*Kabhi Kushi Kabhi Ghum* cpt.1-18 Mods Plz Close

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Hey Guys I am Ayysha and have short FF in my mind. SO this starts from where the episode left off today. Prem goes to drop Chahat.

Here it is '.

Geet ' "Heer jayo '. Apnet PRem kay paas jayo." Heer smiled and hugged Geet tightliy. She ran out. Heer raced down the streets with tears rolling down her cheek. Her heart beating fast. Today she was finally going to be with her Prem. She ran as fast as she could and finally got a cab.

The cab stopped in front of Prem's house.

Heer ' "Thankyou" She paid the driver and went inside the house. Heer wiped her tears and rang the door bell.

Preet Opened the door and smiled when he saw Heer.

Preet ' "Bhabi ap yahaan."

Heer ' "Prem kahan hai' mujhe ussey baath karni hai." Preet told her he was upstairs in his room. Heer hugged Preet and ran upstairs. Every one came out and smiled when they saw Heer runing upstairs. She was about to knock on the door when someone caught her arm.

Heer ' "MA mujhe PRem say baath karni hai."

Gaytari ' "Nahi ' tu Prem say baath nahi kar sakti '. Tu uski zindagi mein nahi aa sakti."

Heer ' "Ma' ye hap kya bol rahi hain."

Gaytari ' "Mein nahi chati kay tu is ghar mein ayay ' mein tumhein kabhi apni bahu nahi mano ghee." Heer had tears rolling down her cheek.

Heer ' "Teek hai ma ' agar ap nahi chati kay mein is ghar mein ayo to mein nahi ayon ghee ' tab tak nahi jab taka p nahi kud mujhe lay kar ayien ghe." Heer left with tears rolling down. She was standing on top of the staris and everybodys face fell when they saw Heer crying and alone.

Lalit ' "Preet Kya Prem na kuch to nahi kaha."

Heer was about to walk down staris when someone caught her hand. She truned around with tears and saw Prem standing with tears in his eyes. Both of them just stared at each other for a long time everyone down stairs watching them and smiling. Prem finally took Heer into hug and she hugged him back. Everyone screamed in joy and Gaytari just full of anger.

Lalit, Preet and Harman hugged each other, everyone too happy to think about gaytari.

Prem and Heer pulled back and he wiped her tears and she did the same. The put their forheads together and held eachother tighitly. Prem and Heer walked down the stairs with everyone watching them. Lalit had tears rolling down his cheek and Everyone else full of happiness. Prem told Heer to take Lalits blessing. She wlaked in fornt of Lalit. He smiled as she toched his feet as her BAHU.

 

Kabhi Kushi Kabhi Ghum

Na juda hon gay hum Kabhi Kushi Kabhi Ghum

Heer Hugged Lalit and then went to Preet.

Kya Bebasi Hai Kya Majboriyan

Hum Pass Hain Phir bhi kitni hai dooryian

Heer looked at Gaytari standing fuming in anger. Heer patted Preets cheek and Hugged him.

Oh,  Kya Bebasi Hai Kya Majboriyan

Hum Pass Hain Phir bhi kitni hai dooryian

She Huged Maya who was smiling and then Harman.

Jism tu jaan mein teri pahchan mein teri pahchaan mein

Milkay bi na milay yeh hai kasa Bharam

She kissed Meher's forehead and hugged her and then looked at Gaytari. She walked upto Gaytai and was about to touch her feet when Prem caught her hand and shook his head.  

Prem- "Koi zarorat nahi ... Yeh hamri kuch nahi lagti." Heer tried to talk to him but he just told her no and she agreed. Both of them walked upstairs holding hands. When they reached the top Heer looked back at Gaytari.

Heer ' "Ma mein wada karti hoon ' ek din ap mujhe apni bahu zaroor maney gey." Heer thought in her heas and smiled looking at Gaytari.

