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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
hia maria sweetie
please next update karo..please
make sure it is long
 
i wanna see prc and sanyo..pretty please
 
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92

hi everyone thanks 4 beautiful comments i am updating next part nw 😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
#93

PART 6

Sanyogita is sitting at the dining table wearing white dress just moving the fork in the plate from here to there trying to pass the time no need of food in her stomach as she is nt ready to eat or drink anything m everyone is sitting quietly except prithvi who is sleeping n his room as he came in late and everyone on table waiting 4 time to move on ,no one is eating except pritha which is busy in her food not caring about everyone mind situation, finally kamlavati speaks and says"sanyogita beta kuch khalo humein kuch dair baad antim sanskar kay liyay jana hai thak jayo gi beta"

"galay se kuch neechay nayi jaya ga" tears clearly visible in her eyes says sanyogita

"par kuch to " says kamlavti

"nahi hoga bua"says sanyogita

"rehnay do kamlavati baad mein khal lay gi sanyogita "says someshwar to her and then ,oves to sanyogita put his hand on her hand and makes her feel that she is nt alone anymore there is family now 4 her  and then he moves to chand and ask him about antim sanskar and he replied that pandit ji will do it at 11 am today at the river side in ajmer ,finally prithvi comes in and sits at the table next to pritha but exact infront of sanyogita ,his hairs are wet as he took a bath before coming water falling from the edge of hairs and few hairs are cming infront of the eyes he moved it with his left hand sanyogita is watching prithvi very seriously and thinking that hw cute is he looking in white kurta and shalwar but suddenky she throws all this thoughts out of her head and thinking about last night and she smiles at her self and then prithvi moves his head toward her and saw her smiling looking at him but lost somewhere and sanyogita saw this and ties to look at other side  and prithvi busy talking with mom and her family and tell everything about delhi and the project they got nw ,they all smiles and congrates him but he will feels something is nt right here bc this was the dream project of his dad and bro but only a small smile 4 this achievement only ,"kiya hua hai yahan sab itnay chup kyun hian "says prithvi

"beta tum kuch batan hai "says someshwar

"tumaray mamu yani tumaray maa kay baai ki death ho gayi hai 2 din pehlay aur is liyay sanyogita yahan ayi hian unka antim sanskar karnay jo unki akri icha tha jo who chatay thay tumari maa kay hathon se ho "says someshwar ,prithvi couldnet belive what he just heard and he stand up in shock and in mean while sanyogita gets teary again and she left from there  ,everyone saw her going but no one went after her bc they think she need some time  4 her self then she will be ok , leaving all this prithvi moves to her mother hold her face in his hands and says "itna dard saha aur mujay kuch nahi kaha kyun maa"

"yeh dard meri kismet mein hai aur mujay hi sehna hai par dard is baat ka hai meray bhai ki family sab kuch kho chuki hai apna aur mein unko is haal mein nahi daik payun gi "says kamlvati

Prithvi wipes her mom tears and says "matlab maa ap kiya chati hain hum waisa hi karain gay "says prithvi hearing this pritha get angry but didn't showed it to anyone and leaves from there ,prithvi felt bad her going like this but concerate on her mom,

"sanyogita ko mein yahan rakna chati hoon apnay is ghar mein apni ankon kay samnay ,uss kay ansu nahi daikay jatay jin hathon mein who kabhi kheli thi un hathon mein usay sambalna chati hoon girnay se baas takay who apnay ghar ko bana sakay phir se "says kamlavati

"bas maa itni si baat jo ap chati hain waisa hi hoga sanyogita yahin hi rahay gi ap kay samnay par kiya who yahan rehnay kay liyay tayar hai "says prithvi

"aj antim sanskar kay baad us baat karun gi mein man jayi gi par zara khud dar hai who is liyay zara dar hia shayad na keh day shayad usay yeh pyar ehsaan na lagay hamara "says kamlavti

