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Posted: 15 years ago
"What was all that Kaya?" asked she

"Prags….I was…."

"You don't need to explain me anything…because I know exactly what you're trying to do"

"No it's not what you're thinking…." she tried

"Don't you think you should behave a bit more responsibly towards someone?"

"I know"

"No you don't know anything…..you're not free to do anything you like"

"Please try to…"

"No you try that….may be he doesn't utter a word about anything, but he too gets hurt at these stupid acts"

"Where's Nihaal?"

"You still care where he is?"

"Just tell me….." but she turned away, so Kaya walked away


****



Shlok had been sitting in the verandah on his own when Prags marched in

"Hi" she greeted suddenly

"Hi Prags" he returned

"Do not call me that…..you're no one to do that" she warned

"Ok sorry"

"Let me tell you…..that was a good one"

"What?"

"The way you wished her…..I must say that was quite impressive"

"Really?" she nodded, "Thanks"

"Any girl would feel flattered by such an act, isn't it?"


"I hope so"

"You knew it so well"

"I knew what?"

"How to grab eyeballs around you…..you do it perfectly"

"What are you saying?"

"Are you really not getting anything of what I'm saying?"

"Believe me no…..I just did it for fun"

"Fun? For whom….Kaya?"

"Yeah…..I thought….."

"You didn't mean any of that before doing so….."

"You cannot accuse me like that?"

"I can for I know what you want to prove by doing all this"

"That's enough" he stood up

"I should say that to you…..that's really enough"

"Pragya….please"

"I'm warning you for the last time…..do not cross your limits" she fingered at him

"Come on….I know my limits well, it's time you learn yours"

"Now you'll tell me how to behave….."

"Certainly, if you allow me"

"Just stop it…..I'm not Kaya who takes all your rubbish"

"I know you're not her"

"You know what….you are not going to succeed in whatever you're trying to do"

"But what am I trying to do….I told you what I did was just for some fun"

"That's what you think"

"Why are you so bothered….I played it on Kaya, n she's fine with it….n let me tell you are not Nihaal either, so stay away" he declared

"Nihaal….he's so good to you that even if he feels anything wrong, he'll never say it out"

"Then let it be….that's something between us, n I don't think I need to discuss it with you" he turned to leave

"You can never break their relation…she's getting married to him Shlok?" she said n he stopped at his track

"What are you talking?" he walked up to her, "Why would I even think of doing so?" he asked

"Because I can see you doing that only"

"Pragya please….I may have crossed my limits as per what you think, but I cannot do anything to them…believe me they are my friends" his voice calm

"But Kaya is not only a friend….is she?"

"No….she's much more than that"

"Shlok please I beg you…..leave them alone, she cannot be with you all the time…." she cited

"Hmm"

"She has her own life…..her commitments to Nihaal, n you know that you have to let her go soon" as she was saying all this to him, she could notice blankness in his eyes with the mere realization what it actually means

"Thanks" he uttered before leaving


****


He walked through the corridor slowly, thinking about what Pragya just said to him….n how true it was, that he has to let her go n no matter how badly he wants her to stay with him, she has to go

Entering the room, he saw Kaya n Nihaal discussing about it only but what bothered him at that moment was the proximity they shared as Kaya sat with him draping an arm around her drawing her closer

"I'm sorry" he turned

"Shlok…." he stopped him, "Come on in, its okay" he glanced at Kaya's face, it seemed that she had been crying a bit

"Nihaal…please don't misunderstand, whatever she did was because I urged her to do"

"I know"

"That was a foolish act….I should have thought about her before doing anything like that"
"It's perfectly fine with me….but you know I just can't go n explain that to everybody, n frankly they
won't even understand your relation"

"I'm really sorry for messing it up…."

"Don't worry, it'll get okay"

"Kaya….I'm really sorry for spoiling your birthday" she looked at him, "In fact I shouldn't have come here…..n make things bad"

"Hey don't say that" Nihaal urged, "We're happy that you came along"

"But I didn't let you be that"

"Shlok please…..don't blame yourself, I did it" she said, "You don't need to say all that to us, we know you didn't do it knowingly"

"Yeah…it's okay" Nihaal added

"No it isn't…I don't deserve to be here, I'm sorry" he left the room in a hurry

"Shlok….listen to me" Kaya called out

"Don't worry he'll be okay in sometime"

"Hmm"


****


It was almost evening n now Kaya had been worrying about him, for he was seen nowhere. First they had thought that he must have gone for a walk but now it was too late for one

"We need to do something" suggested one

"Hmm"

"Let's go n search him….may be he's lost somewhere in the dark" said another

"That's not possible, he was telling me that he knows this area well" informed one

"That means either he's willingly not coming back or he might be in trouble"

"You mean he's gone back?" asked one

"Uhun…..he cannot do that without informing" Nihaal said, "We should first search him out" he got up

"Nihaal, I would go to" Kaya said

"What will you do?"

