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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: saanch_69

Thanks for liking the part sweety 😊
Yes you're very right.....Shlok hurts Kaya, may be knowingly so that she doesn't come back to him😉 stupid guy, unaware that it's making him more intriguing to her, the gal she is😆😆
Vikram really tried to stop him but stopping Mr. Mittal is not an easy task for him though😆
Prags understands Kaya coz she finally opened upto her regarding Shlok, which she had resisted herself from before😊
The diary part is really close to me, so thanks for finding it interesting 😃

Welcome dear😳.Yes u r right, shlok doesn't know kaya well😆..
Yes, mr. mittal ko kaun rok sakta hain😆😉.
Yes, finally kaya opend up her feeling and prgya understands her very well😳.
Welcome dear again and the diray part is really very well.I liked it😳.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

U knw wat this part always brings tears in my eyes. When I read that convo of Shlok n Avni in the diary.....I just feel like crying. At that tym I cud only think of "How hard it must hav been for Him, how he must hav felt at that tym when he was losing his lyf but cudnt do anything, how helpless he had been".....oh I feel suffocated by just thinking of his situation n here (though in the fic) he actually lived thru it....and I think none can remain the same after going thru all these....or may Living thru all these. At least I cant do that...I knw.

Btw I liked Shlok's saying to Mrs Thomas "Ur prayers only work when u do that for me".....so cute!!! N Wid Vikram he said "An associate of course".....hehe...wonder when Vikram wud understand he cannot trick Shlok wid words...hehe.

Well u said ryt...when it cums to sum1 like Shlok....we r "no mind only heart" girls.....coz as soon as we start thinking of him our minds stop working n only the heart starts beating double faster...hehe. But I actually hav no limit of backing Shlok.....coz I always defend my loved ones incredibly no matter wat....even if the base of defense is absolutely lame.....hehe. After all, to me only one thing matters n thats I LUV him.😳

Ok...I'll stop ryt here. Will be w8ing for the next part.

Thanks dear for being so invloved in the story.....that u got tears in ur eyes How many times did u read this part?
Well the convo was not actually in the diary....it was part of Kaya's imagination, where she perceives them in that condition....but yeah it had been too hard for Shlok to be in that position....n even harder to come out of it. It's really so helpless seeing sum1.....ur most loved one dying before your eyes, n being able to do nothing at all but wait for that last breath😭😭😭
Yes even Mrs. Thomas knows it well....that Shlok is so right when he says that. She had always been praying for him all her life....n now a sudden prayer for herself won;t work really😆😆 n as I said Vikram is far away from tricking Shlok in his words.....he's way too sharper for him😉
I know dear....that's why I said that we are no mind all heart gals 😆😆😆 but cum to think of it, hearts know better than our already stressed minds, dun u think so?
N ya am exactly eveready with my back-up plans to cover my dear's loopholes, if any😆 When I love sum1, I think I fall in love with more of his weird qualities rather than the usual goody-goddy ones, well that's fair enough for someone has to do it na 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Saanch
How r u?R u prepared for your exams????..😊😊😊
Update was mesimerizing really..👏👏👏
I mean I got to know this character Shlok n he is so very diffrent from wat I presume..(Now I know alot abt him😉😉😉)
He is a kind of man a girl's mother want as his son -in -law..😊😊😊
He has faced such a huge loss in his life n how can we expect him to b fine with others..😭.
Mrs.Thomas wants to see him happy but I think he needs time to get over from that past trauma..
His diary states so many unknown sides of his personality..He loved Avni so very much n dat damn Tarun..😡😡😡
Oh!!!! how much i hate these kinda guys..They r just so mean n shrewd..n to worsen the situation he even married some rich gal leaving Avni in mess.😡😡😡
How cud she love such a man?????n dats why she doesn't wanna live any more..She dont wanna b a burden to Shlok.But Shlok is in a fix...Avni has rocked him to the core..Tragedy like the 1 that Shlok faced cud have life-crippling effects..He lost his love .n dats why he is so wary of a relationship..
Kaya really needs to pull on her socks if she really wants Shlok to start living again in real sense..

Kaya has again cossed that threshhold ..
I dont think dat Shlok will let her go again...
Wat will happen now?????I really wanna know...