"nahi lagay ga hum pyar se kahin gay aur pyar ehsaan nahi hota khush nasibi hota hai sab kay liya maa "says pooja ensuring her mom that everything is going to ok nw ,at 11 am everyone goes to do antim sanskar and takes their place in the pooja and sanyogita sit in the pooja place with her bua she hold the kalash in het hand tighly as she never wana loose her dad soul but she has making her teary ,she moves her head in another direction and wipes hre tears by the edge of her hand and look at the everyone like no one sees this but prithvi is looking at her that sadness is hw much inher heart but she cannt hide it despite many efforts ,everyone comes at the river ,the pandit ji told him to put the kalash in the river but sanyogita hold the kalash close to her heart not letting it to go away from her self but kamlavti puts her hand on the shoulder and they put the kalash in the water and  they all move back to home in the whole journey no one talked to anyone , everyone reached home in night back again  everyone is sitting in the sitting room and sanyogita is in her room thinking about something to do ,what is she thinking nw good or bad ?stayed here  4 knowing

This part is 4 ur shona dear specially bohat intazar kar vaya dear tumko

.sorry😊
do leave ur comment i will be waiting 4 them😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94
Hi Maria,
Lovely update.
its so nice.
keep it up.
Thanx 4 ur PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
It's wonderful update.
Too good part.
Sanyo ka dard jis tarah tumne dikhaya is just superb.even,I feel sad for her dear.
I liked conversation between kamlabati and prithvi.
What's wrong with pratha?I don't understan it.
Continue soon dear.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
awesome update dear
really touched my heart
u really showed me sanyo's pain
it made me feel really sad for her
it was an lovley update
thanks for the pm
great update
plz post the next part soon

Mariam

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Really a very touchy part dear. i feel sad for the unfortunate girl. but neways prithvi is there 2 tk cr of her n as she will probably live with them now we will ger 2 c the beginning of their love isnt that Maria? waiting for the nxt ud plz post soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
hii dear
it was lovely update
thx for the pm
keep it up
 
love lucy
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 7:

Everyone is sitting quiet in the sitting room ,someshwar and sons are discussing how to help  jaichand family so they can stand on their foots again and kamlavati thinking this will make her brother happy where he will be and silently wiped the tears  , sanyogita is in her room thinking that she cannot live here  although her bua and her family is really nice and good to her and most above all they love her but the reason she donot wanna  stay is that her mom and dad never looked at them in their entire life with love and effection just busy with in their own prepectives lifes counting hw much money will be added in their account instead on counting the numbers of relation they r just loosing just 4 money which never belonged to anyone,she is gathering courage to tell her bua that shw will leave in morning in the hostel and will there from nw on and will do the job that her uncle  offered her in his friends officebut she knows that her decision might hurt her already she lost her brother but sanyogita doesn't want to loose her self respect at anycost ,she thinks relations are the real money of the life, finally she stand up and goes down into the sitting room where everyone is sitting ,she comes at the door saw some is discussing between them ,she tried to go back but her bua saw her going she calls sanyogita  and she come and sits near her bua and says what happen is anything she wants to tell them and sanyogita says "bua mein ap se kuch baat karnay ayi hoon par "

"kaho na beta kiya baat hai "says kamlavati

"ap bura maar maniya ga meri baat ka mein ap ka dil nahi dukana chati "says sanyogita looking down  pagal hotay hain

" kiya hua mein nahi bura manun gi tumari baat ka beta bolo"says kamlvati

"mein kal yahan se shift ho jana chati mujay yahin dad ka friend kay office mein job mili hai mein wahan job karma shuro karma chati hoon takay mein apni parrivar ki zimadari utha sakun"says sanyogita and everyone looks at her includinf prithvi in little shock

"kiya tum yahan se jana chati hoon par kyun beta koi takleef hai tumhein yahan kisi se ne kuch kaha kiya tumhein"says kamlavti looking at pritha

"nahi bua kisi se kuch nahi kaha mujay bas mein khud hi yahan nahi rehna chati ,who mein ap sab par burden nahi bana chati hoon mein apnay ap sab kuch sayi karma chati hoon "says sanyogita

"par  yahan se kyun jana chati hoti beta aur tum burden nahi hogi hum par aur humney kitna kuch socha hai sab kuch wapis karnay kay liyay "says someshwar with care