"I don't know…..I'm not feeling it right, if something had happened to him"

"I'm sure he's fine"

"May be but I can't stay here"

"Don't worry Kaya…..I'm going, I'll bring him back"

"He'll be okay isn't it?" she asked in an assurance

"Of course why not….we'll be back soon" he kissed her temple briefly before leaving

Kaya had been calling Nihaal at intervals…but he said they hadn't located him yet…..worried she came in n saw Pragya reading a book

"Prags…."

"Hmm" she uttered without looking up at her

"How can you be so relaxed?"

"Why not? What's wrong?" she asked instead

"Everyone's so worried about Shlok….he's missing"

"So what do I need to do?"

"You really amaze me…..they have gone to search him out, even those know him for less than a day, they too care…..n look at yourself, you're reading a book?"

"Yes…because I know there's nothing to panic about"

"You know him well….n after whatever happened…."

"That was his fault….n your's too"

"Okay, but then too how can someone totally turn away from a person like that?"

"Don't worry…" she said finally putting her book down, "Who knows, may be he's doing all this just for fun?"

"Just stop it….how can you even think that?"

"Because now I know him well…you don't know what he said to me at the restaurant?"

"What?"

"That I'm jealous of you…..n he thinks I'm offended with my own life, rubbish"

"I know……he had said all this to me, n asked me to take care of you"

"Huh?" she was surprised to hear that, "What?"

"Hmm, even he feels your pain….that how difficult it is to be lonely, for he's going through the same"

"But he….."

"Just let it be Prags…..you never understood him, but I know what he's"

"Kaya believe me he was really blaming me that day…or why would I…."
"Because you just can't stand him, I don't know why?" she gushed out before leaving the room

Walking down the passage, her eyes swelled up with tears

"Shlok…. please come back" she pleaded, "I'll not say anything to you…"

"Kaya…." came one running to her, n she rubbed her tears off

"Hmm…"

"They have found him out…..Nihaal is bringing him back" she said

"Where's he?"

"They are on their way, come" n she rushed to the entrance, waiting to see him again

As soon as the car stopped, Nihaal stepped out n walked over to Kaya

"Where was he?" she asked hurriedly

"He was sitting by the lake….I think he's still upset over that thing"

"I'll talk to him"

"Hmm"

She crossed over to Shlok who now looked tired, like he had gone through a lot,

"Where were you gone…..you know how worried I was for you?" she asked n he looked at her

"I don't want to stay back…."

"But why, we'll be leaving........." he stopped her by a hand

"I need to go home now" saying he walked back


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That's all for now

cYa next tym 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Saanch
How r u???
Update was awesome..👏👏
Shlok was indeed with a gud ccompany but Kaya was not sure of it or rather we can say she was missing him too much..she wanted to b with him..😊
Atlast she was able to confront him..He really is too adorable ..he is only bothered abt Nihaal bcoz he means something to Kaya..
She is indeed becoming really possesive of him..She doesn't even like some other gal talking to him.😆😉
Presently Kaya is talking to Nihaal abt her souring relationship with Shlok..Both r married n still not able to stay with each other..something has gone terribly wrong between dem.😲..
Shlok was not happy coz Kaya didn't told him abt her birthday..He was really dissappointed..
He asked her to climb the cliff n shout sorry den only he will forgive her..Mr.Mittal n his stupid ideas!!! He never thought that how embarrasing it was for Kaya especially..But Kaya was too ready to think over all thi9s..she was determined to make him happy.
Pragya was not so glad at this scene n she really gave a gud scolding to Shlok..She was indeed very rude towards him..Shlok was so hurt n now he is beginning to realize dat Kaya is slipping out of his life.She has indeed become an integral part of his existence..
Do update soon
Bye
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Posted: 15 years ago
Superb part.Kaya is missing shlok during their travel. shlok and kaya's all friends are sharing very good company during the travel and kaya feels jealous.
Here shlok also disappointed to kaya about not telling about her birthday.
Shlok ka idea tha kaya ko sorry bulane ka.And kaya also didn't think twice and determined to make him happy and tell sorry to him.
Hey what's the problem of Miss.Prag?She is too rude to shlok.
Shlok hurt and going somewhere.everyone missing him and searching him.But miss prag reading a book.
Anyway update was superb,brilliant.
waiting for next part dear.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ok.....firstly I'm very sorry for not being able to comment the way I wish to....but this is not completely my fault....pata nahi ye xams aise kaise tapak rahe hai....and I really am in a mess....howvere the part was really gud.....and the best thing abt the part was of course Shlok....hehe. Actually liked this when he was apologizing....his helplessness was very touchy....actually it was not a gud thing....coz I cant see him in a helpless defeated state....felt really bad for him....but even that was cute....hehe. I knw u got wat I wanted to say....and yes, I cant comment on every bit....as I hav got really short tym....but u knw na.....I luved all the parts....they r simply gr8.....continue soon dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi sanch.....
how r u?
the update is awseome dear as always
kaya is in nihaals car but she is thinking about only shlok......she is deeply madly in love with him.n her jealousy .....i love it
so its kayas birthday n shlok was upset that she didnt informed him before
this pragya.......i really hate her...kya jarrorat thi shlok ko wo sab sunnaneki.......shlok was so upset......pragya ne itna sab kuch kiya aur aaram se book read kar rahi hain .she is really too much
waiting for the next part
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran99