 

Yeh hai teray Karam Kabhi Kushi Kabhi Ghum

She looked back into Prems eyes and both of the went to their room. Prem let go of Heer's Hand and closed ther doors slowly.

Ne juda hongay hum Kabhi Kushi Kabhi Ghum.

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*Important Note*
 Hi guys 
I was just going to let you know that "Dil Ka Rishta, Dosti Ya Pyaar and Dil day Diya hai Are going to be on a hold for a bit, since I am trying to pack up with Kabhi Kushi Kabhi ghum.

 Don't worry it wont be finished, its just after its 25 Chapters Kabhi Kushi Kabhi ghum II id going to take place, when Prem Heer have their son.

The story will take a twist and it will be full of Romance and love between Prem Heer. So I am just going to try to update that as much as I can so we can began part II.

As For Journey to our destiney.

I am realy happy that my FF is gona to a great place and all of you enjoy it a lot, I love your comments so as a thankyou, after Premeer's marriage. Around 25th Chapter Part II is going to start. Where there married and Heer has a girl. The story will contain a lot of Romance and happiness. It will also contain the return of Nihaal and Veera.

The story will take different twist while Prem Heer continue there journey as lovers/Husband and wife.

I am sorry for pausing my other FF's it just I get a lot of homework and if I ever get a chance I will update them, but if I don't please don't be upset or hate me I will update as much as I can.

I am sorry guys its just too much school work.

Hope you can forgive me.

Love - Ayysha

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  • Index

    Part1. Pg.1

    Part.2 Pg.3

    Part 3. Pg.6

    Part.4 Pg.9

    PreCap Pg.14

    Part.5 Pg.16

    Part.6 Pg.19

    PreCap Pg.22

    Part.7 Pg.24

    PreCap Pg.27

    Part.8 Pg.30

    Part.9 Pg.34

    Part.10 Pg.37

    Part.11 Pg.42

    Note Pg.45

    Part.12 Pg.48

    PreCap Pg.53

    Part.13 Pg.56

    PreCap Pg.60

    Part.13B Pg.64

    PreCap Pg.69

    Part.14 Pg.74

    Part.15 Pg.79

    Part 16A Pg.88

    PreCap Pg.91

    Part 16B Pg.99

    Kabhi Kushi Kabhi Ghum II Summary Pg.103

    PreCap Pg.106

    Pt.17A Pg.121

    PreCap Pg.127

    Pt.17B Pg.131

    Pt.18 Pg.138

    PreCap Pg.143

    Part 18B Page.146

    Love - Ayysha 😳



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    Posted: 16 years ago
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    sweet post .luv it. i want to kill g3 .plz continue .
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    My spot
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    soo chweet...i loved the part where Prem stops Heer from leaving, their hug, and most importantly the part where he said Gayatri doesn't mean anything to them!!
    Keep writing =D
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    It was really Good
    Maybe You can right a sequel?
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    it was really nice and cute...good going prem with the whole blessing thing!

    -aashifa-

    ps:thank you for the update
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    lovely, well written, do write more
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    loved the OS, I am soo glad that Prem stopped Heer....go Prem go
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    Small g8 os!
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    Hi guys As you know this was a One shot but everyone wanted to read more so i truned it to a short story :)
    HOpe you enjoy part 2:)
    Part 2

    It had been a Week sincec Heer's Return as Mrs.Heer Prem Juneja and everyone was happy ecpect for Gaytari. Prem ignored her and Heer always listend to Prem. Prem had decided to move out to Heer's house instead of living in Juneja house. Chahat was happy to live in her own house and was happy with Prem.

    Heer was being a good wife to PRem and doing what he would say. The juneja's were all happy because Heer and PRem were happy, but deep down everyone was sad because they wished PRem heer lived with them. In Premeer's new hosue no one talked about Gaytari. Preet , Lailt ,Meher and Harman visited everyday.Kulraaj would come with her kids from time to time. Everyone was enjoying there lives.

    Premeer House

    Prem – "Heer … Heer …. Heer." She came runing into the room.