Do update soon
Bye

Heylo dear....am good as always😃 n please dun ask me about exams....I really dun knw wat the hell am I going to do for it's almost a dozen of cases I need to go thru everyday.....n am terribly hating it. 😡
Well thank god my updates manage to be as as mesmerising as ur replies 😃
Yes now u wud be knowing him better now.....n ya he's much much different from wat u have been prcvd him as😊
I dun knw about ne1 else.....but I be more than happy to take him to my mum😳😳
Yes Shlok has seen too much in his life.....n if he's like this, there's no reason to blame him for this! People like Tarun do exist in this not so beautiful world...n they surely make it worser😡 Life has shook him hard n now kaya needs to do that to unfreeze him😉
Yes Shlok is not going to let her leave this time😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

It's superb part.Too emotional.When,I read the this update,I was crying.

I liked the conversation between Shlok and Mrs.thomas.She try to make him understand.
I loved the Conversation between Shlok and Vikram.Bechara vikram trying hard make him understand but fails.
Post next part soon dear.

Thanks darls for liking it so much...😊 yeah it was emotional coz it brings out the unknown painful past of Shlok 😭
Yup everyone is trying to put sum sense into him.....but Shlok is Shlok....why wud he care to listen to anyone 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago

Here's the Updtate:

~Episode Eleven~

Standing there for a moment, she looked down at his hand holding hers....feeling his grip on her skin made a chill run down her spine, where she was nervous about what he's up to next; though she was also feeling it nice that he stopped her

"I...." she started, unsure of what to say, he let her free

"Before you leave me with your apologies n my guilt...." he started

"But you don't need to...." she was stopped as he raised his palm

"I know what I need to or not....." he walked away from her, "You must be thinking of me as some egoistic fool....."

"Believe me, I never thought that" he smirked at her statement

"You actually don't need to be that good to me....I don't deserve that, not even an inch of it?"

"Hmm"

"I can't expect anyone to understand me the way I want to"

"That's true" she added, "But only a friend can do that....I can do that"

"Why do you still...."

"Because I know what you have gone through...."

"You know why I threw those flowers?"

"Why?"

"Because it made me sure that you had read that diary of mine.." Kaya felt caught, "You did, didn't you?"

"Yes...I read that"

"I wasn't really upset with you for bringing me those flowers but for reading that"

"I know...I had kept it back where it was" she informed quickly

"I saw you doing that only"

"Oh..." she bit her lip nervously

"But why did you do that?"

"Do you really want to hear the truth?" he nodded, "When I saw you for the first time, I felt something so mysterious about you....."

"Oh so you must be feeling relieved now that you have been able to unfold that mystery?" he asked sarcastically

"No I'm not happy at all nor relieved....."

"Now what else is left?"

"I didn't know so much has happened with you...."

"Please stop that, just stop sounding sympathetic" he said in a raised voice

"I'm sorry if I did, but I didn't mean to do that at all"

"Now what more do you want of me?" he confronted

"I want a friend, who'll keep no secrets....shall open up to me fully, can I have one?" she asked cautiously

"I don't need any to share my unfortunate thrusts with" he cleared

****

Down...Vikram was in search of his stupid friend, unknown of what was going on upstairs

Where he was still feeling irritated about his behavior done to her, he wasn't aware that he's at it again.....

"Shlok" he called out, while moving around the house, "I don't believe this....first he tells me to be here on time with the papers, n now he himself is missing"

****

She looked at him dithered.... as if trying to make out what would she do to turn this on a positive note, while he faced away

"Ok let's take it in both ways...I shall do that too" he looked at her surprisingly, "Now that's a fair deal, Mr. Mittal, isn't it?"

"An imposed one too" he added sporting an irritated look

"Come on Shlok....I can be a very good friend, trust me" she assured playfully

"N I can be an equally bad one, trust me" he replied in the same tone

"I trust you completely on that" she smiled wide as she took out her hand for a shake, which he took a bit hesitantly,

"You won??" he said like he had no other way out but to accept it

"You can too if you stay beside me" cheered she n a smile was returned

"I don't know about that but yeah I won't be allowed to stay quite, that's for sure...."

"Why?"

