extremely, and then unable to hold herself back she just pushed back her head on his shoulders gently, as if surrendering herself. A triumphant beam formed in his mind, but he continued kissing her throat and collarbone sensuously for some long seconds.
 
However the burn, the excitement was too much for her to control and inadvertantly her fingers moved a little to dig in his hands, pleading to him. The same urge, same passion flooded within him as well and unable to pin down his feelings anymore, he slowly released her one hand and raised his hand to hold her upper arm. She struggled to take the air inside her lungs, as it felt too tight and parched. He lets his hand on her shoulder slide across her wide exposed upper chest sensuously to reach the other side of her shoulder. She trembled again, as the tension mounted inside her; he felt the same reaction within himself and slowly loosened the other hand around her, but didn't release her, to turn her around to him.
 
Her crimson red face and her yearning eyes, easily suggested that she was longing just for what he was. Taking another breath, he tightened his arms around her swiftly bringing her close to his body. She automatically glid her hands up his chest very passionately before resting them on his nape, desiring more closeness. His smoldering desire now exploded inside every cell of his and flashing a crooked smile, he crushed her to him, giving her what she had asked. She gasped a little in reflex and he began advancing his face to her's. Breathing unevenly, a small shy smile creeped across her lips. As their jagged breathing fell on each other's lips, their hearts jumped inside their chest – almost so loudly that they could hear the other's racing heart beats and screaming yearn! And then he touched his lips to her, which instinctively made her part her lips......and he fused his lips with her. She closed her eyes feeling pleased by his move, so did he feel. The yearn inside their hearts multiplied inordinately as they desired for more intimacy. He loosened his arms to let his hands caress her naked skin, while her hands were caressing his neck sensuously and pulling him more closer. Sensing this, he tilted his head and deepened the kiss in to a hard passionate kiss.
 
 
Suddenly – a loud noise of clapping filled his ears, jerking him back to reality with a faint shudder. His smooth relaxed face carved in to a frowning one as he saw Mrinalini, Vivek, Deepika and Arjun taking a bow from the audience – everyone but Radhika!! Puckering his brows deeply in mystification, he lets his gaze scan around everywhere but didn't find her. The images of the past few minutes flashed across his eyes in a jiffy. Her sudden presence, their dance and the kiss......Soon realization dawned upon, it was just a mirage!!
 
And upon comprehending, a grin broke on his face and shook his head once lightly.
 
"Kya huwa Dev?" Dadima asked, inching closer.
 
He jerked his head to look at her. "Jee?"
 
Arching her brows teasingly, "kyun? Radhika ke khayalon main kho gaya tha?" she asked with a sweet smile.
 
Dev's lips parted in astonishment, wondering how did Dadima know? Did she notice him being lost in his own beautiful trance? And if yes, did he do anything that would have revealed the instances in his reverie to her? The thought itself made his face go red in embarrassment as he couldn't even think of telling Dadima about the things he had been imagining with Radhika in his mirage!!
 
"are.....itna romantic sa gaana chal raha ho aur mere pote ko.......uske pyaar ki yaad na aaye aise to ho hi nahi sakta? Kyun uske hi baare main soch raha tha na?" Dadima asked again assertively, in a loving tone.
 
Probably Dadima didn't notice anything, he thought to himself and let a small grin erupt on his face. "sahi kaha aapne Dadima......." agreeing in a composed sweet tone, he moved his arm around her. Dadima just smiled back.
 
 
 
Meanwhile in Shastri House,
 
The girls were busy dancing on various songs cheerfully while Radhika's mehendi was being done. She had a sweet smile lingering continuously across her face, feeling the excitement and happiness in the air. As she casually glanced down once at the mehendi being done on, her gaze stumbled on his name written on her palm. A sweet smile formed in her lips, however the next second her smile disappeared feeling a small twinge in her heart. Although she was very happy amidst this merriment and joyous revelry, still a small part of her heart was yearning for her love – for him! But she knew that she would still have to wait for a long period to see him!
 
 
"mere baare main soch rahi thi?" his warm loving whisper floated in her ears, making her shudder in surprise and she hurriedly turned her face to side only to find Dev seated close to her. Her lips parted and eyes widened by a fraction in amazement. He was sitting adjacent to her, but in the opposite direction so that he can face her.
 
"aap?" a shocked whisper flew out of her lips.
 
"Hmm" he shrugged casually. "Tum mere baare main itna jyaada soch rahi thi na? to lo main aagaya"
 
His answer bought a small coy smile on her face. "acha?" Somehow suddenly she didn't see anyone else in the surrounding, apart from him. Even the volume of the songs went low enough for her to hear him clearly.
 
"Hmm. Kyun tum nahi chahti ke main yahan rahoon?" he asked impishly.
 
She jerked her gaze up, feeling a strong spasm in her heart. "maine aise to nahi kaha" her voice remained a whisper.
 
He chuckled with a grin, seeing her somber face. "Aur tum agar keh bhi deti to bhi nahi jaata......kyunki mujhe pata hai ke tumhara dil har pal mujhe yaad kar raha hai"
 
That was so true, she couldn't just keep her thoughts away from him. Smiling shyly, she glanced down at her mehendi. He too followed her gaze and found the intricately designed mehendi on her beautiful palms.
 
Nearing her ear, he rasped "aaj tumhare haathon main......mere naam ki mehendi lag rahi hai. Aur kal......." He lets his voice trail off purposely.
 
Her pulse quickened and she felt a small warmth in her cheeks.
 
"Bas kuch aur ghanto main......tum meri ho jaaogi. Aur main tumhe humesha ke liye apne saath le jaaonga.......tumhe apne kareeb humesha rakhoonga" he whispered affectionately, letting his warm breaths caress her hairs.
 
She took a long breath, feeling a tingling sensation.
 
Holding her elbow, he slowly lifted her one hand up by some degree. "Hmm.....mehendi to kaafi achi aayi hai"
 
"aapko acha laga?" she asked sweetly.
 
He neared to her ears. "Bahut" his whisper tickled her skin and she tilted her neck by a fraction in reflex.
 
"umm........waise sach kahoon? Mujhse ek aur pal intezaar nahi ho raha. Man kar raha hai abhi tumhe leke udd jaon.....tumhara man bhi kar raha hai na?" he asked, already knowing her answer.
 
Her cheeks felt more warm, as she couldn't deny that indeed she too felt the same, but she kept mum.
 
"Tum bhale hi chup raho......lekin main jaanta hoon ke tumhare dil main kya hai" he rapsed passionately against her ear.
 
She blushed red and looked down shyly. He grinned and touched her jaw, turning her face to him. A small shiver passed through her body as her skin tingled under his touch.
 
"Bolo sahi keh raha hoon na?" he prodded further.
 
This bought a small teensy coy smile on her face and she lowered her gaze.
 
Chuckling at her shyness, he slowly leaned to plant a kiss on her forehead. She quivered under his warm lips and closed her eyes, while the tiny sweet smile lingered on her. He then moved down to place warm kisses on her cheeks. Another shudder passed across her spine, and cheeks now flushed hot. An appeased smile flickered across his face and then he dropped his gaze to her shivering lips – as if they were already anticipating for his lips. He didn't wish to increase her agony, and pressed his lips passionately to her's. A pleased smile filled her mind and she parted her lips for him.
 
 
 
Vishaka who was too immersed in her dancing, suddenly noticed Radhika's unusual posture – her head was tilted as if she was looking at her mehendi but her eyes were closed and a small shy smile was lingering on her lips and to add it her cheeks were blushing!
 
Halting her dance, Vishaka twitched her brows in confusion as her gaze focused on Radhika, wondering why was she sitting like this? And why was she blushing for no reason at all??? Or was there a reason.....? Yes, there was! Comprehending, Vishaka shook her head lightly with a smile and approached Radhika.
 
As Vishaka reached near the dais, she snapped her fingers right in front of Radhika's face, that bought her out of her sweet trance instinctively and she flung her eyes open, startled.
 
"kya huwa? Yahi thi na?" Vishaka asked, arching her brows
 
"huh?" Radhika asked confused, still under daze. Something was amiss, where was Dev? What was happening?
 
Seating next to her, "Maine poocha ke tu yahi hai ke phir kho gayi?" Vishaka repeated her question.
 
Radhika blinked once, still reeling under the stupor. "erm.....umm......." nothing came out of her lips, as she felt too puzzled. What had happened a few seconds ago? Had Dev been here? Mystified, she wandered her gaze around aimlessly.
 
Vishaka gave a short sigh, deciphering her perplexity. "Radhika......yahan Dev kahan se aayenge?"
 
Radhika glanced at her. That was right! How can he come here? Even if he can, then could only be in her thoughts – exactly she was again just thinking about him!!
 
"Radhika? Waise tu soch kya rahi thi? Bada sharmaye jaa rahi thi?"
 
