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Posted: 14 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: rumela711926

well doneπŸ‘β­οΈ

thanks sweeti πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: maria_awan

hi shona i wil update it tomorrow i will update my all ff tomorrowπŸ˜‰

teek hai...make sure it is long
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83

Wait for the next part dear.post soon.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84

Part 5

 
prithvi takes the gifts  and put them in the back seat of the car and leaves  from delhi to his family in ajmer . he did not  gave them the news og f his coming back with the good news of the project in their hands nw unaware of the situation going on in his family , he is really happy and listening to the song
"aj mein upar asaman neechay  chalun sidhay ya ulta chalun ......................"
 
(scene changed to chauhan mansion):
 
sanyogita wakes up at 7 pm and takes the shower and come back and sits on the bed  thinking hw her life has being changed in  last 2 to 3 days .never expected all this stuuf in her life .she had some dreams of flyin into air and she falled on the floor in 2 days .tear were flowing down her cheek when she heard some  coming toward her room and the door opened by her bua and quickly wiped her tears  . kamlavati cames near her and looks at the face and says "beta  kiya hua sab tik to hai na "
"ji bua sab tik hia bas who kuch yaad agaya tha "says sanyogita
"janti hoon beta ab zindagi waisai nahi hai jaisay bhaya kay hotay huay thi na who to tumoo bohat pyar kartay thay aur ........."says kamlavati  who started crying nw
"aur phir bhi mujay chor kar chalay gay "says sanyogita who wipes her and her bua tears
"yeh zindagi hia beta aisa to har moor par hoga sab kay sath bas humein apna sabar kayam rakna hai "says someshwar chauhan  who came into her room
"ji pupa ji "says sanyogita who tries to smile but cannt
"mein kiya kehnay ayi ti aurt kiya baatein hogayi chalo beta neccahy ajayo aur dinner kar lo "says kamlavati
"par bua mera dil nahi hai "says sanyogita
"aisay nahi beta thora sa khalo  warna kamzor ho jayo gi "says somehwar
"ji mein ati hoon "says sanyogita who couldnt  say no to them
after few mins sanyogita came down and kamlavti call in her the sitting room and introduce everyone to her and she says hello to everyone and kids are very happy to see her and says "ap bhi hamari bua ho na "says sapna
"budhu yeh papa ki cousin matlab behan hain to bua hui na hamari "says sagar
"ha bacho yeh tumari bua hai "says pooja looking ta sanyogita
"kaisay ho ap dono meray pass ayo "says sanyogita and kids comes to her and they started talking to her and felling happy to have one more bhua . after few mins pooja goes into the kitchen and sanyogita flow her and  trying to help her out but pooja says no bc she is little tired  .they talking about chauhan family as she wanna be good with them and wanted nt to make anyone unhappy and pooja is trying to make her comfortable in her house .pritha came into the kitchen and saw her there and  become angry  to see her there .pooja saw pritha there and call her in and intoduce both . sanyogita says hello kindly but pritha  says hello in angry tone  .sanyogita feels something worng here but didnt said anything .pooja ask pritha to put the plates and food on the dinning table and sanyogita trues to help pritha but pritha says "is ki koi zarut nahi hai ap mehman hai mehman hi rahin " and leaves the kitchen  .pooja hears this and sanyogita is trying to understand what happen just nw .she is thinking taht she found some one  like she was thinking to be here . everyone was trying to be nice with her but koi to aisa mil hi gaya jp shayd usko pasand nahi karta .pooja saw sanyogita is lost somewhere after the pritha reply and she tells her that pritha is  little hyper kind of girl .she dont trust some one easily but she will be fine with her  in few days and sanyogita agrees to her and then they all have dinner together quietly and after dinner sanyogita leaves 4 her room bc she wanna be alone 4 sometime
sanyogiat leaves 4 her room and sits on the sofa and thinking again about he life and her family future and just sleeps ther thinking all ths stuff 
 
