PRC- Pyaar, dosti aur farz-part 5 updated page 9 - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
its really awsome shona janu i loved it but yeh bhimdev na 😡i loved everyone teasing prithvi 😳😳😳hope to see them together soon and plz upodate jaldi karna😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52

Wonderful,superb,mindblowing,brilliant update.

I loved this part.
First arguement between Pundir,chand and Rupali and sammy.
Second Prithvi's conversation with sammy.Woo.
Next I guess that letter for Sanyogita
Prithvi feels someone near to his heart is there.I loved it.
Wow,Prithvi save Sanyogita's life 😳.Good dear.
Actually prithvi save his own life because sanyogita is life of prithvi.
Prithvi lost in sanyo's beauty already😃.Really loved it.
Then sammy and prithvi and his friends became friends,I loved it.
Prithvi already impressed with sanyo,wow,loved it and loved sanyo's action.
chamki and other teases prithvi about indrabati but why jwala blush?hey kaya oh bhi prithvi ko pyaar.omg .
Anyway,iye sanyo ka pareshaani   hain😆.She'll handle it well ,I think.
Thanks for the pm and long update.
Now post next part also soon dear.
 
 
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
wow !!! shona dear u hv written outstanding fan fic for OUR SHOW PRC !!!
 
its so refreshing to read the frienship quotes & humour of all 4 frnds
& our dear sanyogita with prithvi !!!!!😳😳
Edited by sita11 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
shona u rly rock...awesum update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
Thanks for the update its lovely dear..I think Bheemdev's prey is Sanyo & she will be attacked & somehow PRC will be present there & will save her!👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
HI HOW R U?
VERY NICE UD
I LOVED IT
MINDBLOWING
SUPERB
JALDI UD KARNA

LOVE
DEEPA

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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
hiee
 
 
very nice part
 
well-written...!!
sorry 4 late comment sweety
i love d convo b/w chand n chamki
d way dey r teasing prithvi is very interesting!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
My princess,pls update the next part.I'm waiting.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
thanks guys for ur adorable comments...thanks alot.....jus keep commenting and boosting my confidence to write better each time
 
love u all
 
luv shona
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
😆😃😉hey my adorable readers...sowi for keeping u wait
 
heres the next update read and enjoy
 
dedicated to my dazzling rakhi di expecially, and to ma precious prcians and ma lovely fwends😆😃
 

 

Precap – Prithvi receives a sandesh from. Bhimdev tells prithvi how easily he got fooled by Bhimdev. Prithvi's anger increases. Bhimdev tells prithvi that at the moment his prey is someone else....and after he attains his prey he will think about prithvi.

 

Part 5 –

Jwala is aware that Prithvi is very angry...therefore she gets the sandesh from Prithvi and reads it. Everyone is standing under a tree.

Jwala says to Prithvi that they should return to Delhi and should check if everything is alright.

 

Arjun: chalo wapas delhi chalte hai....mujhe lagta hai ye bhimdev ki new chaal hogi.....

Chand: haan arjun teek keh raha hai

Prithvi is lost in his thoughts....Arjun comes to him and says to him...

Arjun: kya baat hai prithvi....kya soch rahe ho

Prithvi comes back to his senses....

 

Chamki: prithvi....hume lagta hai...hume wapas delhi chalna chahiye....shayad delhi danger mein hoga

Prithvi is about to say something.....when sanjham interrupts him.

Sanjham: mujhe lagta hai ke bhimdev...shayad un larkiyon ke peeche hoga.......shayad unki jaan danger mein hai

 

Pundir: haan ye bhi ho sakta hai

 

Prithvi:  vaishali....chamki...sanjham....arjun...tum sab abhi ke abhi dellhi jao...

 

Chamki: kyun....??

 

Sanjham: kyun ke chamki ji..ye bhimdev bahot hi shatir insaan hai....ek teer se dho nishano ka khel kelta hai ye

 

Payal and Viashali: tho...iss ka kya matlab hai???

 

Arjun: ye lo...ab in dono ko explain  karo......

Pundir: arre ye larkiya hothi hi aise...kuch nahi patha...aur payal....tumhe tho kuch nahi patha...tum tho

 

Jwala looks at Prithvi and then at Pundir...

 

Jwala: pundir...bas karo....

 

Jwala turns to Vaishali and Payal....she tells them that Bhimdev has many aims.....and his main aim is to destroy delhi...ajmer and Kannnauj...

