ff-thoda thoda pyaar(mayur) updated part 23- Pg140 - Page 78

nice part yaar.plz do continue soon.🤗

Originally posted by: annie07

Amazin part madhvi.............with MJHT no longer having Mayur.......ur ff, made my day..........keep updating

Originally posted by: gr8_mms

acha part tha khass kar MM wala part i mean ab wo maan gai hai to mayu nups ko mana lai ga na hehehe

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~

pehle telling, im feeling wayy too lazy today so not going to b a long comment, idk why im tired, too much studying i suppose
anyways i loved the mm-m convo!!
i just love mm!
apne jamane mein tere dad gazab type ke sexy the
i loved this dialogue made me crack up n i also liked
to the point ye keh rahi hu, nupur ka old version mujhe bada pasand hai.....iss upgraded version ko haatao........phir usse patao.....n mere ghar laao
its an open invitation for him to go n propose to nupur!!
the whole convo had so much meaning but was soo light-hearted
acha maine jab likha, tab i thot its supposed to be only light hearted....thnx😛
mayank totally has the best mom!!
evn the convo btw mayur was nice
at least now we (us n mayank) knw that nupur wants him to cum to gunjan's engagement
yep but she wont believe that herself
n nupur's words in the end were so beautiful
nupurs nai cj's words my dear
ur very tired indeed😆
i loved them!!
can't wait for mayur to get back together!!
continue soon
u kno i cant😭

Originally posted by: rose.mn

Hey dear it was really nice part
the best part was the discussion of mayank n his mom
that was just superb
bt plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont sooooon
itna bi intizar karwana achi baat nahi hoti
hehehe
bt plzzzz post ur next sooon
n thanks 4 pm yaar