awsome update enjoy reading it




Thanks for liking it😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Saanch

How r u???
Update was awesome..👏👏
Shlok was indeed with a gud ccompany but Kaya was not sure of it or rather we can say she was missing him too much..she wanted to b with him..😊
Atlast she was able to confront him..He really is too adorable ..he is only bothered abt Nihaal bcoz he means something to Kaya..
She is indeed becoming really possesive of him..She doesn't even like some other gal talking to him.😆😉
Presently Kaya is talking to Nihaal abt her souring relationship with Shlok..Both r married n still not able to stay with each other..something has gone terribly wrong between dem.😲..
Shlok was not happy coz Kaya didn't told him abt her birthday..He was really dissappointed..
He asked her to climb the cliff n shout sorry den only he will forgive her..Mr.Mittal n his stupid ideas!!! He never thought that how embarrasing it was for Kaya especially..But Kaya was too ready to think over all thi9s..she was determined to make him happy.
Pragya was not so glad at this scene n she really gave a gud scolding to Shlok..She was indeed very rude towards him..Shlok was so hurt n now he is beginning to realize dat Kaya is slipping out of his life.She has indeed become an integral part of his existence..
Do update soon
Bye

Hi darls
Though Shlok isn't trying to make her jealous but no one can stop her from being that when her Mr. Mittal is not with her n with someone else 😉

The present track seems too puzzled up for me explain further so I would let that be for now
Shlok was upset on not being told about her birthday.....he's almost feeling like an outsider, poor he😭
When he decides on sumthing....no one can deter him, so there he is asking for an unusual way of saying sorry....n what is more surprising that Kaya gave in too, knowing that her friends are there too😕
Prags was again at his work n had a tiff with him again, which upsets him as he saw Kaya with Nihaal....he's now getting to know what she holds for him😳
Take care😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Superb part.Kaya is missing shlok during their travel. shlok and kaya's all friends are sharing very good company during the travel and kaya feels jealous.

Here shlok also disappointed to kaya about not telling about her birthday.
Shlok ka idea tha kaya ko sorry bulane ka.And kaya also didn't think twice and determined to make him happy and tell sorry to him.
Hey what's the problem of Miss.Prag?She is too rude to shlok.
Shlok hurt and going somewhere.everyone missing him and searching him.But miss prag reading a book.
Anyway update was superb,brilliant.
waiting for next part dear.

Thanks dear 😊
Kaya is missing him so very much in the journey...just hopes the way ends soon, while Shlok is enjoying himself with her friends 😆
She makes him upset by not telling about her birthday but he knows how to turn the tables round😉
Prags is at her rudest best when she confronts Shlok....seems like some serious problem has gone into her head 😡
Keep reading..take care😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Ok.....firstly I'm very sorry for not being able to comment the way I wish to....but this is not completely my fault....pata nahi ye xams aise kaise tapak rahe hai....and I really am in a mess....howvere the part was really gud.....and the best thing abt the part was of course Shlok....hehe. Actually liked this when he was apologizing....his helplessness was very touchy....actually it was not a gud thing....coz I cant see him in a helpless defeated state....felt really bad for him....but even that was cute....hehe. I knw u got wat I wanted to say....and yes, I cant comment on every bit....as I hav got really short tym....but u knw na.....I luved all the parts....they r simply gr8.....continue soon dear.

Hey you don't have to sorry dear....it's so nice of you to reply each tym amidst your exams😊
Hmm he realized that he might have done something wrong.....which he shouldn't have done, at least not there....so he went upto apologize
Keep on reading more n commenting more about Shlok....you know what I mean😉
Take care😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanskruthi

Hi sanch.....

how r u?
the update is awseome dear as always
kaya is in nihaals car but she is thinking about only shlok......she is deeply madly in love with him.n her jealousy .....i love it
so its kayas birthday n shlok was upset that she didnt informed him before
this pragya.......i really hate her...kya jarrorat thi shlok ko wo sab sunnaneki.......shlok was so upset......pragya ne itna sab kuch kiya aur aaram se book read kar rahi hain .she is really too much
waiting for the next part
plz continue soon

Hi dear
Kaya's so much in love with Shlok....n her jealousy only pushes the fact further, as they two sides of the same coin😳 Shlok was upset but then Kaya did her bit to make him alright.
But prags was there to spoil it back again...n look she succeeded too. She's really 3 much😆
Take care😊

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