|~~The Perfect Heart~~| AR one shot - Page 8

Originally posted by: Prasanthi

Okkie Dokkie..!! 😛

 

Definitely Swati. Will wait for your future writings :D.

Originally posted by: -Neetz-

Comment updated pg 4 :D

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Originally posted by: -Neetz-

*Reserved

 

aww hun u dedicated this to me ? thankyou so much swati! altho seriously i don't know what i've done :D

 

thanks again! shall return with my comment soon :D

 

*Edit:

Awww...this was so sweet swati! 😳 really cute and romantic :) and one part of me wishes that I could write romance as effortlessly as you..because I can't write it well at all, scratch that..heck i suck at it 😆

 

But kudos to you for pulling this off so well! It's not everyday that we get to read a GOOD fluffy/light-hearted fic, and urs is probably one of the few ⭐️  It was truly great! i absolutely loved the way armaan confessed :D that bit was done beautifully :D

 

Keep it up!

 

love

neeta :D

Neetz Neetz Neetz!!!!

Awww... you don't need to worry about that... you are better at much much better things..!! 😃

Thanks so much for the kind words Liza... I am so happy you liked it, sacchi!!

Love ya girl!
Swatzz

Originally posted by: mrs.armaan

heyyy....

i dnt remember if i hav reserved or not... im not gonna search for it now..


ohh my..!! Swatzz..  tht was awesum Babe... really goood..

i jus loved it/..... Oye hoyye... i dint kno ur wer such a gud writer... 😉

n Oye.. here AR are Gore>??? in tht pic... thr r white AR... 🤣  but i loved it anyway....

m glad i read this...

plz do write more n more.. n do PM me abt everything..

DONT u DARE forget...😈

Since you don't remember, I will oblige... No you didn't! 😆

Oh Man! Thanks so much Anjzz...!! Love you babe!

N that pic was just to give more effect and feeling to the story, thike? They are not gore... they're Desi Indians...!

And ohhhh!!! Main toh darr gayi..Anjzz ne mujhe dhamki di...hawwww.....!!!
Don't worry, you'll get a PM for every random thing i post! 😛

Love you!!!!
Swati...

Originally posted by: prernawaghray

hey swati
its beautiful dear
AR's relationship is tooo adorable n cute

Thank you Prerna... I am so happy that you liked it...
But, but inna chhota comment?? Not done! 😕
Agli baar, I want lamba lambe comment, ok?

Love you!
Swatzz

Originally posted by: HannahF

Hey Swattz 😊
I promise I will reply tonight. I have just got to finish my English assignment and next stop is reply. I have read it and it was beautiful, but I want to give a nice long reply as your work deserves it😊 but honestly it really was beautiful. The perfect amount of love not making it too sugary nor too bland. Just perfect. Haha just made it sound like a recipe

Hannahxx

You wrote the comment here only? If I knew that patience will reward me with a nice long comment I would have never PMed you at all! 😆

Well, thanks Hannah! Finish your work fast fast and then get back to replying, okies?
P.S. I love such recipes! 😉

Love you!
Swatzz

Originally posted by: Enigma_Swati

Since you don't remember, I will oblige... No you didn't! 😆

Oh Man! Thanks so much Anjzz...!! Love you babe!

N that pic was just to give more effect and feeling to the story, thike? They are not gore... they're Desi Indians...!

And ohhhh!!! Main toh darr gayi..Anjzz ne mujhe dhamki di...hawwww.....!!!
Don't worry, you'll get a PM for every random thing i post! 😛

Love you!!!!
Swati...

Desi Indians???? woh kya hai?? Desi means Indians... 🤣🤣🤣🤣

u Dhakkan..🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: mrs.armaan

Desi Indians???? woh kya hai?? Desi means Indians... 🤣🤣🤣🤣

u Dhakkan..🤣🤣🤣

Ohh!! Yeh toh maine socha hi nahi...!! chalo, me dhakkan part 3..vaise bhi 3 is my lucky number...!!! 😆

Originally posted by: Enigma_Swati

Ohh!! Yeh toh maine socha hi nahi...!! chalo, me dhakkan part 3..vaise bhi 3 is my lucky number...!!! 😆

 
😲   😲   😲  3 is my lucky no. too.. 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Swatttz 😃

How are you? First and foremost a huge huge huge apology. I intended to comment on Monday, but then we had a powercut in my area. Please maaf kardo na. Pleaaaaaaasee 😭

As for the one shot. All I can say is WOW! I have ready many one shots, but yours included the perfect balance of love and  tenderness, ensuring that it did not become too sweet. I loved it. 😃.

What I liked most, is you gave a balanced opinion from both Armaan and Riddhimas perspectives, not making it seem over the top. And I felt Armaan was too cute, when he opens the balcony and Riddhima suspects something. Which all leads up to a beautiful ending of the proposal.

Moreover, I liked the idea which you utilized of the dance. I could picture it all and I could picture Riddhima getting tired.. Beautiful.

Romeo and Juliet. So apt for your one shot. It was conceptualised perfectly 👏.

So so so sorry once again😔

Keep Smiling
Hannah Sophiaxxx

P.S Taylor swift is awesome, and I love her song love story...