ff-thoda thoda pyaar(mayur) updated part 23- Pg140 - Page 76

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Part 15 was nice specially i like Akash's idiotic dance on the floor. Mayank would never like to see Noops with someone else but i think he had to do something.
Sammy n Gunjan r awesome n now they r engaged good.

Mayank that night slept thinking bout his mother n her dreams..............i can not afford to disappoint her...............she has done so much for me......................too much to think off in my small life.........i can not dissapoint her.......she is the only one he has.........he is the only one she has.......these were facts he was aware of ever since, he was very confused.............after all that he read he was pretty confused

Mayank was woken up by the door bell, his mother wasnt there at home........

At th door

M-Hi nupur

N- hi mayank, ye gunjan ki sagai ka card hai, all of us are leaving this evening to morena.....ye tickects rakhlo.........do come

Nupur was bout to turn n leave......but mayank stopped her

M- Nupur, i dont really think.........

N- mayank, me n gunjan dont really hv a mother, aunty is like a mother for both of us.......we really want her to come......plz get jer mayank ........plz

M- Nupur......but......wat if i dont come......ill leave mom with u ol....

Nupur kept quite for a while.....n

N- Mayank, ur wish, but i guess ull make gunjan happy by being there.........

M-If that is the case n then ill surely be there.....with ma.....i ll be glad to c both of u happy

Nupur left from the door.......mayank wanted to call her in but cudnt......he dint think he shud....

At the station........

Mayank came alone......

Nupur was waiting for THEM......

N- Aunty??

M- nupur u guys leave we ll come by tomorrows train......n dont worry we will be there....

Mayank assured and nupur left wih the others..........

Train journey was so much fun....she was with some ppl whom she liked........whether it was uday n archi upto pda's or samrat saying stuff to gunjan which made her blush........gunjan looked so sweet.....nupur prayed that her happiness remained......like forever......

The entire journey, nupur was a silent observer.......to all the couples......cj and benji looked so comfortable with each other, they dint really need to show their affection it was just there......

Archi n uday .......who wud hv thought such a sensible girl wud be a perfect match for uday n she would love him unconditionally.....archi seemed like udays teacher mostly......pampering him......he liked being pampered and scolded by her.......

Samrat n gunjan......however they were.....she would like to assume they were perfect........and no1 else cud keep them happy.....

Nupurs gaze shifted to an elderly couple......the uncle seemed to hv a back problem.....that is why the aunty was trying to climb up the middle birth........she tried really hard but cudnt......uncle was bout to go for it too but aunty just dint let him try

Nupur offered aunty her seat and went and sat near cj.....

Cj- nupur kal se dekh rahi hu ur quite........dont tell me tum baatein karna bhul gayi....

Nupur lightly simled at her ......

N- nai kal se bas tum sabko ko dekh rahi hu.......sab ek saath.....khush...

Cj- hmm, acha ye mayank kaha hai?? Nai aa raha kya??

N- nai nai aa raha hai.....infact abhi tak train mein bhi baith gaya hoga....

MM- mayu dekh na sab ki shaadi ho rahi hai......mere bhi armaan jaag rahe hai

M- shaadi ke........maa iss umar mein??

MM- Kyu kya kharabi hai meri umar mein??

M- nai kuch nai....karo karo.....im there to support u....

MM- toh chalo ladkiya dhudhte hai...

M- ma ab tum ladki se shaadi karogi

MM hits mayank n says

MM- main teri shaadi ki baat kar rahi hu.......koi hai.....girl friend ??

M- nai maa......tum jis ladki se kahogi usse karlunga....

MM- bina dekhe??

M- haan maa

MM- par mayu ladki dhudhna is a lot of mehenaat tu hi karle.......dekh pechle aaqal judge karo phir shaqal, phir haao bhaao swabhao.....uff...n phir ye socho ki woh tere layak hai ya nai

M- maa main bhi jo ladki launga, tumhe uske saath bhi ye hi karna hoga

MM- nai bas tu ek baar keh de ki, ma main isse pyaar karta hu......phir toh chaat mangni paat byaah

m- ma so jao, tum bahut high hope kar rahi hu mujhse

mm- acha tu bata tujhe kaisi ladki kaisi achi lagti hai??

M- koi bhi.....normal si

MM- arre ye toh bahut ajeeb hai

M- issme ajeeb kya hai??

MM- arre jab main teri umar ki thi toh mujhe ek hot sexy type ke ladke se shaadi karni thi

M- aur kya dad the??

mm- apne jamane mein tere dad gazab type ke sexy the

Mayank was a lil embarassed at this discussion but mm continued

MM- dekh woh jo ladki hai, woh tujhe line mar rahi hai......baat karwau??