Her face turned crimson red in embarrassment. "umm.....na....nahi.....kuch nahi" she replied hastily and looked down.
 
"Radhika.......tera to bilkul bas nahi chal raha hai apne aap par. Are jara to control kar apne man ko........Ma Babuji dekhte to kya sochte?" Vishaka teased, in her ear.
 
Hearing this, Radhika sensed her breath stuck on throat suddenly, feeling stunned! Vishaka was right!
 
"Aur tu to Dev paas kal jaane hi waali hai na? to itna kya besabr ho rahi hai hmm?" saying, Vishaka nudged her shoulder.
 
Radhika felt her cheeks going more red in embarrassment and shyness, not knowing how to answer her. How was she supposed to make anyone understand the yearn in her heart?
 
Meanwhile Vishaka called a few cousins and muttered something in her ears. The girls nodded and ran away to the music system. A few seconds passed and a beautiful song started playing out, filling the aura with more excitement.
 
 
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RD9rD-OFvSM[/YOUTUBE]
 
 
As the lyrics started flowing out, Vishaka held Radhika's chin to tilt her face up and gestured her eyes towards the mehendi. And then glancing back at her, she winked an eye.
 
Radhika's face grew deep red again, listening to the lyrics that were suiting her properly – indeed she wasn't able to control her mind even a bit and nor did she remember about day and night!
 
And on top of it, Vishaka spared no single chance to tease her. Smiling coyly, Radhika glanced down and found his name inscribed on her mehendi again. Her smile widened by a small degree.
 
 
 
 
Some hours later.......
 
The mehendi and sangeet function went off very well and all the friends and relatives had gone in to take rest. However Vaishali's mind found no peace – it remained disturbed.
She paced across the room, worried and nervous, as her mind kept remembering Amma's words. Every single word of Amma had been fretting her the whole day, because she didn't want Radhika to be at the receiving end of Amma's craziness.
 
Suddenly her gaze stumbled on the phone and she halted her paces. The only way to enquire about Radhika was to call up Shastri house. Taking a firm breath, she picked the phone and dialed the Shastri's.
 
A few rings later, Shastrijee picked the phone. "Hello?"
 
"erm......Shastrijee? Main Vaishali bol rahi hoon" she replied, trying to smother to anxiety.
 
Shastrijee smiled a bit – half worried, thinking why she had called in so late. "Are Vaishalijee aap? Iss samay? sab theek hai na?"
 
"Jee Shastrijee sab theek hai.......umm......maine to bas yahi poochne ke liye phone kiya tha ke sab ache se ho gaya na?" she asked.
 
Another smile formed in Shastrijee's face, this time a relaxed one. "Jee......jee Vaishalijee .......Thakurjee ke krupa se sab ache se ho gaya"
 
This meant Radhika was safe. Vaishali took a relieved breath. "Haan......bas wahi poochna tha......."
 
"Jee.....erm.....wahan sab theek se huwa?" Shastrijee asked sweetly.
 
"Jee haan yahan bhi sab ache se ho gaya hai......."
 
"acha......"
 
"erm......acha ab main rakhti hoon......der ho rahi hai na......" Vaishali said, feeling much relaxed.
 
"Jee......aapne humare liye itna socha yeh dekhkar bahut acha laga. Radhe Radhe" Shastrijee replied warmly.
 
"Radhe Radhe......." saying, she hung the phone down.
 
 
"Mamma? Kise phone kar rahi thi?" Mrinalini's voice reached her, and she turned. However before she could reply, "Shastrijee ko?" Mrinalini asked.
 
Vaishali gave a small exhale. "Haan......mujhse raha nahi jaa raha tha beta......"
 
Mrinalini understood her anxiety as she too had been tensed about the same issue. "I know Mamma.....infact even I was getting worried for Radhika. Erm......everything's alright na?"
 
Vaishali nodded, assuringly. "Haan beta.....maine poocha......wahan sara function ache se ho gaya hai"
 
"Thank God" Mrinalini sighed.
 
"acha.......beta tumne khana nahi khaya hai na ab tak? Chalo have something first"
 
"Jee....." smiling a little, she strolled along with Vaishali to dining area.
 
 
 
Meanwhile in Shastri house,
 
Devki slowly entered inside Amma's room. "Ammajee?"
 
Hearing this Amma glanced up, feeling hurt and angry. "Ka hai!!?" she shouted.
 
A small frightened shudder passed through Devki. "erm......jee khana......Ammajee"
 
"Kahe? Kahe de rahi ee khana moko? Eei khana zeher se kam na hai mere liye" she replied curtly coming to Devki.
 
Devki's face grew tensed. "Ammajee......aap gussa na ho. Shant ho jaaiye........"
 
"Shant ho jaayen??" Amma interrupted. "Kaisen shant ho jayen bahuriya? Bol? Tor jaise muh pe taala pehen ke baith jaaven? Na hum aisen na kar sakat hain! Samjhi!"
 
"Dekhiye Ammajee, itne saare log aaye hain......bina wajah ka tamaasha mat....."
 
"Tamasha hum khada kar rahi hain??" Amma again interrupted her coldly. "Are tamasha to tum logon ne banaya hai mor poti ke jazbaton ka! Sabko uss abshaguni Radhika ki padi hai.....aur mor poti ka kisi ne socha??"
 
"Ammajee hum sab jaante hain ke Vishaka ki khushiyan kis main hai. Aur agar Vishaka iss vivah se khush nahi hoti to shayad Radhika khud peeche hat jaati"
 
"Kahe? Kahe hat jaati? Ooko to eei vivah karke sab kuch mil jaavego! Aur mor poti ko? Kachu na!!" Amma retorted sharply.
 
"Ammajee......main sirf itna kahoongi ke.....Vishaka meri bhi bachi hai. Uska bura main kabhi nahi chahoongi. Main apne dono bachiyon ki bhalai ke baare main sochke hi saare kadam uthangi" Devki said in a gentle soothing voice.
 
Amma just smirked, contemptuously.
 
"Ammajee......chahe aap hum sabse gussa hon.......lekin khana to kha leejye" Devki held the plate forward. "aur phir thodi der aaram kar leejye.......thaki huwi lag rahi hain aap"
 
Amma stared at her for a few seconds silently and then took the plate from her. "Theek hai tu jaa......"
 
"aap kha lengi na?" Devki asked softly.
 
"Maine kaha na jaa.......hum kha levengi" she snapped back and turned to sit down.
 
Nodding once, Devki left the room. Amma's face grew pensive as another idea started forming in her brain.
 
 
 
Later in the night......
 
Radhika slowly slipped out of her bedsheet and then got down on her feet without making any sounds. Stretching her neck, she looked at Vishaka once to make sure that she is sleeping. Vishaka was snoring very lightly. Ensured that she was dozed off, Radhika gave a relieved short sigh with her hand on chest, and turned to arrange the pillows on bed – a small cushion near the head part and other two large pillows down, and then drew the bedsheet over it. It appeared as if she was still sleeping on the bed.
 
This was a small trick that she even used yesterday in case Vishaka would get up from sleep and check on her – which was a rare possibility as her sister was a sound sleeper. But nevertheless she didn't intend to take any risk. Then, she went over and closed the windows so that the room goes dark and no one finds about her.
 
 
Meanwhile in Purohit House,
 
Dev was lying on his bed, legs pushed down to the floor, and stared at the celing thinking about Radhika. One hand of his was clutching the phone, awaiting for her call impatiently. Why was suddenly the time again ticking off so painfully? He wondered. Raising his phone up, he looked at the colourful screen, waiting for Shastri's number to be flashed on it.
 
"Radhika? Kab karogi tum call? Main yahan pagal ho raha hoon. Please......tumhari awaaz, tumhari hasi.......sun ne ke liye.......tumhara yeh Dev tadpa jaa raha hai" he mumbled, gazing at the screen.
 
However nothing appeared on the screen except the wallpaper. He sighed somberly and looked away, moving his phone down.
 
Suddenly the phone started buzzing and Dev glanced down once swiftly at the phone, before raising it up. The moment his gaze read the flashing number, a pleasant smile filled his face. "Radhika......." and he picked it up quickly.
 
"Hello" her soft loving voice floated from the other side, that made his heart race. He closed his eyes for a fraction of brief second, absorbing her voice inside his heart.
 
Radhika twitched her brows in confusion as she didn't hear him. "Hello?" she said again in a whisper, aching to listen his voice and love.
 
Smiling, he opened his eyes and was about to reply when something struck him and he pursed his lips impishly.
 
Again silence. She wondered as to why wasn't he replying back. "Hello? Aap jawaab kyun nahi de rahe hain?"
 
He chuckled silently, sensing her yearn to hear him. But he wanted to tease her a little more, so he kept quiet enojoying her loving voice.
 