"You talk a bit too much as per my hearing capacity" he reasoned

"Just like Avni?" shocked was he hearing that name from her, she could see well the turmoil in his eyes gearing up for a moment,

"Can I request you something?" she nodded, "Please don't push me to the wall so that am bound to react again"

"Ohk ok sorry for that....will remember that"

"Thanks"

"I shall wait for the moment when you'll tell it all to me.....I'll wait for it Shlok" she thought

"Now that your work's over here....." she got that clearly, "I think we should move down, Mrs.Thomas must be home by now"

"Hmm sure" n she followed him towards the door

As he opened it,

"What man....you told me to come here n you're..." but he was stopped seeing her peeping from behind, "Aah...Kaya?"

"Hi" she greeted but her gaze still fixed on him, Vikram didn't miss that

"Did you bring those papers?" asked Shlok n Kaya gained her composure back

"Of course...after all you had ordered Sir" he replied in a flattering manner, handing them over to him while he rolled his eyes to that

"Stop that thing" he said as he passed across him smiling, Vikram whistled a little to that

"Someone's in a real good mood today" he commented in a quite audible voice, "What do you think Kaya, have you ever seen Mr. Mittal like this?"

"Speak a bit softer" she insisted

"Don't tell me you too are afraid?"

"Well are you afraid of him?"

"Yes....am very much afraid of his mood swings from a quite some time" he informed

"I know, but that's because he's gone through a lot"

"Hmm, I know that"

"Can we have you down Mr. Raina?" asked Shlok who had been going through the papers in the hall

"Yes Boss" he said before moving down with her

"Ah....you people carry on, I shall leave then" said she

"Ok" he said

"What ok Shlok, why are you leaving so soon, it's just a matter of sometime....you surely can wait" said Vikram

"No that's fine...I'll see you later Shlok" she said

"Hmm...bye"

"Ok then I'll escort you out Ma'am" poked Vikram

"Vikram....." started he

"I'll be just back" n he went out

Out as they walked past the lawn

"You know I'm still not able to believe what I just saw...I mean he's talking to you n that too quite well"

"He was angry with me, but now it's been resolved" she informed

"But how did this miracle happen?"

"Miracle is yet to happen, when you would see your friend back as he was earlier" she said with a renewed confidence in her eyes

"Am sure it would happen soon"

"It would, trust me" she assured

"Hmm...thanks Kaya"

"You don't need to thank me; he's my friend after all"

"Yes true...then I take my thanks back"

"That's better"

"Ok tell me one thing.....Shlok was saying that you have a fiance?"

"Yes......Nihaal Kapoor, he's in Delhi right now"

"N why are you here?"

"I have some work over here so......"

"Hmm, work comes first....he maintains that too" n they finally reached the gate

"Ohk then I'll see you later"

"It was really nice meeting you again, n this time for good"

"Hmm....bye"

"Bye" he waved, "That means she's only trying to be his friend, that's all. I shouldn't get myself to search any other meaning to this n further complicate their lives" he decided

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He picked up the phone, which went ringing from quite some time

"Yes Uncle" he said picking it up

"So you have reached there?" the caller on the other end asked

"Yes…n that too in one piece" he joked

"Shut your mouth up, I have heard it all…..how you behaved with Kaya?"

"You know what uncle….I always knew she can't keep herself from complaining" he opined

"N how do you know she's told me all this?"

"It's so very obvious, even a toddler can claim that"

"Yes….a toddler can but not you"

"Oh come one, am sure we have other things to discuss rather than talking about that woman, or really we don't?"

"Check yourself before you cross that line….."

"Ahh….."

"If not for anything else, you can at least respect the relation you share with her; can't you do that much for her?"

"May be I'm doing that only for those long years I have spent with her…….or I would have left her long back" he reasoned

"There's another reason too, but I know you would never accept that"

"No there's none other than this……"

"Don't you love her?"

"No…I don't love her; I have to go through so much because of her…….I'll never forgive her"

"How can you always think about yourself, have you ever tried to……..how can you be so selfish?"

"Because I'm selfish"

"I don't believe this….you sound so similar to someone you hate"

"I don't sound like anybody else in the world except myself" he declared making him smile in turn

"Ohk agreed! Now tell me….when is the function scheduled to be at?"

"They informed me just when I reached, at about 7 in the evening tomorrow"

"Hmmm…..are you ready?"

"I'm always…..are you visiting me by any chance?" he asked with deep curiosity in his voice

"What makes you think so?"

