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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wonderful one-shot!
I love that song, the lyrics are so heartfelt and touching and poignant!
Preet's words to her, so sweet!
No update?
Love TJ
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shabo24

*sob* 😲 You wanted to cry? You?

This shot made me wanna cry. It was so GOOD! Just the simple way that Preet said "Don't go." Oh di, it just tore are your heart. You are so evil...but why didn't Preet go with them! MEHER! Girl doesn't know what she's letting go. :) Great shot di, loved it! I still cannot believe that you wanted to cry! I'm going to take that as a compliment. A huge one. Thank you Shabo!

--shabz



Originally posted by: sourpuss


I hit the 'like' button 'cause I didn't feel like commenting.

 
And yet I did. No comment. πŸ˜†
 
Meh, you know what I thought of it. Thanks B!
 
Love, love you too.
Bhav (:



Originally posted by: *Shifali*


You shoudda used "Tusi Jaa Rahe Ho? Tussi Na Jaao" πŸ˜† I was thinking about it. I may use it in another context, for another shot. πŸ˜‰

 
But I LOVED it. The title SUITS the shot AWSOMELY! Honestly...It was sad...*cry* Aw, thanks Shifu! *hug*



@ jamune: Sorry?


Originally posted by: indiandoll89


Ahhh Radz! 😳Meera! *hug*

that was so sad and touching and I wanted to cry! πŸ˜” The way he said, "don't go," Literally ached at my heart! 😳Aw! I'm glad. I think. πŸ˜†

I'm somehow proud of Meher for being with her sister, I'll just make it a happy ending in my mind! πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³You can do that. Till I write the sequel. πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

Love you, love you too!

Meera😳



Originally posted by: Rakhie_08


Dammit.  Why can't I hit the 'Like' button more than once?!?!?! 😳 How sweet.

 
Once is not enough  πŸ‘πŸΌ Thank you!



Originally posted by: Rhea_401


its was very touching......i cud actually feel wat dey were goin thro n was on d verge of tears.....very well done.. πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘Thank you! *hug*



Love,
Radz

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: LilyGurl

thnx radz di u described their feelings so beautifully preet is soo sweet Thank you Lily!

love lily



Originally posted by: natashaa46


WOW!!! wht a shot yaar................it actually made me cry 😭 😭 Thank you. And I'm sorry about making you cry!

i was feeling sooooooo bad for Preet n Meher..........

nd the details with which you wrote it really awesome.........i could feel myself there with the two seeing them apart 😭 😭 Aw, thanks. And I'm sorry!

hats off to you πŸ‘ πŸ‘  Thank you!
πŸ‘ πŸ‘



Originally posted by: only.asking


That was beautiful.... There was So Much promise In it For their Future, no? πŸ‘



Thanks! Yup, there is promise. And we shall see how that comes across in the sequel. πŸ˜‰


Originally posted by: missindia26


Wonderful one-shot! Thank you!

I love that song, the lyrics are so heartfelt and touching and poignant! Yup, I love the song too!
Preet's words to her, so sweet! Thanks!
No update? I may write a sequel. πŸ˜‰
Love TJ



Love,
Radz

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Posted: 14 years ago
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A sequel sounds wonderful! πŸ˜ƒ *claps*😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
wow! *smiles* while *crying* thta was just great!!!!!!!!!!
Anhdara13 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you Kashish!

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 14 years ago
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really, u have expressed emotions wonderfully. specially the part where preet & mehar hug each other for the last time.
keep going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!