Blinking once, she wandered her gaze around the room to ensure no one catches her. "Hello? Kya huwa? Aap kuch bol kyun nahi rahe hain? umm......sab theek hai na?"
 
But again it was only silence that she received. Frowning in puzzle, she moved the receiver away from her ear and glanced at it, wondering if there was any problem with it?
 
Meanwhile Dev was thoroughly enjoying her frustration and confusion.
 
Keeping the receiver back to her ear, she spoke again. "Hello? Aapko meri awaaz sunayi de rahi hai na?"
 
He nodded to himself, smiling.
 
It was then a small thought flickered in her mind that made her face go low. "aap mujhse naaraz hain? erm......sorry who phone karne main jyaada der ho gayi kya?" she asked somberly.
 
This pinched his heart and his smile vanished. He had never known that she would feel so.
 
"Sorry....." she apologized again cutely.
 
"86,400 seconds........" he uttered.
 
A smile broke on her face, as he spoke finally. But the next second, she frowned in bewilderment unable to comprehend the meaning of the numbers. "Jee?"
 
"Hmm. 86,400 seconds........"
 
"matlab?"
 
"86,400 seconds main tum meri ho jaogi" he replied sweetly.
 
Her smile returned on lips, this time a shy one. "aap kya har pal gin(count) rahe hain?"
 
"Bilkul. Tum nahi gin rahi kya? Main to har pal, har minute......har ghanta(hour) gin raha hoon......uss pal ka intezaar besabri kar raha hoon jab tum mere saamne aaogi" he answered.
 
Her coy smile widened.
 
"Bolo na......tum bhi gin rahi ho na?" he asked assertively, knowing that also would be counting the seconds just as him.
 
Blushing, she nodded looking at the phone dial. "Hmm......"
 
"bas.......86,400 palon main......tum mere paas hogi. Meri bahon main......" he added in a husky whisper.
 
The thought was too beautiful and she started yearning for the moment when she would be in his arms. "Hmm......." she mumbled, blushing red.
 
He knew that she would be blushing deeply. Giving a sigh, "Kaash main wahan hota....... to tumhara sharmata huwa khoobsurat chehra dekh paata" he said.
 
Hearing this, she felt some more warmth in her cheeks. He knew her so well.
 
"aur bas tumhari khoobsurati main kho jaata......" he continued in the loving voice.
 
She chuckled lightly. "acha?"
 
"Bilkul........yeh to bas in rasmon ne mere pair bandh rakhen hain. Warna main to kabka tumhare paas uddke agaya hota" he said, sweetly.
 
Bringing a hand to cover her lips, she giggled silently. "Aap bhi na......erm......waise aap pehle baat kyun nahi kar rahe the? Naaraz the kya mujhse?"
 
Shrugging casually, "Bilkul nahi.......main to tumhare saath thoda sa mazak kar raha tha" he replied, as his lips twitched in to a impish smile. "Mujhe kya pata tha ke tum dil pe le logi aur apni galti samajke maafi mangogi!"
 
Her face grew stern, after learning about his prank. "Mazaak kar rahe the? Main itni pareshan ho gayi yahan pe aur aapko mazak sujh raha tha?"
 
He laughed at her cute anger. "Haan main dekhna chahta ke kaise meri Radhika meri awaaz sun ne ke liye tadap rahi hai"
 
This laughter irked her – why is he mocking her? "aap bhi na......has kyun rahe hain? pehle hi itne mushkilon se main aapko phone kar paa rahi hoon. Aur aap hain ke........" she was almost reprimanding him.
 
"are to kya huwa? Pyaar ke liye tum thoda sa risk nahi le sakti? Bolo?"
 
"Le to rahi hoon na" she replied back, in a slightly irritated tone. She had been so aching to listen his loving voice and he, despite knowing her condition, was playing around!
 
"to itna chid kyun rahi ho?"
 
"Main kahan chid rahi hoon?" she answered back, feeling more chagrined now.
 
"Chid hi to rahi ho......" he too felt irritated now, because she was getting annoyed for no reason at all!
 
"Dekhiye......pehle hi aapse baatein karne ke liye......mujhe sabse chupna pad raha hai...... aur yeh dar bhi laga rehta hai ke koi pakad na le.......aur inn sab ke upar aap hai ke....." she trailed her voice, feeling irked.
 
"Aap hai ke? What? Radhika tum to aise bol rahi ho jaise sirf main tumse baatein karna chahta hoon! Tum to jaise mujhse baat hi nahi karna chahti!! Sirf mere liye risk utha rahi ho? Apne liye nahi?" he snapped back, hearing her almost accusing tone.
 
This sudden anger of his surprised her. "aap aise kyun keh rahe hain?"
 
"To aur kaise kahoon? Pehle hi tumhare phone ke liye main itni der tak intezaar karta raha......!! Aur upar se jab phone karti ho to itna chidke kyun baat kar rahi ho??" he argued.
 
"Main nahi chid rahi hoon!" she stated firmly, in a whispering voice.
 
"Tum chid rahi ho! Aur agar tumhe mujhse isi tarah baat karni hai na......then its better that we don't talk!! Bye!" saying tersely, he cut the phone.
 
Her heart skipped a beat, as the phone went suddenly silent after his angry outburst. She felt too shocked to react. He had never behaved so angrily with her.....then whats with him now? She wondered. The beeping sound of the phone still floated in to her ears, as she held the receiver in the same position.
 
Her throat went thick and eyes felt moist. "who mujhse aise baat kyun kar rahe the?" she muttered to herself. She couldn't bear his hostileness – this scared her because she didn't want to loose his love.
 
Holding her Kanha pendant, "Kanha.......kya mujhse koi galti ho gayi? Main to bas...... shayad mujhse hi galti ho gayi Kanha......" she conceded, unable to tolerate his harshness. Tears automatically trickled down her eyes.
 
 
In the meantime, Dev stared at the ceiling still annoyed. "are baat to aise kar rahi thi jaise.....sirf mujhe us se baat karni ho! Us se to jaise mujhse baat hi nahi karni hai! Saara risk sirf mere liye le rahi hai! Jara mazak kya kar diya itna chid gayi?!!" he murmured in anger.
 
"Kitna tadap raha tha us se baat karne ke liye......aur who hai ke......" he murmured some more angrily.
 
Suddenly something clicked in his brain, and his angry face turned smooth. "who bhi meri awaaz sun ne ke liye tadap rahi thi......aur maine aisa mazak kiya to.........Isilye to nahi chid ke baat kar rahi thi??" he wondered aloud in a somber voice. It could be well a reason, he admitted to himself.
 
"Great! And Dev.......you screwed up all! Ab who naaraz ho gayi hai......kal shaadi hai aur......tune apni hi dulhan ko!!" he bought a hand on his forehead feeling terrible now! "God! Why couldn't you keep a control on yourself!!?" he scolded himself.
 
Just then, his phone started buzzing again. He was surprised, but with a tinge of hope he pulled his phone up and indeed found Shastri's number flashing on the screen. A small smile came on his lips as he quickly received the call. "Hello......"
 
"Mujhe......maaf.......kar deejye" she apologized. Her voice broke twice.
 
This twinged his heart and face was instantly filled with a painful frown. "Radhika tum ro rahi ho?"
 
She just looked down, letting some more tears roll down her cheeks.
 
"Radhika......" he called her gently, wondering if she had been crying for all these moments after he'd shut the phone curtly. The answer was quite obvious. His heart cringed in pain. Damn!
 
"I am sorry Radhika......" the apology flew out of his lips hurriedly. "I am very sorry......main tumhe chot nahi pahuchana chahta tha"
 
"nahi.......galti meri thi" she replied, again her voice croaked and this was scathing his heart badly.
 
"Radhika please......stop crying. And stop apologizing! I am the idiot! Main samaj hi nahi paaya ke tum gussa ke kyun ho gayi......aur tumpar hi naaraz ho baitha" he said in a strained voice.
 
She shook her head, in disagreement. "nahi......."
 
"Haan......meri galti hi thi. Mujhe maaf kar do" he repeated his apology.
 
"Main aapse naaraz nahi hoon......to....maafi ki baat kahan se aati hai" she replied, sniffling once. Her heart felt immense relief after hearing his soothing, loving voice again.
 
However her sniffling was causing him heart aches. "Radhika......please rona band karo. Dekho agar tumhare ankhon se ek aur aansoo neeche gira......to mere liye apne kadam rok paana bahut mushkil ho jaayega. Main tumhare paas chala aajaaonga......" he avowed firmly in an agonized voice.
 
Her lips parted and eyes widened by a fraction in shock. "yeh aap kya keh rahe hain...... aisa kuch mat keejye"
 
"tumhare ansuon ke saamne main......duniya ke reet riwaz nahi dekh sakta" he explained his agony. "Tumhare ansoon......mere dil ko cheer dete hain Radhika"
 
His loving words assured her heart again that he would never go away from her. A sad sweet smile came on her lips.
 