"yeh to ap sab ka pyar hai meray liyay par duniya kay liayay yeh sirf  mera matlba dikalvana hoga ap se aur who mein nahi chati kay meri wajah se koi ap sab par bhi ungli utay aur mein janti hoon kay apnay meray parrivar kay liyay bohat kuch socha hoga par meinay apnay pita ko wachan diya tha kay ab is parrivar ka diyan mein rakun gi aur ussi jagah par wapis lay jayun gi jahan is paarivar ki jagah hai "says sanyogita

"yeh duniya ki baton ki koi fikar nahi karta hum mein say aur rahi tumari apnay ap sab karnay par  to yeh tumari khuddari hia aur kuch nahi aur hum is cheez ka saman kartay hain par "says someshwar looking at sanyogita

"par kiya ji ap yeh sab kaisay"says kamlavati

"mein sayi keh raha hoon hum kisi ki madad to kar saktay hain par kisi kay atama saman ko hum nahi khara kar sakaty aur sanyogita kay liyay uska atma saman sab kuch hai aur hum is cheez ki khaddar karaty hain aur hum usay support karain gay magar beta tumhay yahan se janay ki ijazat nahi daysaktay aur ap jo karma chahain panay parrivar kay liyay ap yahan reh kar bhi karsakti hain hum mein se koi bhi ap ko nahi rokay ga ,tik hai na beta "says someshwar likes he need a confirmation from her

"tik hai babasa mein ap kay pass hi rahun gi bohat shukriya meray baat samajnay kya liyay jo shayad papa bhi nahi samj patay thay .aj laga meray pita ne mera sath diya thankyou babasa"says sanyogita tears fells n her cheeks and someshwar smiles at her innocene and wipes the tears and says "mein tumaray pita jaisa hi hoon aura b khud ko akailay maat samajna hum sab hai n yahan tumaray liaya aur aj kay baad koi ansu nahi in ankon mein , mein apni beti ko rotay hua nahi daik sakta ok "says someshwar and instead of replying sanyogita goes near someshwar and huggs him like he used to hugs his dad in his childhoodand he takes het her in his arms and make her feel his dad is till here 4 her no matter what happens

, after 2 min she leaves someshwar and leaves from there and goes into her room and prithvi is looking and thinking what was this ,saying no to the help of her realtives but then he thinks this was the self respect of a girl who wants to wins  her world at only her efforts she need no support .how she is different from the other girls she preferred her self respect ,her honour nt the wealth of someone ,how she managed her pain and sorrows  at a side and moved forward in life 4 hre family no one would be able to say all this at this point of life ,there is something about her that separates her from the other world and he also goes to his room

Sanyogita goes into herroom thinking hw they all love her like their family member and she will nt disappoint their hopes from herand will respect their wishes always.sanyogita thinks thatshe got some relation in her life that cares 4 her , on the other side prithvi is in his room thinking about sanyogita self honour,hoe she is different from others, but pritha is really angry in her room that why the hell is that girl is geeting so much importance in this house  , pritha thought she is here4few days but nw she is going to live her in same house and she is geeting angry and sangry and then takes a flower pot from hertable and throws on the floor ,prithvi in the corner room heardsoem noise of breaking he comes out of his room and looks the place the sound came from and she looks at pritha room .he goes into the room and saw a pot on the ground and he goes near to pritha put a hand in her shoulder  and she looks  prithvi is standing next to her ,s he quickly gets up and says "bhai ap yahan"

"haan yeh sab kiya hai kis par gussa araha hai meri angel ko "says prithvi smiling bc he knows that when everher sis in in anger the flower pots of the house are in danger ,its pritha old habit from childhood

"kiya bhai ap bhi na har waqt mazak hi kartay hain aur mein yahan itnay gusay mein hoon us ki wajah se"says pritha removing his hand from her shoulder .prithvci stoppedsmiling and says seriously "kiya hau jo itna gussa kiya jaraha hai kahin yeh gussa sanyogita kay yahan ruknay ki wajah se to nahi hai"

"haan yeh us ki wajah se hi miss sanyogita "says pritha very angryliy

"iss mein usne kiya hai yeh sab to maa aur papa nay kiya hai na to phir kyun "says prithvi

"janti hoon bhai yeh sab papa aur maa ney kiya hai par unko apni meeti meeti baton mein usne hi pasaya hai warna yeh nahi hota aj itnay saalon kay baad yaad ayi hai in riston ki matlabi hai sab yahan par "says pritha

