FF - Dil Ko Tumse Pyar Hua Part 11 Pg 34 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

hey zoya, just read this ff CS! sounds awesome! do continue and pm me when u update!

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Originally posted by: bmtdluver

thnx for the character sketch...........sounds great. plz continue when possible

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zoya_01

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ur welcome huni!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey guys

Thank you all for your comments
It really encouraged me
Here goes the part 1
Hope you enjoy it

Character Sketch:Pg 2

AT THE KHANNA HOUSE

Well it's a beautiful morning with birds chirping around

A girl is sleeping peacefully in her room when the alarm clock start to ring

She takes the pillow beside her and keeps it on her head for a while but then throws it as she knew that it is time to wake up

She gets up and put the alarm off and make her way out of the room towards the room beside her own

She goes and stand at the door, turns the knob but find out that it is locked she then start to knock the door. She is continuosly knocking the door of the room but the person inside is in his dreamland. She then goes to her room and get the duplicate keys from the drawer and says

Girl:Ab maza aaye ga. No one can save you from me now. Dude you are gone

She goes straight towards the room whose door she was knocking a while ago, inserts the key and open the lock

There we see a guy sleeping in his bed

The girl goes to him and tries to wake him up but he does not react

Then the girl goes to washroom and brings a bucket of water and Splash

The guy wakes up and shouts

Guy:Bharti ki bachi main tumhe choroon ga nahin

The girl start running and says

Bharti:Bro pehle pakar to lo phir hi choron ge na

Both start running but Bharti is too fast for him to catch he stop in the way as he is exhausted

Bharti:Kyun ab kya hua waise tou bara I am the man I am the man ke naare lagaate ho ab Man se ik larki bhi nahin pakdi jaati shame on you bro

Then her eyes fall on the clock and she realizes that they are getting late

Bharti:Chalo bro lets leave it here abhi hume chalna chahiye we are getting late

Buy:Okay but don't think I will spare you for this you are gone girl because you know I AM THE MAN

Bharti:Yeah! Yeah! now lets go

Both proceed towards their room to get ready


After a while both of them comes to the dining area and sit on their chairs waiting for their breakfast both wait for a while but when nobody comes both start to count

Bharti:1

Bhaskar:2

Bharti:3

Then both together:Payal breakfast

Payal(screaming from the kitchen):Aa rahi hoon

Payal comes out of the kitchen with their breakfasts

She keeps the plates infront of them with anger and settles herself on one of the chair

Payal:Ye acha hai tum dono behan bhai ka khud ko tou kuch pakaana aata nahin hai mujhe tum logon ne apna cook rakha hua hai

She sees that both of them are not listening to her she gets up from the chair and says

Payal(shouting):Main yahan deewaron se nahin tum logon se baat kar rahi hoon tum log mujhe ignore karna band karo

She stops and see that both of them have kept their hands on their ears

Bharti looks at Payal and realizes that she has stopped talking she asks Bhaskar to take his hands off

Bharti:Bro kaanon per se haath hatha lo toofaan tal gaya hai

Both of them then give hi-5 to each other but on seeing Payal still angry stop laughing end engross themselves in breakfast

Payal:Maine jo kuch bhi kahan hai sach tou kaha hai na Kal ko agar meri shaadi ho gayi tout um log kya karo ge

Bharti:Shaadi karke aao gi tou yahin per hi na (she realizes what she has said and bites her tongue)

Bhaskar:What? What did you say??

Bharti:Kuch bhi tou nahin chalo na bro dekho late ho raha hai hume phir Payal ko bhi tou drop karna hai

Payal:Haan haan mujhe bhi tou drop karna hai chalo

Bhaskar:I'll go and get the keys

Bhaskar goes from their while Payal looks at Bharti with big eyes

Bharti(Scared):Kya hua?? Bro ko kuch pata nahin chala chill girl

Payal:Kya chill girl?? I should have not told you Tum pakka ik din phasao gi mujhe

Bharti:Acha baba sorry aage se dehaan rakhoon gi ab chalo

Both make their way towards the car and the trio procced towards their destination

Bhaskar after dropping Payal makes his way towards MU office


They reach their destination and made their way towards the entrance

Bharti:Oh Man??

Bhaskar:Kya hua??