"chalo......isiliye......apne ansoo pocho. Wipe your tears or else I will come there" he warned, jokingly.
 
Her smile widened and sniffling once, she wiped away her tears. "Nahi roungi main"
 
Hearing her voice back to normal, he took a relieved breath. However the next second guilt washed through him. "Lekin main bahut bura hoon na? shaadi ke ek din pehle....... apni hi dulhan pe awaaz utha baitha" his voice turned strained.
 
She shook her head hurriedly. "Nahi.....aap kaisi baatein kar rahe hain.......mujhe aapse koi gila nahi"
 
Chuckling once sadly, "Radhika main tumhe ache se jaanta hoon. Tum meri naarazgi bardasht nahi kar sakti......aur isiliye to tumhare aankhon se ansoon chalak uthe" he said. "Aur yeh jaante huwe bhi ke tumhe mere gusse se takleef hogi......main phir bhi tumpe gussa ho baitha......How can I be so reckless!" he cursed himself.
 
She realized that he was feeling too much penitent. "aap.......vyarth main apne aapko dosh de rahe hain. Mere man main aapke liye sach much koi narazgi nahi hai"
 
"Narazgi nahi Radhika.......tumhe dard huwa meri baaton se. Aur yeh mujhe gawaara nahi"
 
Seeing him feeling so remorseful, she felt bad. "Dekhiye......apne aapko iss tarah mat kosiye na......please. Warna......main phir ro doongi" she threatened cutely.
 
He chuckled once. "acha phir......to mujhe chup hona padega. Kyunki I cant see you in tears"
 
Smiling to herself once, she glanced down. "Jitna dard mujhe huwa hoga.....aapko bhi to huwa hoga na?"
 
"Hmm. Bahut huwa......bahut jyaada" he admitted painfully.
 
A small silent moment passed between them. But even in the silence, they could hear their pains.
 
"Radhika.....waise tum jaanti ho......mujhe bahut acha laga aaj" he said gently.
 
"Mujhpar gussa karke?" she asked, adding humor.
 
He chuckled. "Nahi. Radhika maine tumhe kisi aur se chidte huwe......gussa karte huwe bahut kam dekha hai......tum apne dil ki baaton ko chupa ke rakhti ho taake kisi ko dukh na pahunche. Unhe dukh na ho.......isiliye tum apna dard pee jaati ho"
 
She couldn't deny whatever he said and looked down glumly.
 
"Lekin thodi der pehle......tum mujhse bina kisi dar ke chid gayi. Bas Radhika main yahi chahta hoon ke tum apna gussa, apni chid, apni khushiyan......bina kisi dar ke sabse keh sako" He continues. "aur haan jahan tak meri baat hai.......to main tumse gussa nahi ho sakta. Tum mujhpar chilla bhi dogi na.....to bhi mera pyaar thoda bhi kam nahi hoga" he assured lovingly.
 
Some more tears formed in her eyes while her throat felt tight. But she carefully muffled her sniffles not wanting him to feel bad.
 
"Tumhe yaad hai......ek baar jab hum delhi gaye the.....aur tum mujhse naaraz ho gayi thi. Lekin phir usi dar ne tumhe kamzor bana diya. Uss din main sochta reh gaya tha ke najaane Radhika ko aisa kyun lag raha hai ke......uske jara se gussa hone se main us se door chala jaoonga......? Lekin phir samaj gaya......Radhika mera pyaar itna kamzor nahi hai......aur naahi tumhara pyaar kamzor hai"
 
She nodded silently as her throat felt too choked to release any words out.
 
"Radhika aaj bhi......tum dar gayi na? ke kahi mera pyaar tumhare liye kam na ho jaaye? Hmm?" he asked tenderly.
 
"mm....hmm" she managed to choke out.
 
"mujhse jhooth kyun bolti ho? Hmm? Yeh dar apne andar se mita do kyunki tumhare bina......tumhara Dev kuch nahi hai" he soothed lovingly.
 
Gulping her lump, "Hmm......" she muttered. A little more tears came down.
 
A small second passed.
 
"Erm......tum jaanti ho bhabhi kya kehti hain?" he diverted the topic, to change the mood.
 
"Kya?" she asked in a whisper tone, wiping the tears that had managed to roll down.
 
"Bhabhi kehti hai......ke jab pati patni ke beech aise pyaar bhare jagde(fights) hote hain na......to unke beech pyaar aur bad jaata hai" he replied lovingly.
 
This bought a smile on her face. "acha?"
 
"Hmm. Who kya hai na......jab jhagda hota hai to roothna aur manana(pacify) bhi hota hai. Aur isi ke beech pyaar aur gehra ho jaata hai" he explained sweetly.
 
Glancing down, she played with the phone wire coyly.
 
"Haan. ab dekho na......hum dono ke beech yeh pyaar bhari ladayi ki shuruwat ho chuki hai.......to bas ab tum roothogi to main manaunga......aur main rootha to tum mujhe manaogi. Hai na?" he said sweetly.
 
"mm....hmm.......main nahi chahti ke hum dono ke beech aise jhagde ho" she mumbled somberly, not ever wishing to fight with him.
 
His eyes tighetened. "are yeh who waale serious jhagde thodi na hai!! Yeh to pyaar bhare jhagde hain. Aur waise bhi......main tumse sach much jhagda to kar hi nahi sakta....... because you're my life"
 
Her heart tingled again and smile returned.
 
Lifting his one leg up, he placed it on the edge of bed "And bhabhi says.......that such small fights between couples add some more colour and flavour in the relation. They are necessary in small amounts to make the relation more stronger" he continued. "samjhi?"
 
"Hmm......."
 
A small impish smile twitched his lips. "So theek hai.....jab bhi hum dono ke beech aise jhagde honge......we will make up by evening.....umm.......with a......er......hot passionate kiss" he rasped the trailing words.
 
Instiinctively her heart skipped a beat and warmth flooded to her cheeks.
 
"So it's a deal?" he asked sweetly.
 
"deal?"
 
"Haan.......jab kabhi agar humare beech chote mote ladayi huwi.......then we will make up by evening......with a......." he lets his voice trail off purposely in a mischevious tone.
She could just blush deeply, understanding.
 
"bolo na? deal?" he prompted.
 
Blushing crimson red, "Hmm....." a small, almost inaudible, shy mumbled floated to him.
 
And he grinned in return. "Waise......humne ladayi to abhi bhi ki na? so kiss bhi abhi lenge na?" he added naughtily in a slow voice.
 
"abhi?" her pulse quickened again.
 
"Haan abhi" Pressing his lips to the phone, he gave her a long tight kiss.
 
Her cheeks and ears felt hot, iron hot, after receiving his passionate kiss.
 
"Radhika don't blush so much.....! This will actually force me to come over there and give you a real kiss" he whispered sweetly.
 
Chuckling once, "nahi......aisa mat keejye" she replied. She could almost hear her pounding heart beats behind her ears.
 
 
Suddenly he remembered Dadima's words earlier in the day. "erm......Radhika suno na? aaj Dadima ne mujhse.....mehendi ke rasm ke baare main kuch kaha"
 
"Kya kaha?"
 
"Umm......yahi ke.....agar dulhan ke haathon ki mehendi gehri aati hai to.....uska hone wala pati us se bahut pyaar karta hai" he replied lovingly.
 
Hearing this, her smile again turned shy, almost knowing what would be his next question. She slowly glanced down at her free hand – her mehendi had turned out to be of the thickest dark colour and looked very beautiful on her fair hands.
 
"Umm.....to bolo na ke tumhare haathon main mehendi kaisi aayi hai?" he asked cutely.
 
She smiled to herself. "umm.....aapko kya lagta hai?"
 
"Waise mujhe pata hai ke mehendi ka rang bahut gehra aaya hoga kyunki......woh rang mere prem ko dikhata hai. Aur pyaar to main tumse bahut jyada karta hoon" he answered.
 
Arching a brow once, she thought of something naughty and bit her lip. "Jab aapko pata hi hai to pooch kyun rahe hain?" she said to increase his impatience.
 
"Kyunki main tumhare mooh se sun na chahta hoon" he replied affectionately.
 
She shook her head, disagreeing – although it did pinch her heart to deny his such affectionate request. "Mmm....hmm. Aapko to pata hai na? to phir mere kehne ki kya jaroorat hai. Umm.......kahi aisa to nahi ke shayad aapko aise lag raha ho ke mehendi ka rang pheeka aaya hai?" and asked deliberately.
 
He frowned. "Aisa bilkul nahi hai. I am sure ke tumhari mehendi bahut gehri aayi hai. Aayi hai na?" his voice had assertiveness.
 
Bobbing her head in affirmation, she smiled to herself. "Umm. Aapko yakeen hai na apne pyaar pe.....to kyun pooch rahe hain. Kal hi dekh leejyega"
 
Her game was again frustrating him. "Theek hai. Mat batao. I have full confidence in my love!"
 