"Nothing……..just nothing"

"Hmm, take proper rest…..n I'll call you later again"

"Ok"

"Can I request you one thing?" he asked cautiously

"Why are you saying it like this Uncle…..you just command me n I'll follow" he assured

"Good, then please don't misbehave with her if she calls you…"

"She's not going to do that, I promise"

"N I promise she'll"

"Yes of course, you'll surely ask her to do that" he shrugged

"No no I won't do anything of that sort……it's a deal"

"Cool, I love challenges"

"So do I…..remember?"

"Let's see…."

"Ohk then have a good sleep n a very refreshing morning tomorrow, it's a special day for you ahead"

"Hmm I know. Thanks for calling uncle; I really needed you at this time"

"Anytime dude" he cheered

"Bye good night"

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She had returned from work, a bit late than usual…….throwing her bags down, she thumped on the couch quite lazily, but some kinda smell insisted her to open her eyes

"Kaya?" she asked, seeing her stand with a cup of coffee, almost below her nose

"Yes……Ma'am, at your service always" she replied sweetly handing her over the cup

"That's a surprise actually….n a very pleasant one"

"I know…by the way I said that always, jus to add an effect ok?" she reminded

"Haha……like I don't know" laughed both

"You must be very tired na……."

"Hmmm had lots a work today, my boss is gradually turning to be a monster by the day" she said with a sad face

"Poor Prags" consoled she

"Ok now when you have refreshed me with this wonderful coffee, I shall give you a long delayed treat, how's that?" giving a smug

"That's a very good idea…but some other day for sure"

"Huh.... You mean you are rejecting it?"

"Yes I'm…….. for the dinner is ready too….just the way you like it, but with the things I like" informed she getting up quickly

"What? You cooked again?"

"Hmmmm…..I took a bit too seriously when you said that I can cook really well"

"Seems like"

"Oh no….. my curry" n there she ran straight to the kitchen

"Kaya…" she called but then walked up to her, "What's the news?"

"Huh? What news?" she said stirring the food

"Oh come on, don't even try to fool me….you look happy dear"

"Because I'm happy"

"It's the first time am seeing you like this, since you visited me here……"

"Yes…..right you are" she replied in a more jolly way

"Is it something to do with Shlok?" she asked, n Kaya mellowed down

"Was it so easy to guess?"

"Yes of course, he's been the centre of everything, from the day you are here……" she reasoned n Kaya bit her lip in reflex

"I suppose I need to be more careful with my expressions" thought Kaya

"So tell me….what is it?" Prags asked

"Nothing much….."

"Come on, you can share it with me……please"

"Hmm….we have finally become friends" she declared

"That's good….in fact really good"

"Isn't it?"

"Can I tell you something Kaya?"

"No" she replied quick, "How dare you ask me that?"

"Don't take it in any other way…..am just saying what I'm feeling.." she started

"Ohk Baba, now say it please"

"You didn't sound this excited even when you're getting engaged….remember when you actually broke the news to me?"

"You know…..I really wanted this to happen, may be that's why am so excited?" she cited

"Does that mean you are more thrilled with someone's friendship rather than your own engagement?"

"Ufff no babes…..it's not at all like that"

"Then like what?" insisted Prags

"I did so much for you, n you are talking all this rubbish n spoiling my mood….I won't talk to you"

"But….."

"I don't know" she walked past her irritatingly

"But I know…..or probably I'm getting to know it gradually" she thought, n then went to Kaya, "I'm sorry" she said holding her ears

"No….you are bad" she turned away

"Am really cholly dear" hugging her tight

"Ok but remember not to repeat it again" she warned

"Promise….."

"Hmm….now go n freshen up quickly, am damn hungry" she said

"So am I, especially for your dinner…….just gimme 5mins, I'll be back"

"Ok"

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Posted: 16 years ago

Accepting Kaya in his life as a friend has solved more than one problem for Shlok, for the people around him seemed different..


Mrs.Thomas was happy with him, for at least not misbehaving with her anymore...
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Vikram felt relieved that now he could share his whacky ideas with someone to actually put them into action, unlike earlier when he used to plan them himself but would not gather up the courage to actually execute them

It was not an easy job for Kaya to sum up the reasons, why she felt so good about it; well she declared that she wanted him to happy, to start with his life afresh, which would have a new beginning n a new meaning too, rather than living on just for the mere sake of living...n so she wanted to help him..

