awsome part
thanks for PM.
congrats for new thread
love
Riddss
Originally posted by: missypatel
heya bheegs!! good job eh...2nd thread! ๐
i liked this update lot more than the previous two i think....it was funny (the cute way)watching armaan behave like a kid...so smitten in love...it was really nice...knowing even if its fantasy fiction land...these moments and times exist...ahh! :D
you're best at your thing...keep up!
thanks nijal. OK, now i know what u like- cute romantic AR moments, not necessarily intense. Am I right?
cheers!
nijaL
ps: i was just telling nj yesterday i miss 'definitely maybe..."and hope you pen one of those kinds after this one comes to an end (no hurries :P) its a solace to know one of the writers i like is still around...updating...๐
yeah, i am planning to write another one like DYM but this time from armaan's POV๐ณ
pps: LOL! That expression "deer under headlight' made me grin...some weeks back i came across one...pitch dark...on a lonely no streetlights road...and there it stood on the corner or a turn...waiting or keepin guard....but just standing...still n frozen on the spot..as if unbothered by the sudden light..STARING right back at me...i almost hit the brakes..in fright....aahah it was sum creepy-funny tale! :D
that is a funny story indeed....u know shilpa anand always had that 'deer under headlight' look in the old DMG episodes๐
Originally posted by: sonia-kashian
di congrats for the second thread๐that was yet another wonderful update di. it was soo good to read it. i loved the way abhi was taken care of by keerti and muskaan. loved muskaan's courage. loved keerti too.AR part was lovely as usual. armaan was real spiderman. his lines were too good. i just love his character more and more in each updatei am leaving IF for few months bcz of my studies. so i guess this will be my last post in this thread. keep sending me PMs though i dont reply. i will reply once i come back.i am soo happy that i could get to read such a wonderful part before leaving.
Hey!!!! ๐
Just finished reading the part that was quite an
entertaining read! โญ๏ธ
What with Armaan climbing pipes and Abhi being jilted by Muskaan and Keerti; the part had all the right 'ingredients' to leave me as a reader decidedly happy by the end of it. ๐
AR were at an all time romantic high for this fic (happened to read Nijal's comment and agreeably nothing beats Definitely yes!). Everything from the filmy flirtation to Armaan hiding under Ridhima's dupatta left me with a silly, satisfied grin on my face. Especially the dupatta thing, reminded me of the KASH Valentines Day episode where Armaan did the same as a Pizza delivery boy. :)
Two things touched my heart and they were Armaan laying his head in her lap (Wonderful how such a simple thing can be so romantic) and his not letting on the reason for his 'visit'. Ridhima's realization of the same was done beautifully; I am glad she'll finally confront Abhi and he'll get an earful of what he deserves to hear. Wonder if any realization of his loss will dawn.
Muskaan saving Ridhima was quite liked by me; no guesses why she wouldn't get Abhi's vote for being the Modi bahu, she's too strong willed and independent for that! Rahul's reaction to the situation would be interesting for it would provide the perfect opportunity for him to finally come out completely from under Abhi's shadow.
Awaiting Abhi-Ridhima confrontation!
Love
Smriti
p.s. Just happened to chance upon the second thread. Wouldn't want to miss an update so could you please pm me also when you update next? Thanks!
Thanks Aria. Hope u had a good breakfast๐ Armaan has tasted the forbidden fruit for sure....i am sure he will come back for more 'bites'๐ Abhi's downfall has def started. UR right, by the time he realizes what he's lost, he would have lost everything๐
Ummm...not quite..!! I like AR..for what they are..i love intense n gripping scenes as much as i like their cute bonding chemistry...cuz for me...its about the way its captured or written (in this case) ...no matter how much one writes..the length doesnt matter...its the depth n quality of words...watever i read...i want to be able to picture in my mind...a good vision...almost believable..n realistic! Another thing with AR...like ive always said is....they are not the usual couple...they have a standard of their own which isnt necessarily high or low....its the understanding..and potrayal of their love....the way they do it...! I like your fic...but ive always had a hard time...flowing through it seeing armaan-riddhima...in the given situation...at times the writing doesnt do them justice...sometimes they dont match to the writers credibility...its somewhat off balance...and mostly its off the right tangent coz...this story is focused based on drama....and AR don't fit that criteria..AT ALL (for me!) The same story i would be full of appraisal...if id be readin AK...but i started with AR and hence i m sticking to them..!!
I liked this last part cuz...i saw them as random couple...not AR..for my convenience ๐..but really looking forward to armaans POV in a likewise of DYM...
for now...lets see what the tigress has in store for the bad guy..LOL
nijal ๐
aite! action n love! thats a ton of drama for the update bheegi, and muskaan finally made herself useful... wonder how rahul will get the right act in place when abhi shows his disapproval fo muski now! :D
armaan is a dahlin'! and i think i liked how she found about things herself without him saying it!
good job bheegi!
cheers,
nj
ps: congratz for the new thread bheegi!
Originally posted by: aati1429
well.. This ammy is just such a e pie.. I adore him so much and also like the bold face of ridz.. she is getting stronger for armaan and really like it... it was too good...
update soon
P.S. hate abhi.. please shower some intelligence to him also.. only u have that rights!!!!
congo on the new thread..!..reserved..
*edit*hi im sanam
i have been a silent readr all this while
congrast on ur secon tread
n i wanted to tell u that i ve read all ur ff on AR n there great
n thanks for writing such wonderful ff
thans
Love Sanam
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