"acha hai" she suppressed her giggle, sensing his chagrin.
 
Something flicked in his brain and his lips twitched. "Umm.....waise tumhe pata hai na ......ke dulhe ke haathon main bhi mehendi lagti hai"
 
"Haan"
 
"erm......to jaise dulhan ke haathon ki mehendi ki gehrayi ko pati ka pyaar kaha jaata hai. Waise hi dulhe ke haathon main mehendi ki gehrayi dulhan ke pyaar ko dikhata hai" he informed cutely.
 
She giggled. "nahi. Aisa kuch nahi hota hai. Yeh to sirf ladkiyon ke mehendi ke liye hoti hai"
 
"are......yeh mujhe Dadima ne kaha hai. To kya who jhooth bol rahi hai?" he shielded his stance fiercely. However Dadima had never confirmed this!
 
"Umm......nahi maine aisa nahi kaha. Lekin......aisa nahi hota"
 
"Hota hai!" he argued, confidently.
 
She arched a brow, in wonderment. "Acha? To kaise aaya hai rang aapke haathon main?" and asked casually.
 
A mischievous beam broke on his face. "Agar tumhe apne pyaar pe bharosa hai.....to khud jaan lo? Mujhse kya pooch rahi ho" He got a chance to get back.
 
Her eyes widened, understanding his trick, and she pursed her lips briefly. "theek hai. Mat bataiye. Mujhe bhi apne pyaar pe pura bharosa hai"
 
He had thrown this trick to know her answer but rather she chose the other option. "theek hai. Dekh lena phir......." he replied in a grim tone, as his attempt failed.
 
Hearing this, her lips curved in to a beautiful smile. "umm......waise aapse kuch kahoon"
 
"Kya?"
 
"Mere haathon main mehendi ka rang bahut bahut jyaada gehra aaya hai.....bilkul aapke pyaar ke jaise" she added sweetly, while gazing in to her mehendi filled hand.
 
A grin broke on his face. "sach?"
 
She nodded. "Hmm. Yahi jaan na tha na aapko?" saying she giggled once.
 
"Haan.......main to shaam se tadas raha hoon yeh jaan ne ke liye ke tumhare haathon main mehendi ka rang kaise aayega" As he uttered these words, another question flashed across his mind.
 
"erm.......waise main to tumse kuch aur poochna chahta tha" he said.
 
"Kya?"
 
"erm......kya aaj bhi mehendi ki rasm main.......main tumhare khayalon main aaya tha?" he asked sweetly, with a crooked smile.
 
Her cheeks again flushed red. "Hmm" she affirmed sweetly.
 
His smile widened in to a grin. "kya dekha tumne?"
 
"aapne bhi muhje dekha?" she asked cutely, avoiding his question as she felt too shy to answer him.
 
Shrugging, "Hmm......bilkul dekha" he answered. "umm.....tumne kya dekha?"
 
"umm.....er......pehle aap bataiye" she again tried evading.
 
"acha......erm......." suddenly his eyes tighetened wondering why she was not answering him first. Probably she is again feeling shy! Smiling croockedly, "nahi Radhika. Tum batao pehle......" he insisted.
 
"umm.....maine.......erm.......kuch nahi. Bas aap aaye aur meri mehendi dekhi" she answered, neatly editing the passionate moments.
 
He arched his brows, disbelivingly. "acha?" even his tone seemed skeptical. "sirf itna?"
 
She didn't miss the dubiousness in his voice, but pretended to be ignorant. "Haan. Ab aap bataiye"
 
"umm......kuch nahi. Tum aayi aur bas chali gayi" he also answered similarly.
 
Her forehead creased. "Jee?" But soon realized that she was being given a identical answer to her's. "umm.....bas itna?"
 
"Haan. Tumne bhi to mujhe nahi bataya? Kal haldi ki baat bhi nahi batayi tumne" he retorted gently.
 
Her eyes tinkled as an idea came up. "Umm......theek hai. Aap mujhe aaj ki baat bataiye ......aur phir main bhi bataongi"
 
He laughed once, humorlessly. "Jee nahi main tumhe nahi bataoonga. Kyunki tum to waise bhi nahi batane wali ho!"
 
"erm.....aisa nahi hai"
 
"Aisa hi hai!" he stated assertively, and then his eyes gleamed with naughtiness. "aur waise bhi.....aaj maine jo dekha hai na......woh main tumhe abhi bilkul nahi bata sakta"
 
Puckering her brows, "kyun?" she asked.
 
His lips curved impishly. "Kyunki, main chahta hoon ke tab tum mere saamne baithi raho. Whatever I saw today.....is something I want describe when you come home to me. So that I can sit and relish your blushing face" he elucidated lovingly.
 
His words bought a blush on her face already. "aisa kya dekha aapne?"
 
"dehko tum abhi se sharmane lagi ho! Jab poori baat sunogi.....tab ko sharmake bura haal ho jaayega" he added huskily and laughed.  
 
Instantly some more warmth flooded in to her face.
 
"Are baba bas karo na sharmana......warna mera yahan rehna mushkil ho jaayega" he said cutely.
 
She giggled once.
 
"Radhika tum hasti ho na......to mujhe bahut acha lagta hai. Erm.....waise kal se yeh hasi humesha mere paas rahegi" he asserted.
 
"Haan. kal se to main aap hi ki ho jaaongi" she replied sweetly. A soft breeze washed in the from the small opening of the window.
 
"erm.....der ho chuki hai bahut. Aapko abhi aaram karna chahiye" she said gently, but her heart felt few pangs of pain.
 
His forehead creased. "thodi der aur baat kar lete hai na......" he requested.
 
She understood his ache, afterall she too was suffering the same! However she cannot be here for a longer time fearing the risk of being caught. "chahti to main bhi yahi hoon......lekin koi bahar aagaya to......"
 
Pursing his lips briefly, "theek hai......" he agreed somberly.
 
"aap dukhi kyun hote hain.......kuch ghanto ki to baat hai ab" she added lovingly, to lessen his pain and even her's.
 
He chuckled. "Haan. sahi hai. Erm.....waise.....tum kuch bhool rahi ho"
 
"Kya?"
 
"ahem ahem........mera tofha?"
 
Another flush of warmth reached up her cheeks. "erm......."
 
"dogi na?" he asked lovingly.
 
Pressing the receiver against her lips, she gave a loving kiss. He beamed in response and quickly returned a tight long kiss. She blushed some more.
 
"erm......waise ek aur milega?" he requested in a whisper.
 
Her lips parted and then she broke in to a smile. "mm.......hmm. Bas ek din ke ek hi tofha manga tha na?" she reminded cutely.
 
"To? To kya ek se jyaada nahi dogi?"
 
She shook her head, disagreeing. "mm.....hmm"
 
"Theek hai. Jab tum mere paas aajaogi phir to tumhe meri har baat man ni hogi! Tab to mana nahi karogi na?" he asked lovingly.
 
"Tab mana kaise kar sakti hoon? aapki jo ho jaaongi"
 
"hmm"
 
"erm......ab main rakhoon......"
 
Suddenly she heard a door creaking open, that made her shudder in fright. A gasp automatically flew out of her throat.
 
Hearing this, Dev's forehead creased. "Kya huwa?"
 
She took a breath, but due to fear, the air didn't quite reach the lungs. And then......she saw a shadow. "koi aa raha hai" she whispered in the faintest voice possible.
 
Her frightened voice got him tensed as well and he got up to sit. "Kaun?" his voice too turned in to whisper.
 
Meanwhile she sat in her corner, unmoving, not desiring to be noticed. Just then the person walked across the dim ray of moonlight coming through the window.  "Amma ......" she mumbled in the same whispering sound.
 
His brows furrowed. "Amma?"
 
However she didn't speak, just snuggled her body closer to the wall not wanting Amma to catch her. She saw Amma walking up to her room and inside. Her brows puckered wondering why Amma went inside her room at this hour?
 
"Hello? Radhika are you there?"
 
"Hmm" she answered slowly.
 
"Amma iss samay bahar? Kya kar rahi hai who?" Dev asked, curiously.
 
Holding the receiver as close as possible, she muttered. "who mere kamre main gayi hain"
 
"Kya tumhare kamre main? Iss samay?" he got up, bewildered. Strangely a part of him was prepared, so that if he senses Amma doing something wrong he could just rush to help Radhika!
 
"Haan. pata nahi iss samay kya karne gayi hogi. Agar unhone dekh liya ke main wahan nahi hoon to?" her voice turned nervous.
 
"Radhika don't worry. Dekho tum jahan ho wahi baithi raho........if you move she might just see you. So better stay put where you are"
 
"hmm......" Radhika agreed, while her gaze remained fixed on her room.
 