Bharti:Bro wo main designs ki file car main hi chor aayi tou can I have the keys please??

Bhaskar: Here you go

Bharti gets the keys and gets her file

She enters the building but to her luck the floor was wet and Bharti didn't notice as she was engrossed in the file she put her step on the floor and slips and the file drops from her hand

She closes her eyes tightly knowing the fact that she will be on the floor anytime now

After a while she opens her eyes realizing that she was in someone's arms and not on the floor

She sees the person and its non other than Armaan

Armaan: Hello

Bharti: Thanks

Armaan leaves her

Armaan:Waise that was a nice answer to my greeting

Bharti:Sorry

Armaan:That still not the thing I want to hear

Bharti(a little pissed off):Hello Armaan. Happy now???

Armaan(sadly):yes

Bharti then realizes that she was a little rude to him she thinks to apologize but finds out that he had left

Bharti:Chala gaya thori der wait nahin kar sakta tha use pata hona chahiye ke main sorry bolne waali hoon

Saying this she also head towards her cabin

She was on her way when Narayan stops her and says that Bhaskar is calling her in his cabin

She goes towards the cabin thinking of the reason for calling him

Bharti: May I come in???

Bhaskar:Yeah come in

Bharti comes in and take the seat

Bhaskar:So ready with the designs??

Bharti:Haan bro wo tou maine complete kar liye hain bas ab aapka approvel chahiye

Bhaskar:Wo bhi mil jaaye ga abhi 20 minutes main Amarjeet sir ne meeting rakhi hai udhar you can show them up

Bharti:OK

She was about to leave when Bhaskar stops her

Bhaskar:Bharti

Bharti:Haan bro

Bhaskar:Maine jis kaam ke liye bolaaya tha wo tou sunlo

Bharti knows what he was talking about

She goes to him and hugs him saying

Bharti: Bhaiya I know you called me here to wish me luck and thanks for that

Bhaskar: How do you come to know about it???

Bharti: May be because it is the 25th time I am going to view the designs and since the first time you call me to wish me luck

Both laugh and Bharti goes outside

Well Bhaskar knew that how hard her sister tried to hide this fact but he knows that she loves it when he wishes her luck all alone as it helps to build her confidence and encourages her

He remembers the first time she was going with the designs

She was so nervous that she was biting her nails and again and again going through the file to make sure she has all the designs and are they perfect or not

Bhaskar went to her and said

Bhaskar:Calm down don't panic

Bharti(trying to act normal):Panic??? I am not in Panic

Bhaskar(laughs):OK you are not in panic happy By the way best of luck

Bharti:Thanks bro

Bhaskar saw that his wish made her confident and she does not looked that nervous as she was before

From that day he has always been wishing her luck and knows that it made her confident


Bharti was sitting in her cabin when Narayan came to her with a cup of coffee

Narayan:Madam coffee

Bharti:Table per rakh do

Narayan was about to go

Bharti:Narayan Armaan apne cabin mein hai kya???

Narayan:Nahin tou

Bharti:Good

She then opens her purse and take out a 100 rupee note and shows it to Narayan

Narayan:Kaam kya hai???

Bharti tells Narayan her plan and gives him an envelope with a note

Precap: Bharti tries to talk to Armaan but he doesn't let her and heads towards his cabin

Bharti:Jaao Jaao wapis tou mere paas hi aao ge

Bhaskar:kaun waapis tumhaare paas hi aaye ga???

Bharti(unknowingly):Armaan aur kaun???

Bhaskar:Armaan ???

So this was the part 1
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Posted: 14 years ago
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my critisizm-
it is too short...

joking yaar, actually it is so interesting ki mujhe laga jaldi khatam ho gayi.

jaldi continue karo
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

my critisizm-
it is too short...

joking yaar, actually it is so interesting ki mujhe laga jaldi khatam ho gayi.

jaldi continue karo

Well I thought it was too long
Anyways will try to write a longer part next time
Will continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yaar ...its really very gud ....👏
I like it very much .....update sooooooooooooooon....
W8ing 4 it .....
😉
Posted: 14 years ago
#29
hey huni! amazing part! loved it!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dew-drop

Yaar ...its really very gud ....👏
I like it very much .....update sooooooooooooooon....
W8ing 4 it .....
😉

Thanks for appreciating it
Will continue soon
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