Hi di!!π
i am back after a long timeπππ. i finally managed to read all the updatesππ. i loved them all.
the revised 36th part was very niceβοΈ. it was much beter than the previous part. the fast reunion the the previous part didnt fit well with the situation. glad that u changed it.π
the last few parts were fantastistic.. i was confused whether this is the romantic story or a suspence murder mystery.π all the suspitions, their conclusions everything was very well written. the inspectors statement at the varying statements of the different members of the faimily was too funny. i dont remember the exact words, but its something like - 'pura soap ..'
aradhana's train getting late was suspecious from the beginning as you never write something just like that. there would definitely be a link bw the events. but never till the end did i expect sailender to be the mastermind. nor did i expect saxcena. i was doubting jia till the end. glad that i could read all the parts at one go. otherwise i would be breaking my head about the mystery. i didnt get one thing - why did yuvraj suspect jiyaππ? i understand jia suspecting him, but hy did he suspect jiyaπ? why did he say 'jiya can do anything'ππ?
the end was superb. perfect ending for the wonderful story.
thank u for all the PMs though i didnt reply.
Merry Christmas and advance happy new year di.π
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