"erm.......did she put on the lights?" he asked, pacing through his room absently.
 
"Nahi. Kamre main to pura andhera hai. Erm......maine khidki bhi band kardi thi.....taake mera wahan na hona Vishaka ko pata na chale" she replied, in a murmur.
 
"Hmm. Theek hai. Keep an eye"
 
Bobbing her head in affirmation, she kept her gaze on the room.
 
 
 
Meanwhile inside,
 
Drawing the curtains, Amma began walking up to Radhika's bed. She knew which one was Radhika's and strolled ahead carefully because it was pitch dark, except for the faintest of faint light coming from the other room. But that hardly helped and she didn't wish to open the window of this room, fearing that Vishaka might get up and spoil her plan! Her legs kept moving towards Radhika's bed blindly, when suddenly they hit on something that made a creaky sound. Shuddering, she halted her paces and looked towards Vishaka's bed. But Vishaka seemed to be sleeping, so she took a relieved breath.
 
"lagta hai eeihai hai Oo chori ka bistar!"
 
She slowly moved near the headboard, with faint footsteps not wishing to wake up Vishaka. Reaching near the headboard, she halted and gazed at Radhika.
 
"Hmm. Badi achi neend aa rahi hai na toko? Manhoos? Mor poti ki khushiyan cheen ke tu chain ki neend so rahi hai na? theek hai......ab hum bhi dekhat hain ke kaisen tu mor poti ke khushiyon ko cheen sakegi" Saying to herself, she smirked silently.
 
In the faint dim light, she could see the pale outline of the bedsheet over Radhika. She pulled the bedsheet over from her head and sprinked some lotion on it.
 
"eei aisen davayi hai chori ke......tu bach na paavegi! Kal tera vivah to tab hovego na jab tu wahan upasthit(present) rahegi!!" She said, looking at the silhouette on the bed – that was all she was able to see in the darkness.
 
She sprinkled some more potion on the bedsheet, pillow behind and then safely covered bedsheet over what was supposed to be Radhika's face. After this, she gave a smug pleasant smile. The liquid that she had spread on Radhika's bedsheet was a potion for unconsiousness and excessive inhalation of the same can even lead the patient to coma. Since the potion was odorless, it was quite impossible for Radhika to understand and jerk the bedsheet away from herself. Thus she would keep inhaling the same for the whole night and.......!!!
 
"Mubarak ho Radhika......"
 
Laughing meanly in silence, she began walking back to the door. She glanced back once towards Vishaka and blinked. "tu fikr na kar mor bachi......hum tori khushiyan kisiko cheenne na devengi"
 
She slowly strolled out of the door, towards her own room.
 
Seeing this, Radhika again snuggled herself closer – almost sticking herself to the wall, so that Amma doesn't notice her.
 
Amma didn't notice anything, as it was pitch dark and also she was lost in her own world to spot anything odd at this hour. Reaching her room, she took a relaxed breath and closed the door.
 
An relieved but muffled sigh came out of Radhika's mouth, while her one hand flew up to hold Kanha's pendant.
 
"Radhika?" Dev called, still waiting on line.
 
"Hmm. Amma andar chali gayi"
 
He took a relieved breath.
 
"erm....ab mujhe rakhna chahiye. Koi aur aaye iske pehle......main chalti hoon"
 
"ek minute Radhika......" he stopped hurriedly.
 
"Kya huwa?"
 
"erm.....Amma iss samay kya karne gayi hogi andar?" he wondered aloud, in a tensed voice.
 
"Wahi to mujhe bhi samaj main nahi aa raha. Amma iss samay andar kyun gayi?"
 
"Hmm. Sochne waali baat to hai. Just think......I mean at this hour why should she step inside your room" he thought aloud.
 
"erm......haan shayad......Amma Vishaka se milne gayi ho" she answered, suddenly figuring out.
 
"Vishaka se?" he asked, hardly convinced.
 
"erm......haan......woh Vishaka Amma se baat nahi karti na. To unhe bahut dukh pahunchta hai. Shayad isiliye Vishaka se milne gayi ho" she reasoned.
 
Tightened his gaze, he looked around his room. "ho sakta hai. Ya nahi bhi ho sakta"
 
"Jee?"
 
"Radhika mujhe aise kyun lag raha ke Amma wahan Vishaka se milne nahi gayi hogi" he said, his voice turned strained as his tensed gaze roamed aimlessly.  
 
Her brows twitched. "to aur kis wajah se jaa sakti hai?" she asked, confused.
 
"Pata nahi Radihka......but I feel something's fishy" he muttered, lost in thoughts. His heart was racing in fear.
 
Seeing him so tensed, "aap itni chinta na keejye......kuch nahi hoga. Erm.....aaram kar leejye thodi der.....hmm" she said.
 
"Nahi Radhika......phone mat rakho. I don't trust Amma at all. Dekho tum jitna lightly le rahi ho na......things need not be so easy! Don't you remember that Amma is against this marriage? Just think Amma kyun andar gayi hogi?" he prodded.
 
"erm......to aapko lagta hai ke who mujhe.......kuch......."
 
Clenching his jaws, "Hmm. Radhika that could be a possibility"  he agreed.
 
"Dekhiye aisa to nahi ho sakta. Kyunki agar aisa hota.....to ab tak Amma ko pata chal chukka hota ke maine wahan apne jagah takiya(pillow) rakha hai......aur main to kamre main hoon hi nahi. Amma to ab tak koi bada sa bhakeda(drama) kar chuki hoti" she elucidated her reason in a soft undertone.
 
"Takiya?" he asked
 
"Umm......haan......woh main wahan takiya rakh ke aati hoon. Agar galti se Vishaka ki aankhein khul jaaye to jaldi samaj main nahi aayega na use....." she replied.
 
"Oh"
 
"erm....dekhiye aap jaise samaj rahe hain waisa kuch nahi hai........"
 
Her innocent outlook on everything – especially Amma, frustrated him at this point and he interrupted her. "Radhika tum samaj nahi rahi ho! Tum ache se jaanti ho ke Amma humare rishte se ab bhi khush nahi hai. Who tumhe ab bhi har cheez ke liye zimmedar keh rahi hai. Aise main who iss vivah ko rokne ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai! If she can come and try to weaken your mind in the temple.......she can do anything to stop our marriage!!
 
She fell silent immediately.
 
He feared that she must have felt bad. "Radhika you need to be very careful. Please. Mujhe samajne ki koshish karo"
 
"umm.......haan main samajti hoon. Lekin Amma kya kar sakti hai?" she wondered aloud.
 
His forehead creased as a thought flickered across his mind. "What did you say? You kept pillows in your place? Right?"
 
"Hmm" she nodded.
 
Roaming his sharp intense gaze everywhere as his brain kept thinking vigorously to crack Amma's unknown plan. "Probably she mistook the pillows for you.......aur unhone kuch.......erm......." 
 
Radhika looked on, as it went silent on the other end.
 
Suddenly it seemed as if he got a small clue and his face went smooth but pale. "Radhika change the pillows, bedsheets, bedspreads......erm.....everything immediately. Do not sleep on it!" he almost ordered.
 
"Jee?" she asked bewildered by his odd instructions.
 
"Haan Radhika. Tum sahi thi.......if Amma had understood that you weren't there in the room then she would have surely tried to search you or else would have created a scene. But she did nothing" he explained.
 
"Hmm......" she nodded absently, trying to understand his point.
 
"Iska matlab yeh ho sakta hai ke unhe aisa laga ho ke wahan tum so rahi thi" he continued.
 
She took a silent breath  and was unable to completely deny his reasonings. "ho sakta hai"
 
"Aur unhone kuch........!! Agar who sach much Vishaka ko dekhne gayi hogi.....then fine you're safe! But if not......" he gave a nervous small sigh.
 
She too felt much tensed.
 
"Unhone light nahi jalayi na?" he enquired.
 
"Nahi"
 
"to iska matlab who jyaada kuch kar nahi paayi hongi. Erm......she wasn't there for long right?" he asked quickly.
 
"Nahi thode samay main bahar aagayi thi. Aur kuch awaaz bhi nahi aayi" she replied.
 
"Hmm. Iska matlab she mustn't have opened any drawers or closets.......anyways it was too dark to do all these" he wondered, pacing around.
 
"Haan"
 
"suno.......do you keep water in your room?"
 
"Haan rakhti hoon"
 
"throw it....." he ordered immediately.
 
"paani?"
 
"Haan Radhika.......paani. You never know what she can do!" he snapped back. "acha suno.....tumhare shaadi ka joda who kahan rakha hai?"
 
"Ma ke kaamre main. Erm.......shaadi ka joda, gehne, kal ke liye naye kapde sab Ma ne apne kamre main rakhe hain......naye hai na isiliye" she replied smoothly.
 
"Good" he took a relieved breath.
 
