Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti
hey zoya, just read this ff CS! sounds awesome! do continue and pm me when u update!
Originally posted by: bmtdluver
thnx for the character sketch...........sounds great. plz continue when possible
ur welcome huni!
Thanks dear for commentingWill continue soonWill surely add you to the pm listTake CareZoya
Hey guys
Thank you all for your commentsAT THE KHANNA HOUSE
Well it's a beautiful morning with birds chirping around
A girl is sleeping peacefully in her room when the alarm clock start to ring
She takes the pillow beside her and keeps it on her head for a while but then throws it as she knew that it is time to wake up
She gets up and put the alarm off and make her way out of the room towards the room beside her own
She goes and stand at the door, turns the knob but find out that it is locked she then start to knock the door. She is continuosly knocking the door of the room but the person inside is in his dreamland. She then goes to her room and get the duplicate keys from the drawer and says
Girl:Ab maza aaye ga. No one can save you from me now. Dude you are gone
She goes straight towards the room whose door she was knocking a while ago, inserts the key and open the lock
There we see a guy sleeping in his bed
The girl goes to him and tries to wake him up but he does not react
Then the girl goes to washroom and brings a bucket of water and Splash
The guy wakes up and shouts
Guy:Bharti ki bachi main tumhe choroon ga nahin
The girl start running and says
Bharti:Bro pehle pakar to lo phir hi choron ge na
Both start running but Bharti is too fast for him to catch he stop in the way as he is exhausted
Bharti:Kyun ab kya hua waise tou bara I am the man I am the man ke naare lagaate ho ab Man se ik larki bhi nahin pakdi jaati shame on you bro
Then her eyes fall on the clock and she realizes that they are getting late
Bharti:Chalo bro lets leave it here abhi hume chalna chahiye we are getting late
Buy:Okay but don't think I will spare you for this you are gone girl because you know I AM THE MAN
Bharti:Yeah! Yeah! now lets go
Both proceed towards their room to get ready
After a while both of them comes to the dining area and sit on their chairs waiting for their breakfast both wait for a while but when nobody comes both start to count
Bharti:1
Bhaskar:2
Bharti:3
Then both together:Payal breakfast
Payal(screaming from the kitchen):Aa rahi hoon
Payal comes out of the kitchen with their breakfasts
She keeps the plates infront of them with anger and settles herself on one of the chair
Payal:Ye acha hai tum dono behan bhai ka khud ko tou kuch pakaana aata nahin hai mujhe tum logon ne apna cook rakha hua hai
She sees that both of them are not listening to her she gets up from the chair and says
Payal(shouting):Main yahan deewaron se nahin tum logon se baat kar rahi hoon tum log mujhe ignore karna band karo
She stops and see that both of them have kept their hands on their ears
Bharti looks at Payal and realizes that she has stopped talking she asks Bhaskar to take his hands off
Bharti:Bro kaanon per se haath hatha lo toofaan tal gaya hai
Both of them then give hi-5 to each other but on seeing Payal still angry stop laughing end engross themselves in breakfast
Payal:Maine jo kuch bhi kahan hai sach tou kaha hai na Kal ko agar meri shaadi ho gayi tout um log kya karo ge
Bharti:Shaadi karke aao gi tou yahin per hi na (she realizes what she has said and bites her tongue)
Bhaskar:What? What did you say??
Bharti:Kuch bhi tou nahin chalo na bro dekho late ho raha hai hume phir Payal ko bhi tou drop karna hai
Payal:Haan haan mujhe bhi tou drop karna hai chalo
Bhaskar:I'll go and get the keys
Bhaskar goes from their while Payal looks at Bharti with big eyes
Bharti(Scared):Kya hua?? Bro ko kuch pata nahin chala chill girl
Payal:Kya chill girl?? I should have not told you Tum pakka ik din phasao gi mujhe
Bharti:Acha baba sorry aage se dehaan rakhoon gi ab chalo
Both make their way towards the car and the trio procced towards their destination
Bhaskar after dropping Payal makes his way towards MU office
They reach their destination and made their way towards the entrance
Bharti:Oh Man??