"pritha koi matlabi nahi hai  aur na hi us ne kuch kiya hai yahan ruknay kay liyay who jana chati thi yahan se par  pap aur maa nay rokma hai usay aursahi kiya hai who cousin hai hamari is jagah ko nahi janti yahan humein uski madad karni chiyay na kay us se jagra aur past mein jo bhi hua who baron mein tha bachon mein nayi is liyay  yeh gussa galat hia aurrahi baat uski ki chalaki ki ya meeti baton ki to who aisi nahi hai who bohat khuddar hai aur is baat ka sabot usne khudaj diya hai jab sab kuch uskay samnay tha aurusne sirf apnay atma saman kay liyay inkar kar diya tha "says prithvi

"ap bhi bhai uski taraf  sab uski taraf hain"says pritha and turns her back at prithvi but prithvi moves her face toward himself and says"koi uski ki waqlat nahi karaha hai jo sach hai who sach hai amgel aur ab no gusa ok promise to ur brother "says prithvi

"par bhai who"says pritha

"par war kuch nahi kal bhi tumara jana maa ko kitna bura laga tha tumhey pata hai  aur kisi kay liaya na  sayi maa kay liyay to hum yeh karsaktay haina"says prithvi relasing herthe truth

"hmm.tik hai bhia sirf maa kay liyay "says prithvi caring about her mom

"yeh hua na meri angel nw give me a hug"says prithvi and they both hug eachother  ,on the otherside   sanyogita goes into her bua room and saw her bua is alone in the room and says "bu akiya mein andar ajayun "

"sanyogita arreajayo na beta apnay ghar mein kaisi ijazat "says kamlavti

sanyogita goes near kamlavti and sits on the bed and says "bua kiya mein ap ki goodh mein apna sarrak lun kuch dairkay liyay "says sanyogita very sweetly

"kyun nahi beta aja rak lay apnay sar "says kamlvati  she know when ever sanyogita needs to talk about her fear to her bua she asked her this like in her childhood she does the same but everything changed when they grew up

"bua "says sanyogita

"ji beta "says kamlavti moving herfinger in her head lovingly

"papa kyun chlaay gay"says sanyogita and kamlavti stops moving the fingers and says sadly"kyun kay beta ab unki jaga yahan nahi thi kahin aur banayi gi thi upar walay ne aurunhay jana para "says kamlavti

"par who hum se pyarkartay thay na to phir kyun us uparwalay ko hum pardaya nahi ayi yeh sab karany se pehlay"says sanyogita sad cryingly at the same prithvi enters her mom room to talk about pritha but saw lying on the bed in her mom lap and kamlavati and sanyogita but he goes by saying he will come later bc he knew what r they talking about and he wanted them to be alone 4 nw

kamlavati back to sanyogita "beta who chalay gay par who pyar abhi yahan chorgaya hain hamary liyay aura b humein is kay sath hi jeena hai "says kamlavti

"hmm bua ap ko pita ji  kay ravaiayy se bohat bura laghat hoga na jab who ap se nahi iltay thay "says sanyogita as she movesd into te past

"bura kabhi kabhi lagta tha jab who rishaton se ziyada jaga apnay business ko daity thay par yeh daik kar khushi hoti thi who  achi mehnat kartay thay apnay parivar kay naam ko unchay karnay kay liyay "says kamlvati

"sach mein bua pa bohatachi hain agar ap ki jaga mein hoti na to shayad nahi kar pati "says sanyogita

"acha , mein kiya har behan yahi chati hai uska bhai sabe se unchi jaga ho rutbay mein aur mein bhi yahai chati thi aurunki kami tum puri karti thi  jab bhi mujse baat kiya karti thi "says kamlavti    

"shayad ya pata nahi bua mein kiya karti parabhi to yeh janti hoon kay apnay parivar ko uska mukam wapis dilna hai mujay "says sanyogita

"yeh to sab se achi baathai na beta aur hum sab haina tumaray sath "says kamlavti

"janti hoon bua ap hamesha raho gi meray sath ab mein chali hoon raat bohat hogayi hai aran kar lain ap bhi "says sanyogita and goes into her room  

Edited by maria_awan - 14 years ago