His anxiousness was worrying her. "aap meri ek baat manege?" she asked lovingly.
 
He halted his paces. "Kya?"
 
"erm......itna pareshan mat hoiye. Mujhe kuch nahi hoga. Kanha hai na.....aur aapka pyaar bhi to hai" she reasoned sweetly.
 
Sighing, "Radhika jab tak tum mere paas nahi aa jaati........jab tak tum Amma ke paas rahogi main pareshan hota rahoonga. Kyunki Radhika unhone tumhare saath bahut kuch bura kiya hai.....aur ab main apni patni pe koi zulm hote huwe bardasht nahi kar sakta" he explained his worry to her.
 
Glacing down at the floor, she smiled to herself. "Main jaanti hoon ke aap mujhse bahut jyaada pyaar karte hain.......aur us se bhi jyaada meri fikr karte hain. Lekin mujhe bhi aapki bahut chinta ho rahi hai. Main nahi chahti ke aap apni tabiyat bigad le"
 
"tum nahi chahti na......ke main apni chinta kam karoon......to meri baat mano.....please" he said grimly.
 
"Kaisi baat?"
 
"Maine jo kuch bhi abhi kaha......change your pillows, bedsheets because she must have presumed it to be you......and throw away the water. And haan......kuch bhi pehen ne se pehle.....just check it once to be on the safe side. Hmm? Aur Kanha ka diya jala lo.......taake agar kuch gadbad ki hai Amma ne kamre main.....then you can see it. Okay?" he said, feeling too anxious to leave her alone.
 
She smiled a little. "waise ab to mujhe aap ki bahut jyaada chinta ho rahi hai"
 
"Radhika stop smiling okay! Aur haan maine jo bhi kaha......erm.......tumhe meri kasam hai who sab tum karogi!" something crossed his mind and his twisted his words in the way.
 
Her eyes widened. "Jee? Kasam?"
 
"haan kasam! Sirf meri kasam hi hai......jo tumhe meri baat man ne pe majboor kar sakti hai" he replied swiftly.
 
"erm......lekin? uski koi jaroorat nahi hai" she said.
 
"Jaroorat hai ya nahi........i don't know! Lekin ab to maine tumhe kasam de di hai. So just do as I say" he ordered firmly. But the next second his voice turned loving. "Radhika kal humara vivah hai.......aur main tumhe....." he took a nervous breath, not wanting the hovering frightful thoughts to creep inside his brain. He couldn't bear anything happening to her, and above all Amma was getting on his nerves.
 
She easily sensed his anxiety. "Theek hai. Jaise aapne kaha hai main waise hi sab karoongi" her voice turned loving..
 
"Aur agar kuch problem huwa......to......"
 
"to main phone kar doongi turant" she completed for him.
 
A small smile came on his face. "Good"
 
"erm......ab aap bhi apni patni ki baat maniye. Jaaiye aur thodi der aaram keejye. Aapki awaaz hi itni pareshan lag rahi hai.......mujhe bahut fikr ho rahi hai. Please......" she requested tenderly.
 
"Hmm. Theek hai. Ab patni keh rahi hai......to man na to padega hi" he replied, infusing some cheerfulness in his tone.
 
Her face broke in to a smile. "Acha......ab main aapki har baat manoongi......aur aap meri har baat. Theek hai"
 
"Okay. Erm.....kuch bhi gadbad huwi to........"
 
"maine kaha na.......aapko kasam di hai maine. Phone nahi karoongi main?" she asked, bringing in mock sterness in her voice.
 
He chukled once, hearing her cute stern voice. "Karogi"
 
"acha main rakhti hoon. apna dhyaan rakhiyega" she said softly.
 
"Hmm......." saying he pressed his lips to give her a kiss. "Love you"
 
"Bye......." saying she placed the receiver down and slowly creeped inside her room. As promised she lit the diya and in the faint light, she changed her bed spread, pillows and bedsheets everything. Even threw the water. After she was done with all the things, she sat down in front of the Kanha.
 
Gazing at the Lord, "dekha na aapne........ktini fikr karte hain meri?" she chuckled, amused. "Kabhi kabhi to kuch jyaada hi karne lagte hain"
 
But her smile turned tender. "Lekin sach to yahi hai.......ke mujhe bahut acha lagta hai jab who meri itni fikr karte hain"
 
Kanha just smiled at her naiveness.
 
"Par Kanha......mujhe bahut bura lagta hai jab.....meri fikr main who itne pareshan ho jaate hain. Mujhe acha nahi lagta......" she grumbled in a murmur. "Dekhiye na......aaj bhi bina kisi wajah mujhse yeh sab karwaya.....aur upar se khud itna pareshan ho rahe hain? Amma ne shayad kuch......"
 
However her words interrupted. "kya pata shayad unhone kuch kiya bhi ho? Aakhir who nahi chahti na ke mera vivah unse ho?" she wondered.
 
Folding her hands in front of Kanha, "Lekin mujhe pura vishwas hai ke jab tak aap mere saath hain.....aur Dev ka prem mere saath hain.......mujhe kuch nahi hoga" she said fondly.
 
Seeing Kanha's smile, she puckered her brows. "Kya muskura rahe hain? unhe iss tarah chinta karte huwe dekh?"
 
"Dekhiye......woh mujhse bahut prem karte hain.....aur isiliye meri chinta karte hain. unka mazak mat udayie......." she showed a finger, as if warning. "Main rooth jaaongi aapse......"
 
But Kanha was still smiling, and she too broke in to smile. "Nahi nahi kanha.......main aapse kaise root sakti hoon? main to mazak kar rahi thi. Lekin aap unhe mat chidayega ......erm......acha ab main chalti hoon. Mujhe bahut neend aa rahi hain.......Hmm" saying she folded her hands once again and then turning to her bed, laid down.
 
Kanha's smile widened by a small fraction, knowing that Dev was surely there to rescue his devotee from any obstacle.
 
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Hey guys, I am extremely sorry that i couldnt just write up the Thanks note after the updates/ nor could i send any PM's, even didnt change the title........actually my internet connection went off and was unable to reconnect for a long time. Already i was dozing off on the table, so thought of going to sleep instead. However now since my connection started again (phew!) i am here again!😃

Okay........firstly Thanks a lot you all wonderful people for giving such nice and beautiful responses. 🤗🤗🤗 I am glad that you all loved the haldi part!!!😃😃😃 Also I am sooooooo happy that you loved little cute interaction between Dev and Radhika in their imaginations😉😳 And yep......you guys also have enjoyed Amma's trick!! 😆 Thats for Amma😡

Anyways Okay Actually was stuck up with my project preparation and was unable to login here. I just popped in for a few seconds and then went off, and was unable to reply your PM's and messages Sorry!! A big Sorry actually........Sorry😔

Coming to the updated part, I have updated the mehendi and Sangeet part. Since Dev and Radhika's actual romance cannot be shown due to the customs/ceremonies i have added extra parts of other characters. Hope you guys dont get bored off because of their extra dialogues and descriptions. If yes then pls tell......so that i would avoid further.  😊   Thanks a lot  🤗



@Chalhov: Thanks a lot dear for the wishes. I am really very very glad that you loved this FF so much. I am really happy to have such readers like you🤗 🤗 Thanks a lot! 😃 Yes surely Amma's a nasty character and will stoop down to any levels for her own benefit. But she failed miserably........thanks to Kanha👏!!!!! So here in this update she comes up with one more trick to harm Radhika......😡 And yes i am glad you loved the cute imaginations of Radhika and Dev in haldi😳.  And yes, glad you loved the sweets!!! 

