SITA MATA'S BEAUTIFUL APPEARANCE BUT PAINFUL LIFE

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Friends there was no plan to write this poem.But Juhi asked me to write a poem on SITA MATA'S beauty.So I have tried my level best to write the poem.Actually truly speaking words are not enough to express SITA mata's beauty.She was not only beautiful from outside but beautiful from heart also.Every role in her life she performed beautifuly,so beauty not only reflected in her apperance but also her living.


I am not sure how much justice I could do with the poem.But pls read it and give ur suggestions



SUNDARTA KA ANUPAM PRATIMA




parichay kare sundarta se

aao kare barnan rup Sita ke

saundarya ka anupam srishti

Ram ka jinme bibhor ho drishti.

kesho ki adbhut ye ghata hain

mukhmandal me rabi ki chata hain.

lalat par suraj ki prabha hain

chandrama sa shitalta sama hain

gehre nayan shyaam bin kaajal

nayan me mohit ye bhumandal.

nayan me RAM ka prem sama hain

RAM-PRIYA me RAM basa hain.

mukh par dwaideepwaman he garima

khilte kamal jaise chaye lalima.

karna me kuntal ati manohari.

sundar chabi basi man me sari.

Siya rup na barnan ki jaye

Ram bin kaise koi batlaye

Kati komal kar kamal suhane

Siya saundarya ko Ram hi jane

Tan se sundar,sundar man se

Sundarta jo khile bachan se

Chabi he pyari har nate ka

putri ,patni ya ho uo mata.

Jo Siya rup satya me bakhaye

Kavya unka dhanya ho jaye.

Me to samanya, nehi koi sant

Kaise barnan karu jo hain anant

Siya rup me sare jagat samaye

Ram hriday me Siya rup dekh paye.

Jis Raghav se jagat rup paye

Hriday me unka SIYA hi samaye

Hriday me unka SIYA hi samaye.





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Posted: 16 years ago
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bhaiyaa i am sure u did it well
understood some things
thanx 4 all ur marvellous poems
keep it up
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Saby, sweet poem about the sweetest woman, Sita mata😊 I am like Anusha, understood most of the words, and the poem sounds beautiful! Keep up the good work😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mallika113

Hey Saby, sweet poem about the sweetest woman, Sita mata😊 I am like Anusha, understood most of the words, and the poem sounds beautiful! Keep up the good work😊

thanks di for liking the poem.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: jai sri ram

bhaiyaa i am sure u did it well

understood some things
thanx 4 all ur marvellous poems
keep it up

thanks anusha for liking the poem.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow, wonderful work Sabydeep! The lines are so beautiful!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wowwww saby bhaiyya....ita rly very nice.......gr88888888888 job bhaiyya....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Saby, I am giving U the Khalrika Sangeet Natak Academy award for the Best Poet on RF.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: SwatiAgrawal

wowwww saby bhaiyya....ita rly very nice.......gr88888888888 job bhaiyya....

thanks swati very much for liking it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: _LalithaJanaki_

Wow, wonderful work Sabydeep! The lines are so beautiful!

thanks di, i am glad that u liked the poem.
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