    Heer – "Prem kya hua?" Prem was looking around.

    Prem – "Heer mujhe meri Shirt nahi mil rahi." Heer rolled her eyes.

    Heer – "Prem tum bil kul Chahat ki taran …. 6 saal kay bachay ho." She said and got Prem his shirt.

    Heer – "Prem ankein hain ya tich button."

    Prem – "Haha …. BOhat mazak ata hai." Heer gave Prem a fake smile and left.

    Chahat – "Mama … mama." Heer took a deep breath.

    Heer – "Haan beta." She went to Chahats room.

    Chahat – "Mama meri English ki book nahi mil rahi." Heer wen to her side table and opened the drawer.

    Heer – "Yeh lo." Chahat Smiled and hugged Heer.

    Heer – "Cahlo … breakfast time." Chahat smiled and followed Heer.

    Chahat – "Papa Breakfast." Chahat yelled from the dinning table.

    Prem – "Haan … Chahat you yell so loud … bilkul mummy ki tarah." He smikered and so did Chahat. Heer gave Prem a fake smile.

    Heer – "Chahat ap jucie pee loo." Chahat smiled and drinked her jucie.

    Prem – "Or mein." Heer came and sat beside Prem.

    Heer – "Tum 6 saal kay bachay ho … jo kana woh kaa loo."

    Prem – "Lay … abhi do minute pehlay kamray mein kaha tha mein 6 saal ka bacha hoon or ab." Heer gave Prem a serious look.

    Heer – "Prem"

    Prem – "Heer

    Heer – "Prem"

    Prem – "Heeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrr" Chahat smikered while drinking her jucie.

    Heer – "Chahat arram say." All three of them ate their breakfast and Heer got Chahats lunch ready. Prem talked to Chahat while Heer was getting her bag realy.

    Heer – "Yeh lo beta … ab jaldi say school chalo." Chahat got up and PRem held her hand.

    Prem – "Meiney bi office jana tu Chahat ko drop kar doon ghaa." Heer smiled and nodded. Chahat kissed Heer's Cheek and went outside. Prem looked at Heer.

    Prem – Mein jayon." Heer rasied her eyebrow and pointed to the door.

    Prem smiled and kissed her cheek.

    Prem – "ACha bye" He said and left. Heer smiled and cleaned up. Suddenly the door bell rang. She opened the door and saw Geet and MEher laughing.

    Heer – "Arrey Tum dodo … ayo na." Geet hugged Heer.

    Geet – "Kasi ho."

    Heer – "BOhat achi tum batyao." The three of them talked and teased eachother.

    Meher – "Di mujhe pata hai kay Prem jiju Ma say naraz hain lakin …. Subha ma ka janam din ap Prem jiju or Chat ko please lay kar ana." Heer smiled and nodded. About 2 hours later Meher and Geet left.

    Heer thought of ideas to get Prem to go.

    That night

    Heer had put Chahat to sleep. Heer and Prem were talking in standing by the window. Prem hugging Heer from the back and his chin on her shoulder, her head on his shoulder.

    Heer lifted her head from PRem's shoulder and looked at the moon.

    Heer – "Prem … woh aj Meher or Geet ayi thee … Meher bol rahi the kay subha Ma …" Prem intruppted and let go of Heer and faked a yawn.

    Prem – "Heer calo sotay hain mujhe nead aa rahi hai." Prem truned to leave but Heer caught her hand and made him face her. She held her face in her hands.

    Heer – "Prem subha ma ka janam din hai … or Ma nay hamain invite kiya hai." Prem looked away from Heer's eyes.

    Heer – "Prem please … Ma ka janam din hai … please meary liye." Prem looked at Heer.

    Prem – "Heer… hum nahi jayain gay … that's it."

    Heer – "Par PRem …"

    Prem – "Hum nahi jayin gay." Prem said in a firm voice. Heer removed her hands from his face and gave a weak smile.