@Priyanka: Hey dear.......thanks a lot for the wishes. 🤗 I am glad that you loved all the parts wherein Amma's plans were failing miserably😆😆 She is here with another one in this update😡 Hope you like it (or hate her more😆) Actually i wasnt initially sure as how to show romance between Radhika and Dev.......but then thought of this one quickly and wrote up. I am so happy that you all loved it😃

@Priya46: Thanks a lot dear. Am happy.......very happy that you loved all the parts! 😃 

@Billo77: Thanks a lot dear!!! 🤗🤗 Am very happy that you loved the update so much!!!😃 Actually you know what? I never guessed that the character of Laurence would be so liked by all you guys......😉 That was a surprise for me😊 But I am happy that you like him, and have added some more portions of his in the update. Hope you enjoy that. And coming to Amma.......yep she is stooping lower with every passing minute, she did put the potion in Dev's haldi......but with the Lord's grace nothing happened to him!😉 hehe.......i only revealed the explanation by Shastrijee in the end portions to keep up the tension level😉😃😉  As for regarding, Amma's next attack......its Radhika in this part!!!!!😡 I am glad you loved the imaginations in haldi ☺️☺️☺️ ☺️☺️☺️ And yes, the phone conversation......will she tell him?😉😉☺️ hehe!!😉 Hmm.....for Amma to learn it will take some time. I know you guys are waiting for her punishment.......but a small waiting period comes in between. Right now her biggest blow would be Radhika's marriage   Hey dear, thanks for all the wishes......and yes hadnt been for you wonderful readers who support and inspire at every step i dont think i could have reached till this part!!! 🤗🤗🤗Big hugs!!! I am glad that i could still the interest alive in all of you guys!!!!!😊 Hmm.....the yummy deserts.....i am glad you loved them all. You know what? while i was surfing for these pictures, it went so hard for me to control my urge that i just jumped down from the chair and had one chocolate pastrie that was in my fridge waiting for me 😆 I am a great chocolatie(love all choco.....be it cakes, pastries,.....everything!!)😉 Hey and party at you place......🥳 So sweet of you dear.........🤗 Thanks a lot!!!!!  And hey, i never get bored by long comments........rather love them to core. So you can post up even 100 pages of your such sweet comments and i would read them up eagerly😊😃 🤗

@Diary25: Hey dear, thanks a lot 🤗🤗🤗 Sorry for not replying to the PM, as i said earlier my internet got disconnected. But i would just reply now!!😊 But thanks a lot for your concern dear.......i am really touched! 🤗🤗🤗  🤗🤗🤗

@Sonia122: Thanks a lot dear.......Aww!!......not less than a diwali sweet. Thanku!!😃 I am glad you loved the romantic portions.......hope you enjoy them in this part too.😳

@Palak13: Hey dear.......thanks a lot!!!!! hehehe.......Amma's plan failed miserably!!!!😆 I am glad you enjoyed Amma's confusion😉😆 Also am happy that you enjoyed the romantic portions. 🤗🤗

@Radev_addict: Thanks a lot dear! How are you now dear? Hope you recover completely soon dear......I had been so worried for you and got a pleasant suprise when i saw your comment here. 😃 Also how did your exams go? Aww, dear you were thinking about the FF when you were ill......You dont know, your  following words touched my heart so much!!!!!❤️❤️ 🤗❤️ I am really happy that the FF could connect with you and got a reader like you 🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗   Coming to FF, I am glad that you loved all the previous parts that you had missed. Thanks a lot for such beautiful words and comments dear. I am glad that you are loving this sweet journey of their relation going deeper with each step.....! hehe......true you have a benefit.....you didnt have to wait for the whole period for the next part and could read it whole, even if you missed up initially!! 😉 Yep, and thanks for liking Laurence. I never knew that you guys would like him so much. I included him in this part as well, hope you enjoy it. Regarding Amma, hmm yes her first trick failed and she is up with another one here......😡 Well, as said Amma would take some time to understand that Vishaka doesnt love Dev. Hope her frequent rants dont become boring. If yes, pls tell and i wouldnt add on further. I just add it because, its with Amma's character to keep blabbering her own points😡 Hope you enjoy the part.😊

@Chipak: Thanks a lot dear. I am glad that you enjoyed the part......and the FF so much. Again if it wasnt for the support/ inspiration of you all i would have never reached here. Thanku a lot for the wishes 🤗🤗🤗  I am happy that you loved the little sweet romances between Dev and Radhika here. since they cant meet, this was the only thing i could make up😳 An Dev's really naughty, despite knowing Radhika's shy nature he keeps prodding. Cant help, its his nature na?😉 I am glad that you loved Laurence!!😃 yes he is a good friend of Dev and when he sees Radhika for the first time then......😉?? hehe! Yes. And Amma's up to nasty tricks. Right now, no one would catch her tricks, but one of them already failed......thanks to Kanha! 😃 And this has made Amma really frustrated and in this peeved mind of her's she will stoop down to any extent!!😡 And yes, here Vaishali and Mrinalini have got a suspicion on Amma's plans as she has gone ahead and tried to poison their minds again!!!😡 Yes, she has some moe tricks up her sleeve and one more in this sangeet part!😡 Hope you enjoy it as well.  Hey and yes, I am so happy that you love the creations. Thanks😃

@Niha24: Hey dear.......Thanks a lot. Had been missing your comments a lot. And was so happy to see your comments again. Thanku! I am glad that you loved all the parts and were able to finish up all the updates. I am glad you loved all the romantic scenes with them, and the song 😃😳😳 Yep, coming to the fair, bhootbangla part.....i am so happy that you loved all their conversations....Radhika was really scared, but Dev supported her really well😉😆 And coming to the next part, i am glad you enjoyed Strong Radhika's answers to Amma. That was much needed, because i did not want Radhika to be weak in front of Amma!! She is innocent, but not a weak and foolish person. So i am sooooo happy that you enjoyed it so much!!!🤗🤗 Yep and Dev had to come there to support his Radhika!!😃👏 No, this Amma strangely isnt still scared....!!😡 Hehehe......i know i didnt open the suspense for a long time about the haldi😉 I wanted the excitement and tension to keep rolling and i am glad was able to😉 I am happy you loved Laurence😉 hehe!!  Thanks a lot again dear for liking this FF so much 🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗 Yes and regarding, the twists.......well i know Dev's excitement is reaching peaks.....and its almost marriage now, but again twists add more spice na? 😉 Hope you like the updated part😊

@Avinafan: Hey dear thanks a lot!!!! 🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗 Thanks a lot for the wishes. I am happy that the FF will be cherished in your hearts! Thanksss!!❤️ Coming to FF,  I am glad you loved the parts and also Dev's problem in staying apart😆😉 And yes, Amma will get exposed and punished 😡

@Laxmis: Thanks a lot dear.......🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗 thanku so much for the wishes!!!!   i am so happy that you loved the Haldi parts!!!😃 Yes and Amma's up to here with some more extra tricks of hers. Hope you like it😉

@Imarti_ruby: Thanks a lot dear!! I am so sorry that i forgot to thank you earlier, sorryyyy! I am so glad you loved this FF 😊😃😃






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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome di why didn't u pm me I am angry with u but the update was simply marvelous
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome updates....
I loved the fight scene.....It was really cute....
Thanks u soo much:)
Update Soon....
Take care:)
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Sia

thank you--thank you for a beautiful and long update. loved the song selection as well---

Liked the cute romantic moments--reminded me and made me nostalgic about many beautiful RADEV moments from CB (from 2009)....

I really liked the fact that at least in your FF, amma's dubious plans are thwarted by kanha (in his mystical ways). I could never understand that aspect in CB --as to why Kanha was not able to protect his devotee time and time again---So it is really nice to see you taking a different approach in your FF.

You have a unique style of writing which is very endearing---

Thank you for continuing with the FF (i am sure you have zillions of other pressing things to do) and hope that you can update soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update.... this time Amma will surely die of heart attack...plz add me to your pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks sia for two updates and must say what a playfull and full of life description of marriage celebrations. You covered everything in such a detail that feeling as if its happening in front of me..all the decorations and nach gaana was adding to RaDev happiness...with Dev mee tooo is counting for thier marriage..less than 1 day...

Would come the the other good parts later but most comforting is the thawrted plans of Amma one by one. Kanha either directly or using Dev, Vish and others to protect Radhika n this marriage is what was lacking in real CB..All the glaring indications are not seen by hatred filled Amma who liked to take all this in other way and always finding Rads fault..Must be a hell shock for her in nxt episode (Shaadi...)..Love everything and amma paying back time will come when everyone will get to know all this..hope to see it in your FF..

Loved all the small interactions be it Rad-Vish teasing, Dev-Dadi, Dev-Laurence, Dev love for nandu, Mrin- vaishali understaing of the happenings and their concern, Devki unconditinal lov for radika and Shastriji finally saying what always wanted to her for Amma..
And as for the phone conversation of Radev..it was the cutest convo n loved it all. Wonder how Dev came to the conclusion that Amma must have done something that cruel with radhika and warned rads on that..And yes loved the small romntic scene in the Mehandi sangeet..what to say they always cherries on the cake.. guess will get to read the full treat post marriage but these small beautiful moments are what make the story a more pleasure experience..

Now dear no words for your comittiment for the ff and writing skills..you always was upto the mark when penning down the human feelings. And over the ff journey you proved that you are truly a gem in describing human relation and feelings..Kudos to you⭐️

TC!

Wish you update soon..always greedy😃...All the best for your projects


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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved everything.
I loved the small fight on phone and how smartly Dev handled Amma planning and authoratively asked Radhika to follow orders.
Update soon. I want see Radhika becomes Dev's soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks sia for updating was egarly waiting for it.
will read it later.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sia that was a lovely update with mehendi ceremony and again Dev and Radhika saw each other and had a passionate session😃😉 in their minds like any to be wedded couple.Liked the way Dev countered ammas move by advising Radhika to change her bed clothes waiting for ammas reaction in the morning😡😆.When Kanha looks after Rads in different forms how can anything go wrong.I really appreciate the effort u put and write such a lovely and interesting FF