(scene after the chauhan mansion):
 
prithvi finally reaches at his home .he come out of his car and looks at his house and fells happy finally he is back  after 3 weeks ,he missed everyone  and haves some tears in his eyes but wipes them and look  at the clock it was 1 in night and says "itni raat ho gyai hia sab so gay ho gain ab kiya karun bell bajayun ga to sab  jag jayin gay aur sab ki neend disturb hojay gi meri wajah se "thinking hard what to do next nw as he cannt stay all night outside and then after few min he smiles and climbs the wall of his house and jumps inside and falls on the ground and says "waa kiya baat hai meri apnay hi ghar mein chor ban gus raha hoon agar koi daik lay na to bohat oitay ga mujay "πŸ˜†
and then he moves towars the window of the guest room and says "yeh sayo kam kiya meinay jany se pehlay window zara dili kar kay gaya tha in case agar project na mila to koi to rasta hona chaiyay na ghar mein dakil honay ga "πŸ˜†
he move toward the window and saw it open and says "mein yahan se anay wala hoon yeh baat kiso pata to nahi phir yeh window full open kyun hai chalo jo bhi hai meray liayy to acha "and he gets into the room and the lights are off and he stared to move toward the door and hits by by something lost his balance and fall on sanyogita and she screams and prithvi fall on the floor and sanyogita got scared and they both get up and looks at each other 4 few min thinking of what to do .
"kaun ....kaun ho tum "says sanyogita who is completly scared
"mein ..........who  tum kaun ho"says prithvi in little worried look that he might got into wrong house
"tum meray room mein window se eneter huay ho to tum batao warna mein"says sanyogita as she got hold of her fear
"window se ayun ya jahan se bhi ayun tumko kiya "says prithvi as he was also ready to  hold the flag of his ego or self respect
which he doesnt want to losse in night πŸ˜†
"wah wah mujay kiya meray room mein night ko atay ho wnidow se aur mujay kiya  ik laski kay room mein atay huay tumko sharam nahi ati "says sanyogita in a little loud voice
"kiya matlab tumara aur chilao maat samji tum tum jungilli billi"says prithvi
"mein jungilli billi aur tumkiya  ik bewaquuf bigray rahis "says sanyogita  showing her eyes
"bigra rahis aur mein .........mein tumko nayi chorun ga meray ghar mein mujay hi sun arhi ho "says prithvi as he move one step forward to turn on the light but sanyogita got it wrong and she scream in a loud voice and prithvi put a hand on her mouth to make her quiet but sanyogita bites on his hand and says "khabar dar jo tum agay ay meray pass "
"ah mein tumko na "says prithvi stopped as the room door got open and everyone was standing there watching whats is happening there and kamlavti enters nto the room and goes to sanyogita and says what happen and she pointed the finger toward prithvi holding his hand  and kamlavati says "tum yahan is waqt kiya karahy ho bell nahi baja saktay bechari kitna dar gayi hai beta "
"beta yeh kaun hai bhua "says sanyogita whi is standing after kamlavti
"ab suna beta yeh mera ghar hai aur tum kaun ho aur yahan kiya karahi ho "says prithvi to her
"yeh sanyogita  hia tumari cousin jo aj hi london se ayi hai aur ab yahan hi rahay gi hamary sath "says kamlavati
"cosuin oh ok "says prithvi looking at her
"acha tum yahan kiya karahy ho is waqt "says someshwar
"who mein surprise daina chata tha is liyay bell nahi bajayi aur yahan se aya par yeh mujay chor samaj baiti aur bolnay hi nahi diya mujay"says prithvi
"meinay nahi bolnay diya apko ya ap hi bolay jarahy thay "says sanyogita starring at him
"kiya "says prithvi also starring at her
"acha chalo ab bohat ho gaya ab bakhi ki baatein subha karain gay ab ja kar so jayo tum aur sanyogita tum bhi so jayo and they leaves the room and prithvi also going but as he pass by sanyogita he says "jungilli billi "with a small irritating smile
and sanyogita quickly looks at him and replies "bigra rahis "with a starring look  and every body leaves 4 their room
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
this is all 4 nw friends hope u all enjoy πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
 
 
 
tehzeeb25 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
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thanxxx 4 d pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
Nice update sweetheart enjoyed it fully
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
Wonderful update maria.Strange beahviour of pratha.But pooja is nice.
Wow,I loved the sweet and cute jhagra between prithvi and sanyo.It's really great.Continue soon dear.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
hey maria..
lovely ud yaar...loved each n every scene of prithvi sanyogita
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
Very nice ud  Maria dear. i just luv the sweet nokjhok between prithvi and Sanyo.Reminds me of the golden yatra days. plz ud soon dear.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
hey maria....the update was superb
prithvi ky entry thi...its was awesome....and ye pratha she sounded so mean to sanyo....anyways the update was wonderful....loking forward to read the next update....
dekhte hai wat happens next between the jangliibill and bigra rais
well written
and sorry for the late comment