    Heer – "Chalo soo jatay hain." She went to the bed. Prem felt bad and also went to the bed.

    Next Day

    Prem had finally agreed to go and Made Heer and Chahat very happy. All of them went. Heer wearing a hot pink sari with black embordary. Prem in a Armani suit and Chahat wearing a red dress.

    Prem walked into the house while holding Heer's hand and Chahat holding Heer's.When the three of them walked in everyone's attention went to them. Everyone was smileing expect for Gaytari who was staring at Prem and Heer's hands locked together. She looked like a red tomato. The three of them went inside. Heer's took Lalit's blessing and hugged the other family members. Prem did the same. Chahat played with the kids. Prem and Heer just talked to Lalit and Preet. Prem didn't let go of Heer's hand so she wouldn't go and take gaytari's blessing. Gaytari came upto Prem and Heer. Lalit and Preet walked away letting them three talk.

    Heer – "Happy birthday Ma." She was about to hug her when Prem pulled her back.

    Gaytari – "Prem tu mujhe happy birthday wich nahi karay ghaa." Prem looked at Gaytari.

    Prem – "Jab itney logo na bol diya meray kahnay sey kya farak parta hai." He said walked away taking Heer with him. Gaytari just stood their in anger.

    Women – "Kitni sone jodi hai … bagwan karay inko kisi ki naraz na lagay." Gaytaari became more angry and went upstairs.

    Heer noticed that and told PRem she had to go to the bathroom and left. She went upstairs and tried to find gaytari, when she spotted her in her room talking to someone.

    Gaytari – "Prem tu Heer kay liye mujhe apni Ma nahi manta."

    Prem – "Apko pata hai kay main Heer say kitna payar karta hoon or ap ney usko hi dard pohnchya."

    Gaytari – "Liken Prem tu mujh sey baath kyun nahi karta."

    Prem – "Jab koi meri Heer ko mujh sey door rakna chahay tu mujhe us insaan say nafrat ho jati hai." Heer shocked to hear wht Prem had just said.

    Gaytari – "Tu Heer kay liya sab kuch bol gaya jo meiney tumharay liye kiya tha."

    Prem – "Or aap woh sab kuch bol gayi jo Heer nay meray or ap kay liya kiya tha … Mrs.Gaytari Juneja aj say na ap meri ma hain or na hi mera ap sey koi rishta hai … agat ap ney kabhi meray chotay say Parivaar ko duk pohnchany kay baray mein socha to mujh say bura koi nahi hoga." With hearing that Heer left. She had tears rolling down her cheek.

    She wiped her tears and went back to the party. Every one talking to Heer and Cahat. Prem came down stairs. He looked furious.

    Prem – "Chalo Beta … Chalo Heer." He grabbed their hands.

    Heer – "Prem kya hua." He looked at Heer in sadness with tears in his eyes. Heer shocked.

    Prem – "Bus .. Heer aj kay baad hamra is ghar say koi rishta nahi hai … aj kay baad sirf mera tumhrai or Chahat ka Parivaar hoga." Everyone shocked, Heer stood infront of PRem.

    Heer – "Prem hua kya." He wiped his tears.

    Prem - "Meri apney ma na mujhe apnay pyaar say dor kiya or mujhe 6 saal tak saza diye." Heer confused with everyone else. Prem just took Her and Chahat and left the house.

    Prem – "Aj mein apni Heer ki kasam kata hoon kay aj kay baad Heer ko koi nhai mujh sey dor kar sakta or na hi usko koi duk day ghaa. … Heer tum meri sab kuch ho or Chahat meri zindgai … jab tak tum dodno meray saath mujhe koi nahi kuch kah sakta … iloveyou Heer." Prems thoughts while he was walking with Heer and Chahat to their car. Preet tried to stop them but Prem didn't listen why would he his mother had tried to take away his heart.

    Hope you like itJ

    Please CommentJ

    Edited by Premeerxoxo - 16 years ago

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