 

Jwala: filhaal tho bhimdev Ne iss gao ko koi nuqsaan nahi diya....likin uss ka irada kuch aur bhi tho ho sakta hai...wo kuch bhi kar sakta hai...usse ye bhi patha hoga ke delhi mein prithvi nahi...aur wo delhi ko aur prithvi ko bhi nuqsaan poncha sakta hai...

 

Chamki: arre tho tum sab kya karo ge...yaha reh kar?????

 

Prithvi: hum sab....

He pauses...and sees someone listening to their conversation...he quickly moves to that person......that person is about to escape when Vaishali throws a knife in his shoulder....Chand grabs hold of him...Prithvi comes to that person...

 

Prithvi: kaun ho tum...aur yaha kya kar rahe the???

Jwala: kuch kaho ge ya yahi tumhe hum

Jwala takes out her sword and she is about to strike her sword through that person's neck when that person yells and says ..." bathatha hu"

 

Arjun makes that person sit up....that person informs him that he is one of bhimdev's spy.....and that bhimdev has sent him to overhear King Prithvi's plan and his next move,  prithvi moves close to him and asks him...."aur kya ................. aur kya tum jante ho "

The man is about to say something...when he gets stabbed by a Knife from the opposite direction.....Chamki gasps...whereas the others are shocked....chand, sanjham  and pundir run after the person who has stabbed the man......whilst dying the man is in loads of pain, he struggles to say his last words .....With difficulty he lets out a big cry and then says.......punamashi ki raat ko ....chandighar gao mein......

Prithvi: punamashi ki raat ko....kya hoga??.....The man struggles for breath and dies. Arjun checks the man's heart beat and says....ye tho mar gaya hai

Just then Chand, sanjham and Pundir come back. They inform prithvi that the person has ran off...and that they could not get hold of him.....Prithvi is lost in his thoughts.....

Prithvi turns and tells them that they should leave immediately for chandighar gao, without saying anything half of them leave to protect Delhi.....

 

Far away, there are some gals quarrelling amongst themselves on which route they should take. Finally, two of the gals give up and listen to their young friend Sanyogita and go as per as her orders.

                                                                                                                                              

On the other side, Prithvi, Jwala, pundir, payal and chand are crossing a bridge in order to enter the village, however, as the bridge is too weak due to the number of people crossing it everyday the bridge falls down. At that moment of time Prithvi and Jwala are on one side of the bridge whereas Pundir, Payal and Chand are on the other side.

 

Jwala: prithvi!!!!!

 

Pundir: prithvi!!!!

 

Suddenly, the weather changed, it started to rain......the weather condition worsened. It was raining heavily. The lightning struck and it was very windy. Some of the villagers come and see the bridge fallen apart. The villagers are very worried as the bridge is the only safe route to enter and exit the village. Prithvi tries to fix the bridge. He climbs down the bridge that was ripped apart and tries to amend both ends but fails. The villagers shout to him from the other end to find a shelter till the weather condition gets better. Prithvi's friends agree wid the villagers and tell him to go, and that they will cope with the situation. Unwillingly, Prithvi agrees and goes to find a shelter leaving Jwala to trail behind him.

 

Back at the village, the villagers give shelter to Chand, Pundir and Payal. They ask them regarding Prithvi, that who is he and where he is from, as they thought that Prithvi is not an ordinary person due to the way he appeared, meaning his royal looks and the jewellery he had worn.

 

Chand: wo ek zameendar ka beta hai…..

Pundir: jee haan…..surya humara dost yahi paas wale gao ka rehne wala hai

 

There was a group of villagers asking them questions regarding where they were from, what they need, what they were doing here and last of all who they were. A lady stepped forward from the group and examined Payal and Pundir who were standing next to each other.

 

The lady spoke…..

 

Lady: acha…sab samjh mein aya……tum dono…..kya naam hai tumhara?

Chand: Pundir aur payal

Lady: tum se nahi pucha …in dono se pucha

Pundir and Payal told their names……

Lady: bahot pyaara naam hai payal….

Pundir: ji

Lady: tum dono ka rishta kya hai…pati patni ho?…….

Pundir was shocked whereas Payal and Chand were surprised.

Pundir: kya……

Chand: ji haan ye dono pati patni hai

Payal looked at Chand, Chand smiled at her. Payal felt happy and looked Pundir. Pundir was very angry.

One of the men spoke:

Man: arre bhai gussa kyun hote ho…itni choti si baat pe

Pundir even angrier: ji!!!!

