FF - Dil Ko Tumse Pyar Hua Part 11 Pg 34

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey guys I have tried to write a ff
Here is the inside look of it


Character Sketch:Pg 2
Part 1:Pg 4
Part 2: Pg 6
Part 3: Pg 8
Part 4: Pg 11
Part 5: Pg 14
Part 6: Pg 16
Part 7: Pg 19
Part 8: Pg 23
Part 9: Pg 29
Part 10: Pg 34



 
AT THE KHANNA HOUSE

A girl is continuosly knocking the door of the room but the person inside is in his dreamland. She then goes to her room and get the duplicate keys from the drawer and says

Girl:Ab maza aaye ga. No one can save you from me now Dude you are gone

She goes straight towards the room whose door she was knocking a while ago, inserts the key and open the lock

There we see a guy sleeping in his bed

The girl goes to him and tries to wake him up but he does not react

Then the girl goes to washroom and brings a bucket of water and Splash

The guy wakes up and shouts

Guy:Bharti ki bachi main tumhe choroon ga nahin

The girl start running and says

Bharti:Bro pehle pakar to lo phir hi choron ge na

Both start running but Bharti is too fast for him to catch he stop in the way as he is exhausted

Bharti:Kyun ab kya hua waise tou bara I am the man I am the man ke naare lagaate ho ab Man se ik larki bhi nahin pakdi jaati shame on you bro
Then her eyes fall on the clock and she realizes that they are getting late
Bharti:Chalo bro lets leave it here abhi humechalna chahiye we are getting late
Buy:Okay but don't think I will spare youfor this you are gone girl
Bharti:Yeah! Yeah! now lets go
Both proceed towards their room to get ready
 
Hope you have guessed who the guy is
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I will send the character sketch if I recieve atleast 7-8 comments
 
Take Care
Zoya
Edited by -Zoya- - 13 years ago


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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Zoya..nice FF..!

The scene was cute..Bharti is totally naughty..btw is tat guy Bhaskar?!..so she isnt Bhaskar den..?..well do let us noe soon..

update soon

-Aish
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aish_punk

Hey Zoya..nice FF..!

The scene was cute..Bharti is totally naughty..btw is tat guy Bhaskar?!..so she isnt Bhaskar den..?..well do let us noe soon..

update soon

-Aish

Hey Aish
Thanks for you comment dear
Well wait for the character sketch to know who the guy is
Will update the character sketch soon
Take Care
Zoya
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update Zoya ......
please do continue .....😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Dew-drop

Nice update Zoya ......
please do continue .....😉

Thanks dear
Will update the character sketch soon
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Zoya
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey its very nice. Keep continuing it.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ram92

hey its very nice. Keep continuing it.

Thanks for commenting dear
Will update the character sketch soon
Take Care
Zoya
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Posted: 14 years ago
Really nice
 
Please continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow!! grat update zoya! !it sounds really good so far, plz continue- lolz, i like the line- im the man karte karte you cant even catch a girl.shame on you😆
 
keep up the awesome work!! i really like your writing
 
radhika
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Love_ya

Really nice

 
Please continue

Thanks for appreciating
Will continue soon
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Zoya