While these were more of diplomatic reasons for the people, there was something more in actual, something she wanted to hide from them, maybe even from herself, would often shun it out as baseless, when her inner self would call for it....yes she loved being with him, may be more than she does with anyone else nowadays

These days, all she's got to do is find a reason to meet him, no matter how unimportant it is...Shlok too had started to respond to her gestures, though not as per expected levels but his effort was worth mentioning

That day when he came back in the evening, she was right there with Mrs.Thomas, chatting n laughing...he stopped by the door hearing her voice, unmindful to interfere he parked himself right there for sometime, gazing at her from that distance..like carefully noticing every of her move, when she smiles or becomes so very excited as she speaks about something.....

He felt bad for he had misbehaved with this person, who's trying to share his feelings making him feel good in turn....he had misbehaved with her when he should have been grateful to her for coming into his life..adding the much needed push..
He would have gone on thinking like that standing there if would not have Mrs.Thomas called him
"Shlok...what are you doing there?" she asked, Kaya turned n dropped the files he was carrying

"Ah..I was searching...a paper" he made up picking those scattered papers up, Kaya let out a giggle seeing that before walking up to help him with those, "Oh hi" he smiled uneasily

"Hi...what were you thinking?"
"Huh? Nothing...why?"

"It seemed so..that's why I asked" she said gathering them up
"Thanks n sorry to keep you waiting...."

"That's fine...I was just.."

"But did you tell me you're coming here today?" she denied,
"Oh... then no sorry" he stated before walking off

"Good that you are back, now you sit with her n I'll bring you some coffee" said Mrs.Thomas

"Yes I need that now"

"What did you mean by no Sorry?"

"Huh?"

"Did you mean I'm not welcome here without your permission?" she asked teasingly, "Or is it that you don't like anyone at your place when you are back from a hard day's work, or is it only you don't like me....."she was stopped

"I didn't mean any of that Ms. Bhasin" he clarified

"Then it's fine"

"I told you that you talk too much sometimes, not sometimes, actually always"

"Well, we should keep talking...we all have a freedom of speech, expression n all that..am sure you too have that, don't you?"

"Yes, I do but with that I too have my freedom of silence around me, don't you think so?"


"Oh k" she murmured, "Will this be fine?" she asked putting a finger across her lips n he smiled

"That's a bit over the top now"
"Uhh..."

"You just feel comfortable here; I'll be back after a quick change"

"Do it fast..." nodding he went up

Mrs.Thomas was back within some time

"Where's he?"

"He's gone up to freshen up"

"I must tell you something Kaya..."

"Sure Mrs.Thomas" while she waited for her to complete

"I have never seen him like this...he's really changed" Kaya smiled lightly, "N it's all because of you my child"

"Not only me, it's so much because you were there with me, your prayers paid off n he's on his path of recovery..n soon we'll have our Shlok back...I mean you'll have your Shlok back"

"I know..thanks dear" saying she kissed her temple with utmost love n affection like a mother
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Posted: 16 years ago
That's all for now 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

superb, brilliant update.Great, Shlok and Kaya are become friends.That's really great.

Now, vikram and mrs. thomas also very happy.
Prgya is again find something uneasy and this time also she is right.But, kaya doesn't realise this .
Wait for the next part dear.
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Ahh...I wasso w8ing for this part...to say that when I read the reason for Shlok's anger at Kaya which is actually coz she had read the diary.....I was like..........OOOOO.....and as u obviously knw I of course stand by him in this action of his....n to be honest I wud hav done the same. Well its not taht when he was being rude wid Kaya I was against him for doing that (u knw I can never do that)...but the reason made me luv him all the more.....if only the flowers wud hav angered him then it might be called his inability to faccept the truth....but Shlok's not sum1 like that.....he knws how to live wid the truth.

And yes I luved the convo of his 'imposed frndship', his super-straight answers to Vikram n his short curt replies....ohh...I luv them all. 😳

Well yes u r right.....heart is actually never wrong....it does seem insane to others when sum1 tries to follow wat the heart says....there may be sum onjections as well....but at the end of the day only those win who follow the heart.😳

Btw, I had read the previous part thrice for sure....but it can be more than that too.....4 or 5 tyms....not sure much....actually I read
mostly SUHAAN in free tyms.....☺️

Achha now it was an awesum part....I was so w8ing to convey my ever-ready bak-ups for Shlok....hehe.😉 Pls continue soon.
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