Man looked at the rest of the villagers and sed,"zaroor pati aur patni ka jhagra huwa hai….

Pundir: kya?

Chand: jee haan, yahi baat hai….dono pati patni jhagra karthe yaha par agaye hai

Pundir looked at Chand and sed…"tum chand…mein tumhe"

Lady: arre, bas karo Pundir…..itni khoobsurat patni hai tumhari jo rajkumari jaise dikhti hai aur tum….sharam nahi athi pati ban kar aisa karthe ho

Chand: jee haan…yahi tho mein pundir ko samjha samjha kar thak chukka hoon

Pundir: mein tumhe nahi choru ga

Man: aur beta tum kaun ho?

Chand: mein…mein chand….payal bhabi ka devar

Payal who was blushing sed, "jee haan…ye humare devar ji hai"

Pundir turned to Payal and sed, "kya devar hai?"

 

The lady to Payal, " arre beti tum mere saath aao…?"

Payal was about to fall when Pundir sed, "sambhal ke"

 

Payal turned around and looked at Pundir. Both had an eye lock. Payal was pleased to see Pundir's concern for her; She smiled at him and assured him that she is okay. Pundir smiled back, thinking to himself tum sach mein bahot khubsurat ho.

The villagers looked at Three of them. They sed that 3 of them can stay here, and left the room.

 

On the other side…

 

Prithvi is walking ahead and Jwala is walking behind him. Prithvi stops and says,

Prithvi: ye jaga teek rahe gi

 

He turns around to wait for Jwala's response, but Jwala walks inside the cave. Prithvi follows her in. Both look around to see if there is no danger. Jwala finds a corner and sits down whereas Prithvi looks for woods to light a fire.  Prithvi lights the fire and tells Jwala to warm her hands otherwise she will catch a cold. However, Jwala is lost in her thoughts.

 

Prithvi: Jwala

Jwala comes out of her thoughts and says to Prithvi.

Jwala: kya huwa?

 

Prithvi: mein ne kaha apne haath

Without letting Prithvi complete his sentences Jwala warms her hands. Prithvi feels uncomfortable being with Jwala whereas Jwala is feeling happy. Jwala thinks to herself, "ye mujhe kya ho raha hai, kyu mujhe tumhare paas rehne se acha lag raha hai….kyun Prithvi kyun…..kaise tumhe apne dil ki baat kahu….kya tumhe bhi wahi mehsoos ho raha hai jo mujhe ho raha hai?"

 

Prithvi: Jwala….rain stop hogaya hai….hume wapas gao jana pare ga

Prithvi turns back and looks again at Jwala who is lost in her chain of thoughts…..Prithvi a little louder speaks….

 

Prithvi: Jwala…

 

Jwala comes out of her senses. Prithvi goes to her and asks her….

 

Prithvi: sab kuch teek tho hai na??? kisi baat ki pareshaani hai tumhe??

Jwala: haan…..mera matlab nahi…haan

Prithvi: tum larkiyan bhi na sab ek jaisi ho…tum na bilkul…..

Jwala: kya..

Prithvi: kuch nahi

Jwala: tum kuch keh rahe the

Prithvi: haan, wo, hume wapas jana parega….waha par sab humara interzaar kar rahe hoge

Jwala smiles and agrees; Prithvi smiles back and both make their way towards the village.

 

In Chandigarh gao…..

 

"ye prithvi kaha hai…abhi tho usse a jana chahiye tha"

"kahi kisi ne uss par aur Jwala par kisi ne koi hamla tho nahi kiya"

"fikar math karo Pundir….prithvi apna hiyaal rak sakta hai"

"phir bhi chand"

 

Some of the villagers were shouting and cheering outside the room in which they gave to Chand, Payal and Pundir to rest.  All three of them looked at each other. They went outside.

All the villagers were extremely happy, they were cheering for someone who had amended the bridge. The person who amended the bridge had his back turned towards the villagers.

 

Payal: ab ye kaun hai? Arre ye tho prithvi hai

Pundir: arre payal…dheere bolo….koi sun le ga

Chand: ye surya bhi na….

Chand shouts…SURYA KI JAI HO

 

All the villagers run towards him, they pick him up and everyone cheers for him. Prithvi gets down, he hugs his friends.

 

 

😊😃Thanks guys for taking out ur valuable time and reading my update. Hope u enjoyed reading it. Do comment.

 

Luv Shona😉😛⭐️