M- ma bas bahut hua....... so jao

MM- kya hai mayu

M- ma aapne apni bahu ke liye bahut saare sapne dekhe hai, main aapko keh raha hu, apne sapne sach karlo

MM- Yahi toh baat tu samjh nai paya beta....

M- kya??

MM-ki mujhe khaane mein chahiye hota hai aloo ka paratha with raita, par tere liye karela baanati hu, but jab tu woh karele khaate hue......halki si.....itni si apni dimple waali smile marta hai toh woh saade hue karele khaane mein bahut maza aata hai.......bahut khushi hoti hai

Mayank smiled at his mother..........she is a darling......he thot

MM- dude tere uss smile ke liye main kitne kitne din karele khaati hu........toh soch teri pasand ki biwi laane mein mujhe kitni khushi hogi.....tu usse khush hoga aur iss baat se main........toh beta go fall in love with some1 phir mujhe bata main sab set kar dungi........for chaat maangni paat byaah

M- ma but aapne mere liye ladki select kar li hai na.......

MM- agaar tu uss dairy ki baat kar raha hai jo tu parso raat ko padh raaha tha toh.....

Mayank was staring at his mother in disbelief........

MM- toh maine ussme priyanka chopra ki baat ki thi.....usse pehle bhi maine kai ladkiya chuz ki hai, infact ye gunjan nupur archi cj sabko as possibilities consider kiya hai

Mayanks mouth fell open......priyanka.....gunjan archi cj........nupur

MM- gunjan ko reject mara kyuki phir mera ghar science lab banta........cj baadi gol mol baatein karti hai.....archi achi hai but tv nai dekhti.......nupur best thi......by god....

Mayank could not believe wat his mother was saying, she actually wanted to hint ki she likes nupur

M- ma tum

MM- to the point ye keh rahi hu, nupur ka old version mujhe bada pasand hai.....iss upgraded version ko haatao........phir usse patao.....n mere ghar laao.

M- tumhe pata tha.....kab se??

MM- mujhe ab so jaana chahiye....nai??

Saying this mm went to sleep..............mayank was pretty happy to hear what his mother said...........he was very happy that now he could go get nupur back......to his life.............forever.

He started thinking of all the ways of telling those 3 words to nupur, making her happy, making her his...........

He saw nupur......sitting in the middle of water, in her white suit..............he felt his feet run with gr8 speed towards her

M- nupur, i love u.

He said even b4 he stopped...........nupur got up

N- mayank y r u so late, y dint u tell me this 3 yrs back................when i needed u the most........when i broken shattered totally

Mayank tells her the entire story..........how he found mm dairy n ol of that

N- oh! So now u expect me to come back to u as if nothing happened..............forget all the pain i suffered all this while.............. y do u expect so much out of me...........im not returning mayank......for all the pain again

Mayank is unable explain after all she was right, he could hv done something to help her but he dint.....

Nupur left

The train jerked badly n mayank was brought to reality.............he stilll had a way to go............he could not expect nupur to forgive him easily..........but he needs to be there for her always............he needs to be there for her n him

N- love is seen in different colors nai cj, every color unique has its own individuality. You guys are blessed to hv loved ones...

Cj- its like nupur we have accepted each other totally, we don't wanna change each other.........there is no real need for that really............meri baton mein gussa aata hoga use.....mujhe bhi aata hai.......but nothing better than sorry.........uske baad we don't really remember much.....aisi choti choti baton ko leke koi itni achi companion ship koun chodta hai.......actually kitni hi baadi baadi baton ko leke main ye companion ship nai chodu

Nupur loves like that................a perfect acceptance of imperfection

Hum shayad perfect nai ho sakte but pyaar......whichever color..... perfect hota hai

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Not really a gr8 part i kno

the brown text was mayank's imagination rather

i guess this is divya dee ke ff ka effectt😆

but i still hope u guys like it😛

love

madhvi😳

Gr8 update...

Originally posted by: Piya_2009

Gr8 update...

Loved d MN convo..

Best part of today's update :MM n M scene....

to the point ye keh rahi hu, nupur ka old version mujhe bada pasand hai.....iss upgraded version ko haatao........phir usse patao.....n mere ghar laao.

I luuuved this dialogue....MM understands him so well....

Finally M decided to tell nupur.....good....

waiting for d next part...Update soon....

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

Originally posted by: hgrhr

LOlz madhavi...this was one great update.!!

i loveeed the mayu-mom convo..!!

LOL

"tere ded humare zamane mein gazab ke sexy the" oh godd...LOL...hilarious..!!

to the point ye keh rahi hu, nupur ka old version mujhe bada pasand hai.....iss upgraded version ko haatao........phir usse patao.....n mere ghar laao.

This was the besssst....hehhehee

I love his mom..by god...fulltoo bete to bol rahi hain ke jaa beta aur ladki pata ke aa..!!

haha

Lolz....i hope mayur patch up now..!

awesome part..do continue soon..!