U Are Mine(Mayur ff) last part pg 131 - Page 7

hey honey,

there are some mistakes

gr8 start dear.........lovd it..plzzz continu soooooooon

very interesting beginning!! keep writing 😊

Originally posted by: rkmnkp

Hey dear(Sorry dunno ur name)

You know the whole time I waz reading this FF

I waz

🤣

Sacchi mein

I am not kiddiing

you write so well

That I could see

like this whole scene happening.

And that Dado thingy

Wow so

I'm wondering

is he looking for Mayu???????

And

🤣
When Mayank screams

when he sees

Sammy naking the paratha

first time

🤣

That time

I waz laughing so hard

that tears came into my eyes.

🤣

And when Mayu is looking at Nupur

he is actually looking at the deliouse

Paratha she has🤣

And at the end

where Piya gives the paratha to him

he is so mean

he eats it all himself🤣

And out poor Benji and Sammy has to eat the paratha they made🤣

Sacchi mein yaar

this FF is so uniq

have never seen anything like this one.

Do continue soon

and plezzzzzzzzzzz

add me

Mein Lina

in ur awsome FF pm list.

Mwah

-Lina-

Hey lina thank u soo much 4 ur lovely comment
i m so overwhelmed reading ur comment....😆
so finally i m successful in making u laugh.........i tried to make it funny n i m glad that this fun is working
i'll definietly pm u when update next
n dear i m Rabi as is in my signature......have a look😉
n thanks once again 4 ur comment

Originally posted by: Senny

hey honey,

You are one of the most wonderful writers who can strike a chord with the readers so instantly. You are doing an amazing job.

After reading the character sketches, i knew this would be promising and it certainly is.

Keep it up!

thank u soo much dear 4 such a lovely comment
n thanks 4 liking my ff...... as far as writing skills r concerned i dont even know the abc of writing😆
anyways thanks once again ur comment means a lot to me😊

Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever

there are some mistakes

but it's okay

you should continue

best of luck

thanks 4 commenting
i know there r not some bt many mistakes😆 bt i'll try to improve it
till than bear with it😉

😃

Originally posted by: nikki028

gr8 start dear.........lovd it..plzzz continu soooooooon

thanks nikki😊
i pm'ed u thiss ff just bcoz u r mayur fan n it was also mayur ff so thats why😃
i'll cont soon

Originally posted by: myownarea

very interesting beginning!! keep writing 😊

thanks you soo much 4 commenting n liking its begining😊