Bhaskar:Kya hua??
Bharti:Bro wo main designs ki file car main hi chor aayi tou can I have the keys please??
Bhaskar: Here you go
Bharti gets the keys and gets her file
She enters the building but to her luck the floor was wet and Bharti didn't notice as she was engrossed in the file she put her step on the floor and slips and the file drops from her hand
She closes her eyes tightly knowing the fact that she will be on the floor anytime now
After a while she opens her eyes realizing that she was in someone's arms and not on the floor
She sees the person and its non other than Armaan
Armaan: Hello
Bharti: Thanks
Armaan leaves her
Armaan:Waise that was a nice answer to my greeting
Bharti:Sorry
Armaan:That still not the thing I want to hear
Bharti(a little pissed off):Hello Armaan. Happy now???
Armaan(sadly):yes
Bharti then realizes that she was a little rude to him she thinks to apologize but finds out that he had left
Bharti:Chala gaya thori der wait nahin kar sakta tha use pata hona chahiye ke main sorry bolne waali hoon
Saying this she also head towards her cabin
She was on her way when Narayan stops her and says that Bhaskar is calling her in his cabin
She goes towards the cabin thinking of the reason for calling him
Bharti: May I come in???
Bhaskar:Yeah come in
Bharti comes in and take the seat
Bhaskar:So ready with the designs??
Bharti:Haan bro wo tou maine complete kar liye hain bas ab aapka approvel chahiye
Bhaskar:Wo bhi mil jaaye ga abhi 20 minutes main Amarjeet sir ne meeting rakhi hai udhar you can show them up
Bharti:OK
She was about to leave when Bhaskar stops her
Bhaskar:Bharti
Bharti:Haan bro
Bhaskar:Maine jis kaam ke liye bolaaya tha wo tou sunlo
Bharti knows what he was talking about
She goes to him and hugs him saying
Bharti: Bhaiya I know you called me here to wish me luck and thanks for that
Bhaskar: How do you come to know about it???
Bharti: May be because it is the 25th time I am going to view the designs and since the first time you call me to wish me luck
Both laugh and Bharti goes outside
Well Bhaskar knew that how hard her sister tried to hide this fact but he knows that she loves it when he wishes her luck all alone as it helps to build her confidence and encourages her
He remembers the first time she was going with the designs
She was so nervous that she was biting her nails and again and again going through the file to make sure she has all the designs and are they perfect or not
Bhaskar went to her and said
Bhaskar:Calm down don't panic
Bharti(trying to act normal):Panic??? I am not in Panic
Bhaskar(laughs):OK you are not in panic happy By the way best of luck
Bharti:Thanks bro
Bhaskar saw that his wish made her confident and she does not looked that nervous as she was before
From that day he has always been wishing her luck and knows that it made her confident
Bharti was sitting in her cabin when Narayan came to her with a cup of coffee
Narayan:Madam coffee
Bharti:Table per rakh do
Narayan was about to go
Bharti:Narayan Armaan apne cabin mein hai kya???
Narayan:Nahin tou
Bharti:Good
She then opens her purse and take out a 100 rupee note and shows it to Narayan
Narayan:Kaam kya hai???
Bharti tells Narayan her plan and gives him an envelope with a note
Precap: Bharti tries to talk to Armaan but he doesn't let her and heads towards his cabin
Bharti:Jaao Jaao wapis tou mere paas hi aao ge
Bhaskar:kaun waapis tumhaare paas hi aaye ga???
Bharti(unknowingly):Armaan aur kaun???
Bhaskar:Armaan ???
Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray
my critisizm-
it is too short...
joking yaar, actually it is so interesting ki mujhe laga jaldi khatam ho gayi.
jaldi continue karo
Originally posted by: Dew-drop
Yaar ...its really very gud ....👏
I like it very much .....update sooooooooooooooon....
W8ing 4 it .....😉
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