Funny Poem on LNMDJ - PriDa story(update on Pg 3) - Page 2

Jhanvi that was beautiful. From a long time i had wanted to do something like this in hindi but now no need. You have done an amazing work. U knw they remind me of the poems in The Lord Of the Rings, they also have the same tone and i simply love them.

Whoever said you can't write Jhanz..that was lovely. So well put - each aspect and so simply.👏👏👏

What a great way to sumarize the journey so far. Bring it on - lets see whats in store,

Jhan .. that was beautiful!! Loooved it ... especially the simplicity in words and feel! And sooo wonderfully brought about their entire journey .. Awesssome! 👏 👏

hey nice one...u kind of summarised d whole story!

@ Mru, Rads, Amby, Carie, Slweird (sorry don't know your name) and Armaan-Riddhima (Sorry don't know your name either)

Thank you for the encouragement and for liking my poem.

@ Rach

Thank you darling. How is your foot and your head now? The poem is 3 pages long and so I am posting it in parts - the next part is on PriDa - coming soon. 😉

@ Krups

Thanks. I tried to do that. It is all so dire and depressing now. You are right we have each other and we will make it through. 😃

@ Soni
Poet Jhanavi 😳 Aww. Now I feel extra special like someone conferred a title on me. Thanks. 😳

@ Sistu
In hindi, you must do it. Thank you for comparing me to Lord of the rings. Gosh I am flattered. ☺️

@ Maz, Eks and Achu
Thank you for all the encouragement and support. The next part on Prida is coming. I am putting the finishing touches on it.

@ Niki
Thanks for the wonderful limerick. I am touched. 😳 You are talented. You must write a poem too and soon.

@ everyone
Thanks guys. The next part on PriDa is coming soon.

Part - II : The PriDa story

Kingie and Queenie we call them here

To PriDa fans they are very very dear

Damini and Prithvi hated each other on sight

Like cat and dog did they always fight

Damini and Prithvi are two of a kind

Their attraction to each other put them in a bind

Damini was engaged to a fellow named Inder

That being so their love story could go no further.

Then Inder turned on Damini, to take her life he tried

Prithvi saved her life that day, but in that he almost died

Inder, you moron, how could you cheat on a maiden so fair

Damini called a press conference "its over" to declare.👏

Dame Ila's health took a turn for the worse

Prithvi supported Damini through this mess

Prithvi became her knight in shining armour

Prithvi's company Damini began to savor

Ila regarded Prithvi as a savior

Prithvi and Damini came so much closer

Slowly but steadily, in love with Prithvi did Damini fall

Dame Ila asked Damini to marry this knight so tall.

For Prithvi there was a lot at stake

Damini married him for her mother's sake

The grandmother's will had so decreed

Damini's husband would get half the empire indeed

So to avenge his father's death Prithvi got married

Overpowered by vengeful desire, he did this deed. 😡

RB is the demon that rules his head and heart 😡

Striking at Damini's dreams many a sharp dart. 💔

But Prithvi is a gentleman all the way 😃

So far from Damini he will stay.

To protect her from himself he will play

All kinds of games to keep her away.

Her love and trust he believes he must not break

For this every evasive action he will take

"I want Aloo parathas" he will say

And then not eat what she made anyway.😡

To hurt Damz now will bring him hate

Prithvi believes at a later date

So when the truth comes out

her heart will not break

This stupid belief of his

none can shake.

He loves her by his own admission ❤️

But must concentrate on his real mission 🤢

Hurting Damini shakes him to the core

It is an open wound, a festering sore

But do everything he will to hurt her

In his mind this is just to protect her.

There are too many demons that haunt this man

To slay these demons is a task gargantuan

These demons will finally be laid to rest

Love will win this final test 👏

Prithvi your love you must openly state 👍🏼

For all this pain to finally abate

We hope the day will come real soon

Forgiveness for Prithvi will be a real boon ❤️

With bated breath that day we await

On this statement there is no debate

Their union will make us all swoon

All us PriDa fans will be over the moon. 👏 👏 👏

How can the PriDa story be really complete

Without a discussion of something to eat. 😆

Those aloo paratas did hold sway

Over this forum for many a day.

They became quite an obsession

To it many posts owe their creation

One small line Prithvi uttered

"What was he thinking" everyone muttered.

"Cooking classes" we will arrange

Recipies for Damz we will provide

Some angry forumers got on his case 😡

Others believed it was just a phase.😳

Aloo parathas set this forum aflame

We will never look at them quite the same

Queenie dear got our sympathy 😭

Brickbats were reserved for her pati 😡 😡 😡

A lot of mirth and hilarity ensued 🤣

In a situation where sadness was assured

Every single one of us had a ball

Plotting the poor kingie downfall.😆 😆 😆

Kingie's shirts are another pet peeve

Oh why does he wear such a short sleeve

GK looks good in whatever he wears ☺️

Some think with Mayank a wardrobe he shares 😲

His plaid shirts have universal approval 👏

Some of his shirts need immediate removal 🤢

The camouflage one was universally panned 👎🏼

The red one we said should really be banned 👎🏼

Some of the shirts must be forcibly retired

After all our kingie must be suitably attired. 😳

Loud and long we all complained

The shirts we hated stubbornly remained

Star one eventually found out we were riled

Thanks to all those who called and e-mailed 👏 👏 👏

A change in wardrobe was what was sought

New outfits for everybody needed to be bought

This was a change that was sorely needed

Thank god our requests were heeded. 👏 👏 👏

Kingie darling in formal wear ☺️ 😳

All we could do was sit and stare 😍

Mouths agape and goggle eyed 😍

Some of us almost died

Queenie helped him with the tie

She was such a cutie pie 😳

They looked so good together

How I wish that moment could last forever

Kingie looked so good in just the shirt ☺️

That stupid waistcoat turned the outfit to dirt

That Ghajini outfit has critics galore

That is soooo not a corporate look we swore

A real blazer would have been fabulous indeed 😃

Come on designers get up to speed

The MD of Gujral industries must dress the part

Wear something lame he definitely must not. 😡

Now we wait with bated breath

To see what Kingie's designers bringeth.😃

Wow Jhanvi, that was just brilliant. I mean words fail me to describe how lovely it was.

OMG Jhanvi!! That was FANTABULOUS!!!!!!!!! I cannot tell you how much I loved it!! It has such a feel good quality to it. Like reading a fable! 😃 From start to finish it told the whole Love ne... and PriDa story so well. And I absolutely adored the humor!!!!!!!!!! I was laughing delightedly at the aloo paratha and shirt parts!! JUST AWESOME!!!! How I wish I could press the like button again and again!! 👏

Jan..this is just wayy too good👏...i love how you blended the pagalpanti of this forum with the PriDa story😆....so witty...amazing!..i recommend u continue this as the actual story progresses!👍🏼